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1、最新 中考英语书面表达综合测试含答案1最新 中考英语书面表达综合测试（含答案）1一、中考英语书面表达（含答案详细解析）1假如你是班长李华，今天你们班对即将到来的暑假计划进行了讨论。你们班的外教David对此很感兴趣。请你根据以下信息，给 David写一封电子邮件，告诉他讨论的情况及你自己本人的计划及原因。比例计划原因50% 去国内外旅游1.放松;2.欣赏美景30% 多读一些书1.增长知识；2.培养兴趣20% 参加社会实践1.锻炼自己;2.结识朋友你的计划? （至少一个）？（请你补充）注意：（1）邮件应包含所有要点（2）词数80个左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数）；（3）不得透露学校、姓名等任

2、何个人信息，否则不予评分注：社会实践 social practice activitiesDear DavidIm writing to tell you something about our discussion today._Best wishes!YoursLi Hua【答案】Dear DavidIm writing to tell you something about our discussion today.The students have their own plans about how to spend a meaningful summer vacation. Half

3、 of the students plan to travel at home and abroad. They want to relax and enjoy the beautiful scenery. Thirty percent of students plan to read more books. They believe that reading can increase knowledge. Reading books can make people smart and develop interests. 20% of them plan to take part in so

4、cial practice activities. They want to exercise themselves and make new friends. Im going to take part in social practice activities, too. I want to learn something new and get good experience from these activities.Best wishes!YoursLi Hua【解析】【详解】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如how to do，spend a meaningfu

5、l summer vacation，half of，plan to do，travel at home and abroad，enjoy the beautiful scenery，take part in，social practice activities，make new friends 等。而非谓语动词结构The students have their own plans about how to spend a meaningful summer vacation./ Reading books can make people smart and develop interests.

6、和宾语从句They believe that reading can increase knowledge.的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。2近年来，各大城市雾霾（haze）情况越来越严重，整个国家的空气污染状况令人担忧。请分

7、析空气污染的现象，原因，应对措施，写一份英文的倡议书，呼吁大家保护环境，减少对空气的污染。要点提示：（1）我国空气污染的现象。（至少写2点）（2） 空气污染产生的原因。（至少写2点）（3）减少空气污染的措施。（至少写2点）要求：（1） 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。（2） 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。Dear students , As we all know , hazy days have been influencing our lives a lot in recent years . That warns us of the serious airpollutio

8、n_ 【答案】Dear students,As we all know, hazy days have been influencing our lives a lot in recent years. That warns us of the serious air pollution. Big factories, power plants and cars all can cause air pollution. For example, chemicals in the smoke from power stations cause a lot of damage. Besides,

9、the peoples activities are also the sources of air pollution such as throwing the rubbish and smoking. Whats more, the more trees are cut down, the less polluted air can absorb. Air pollution is becoming more and more serious, so we should take some measures such as planting more trees and stop fact

10、ories from sending out waste air, whats more, we had better walk or take a bus. Protecting the environment is our duty. Everyone should play a part in saving the earth.【解析】【详解】这是一篇材料作文，根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下整个国家的空气污染状况。所提供的材料中列举了近年来，各大城市雾霾（haze）情况越来越严重，主要从空气污染的现象，原因，应对措施三个方面去介绍。时态为一般现在时。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息，并适

11、当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。【高分句型一】We had better walk or take a bus. 我们最好步行或乘公共汽车。这里had better表示最好，后面跟动词原形，take a bus表示乘公共汽车。【高分句型二】Protecting the environment is our duty. 保护环境是我们的职责。这里Protecting the environment 做主语，用的是动词的i

12、ng形式。3书面表达社会需要爱，时代呼唤爱。对善行、对爱心的感动，存在于每个人的心中。但很多人缺乏的不是感动，而是一种显示感动的勇气。请为你身边的人或事点赞，让“点赞”成为传递正能量的一种行动吧！是什么行为让你点赞？讲述一件你点赞的事情。你从他/她身上可以学到什么？让我们一起分享吧！请根据以下提示要点，写一篇文章。注意：1词数：80左右；2不要出现真实的人名及校名。Make a list of the persons that you should give a “like” buttonTell us one of the experiences that you clicked a “li

13、ke” buttonWhat could you learn from him/her? 【答案】I should give my uncle a “like” button. He is very tall and very strong. He punishes the bad people and protect the good people. He always helps others. He is my hero. He works hard.When I grow up, I want to be a policeman like my uncle. I want to hel

14、p people and protect them, so they can live a safe life.【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，讲述一件我点赞的事情，我从他/她身上可以学到什么。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I should，He is，He always helps，I want to，so they can等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我要点赞的人，接下来介绍他

15、的情况，最后指出我从他身上学到的东西。此处give sb sth, work hard, grow up, want to do sth, live a life等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。4书面表达根据下列表格的提示，写一篇题为Changes in Our Hometown的英语短文（80词左右）文章内容必须包含所给的所有信息开头已给出，不计入总词数内容要点：过去现在1旧房1高楼2河水肮脏2河水清澈（clean and clear）3步行、骑自行车上班3乘公交车、小汽车上班4道路狭窄（narrow）4街道宽阔（wide），干净整洁5居住条件（livingconditions）差5生活越

16、来越好，环境（environment）越来越舒适6你的感想（写两到三句）Changes in Our HometownIn the past ten years，great changes have taken place in our hometown 【答案】Changes in Our HometownIn the past ten years, great changes have taken place in our hometown. In the past, there used to be old houses. The river was very dirty. The ro

17、ads were narrow and the living conditions were terrible. People were not rich. They went to work on foot or by bike. But now, there are many tall buildings in our hometown. We can see the clean river and the clear water . Even we can see fish in the water. There are many wide and clean roads. Our li

18、fe is better and better The environment around us is more and more comfortable. People usually go to work by bus or by car.I am glad to see these great changes in my hometown. But I think its still important to remember the past. It tells that we should cherish the present life.【解析】【详解】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清

19、晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如take place，in our hometown，in the past，used to be，go to do，on foot，by bike，better and better，more and more等。而I think its still important to remember the past/It tells that we should cherish the present life.等宾语从句结构的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样，是本文的最大亮点。【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所

20、规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。5 书面表达请将短文写在答题卡相应的位置上。一直以来，同学们对作业持有不同的观点。在你班的主题班会上，同学们进行了“Is daily homework necessary？”的讨论，请你根据提示和要求，并结合自己的实际经验，发表你的观点。YesNoHelp us understand what we have learned；Practice makes prefect；.Take up too much

21、time；Make us less interested in studying；.Your opinion：要求：180词以上。2文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。【答案】Dear students，Im glad to give a report about my ideas on daily homework. I think its necessary for us to do daily homework.Doing daily homework can help us understand what we have learned in class. For me, I always

22、have some difficulties in mastering all of what I have learned in class. Through daily homework, I review the knowledge and think over the difficulties. Little by little, I have a better understanding. So I always believe “Practice makes perfect”In my opinion, daily homework is necessary for us stud

23、ents. But it shouldnt be too much. It can improve our skills. Daily homework should be different and colorful. It might be some extensive reading, a paper or even just a game. We should be left enough free time so that we can do things we really like to do.Thats all. Thanks.【解析】写作分析：审题之后能明白写作任务是要写出一

24、篇小论文，讨论每日的作业到底是不是必要的。首先需要陈述正反两方面的观点，其次结合自己的实际经验，发表自己的观点。写作过程中要注意逻辑准确，注意正确使用连词，借助实例、实际经验来佐证自己的观点。写作亮点：首先用一个自然段来阐明写作的主题，表达出自己的观点（认为作业是很必要的），可以借助it is necessary for sb to do这样的句型。其次，开始具体陈述观点，陈述的时候要适当使用实例，相关用到的短语有have some difficulties in doing在做的时候有困难，review the knowledge复习知识，think over the difficultie

25、s来回思考难点，Little by little一点一点地。恰当的谚语也为文章增色不少，例如用到了“Practice makes perfect”熟能生巧这个谚语。最后可以用说理的方式来介绍做作业的必要性，例如用到了improve our skills提高我们的技能，在这里也有一点亮点，就是说作业也要有变化性，要丰富多彩，体现了作者的深度思考，总体来说出色地完成了既定的写作任务。6为了宣传和弘扬中华优秀传统文化, 某双语杂志将举办征文活动来介绍中国的经典故事, “程门立雪（Stand in the snow to wait for Master Cheng respectfully）”是其中一

26、个选题。请你根据下面的内容提示, 用英语写一篇短文参加此活动。内容提示：1. 杨时去拜见老师程颐一老师在睡觉一杨时在雪地等一老师醒来发现杨时在门口2. 通过介绍这个故事, 发表你的看法或者观点。要求：1. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯：词数：100左右. 2. 不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称、老师和同学的真实姓名。【答案】Long long ago, there was a man called Yangshi. Once he went to visit his teacher, Chengyi. Unfortunately, Mr. Cheng was sleeping in the

27、room. He didnt wake up the teacher. So he stood in front of the gate. At that moment, there were snowflakes flying over his head and it was very cold. But yangshi still stood in the snow until Mr. Cheng woke up. When the teacher woke up, the snow was very deep. Yangshi was like a snowman standing at

28、 the gate. Finally, the teacher was moved deeply.After reading the story, I think we should respect our teacher. We should study hard.【解析】【详解】这是一篇材料作文，主要介绍中国的经典故事, “程门立雪（Stand in the snow to wait for Master Cheng respectfully）”。目的是宣传和弘扬中华优秀传统文化。时态为一般过去时，灵活运用动词的过去式。作文要包含材料上的所有信息，通过介绍这个故事，发表看法或者观点。写作时

29、，避免汉语式英语。注意固定搭配及主谓一致的问题，例如:There was/ were.注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，具有条理性。7书面表达（本题15分）根据要求完成短文写作，请将作文写在答题卡指定的位置上。为了使生活更美好，社会需要正能量（positive energy）。生活中，我们需要他人的帮助，也要学会帮助他人。请你在网上给What would you do?本期节目留言，内容包括：1. 你对节目中挺身而出的顾客的看法；2. 说说你帮助别人或别人帮助你的一件事例；3. 呼吁大家互帮互助，彼此感恩，让社会充满正能量。作文要求：1不得照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓

30、名。2语句连贯，词数80个左右。 作文的开头已经给出，不必抄写在试卷上，也不计入总词数。In the program, a customer stood up when a blind woman was cheated badly in a cake shop. _【答案】In the program, a customer stood up when a blind woman was cheated badly in a cake shop. I really admire her because she was brave enough to help the woman in need.The other day I saw a little girl crying at a street corner on my way home. I tried my best to make her stop crying. When I knew she was lost, I helped her make a call to her dad and stayed with her until h