高考英语二轮复习书面表达复习专题14 社会交际类话题指导.docx

1、高考英语二轮复习书面表达复习专题14 社会交际类话题指导2013届高考英语二轮复习书面表达复习专题14 社会交际类话题指导实例指导1-身势语 本文属于说明文，说明什么是身势语，阐述其作用并举例说明一些身势语在一些国家的共同点和不同点，然后建议我们对各国的身势语作一些了解，以便更好地交流。 本篇写作基本结构可以为：开头简要地介绍一下什么是身势语，(可以用is used by people for)，然后再说明其重要性，此时可以举例说明，使文章具有说服力。第二段可以说明相反的情况，即说明身势语在不同的国家有着不同的意义。最后提出建议：我们对各国的身势语应作一些了解。 相关的词汇或短语Is used

2、 byfor被用来 ；make oneself easily understood使某人更容易被理解）； be accepted both by and .被和共同接受；shake hnads 握手；instead of代替；it isi very important to 很重要；make much more pleasant and comfortable 使更舒适愉快【参考范文】 Body language is used by people for sending messages to one another. It is very useful because it can hel

3、p you make yourself easily understood. When talking with others, you are not just using words, but also using expressions and gestures. For example, waving ones hand is to say Good-bye. A smile and handshake show welcome. And they are accepted both by Chinese and foreigners with the same meanings. H

4、owever, different countries have different body languages. For example, men in Russia, France and Arab countries kiss each other when they meet, but men in China or Australia shake hands instead of kissing. When you use a foreigin language, it is very important to know the meanings of gestures of th

5、e country. And it will make your stay there much more pleasant and comfortable.实例指导2Being a Good Listener【写作任务】 实现有效的沟通，建立良好的人际关系，不仅要善于言表、更要学会倾听。请你根据下表中所提供的信息，写一篇题为“Being a Good Listener”的英文演讲稿。词数150左右。为何倾听表示尊重，增进理解，建立良好的人际关系谁来倾听家长倾听孩子理解孩子，消除代沟，老师倾听学生了解学生，满足需求，同学相互倾听增进友谊，互帮互学，怎样倾听（请考生联系自己拟定内容，列举两至三点

6、。）Good afternoon, everyone! The topic of my speech today is “Being a Good Listener”. _【写作指导】文体分析本文是演讲稿。主题是如何成为一名好的倾听者。要求根据表格内列出的要点提示进行说明，并发表自己的看法，属于半命题、半开放性作文。此范文要点齐全，论述严密，一环扣一环，同时较多地使用了祈使句，整体上给人一种灼灼逼人的气势。文章使用了第一人称，所用时态主要是一般现在时。行文模式本文采用了“三段式”的结构。第一部分：第一段，提出文章的主题，即文章想要阐述的主要内容，也就是发言的主题。第二部分：第二、三段，是文章的

7、主要部分，对文章的主题进行展开说明。第二段阐述的是倾听的好处；第三段阐述的是三种方式的倾听。两段内容互相呼应，采用不同的句式将倾听的方式展现给听众。第三部分：最后两段，即演讲稿的结尾部分。作者在这一段里提出了自己的观点。最后用in a word作总结性结尾，与第一段提出的主题遥相呼应。分析:本写作任务较简短,写作体裁、写作重点一目了然,即写一篇有关body language的作用及重要性的演讲稿。简短的演讲稿是写作中经常会遇到的一种写作形式。它的目的很明确,即让听者了解你介绍的信息或者你要陈述的观点,并被你说服或者打动。针对本写作任务,在没有相关提示的情况下,这类作文的难点就是对论点或者理由的

8、寻找和组织。身体语言很重要,但是为什么说它重要呢？从写作任务中我们可以得到提示:讲清楚了它的作用,我们就有了说它重要的基础。作用和重要性是不可分的。另外,在写作中我们还需要把握另一个关键词:communicate。这是座谈会的主题,一定要围绕交流写body language的作用。初稿:Body language is very important in communicating. I think people all use body language when they communicate with someone. There are many kinds of body lang

9、uages and people from different places may have different body languages. If you want to communicate well, you need to understand the meaning of the body language. Most of the people use hands, eyes, and emotions to help them express themselves. Pay attention to them when you are communicating. You

10、will learn more about the people. At the same time, other people are also reading your body language. So if you dont use body language correctly, you may give a wrong message to the person. You may create misunderstanding and make the communication difficult to carry on.教师点评:初稿第一段开篇点题,提出自己的观点:body l

11、anguage在交流中很重要。但是第二句对观点的补充显得苍白,没有说服力。这里不要用I think ., 这种表达会降低语言的效力,最好用一个数字或者比例来表明body language的重要性。第二段从两方面说明body language的重要性:1. 交流中,多注意别人的身体语言,你能更了解那个人。2. 如果不运用好你自己的身体语言,你可能会传递错误信息。文章基本上是围绕着body language在交流中的作用来写的,中心没有大的偏离,两个论点也选得很好,但是在语言的组织上逻辑还不够清晰,不够完整,欠缺说服力。如第二段的第一句话本应是对该段的总起,说的是身体语言有很多种,但是后面并没有对

12、该观点进行说明,也没有阐述出它是否影响交流,与后面的两个论点没有形成统一的逻辑体系。另外,读完这篇文章后感觉没有写完,主要原因是欠缺一个总结性质的结尾。作者最后应该重申一下自己的观点或者写一个简短的结论来结束全文。最后一个需要注意的细节是开头。由于本文是为座谈会上的发言准备的,礼貌地打招呼是演讲基本的礼仪。成稿:实例指导4Getting Along with Others 写作任务:在日常生活中,我们每天都要与人打交道,而说到与人打交道,我们更多想到的是如何处理好与同学、老师以及朋友的关系,而往往忽略了与我们每天都要面对的、最亲近的父母之间的关系。不少同学以代沟为借口,拒绝与父母交流沟通。你怎

13、样看待这个现象？说说你的看法以及你与父母融洽相处的小秘诀。分析:1. 写作任务要求大家根据某一话题发表自己的看法,根据所给题目,我们可以提炼的信息是,该习作要求对一种社会现象进行分析,然后给出自己的见解。写作任务部分已经对这种现象进行了描述,因而写作重点是你对该现象的看法。我们可以从自己的日常生活中总结经验,提出自己的观点:多和父母交流才能促进理解,进而融洽相处。2. 确立写作重点之后,就要考虑文章的结构。该习作可以分三部分来完成:首先,简要描述当前同学们在与父母相处过程中遇到的问题；其次,就这些问题阐明你教师点评:1. 该篇习作的整体结构安排较为合理,开篇描述了当前青少年在与父母相处过程中存

14、在的问题,然后针对问题提出了自己的建议,并且分三点进行叙述,条理比较清晰。最后作者对整篇文章进行了总结。因此,从整体上看,这篇习作基本完成了写作任务的要求。2. 语言表达基本通顺,运用了一些复杂句式。3. 文章的不足之处在于:(1)有些部分不够连贯。如第一段中最后既没有给出衔接上下文的句子,也没有明确提出问题,第二段开篇直接论述自己的观点显得有些突兀。(2)文章主体部分在论述自己的观点时,条理性还有待提高。如第二部分,第二点和第三点都是先提出观点,随后展开论述,第一点最好跟后面两点保持一致。(3)文中有些句子显得很突兀,如第一段中最后一句Nobody wants to have problem

15、s with his or her parents以及第二段中最后一句Sometimes they may scold us and may not have the patience to listen to us, but we all know our parents love us.建议将这些句子去掉或是整合到其他部分。(4)此外,文中有些地方用词不是很恰当,如最后一句中,best solution for建议改成best way of。成稿:How to Get Along with Your ParentsNowadays, many teenagers find it hard

16、to get along with their parents. In daily life, they may quarrel with their parents and even have a negative attitude towards their parents opinions. So, how can we teenagers get along well with our parents? First, I think we should spend more time with our parents and communicate with them. Differe

17、nt generations may have different views towards one thing, but we should not use that as an excuse to refuse to talk with our parents. Second, we should trust our parents and turn to them when we are in trouble because they are more experienced and may help us solve our problems quickly. Third, we m

18、ust understand our parents better. They have a lot of pressure in their work, but they still have to spend time taking care of us. The most important thing for us to remember is that our parents love us deeply, so it should not be so difficult for us to understand and communicate with each other. Po

19、werful sentences:1. Nowadays, many teenagers find it hard to get along with their parents. 2. I think we should spend more time with our parents and communicate with them.3. We should trust our parents and turn to them when we are in trouble because they are more experienced and may help us solve ou

20、r problems quickly. 实例指导5How to make friends 写作要求不可少的。写作技巧1. 遣词：文章中可能用到的其他词汇和短语有：discuss with ,in my opinion the most , besides , whats more , on the other hand , firstly ,secondly .last , in return , think of , agree with2. 构句：1) Im writing to discuss with you about how to make good friends. 在这个句子用

21、到了不定式作目的状语。参考范文Dear Li Jun ,Glad to hear from you . Now Im writing to discuss with you about how to make good friends.As you know , everybody needs friends, so how to make true friends is very important to anybody. In my opinion, to make friends, the most important thing is that you must be friendly

22、 to others. Smile at others and you are always sure to get a smile in return. Besides, never judge a person only by his appearance. Whats more, you should think more of others than of yourself. On the other hand, if you dont agree with others on a certain matter, dont argue but discuss with him. Alw

23、ays remember, a true friend is the one that is coming in the door while everyone else is going out, as the saying goes, “A friend in need is a friend indeed”. Yours faithfully Wang Hua下水试游仿照范文中的句子，将下列汉语译成英文。1. 为了早晨睡得晚些，鲍勃关上了闹钟。2. 正如大家所知，地球围绕太阳转。3. 如何穿过那个峡谷仍然是个难题。4 .麻烦是我把他的地址丢了。5. 她讲英语比我多。 6. 如果他找到了，

24、他会送来的。7. 因为暴风雪，所有航班都被取消了，于是许多乘客只好乘火车。参考答案：仿照范文中的句子，将下列汉语译成英文。1.To sleep late in the morning, Bob turned off the alarm. 2. As is known to all, the earth moves around the sun. 3. How to get through the valley is still a difficult problem. 4 .The trouble is that I have lost his address.5. She speaks mo

25、re English than I do. 6. If he has found it, he will send it. 7. All flights have been put off because of the snowstorm , so many passengers could do nothing but take the train. 实战演练每个人都有自己的朋友,有时候朋友在遇到困难时可能会向我们求助,如果能办到,我们当然应该尽最大努力去帮忙,但如果朋友提出的某些要求不是我们力所能及的,这时我们就要学会说不。不少人往往不知道该如何开口拒绝,尽管明知道有些事情自己做不到,却害

26、怕伤了朋友之间的感情。那么,究竟该如何开口拒绝,才不会伤害对方呢？请就此以如何正确说不为题来谈谈你的看法。词数120-150。How to Say No ProperlyA friend in need is a friend indeed. When our friends get into trouble, we should try to help them out if we can manage to do so. However, if its something beyond our capability, what should we do? How can we say no

27、 in a soft and proper way? First, we should explain to them clearly why we have to turn their requests down and at the same time apologize for being unable to help. Second, try to avoid using ambiguous words that may cause misunderstanding. Wed better make it clear whether we can help or not. And on

28、e thing is very important: We should express ourselves in a polite and sincere way and make our friends understand that we have tried our best._As you know, food shortages have hit many countries in the world and even caused social unrest in some areas. But who is responsible for the current world f

29、ood crisis? First, annual world grains output has declined because of climate change. Then lots of farmland has been lost due to the rapid development of industry and urbanization. Then what should we do to deal with the problem? On one hand, we should focus on the environmental protection and impro

30、ve the ecology. On the other hand, strict measures should be taken to protect farmland. As for me, I will call on the people around me to live thriftily. And for the moment, I think, we should study hard to develop science and help solve the food shortage in the future.Celebrities as the products spokespersonIn recent years, it is very common for celebrities, or the so-called superstars, to be spokespersons or representatives for a wide variety of products_