浙江专用高考英语二轮复习 专题五 层级二 作文策略 第一讲 靓化词汇学会运用高级表达教案.docx

1、浙江专用高考英语二轮复习 专题五 层级二 作文策略 第一讲 靓化词汇学会运用高级表达教案第三板块 书面表达书面表达是高考浙江卷的重要试题。本板块精研真题，引领考向；高考真题感悟与模拟题演练相互加力，讲解与练习环环相扣，帮助考生高效备考，轻松增分。年份考查点词数考纲解读2019.6第一节感谢信80左右浙江属于高考综合改革实验省份，实行一年两考。依据普通高等学校招生全国统一考试英语科考试说明(高考综合改革试验省份试用第一版)可知，2016年10月份开始的浙江英语新高考与自主命题的浙江卷写作部分发生了重大变化。其变化就是由原来的短文改错和书面表达变成了应用文写作和读后续写或概要写作两篇作文。第一篇是

2、应用文写作。此题型对于考生来说并不陌生，因为我们在平常的学习中经常接触到这方面的内容。常考的应用文有：书信、日记、海报、倡议书、电子邮件、发言稿、感谢信、建议信、求职信、推荐信、自荐信、邀请信、申请书、通知、招聘、请假条、留言条、启事、欢迎词、欢送词、告别词和广告等。纵观近几年的高考题，信件居多。第二篇是读后续写或概要写作。考试说明上明确表示：“两种形式在不同考次不定期交替使用”。第二节概要写作60左右2018.11第一节求助信80左右第二节概要写作60左右2018.6第一节申请信80左右第二节读后续写150左右2017.11第一节邀请信80左右第二节读后续写150左右2017.6第一节邀请信

3、80左右第二节读后续写150左右进入二轮复习，如果想让作文在短时期内有一个质的飞跃，编者认为，那只是一个美好的憧憬而已。写作是一个人语言基本素养的流露，是综合能力的显现，非一朝一夕之功，但这并不等于写作水平已定型，无提升空间。因为英语写作的能力要求远低于汉语写作的能力要求，如果针对自己的薄弱环节训练得当、措施得力，是完全能够在短期内提升一个档次的。层级一审题准，表达清高考作文阅卷， 时间紧、任务重，一篇作文往往在一分钟内被判“生死”。要想赢得高分，首先要赢得阅卷老师的“印象分”。审题偏颇、错误百出的作文会让阅卷老师大倒胃口，阅卷老师会毫不怜悯地将其打入低分冷宫。所以，写作要想取得高分，先要把写

4、作基础抓稳。一、准审题为写作定好基调审题是写作的前提，是一篇书面表达成功的关键所在。审题正确可以保证得到基本分，所以真正开始写作前，必须花相当一部分时间做写前阅读、思考等准备工作，具体包含以下几方面：审体裁根据情景提示首先要弄清写何种体裁的文章审格式日记、便条、书信、通知等格式审结构明确开头、正文和结尾的主要内容，定好段落审内容弄清哪些是写作重点，哪些要略写，并注意内容的连贯性审人称和时态弄清书面表达要用何种人称并根据材料确定短文的基本时态 “提纲类作文”之审题典例(2019全国卷)假定你是校排球队队长李华。请写封邮件告知你的队友Chris球队近期将参加比赛，内容包括：1比赛信息；2赛前准备；

5、3表达期待。注意：1.词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_审题提纲类作文的审题要点：要注意合理组织要点，将题干中的要点和所给提纲中的要点进行有机地结合，切记不要遗漏题干中的重要信息。分析体裁告知信人称第一人称为主时态一般现在时和一般将来时结构与内容第一段告知队友比赛信息第二段赛前准备第三段表达期望参考范文Dear Chris，Are you excited about our coming volleyball game against Yucai Middle School next Friday? Here Id like to inform you of some det

6、ailed information so that you can make full preparations for it.First and foremost, the competition to be held in our school stadium will begin at 2 pm and last for roughly 3 hours. So significant is the game that it is required that everyone should present themselves punctually. Further, it is nece

7、ssary for you to take a good rest, which will provide enough energy for you. To sum up, I wish you could live up to the expectations of our school. And I firmly believe hard work will pay off!Looking forward to our victory!Yours truly，Li Hua二、准表达把内容表达清楚写作中一旦出现较多错误，会导致语意不清、表达不明，阅卷老师潜意识中会认为该考生基本功较差、能力

8、较弱，给阅卷老师留下这样的印象，作文有可能要比想象中的低一档。写作中考生常犯两类错误：一是惯性错误，就是考生在不经意间习惯性犯的错误，这类错误不但常犯而且还是阅卷老师比较敏感的错误，一旦出现这类错误，往往会被“放大”；另一类就是由于使用高级表达而导致的错误。(一)惯性错误要避免1动词类错误动词的种类有很多，从不同角度可分为实义动词、系动词、助动词和情态动词，也可分为谓语动词和非谓语动词等。(1)实义动词又可分为及物动词和不及物动词。写作中常出现的错误有：及物动词后加了介词；不及物动词后少了介词。(2)系动词be在写作中非常活跃，但要用好be动词却不是一件容易的事。常见错误有：不及物动词用be动

9、词构成了被动语态；该含有be动词的句子出现遗漏be动词的情况。(3)助动词和情态动词不能单独作谓语，写作中常见错误主要是倒装句中少用了助动词或情态动词。(4)谓语动词与非谓语动词的误用是考生最易出错的地方。需注意：谓语动词作谓语，包括时态、语态、主谓一致、虚拟语气；非谓语动词可作除谓语以外的其他成分。2并列连词与从句引导词类错误并列连词与从句引导词是考生容易出错的地方，下面主要介绍常见的一些错误类型。(1)考生易受汉语干扰导致状语从句中从属连词的重复使用。例如汉语中可以说“因为所以”和“虽然但是”，但在英语中用一个连词即可表示，用了though/although，就不能再用but；用了beca

10、use，就不能再用so，therefore等词。(2)写作中经常用同位语从句给文章增添色彩，但是引导词that的缺失却令这种色彩暗淡了不少。(3)表语从句的一个易错点是高级表达The reason why.was that.中that的误用，考生容易误用because。(4)非限制性定语从句中误用that在作文中经常会见到，用which表示人的状况也是屡见不鲜。(二)高级表达中出现低级错误太遗憾在阅卷中，阅卷老师常为这样一类卷摇头叹息，无论是从要点的呈现、表达的优美还是衔接的顺畅等方面来看该类卷都近乎完美，应该给高分甚至满分，但偏偏有几处瑕疵给本应完美的习作徒添了些许不和谐的音符，甚至有点刺眼

11、，从而影响了阅卷老师的好心情。阅卷老师为了稳妥起见，在阅卷中尽量避免争议卷的出现，会“惋惜”地扣掉一些分数。因“低级错误”而影响高级得分，岂不遗憾！层级二低档作文如何升级为五档作文，策略告诉你书面表达得分较低的学生的写作特点：1.只使用简单的词或短语； 2.句式单一，单句较多； 3.缺乏承上启下的词语和句子； 4.不会使用从句； 5.不会正确运用谓语动词或短语； 6.不会使用倒装和强调句型。高考书面表达侧重考查考生的语言运用能力，这就要求考生能够正确运用高级的词汇和语法结构并能够熟练运用句与句之间的连接成分以使行文流畅。因此， 平时的写作训练中，要学会恰当地运用高级句式和过渡语，使文章“闪亮登

12、场”。第一讲靓化词汇学会运用高级表达英语书面表达第五档作文中提到：语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致。换句话说，如果考生使用高级词汇或句型，即使犯了少量或轻微的语言错误，也可不扣分，文章还是属于最高档次。因此，为了让文章档次高，首先要学会使用高级词汇。高级词汇的使用能够给文章增添色彩和画面感。它会大大提升文章的档次，从而帮助考生获得高分。要做到准确使用高级词汇，应该注意以下几个方面：一、使用亮点词汇的4种策略“语”众不同，避免人云亦云写作时恰当得体地使用别人可能想不到的词汇或表达，会给阅卷老师耳目一新的感觉。(2019北京卷书面表达)Im very glad

13、to know that youre coming to tour in China.Im more than delighted to know that youre coming to tour in China.(2019全国卷书面表达)I hope you can consider my application and allow me to be a volunteer.I hope you can take my application into consideration and allow me to be a volunteer.(2019全国卷书面表达)So I can s

14、erve as a volunteer to show the visitors around the gallery and I am sure that I am fit for the job. So I can serve as a volunteer to show the visitors around the gallery and I am convinced that I am qualified for the job. (2019全国卷书面表达)As a result, enough preparation is urgently needed, including pr

15、actice, nutrition and a perfect plan.As a consequence, adequate preparation is urgently needed, including practice, nutrition and a perfect plan.(2019天津卷书面表达)I want to make my voice heard.I feel an urge to make my voice heard.Only when you do more reading and writing can you succeed in improving you

16、r English.Only when you do more reading and writing can you make it in improving your English.To our great joy, not only are our classes lively and appealing, but our school life is also rich and colorful.To our great joy, not only are our classes lively and attractive, but our school life is also r

17、ich and colorful.(2018全国卷书面表达)Great changes have taken place in our school in the last few years. And the news came that a short film will be shown in our school.Our school has witnessed great changes in the last few years. And word came that a short film will be shown in our school.更新换代，避免重复写作时应尽量避

18、免重复使用相同的词语，要用贴切多样的词语来展示自己的水平。用词不同、表达方式迥异，也是高级用法。(2018天津卷书面表达)On hearing the news, some of my classmates and I formed a group to take part in the competition. I know you once took part in a robotics competition and won the award, so you must have accumulated much experience in it.On hearing the news,

19、 some of my classmates and I formed a group to take part in the competition. I know you once participated in a robotics competition and won the award, so you must have accumulated much experience in it.(2018全国卷书面表达)Moreover，we will build a new stadium and with the stadium built，a wide range of sport

20、s events are able to be held.Moreover，we will build a new stadium and with the stadium set up，a wide range of sports events are able to be held.(2017全国卷书面表达)The team will hold many activities，some of which will appeal to you，including many matches.The team will hold a range of activities，some of whi

21、ch will appeal to you，including many matches.词汇运用，短语优先当单词和短语表示同一个意思时，优先使用短语。恰当使用短语，一方面能使文章更加生动，另一方面也能展示出学生扎实的语言功底。(2019全国卷书面表达)Besides, I know English and I can express myself fluently and clearly, which helps me communicate with our distinguished guests efficiently.Moreover, I have a good command o

22、f English and I can express myself fluently and clearly, which helps me communicate with our distinguished guests efficiently.(2019全国卷书面表达)For one thing, I know Chinese painting well, for my father is a Chinese painter.For one thing, I am quite familiar with Chinese painting, for my father is a Chin

23、ese painter.(2018天津卷书面表达)We desperately need your help.We are desperately in need of your help.(2018北京卷书面表达)Last week, we took the foreign students in our school to experience the authentic tea culture, which proved to be extremely rewarding.Last week, we took the foreign students in our school to e

24、xperience the authentic tea culture, which turned out to be extremely rewarding.用高级词汇取代简单词汇为了表现自己的语言功底，显示出自己的写作水平，应避免反复使用低年级学过的简单词汇，尽量使用高中阶段学到的词汇来代替。(2018北京卷书面表达)If you take my advice you are sure to have the most unforgettable experience during your college in Beijing.So long as you take my advice

25、you are bound to have the most unforgettable experience during your college in Beijing.(2017天津卷书面表达)Second，I am trying my best to acquire the essential knowledge and skills concerning my position.Second，I am sparing no effort to acquire the essential knowledge and skills concerning my position.(全国卷书

26、面表达)I should say sorry for being unable to go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon.I should make an apology for being unable to go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon.二、写作的秘密武器24个高级词汇名词普通词汇高级词汇普通词汇高级词汇chanceopportunitychoicealternativeideaopinionpeopleindividualresultconsequenceef

27、fectinfluence动词havepossessreplacesubstitutebearput up withunderstandmake sense ofdeveloppromoteconsidertake into account形容词enoughadequaterichabundantproperappropriateimportantvital/ significantinterestingabsorbing/ appealingdifficultchallenging副词finallyeventuallyhardlybarelyimmediatelyin a flashnowa

28、dayscurrently连词sothereforeandas well as(2017全国卷书面表达)It is of importance for you to understand the content，Tang poetry.It is of importance for you to make sense of the content，Tang poetry.It is of importance for you to be aware of the content，Tang poetry.(2017北京卷书面表达)Thats why I think the trip along

29、the Yangtze River will be a better choice.Thats why I think the trip along the Yangtze River will be a better alternative.In the coming three years，our school life will be difficult.In the coming three years，our school life will be challenging.三、写作的顶级装备27个加分词汇表达关注的名词attention, focus, concern表达争论的名词discussion, debate, argument表达现象的名词phenomenon表达优缺点的名词advantage, disadvantage, strength, weakness表达增长或下降的动词