英语书面表达提高训练.docx

1、英语书面表达提高训练英语书面表达提高训练一、英语书面表达1书面表达根据以下提示，写一篇介绍我的朋友张阳的短文。基本情况张阳，阳光中学九年级二班学生兴趣爱好1. 喜欢阅读。每周花七个多小时阅读各种类型的书，因为2.喜欢观鸟。每年统计两次鸟儿的数量，以研究鸟儿在数量方面的变化。优秀事迹上个月把零花钱捐给了希望工程未来梦想1. 希望成为连接家乡到上海路段的高铁总工程师2. 每个人为保护环境都可以做一些改变。如：.（举1例）要求：1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2）必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥； 3）词数：100词左右（短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数）；4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地

2、名等。Zhang Yang is a student in Sunshine Middle School._【答案】Zhang Yang is a student in Sunshine Middle School. He is in Class 2,Grade 9. He likes reading. He spends more than seven hours a week reading all kinds of books because he thinks reading is helpful. He enjoys watching birds. He counts the num

3、ber of birds twice a year to study changes in the number of birds. He donated his pocket money to the Hope Project last month. His dream is to be the chief engineer of high-speed railway connecting my hometown to Shanghai. He hopes everyone can make some changes to protect the environment. We mustnt

4、 throw rubbish everywhere.【解析】【详解】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如like reading，more than，all kinds of，spend time doing，enjoy doing，the number of，twice a year，be the chief engineer of等。而He spends more than seven hours a week reading all kinds of books because he thinks reading is helpful./ He

5、hopes everyone can make some changes to protect the environment.等多种复杂从句结构的综合运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。2书面表达“小手拉大手,同做文明人。”自创建文明城市文明乡村以来,淄博人民万众一心,众 志成城,让人点赞的行为随处可见。作为中学生,我们也

6、做出了自己的努力。请根据以下所 给要点,写一篇 100 词左右的英语短文。1.种植花草树木；2.遵守交通规则；3.公共场合不大声喧哗；4.公交车上主动给有需要的人让座；（自主发挥,至少两点）参考词汇: civilized 文明的 make joint efforts 共同努力 obey 遵守【答案】Since creating the civilized city and countryside, all the people in Zibo have made joint efforts（共同努力）. Their good behavior can be seen everywhere.As

7、 junior students, we have also made some contributions to the civilized Zibo. Forexample, to protect our environment, we plant flowers and trees. Also, for our own and others safety, we obey the traffic rules and never run red light. In addition（此外）, we no longer talk or laugh loudly in public.Whats

8、 more, when on a bus, we actively give our seats to the people in need.Besides, we have formed a good habit of throwing rubbish into a dustbin, never littering anywhere. Furthermore（而且）, we are accustomed to （习惯于）queuing up （排队） for a ticket or something else. All in all, we will try our best to do

9、what we can to make ourselves and Zibo city more civilized【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如make joint efforts，as junior students，for example，obey the traffic rules，run red light，in addition，no longer，in public，and so on，whats more，on a bus，in need，be accustomed to，queue up，all in all等。而to

10、protect our environment, we plant flowers and trees./ Whats more, when on a bus, we actively give our seats to the people in need./ All in all, we will try our best to do what we can to make ourselves and Zibo city more civilized.等插入语的运用，丰富了短文内容，使语言表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材

11、料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。3 书面表达暑假即将来临,对于如何安排孩子初中毕业后的第一个假期,家长们和孩子自己有着各自的想法。根据下表提示,写一篇英语短文,描述他们的不同看法,同时发表你自己对暑假安排的观点。Parents opinionsGet ready for high school. Do some houseworkKids opinionsHave a good rest. Do some sightseeingYour opin

12、ion注意（1）表格中的观点仅供参考,允许适当发挥;（2）开头已给出,不计入总词数;（3）文中不得出现真实姓名和校名等信息;（4）词数:不少于80。How will you spend the coming summer vacation? Parents and kids have their own opinions. _【答案】How will you spend the coming summer vacation? Parents and kids have their own opinions.Some parents think kids should get ready for

13、 high school in the sum?mer so its important to take summer courses. They also think kids can help do housework to learn some life skills. But the kids disagree. They think its time to take a good rest. They need to hang out with their friends to go sightseeing.In my opinion we can have a talk with

14、our parents. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. We need to relax ourselves after working so hard at school. Its good for us to do some sports.【解析】【详解】这是一篇给材料作文，本文已经给出了主要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；结合材料内容，可知本文主要是第三人称，一般现在时态进行叙述语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯适当使用连词，做到上下文

15、联系紧密，符合逻辑关系【点睛】这篇短文用到了一些好的句型：They also think kids can help do housework to learn some life skills. But the kids disagree. They think its time to take a good rest. They need to hang out with their friends to go sightseeing.这些给文章增色不少。4书面表达假如你是李明，你的英国笔友Jack来信询问你的家乡是否有雾霾天气，情况如何。请你按照以下提示给他回一封e-mail。内容如下：

16、1. 由于大气污染程度十分严重，去年已发生数次雾霾天气；2. 人们已经意识到雾霾天气的危害，正在采取各种措施减少其发生；3. 你在日常生活中打算为此做些什么。参考词汇：雾霾haze注意：1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；2. 语言通顺，句子连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；3. 词数80左右，信件的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jack,Im glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. Now Id like to tell you something

17、 about the haze. _ Yours,Li Ming【答案】Dear Jack,Im glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. Now Id like to tell you something about the haze.The hazy weather has occurred a lot of times in my hometown since last year. It was bad for our daily life. More

18、 and more people have to go to see the doctor due to the serious diseases caused by the haze. A great number of people have to stay at home .People all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather now. The government suggests that people go to work or school by public transport, s

19、uch as the bus and the subway.As for me, I will go to school by bike or on foot. In addition, I will tell the people I meet to protect the environment. Would you like to tell me some good ideas? Im looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Ming【解析】【详解】这篇作文要求我们以李明的身份给自己的英国笔友写信，告诉他关于家乡雾霾的情况。题目中列出了三个要点，我们

20、应根据这些要点提示，来组织语言，充实内容。首先介绍去年家乡的雾霾情况严重；然后介绍为减少雾霾人们采取了一些措施；最后介绍一下你自己在日常生活中应该怎么做。因此文章应主要分成三段，一个内容一段。文章内容中叙述的情况不一，时态不能统一，根据表达的需要使用正确的时态，注意谓语动词的正确形式。写作时，应注意英语句式表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能逐词翻译，应从句子的整体考虑，写完整的句子，利用简单句的基本句型，使用恰当的词汇和短语。为提升文章档次，可以穿插使用并列句和复合句；语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯，表达流畅。【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文中作者根据题目要求介绍了自己家乡治理雾霾的情况，并

21、结合自身的实际情况，讲述了自己日常生活中是如何做的。首先短文内容完整，包含了题目中要求的所有信息，没有遗漏要点；且文章结构清晰，分成了三段，每一段的中心明确，意思表达清楚、明了。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，作者根据表达需要使用了一般过去时、一般将来时态和一般将来时态，动词形式变化准确，语法规范。短文中语言得体，句式表达符合英语的习惯。句子结构以简单句为主，也使用了一些并列句和复合句，长短句结合，使文章富有节奏。短文中较好的句式有More and more people have to go to see the doctor due to the serious diseases cau

22、sed by the haze、People all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather now. 、The government suggests that people go to work or school by public transport, such as the bus and the subway、In addition, I will tell the people I meet to protect the environment.等。5共享单车自从2016年在江阴投入使用以来，

23、给人们带来了诸多便利，受到人们的追捧，改变了人们的出行方式，但同时也遇到了一些挑战，是国民素质的“照妖镜”，请你根据表格中信息的提示，给21世纪英文报写一篇关于共享单车看法的稿件。社会现状自从出现，饱受赞誉。诸多优势随处可见，出行方便有益健康，减少污染费用不高，负担得起存在问题未及时归还占道挡路你的观点我认为-参考词汇：公共自行车public bicycles注意事项：1.短文须包括表格中所有提示内容，要求语句通顺，意思连贯。2.表格中“你的观点”一栏用2-3句话展开合理想象，做适当发挥。3.词数在90个左右，文章的开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。Public bicycles are beco

24、ming more and more popular in our daily life. 【答案】Public bicycles are becoming more and more popular in our daily life. They have won high praise since they appeared. Public bicycles have brought us many advantages. They can be seen everywhere so that its easy for us to get around on public bicycles

25、. Also, Riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. Whats more, using public bicycles costs so little that we can afford it. But there are some problems too. Some people cant return public bicycles in time. Sometimes because public bicycles take up too much of

26、 the road, they are in our way. I think we should encourage more people to use public bicycles. After all, its a way of living a green life.【解析】这是一篇材料作文，要求给英文报社写一篇投稿，介绍对共享单车看法。作文应包括4个主要内容，一个是社会现状，第二个优点，第三是存在的问题，最后发表个人的观点。动笔前要认真审题，深入挖掘题材内涵，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。要注意上下文的连贯，将这些内容有机的连接起来，不要逐句翻译。使用一些好的句型和短语，注意正确的时

27、态和语态以及谓语动词的形式，还需要注意英语表达和汉语习惯的不同，让整篇短文表达流畅。6书面表达为了配合“足球进校园”活动，你们班开展了一次主题班会。请你以足球迷的身份，根据下列表格中的要点提示，用英语向同学们介绍足球这项运动并谈谈自己的梦想。常 识历史悠久，深受喜爱世界杯4年举行一次好 处男生女生皆可参加利于培养团队精神考生自拟（至少1点）偶 像梅西，有足球天赋梦 想考生自拟（至少1点）注意：1. 词数90左右。短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；1.短文须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；2.短文中不得真实的人名、校名等相关信息。参考词汇：梅西 MessiDear c

28、lassmates,Im very excited to hear that China will build 20,000 football-themed schools by 2020. Thank you for your attention.【答案】Dear classmates，Im very excited to hear that China will build 20，000 football-themed schools by 2020Football has a very long historyIt is liked by people all over the worldThe World Cup takes place ev