焦作书面表达英语作文汇编中考英语专项训练含答案解析.docx

1、焦作书面表达英语作文汇编中考英语专项训练含答案解析焦作书面表达英语作文汇编中考英语专项训练含答案解析一、中考英语书面表达汇编1（北京中考模拟）年2月20日，中央宣传部授予北京榜样优秀群体“时代楷模”称号。时代楷模充分体现“爱国、敬业、诚信、友善”的价值准则。某网站正在开展以“向时代楷模学习”为主题的英语征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈生活中你该怎么做，以及这样做的意义。提示词语：pick up, rubbish, study, honest, important提示问题： What should you do in your daily life? Why do you d

2、o so? As a middle student, I can do a lot to learn from our role models. 【答案】例文As a middle student, I can do a lot to learn from our role models. First, we can protect the environment. For example, we can pick up the rubbish, recycle things in our daily life, and so on. Second, we shall respect peop

3、le around us. Respect others to start from small things. Third, behave well. We should be kind to others, warm-hearted to everyone, and generous to our friends. By doing so, our world will become more and more beautiful.【解析】【详解】题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，但写作时要按照应用文格式写，写作时承接短文开头，具体写出怎样做以及这样做的意义。例文点评：例文采用的是一段式，人

4、称用的是第一人称复数形式，时态主要用的是一般现在时，描述具体怎么做时，描写细致，条理清晰。高分亮点：短语：protect the environment；pick up the rubbish；behave well；be kind to sb；more and more beautiful。句型：By doing so, our world will become more and more beautiful；we can pick up the rubbish, recycle things in our daily life, and so on。2（天津中考模拟）书面表达86. 如今

5、，中学生的学习时间长，压力大。上周我班学生对如何减压、放松进行了讨论。大家提出了许多种减压、放松的方法。请根据提示，以How Can We get relaxed为题，写一篇短文。词汇：压力pressure要求：（1）词数：80100个。（2）开头已给出，不计入总词数。（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥How Can We Get RelaxedThese days, many students study too long every day and suffer from great pressure. Last week, my class had a discussion on ho

6、w to get relaxed and reduce the pressure. 【答案】These days, many students study too long every day and suffer from great pressure. Last week, my class had a discussion on how to get relaxed and reduce the pressure。The students offered different good suggestions. As well as going to the movie, listenin

7、g to music, even going sightseeing at the weekends, some students think it a good way to take exercise between lessons. After all, too long study without exercise is harmful to our health. Other students feel it important to communicate with our parents. We can get help from them when we are in trou

8、ble.In my opinion, we should spend a little time developing our hobbies like reading or doing sports while working hard. In this way, we can get relaxed and reduce the pressure.【解析】【详解】本文属于话题作文，主要讲述如何减压放松。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用

9、一些亮点词句，如as well as，a good way to，take exercise，after all，be harmful to，communicate with，get help from，be in trouble，in my opinion，spend+时间+（in）doing以及in this way，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。【点睛】写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是

10、开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。3（安徽中考模拟）近来，美国总统特朗普的外孙女由于说一口流利的中文而成为“网红”。你的美国朋友Sam 看过相关报道之后也很想学好中文,但是不知道该怎样

11、做。假如你是大明，请你根据以下提示写一封邮件给他,提一些关于如何学好汉语的建议。要点提示 :1.课堂上认真听讲,做好笔记;2.不要害怕犯错误,与同学们用中文交流;3.课下经常阅读中文杂志、报纸等,在网上看一些中文语言类节目;4.经常用中文给外国笔友写电子邮件等。注意 :1.词数80-100;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.信中不能出现与本人相关的信息;4.开头和结尾已给出,不计人总词数。Dear Sam ,Im happy to hear from you. I know you want to learn Chinese well. Here are some suggestions.

12、_In a word,if you have good ways of learning Chinese ,you will learn it well.YoursDaming【答案】Dear Sam,Im happy to hear from you.I know you want to learn Chinese well.Here are some suggestions.First, you should listen to the teacher and take notes carefully in class. Second, its a good idea to talk wi

13、th your classmates in Chinese. And dont be afraid of making mistakes. Third, youd better read Chinese magazines or newspapers after class. You can also watch Chinese programmes on the Internet. I think it can help you to improve your pronunciation. Lastly, you can write emails to me or other Chinese

14、 friends in Chinese.In a word, if you have good ways of learning Chinese, you will learn it well.Yours,Daming【解析】【详解】这篇作文要求我们以大明的身份给Sam写一封信，告诉他如何学好汉语，题目中从四个方面提出了建议。通过审题可知，这是要求写一封建议信，内容应包括以下几个方面：首先应和Sam先做一个交流，然后引出写信的目的；接下来给出具体的建议，依据题目中给出的这四条，用正确的英语表达出来，还应注意补充一些内容，使文章更加充实；最后写一个适当的结尾，如希望建议对你有帮助等。文章应使用一

15、般现在时，根据表达需要使用恰当的人称。写作时应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不能按照汉语的思维逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语。应从句子的整体结构考虑，写完整的句子。如可以较常见的主谓宾结构或主系表结构为主，简单句的句型可以使文章叙述清楚、简洁。为提升文章档次，可以穿插使用并列句或复合句以及其他一些复杂句式。语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文章意思连贯，表达流畅。【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求给Sam写了一封信，对他的汉语学习提出了一些好的建议。首先短文内容完整，包括了题目中要求的所有信息。文章主要分成三个部分：第一段是与Sam之间的问候以及引出Sam学习汉语这一话题，并介绍写信的目的

16、；第二段中是提出的具体的建议，这是这篇文章的主体，所在篇幅最大。这一段中使用了First，Second，Third，lastly等词，叙述条理、有层次；最后一段用一句话对整篇文章做了总结。其次短文使用了正确的时态和人称，句式结构符合英语的表达习惯。语法规范、准确，用词得体。文章中的语句以简单句结构为主，也使用了并列句和复合句，调整了文章的结构。文章中使用了较为丰富的短语和句型，如First, you should listen to the teacher and take notes carefully in class.、Second, its a good idea to talk wi

17、th your classmates in Chinese、I think it can help you to improve your pronunciation、In a word, if you have good ways of learning Chinese, you will learn it well.等等。4（山东中考模拟）环保话题是人们最关心的话题之一，请以Change for a better China为主题，结合自己家乡的变化写一篇英语短文。注意事项：1.短文应包括表格中的所有提示内容，条理清楚，作适当发挥。2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名,词数不少于80。 状况

18、水污染，大气污染. 应对措施立即阻止此类活动,治理环境（至少两条）. 感想建议环境能够变得更好.Change for a better China_【答案】We all know it is becoming more and more important to protect our environment well. But some people dont care about it .They throw litter into the river and even worse factories also put waste into the river, the river is

19、full of rubbish. The air is badly polluted because there are more cars on the road these days. Factories that burn coal also pollute the air with a lot of black smoke. We hardly ever see blue skies anymore.I think everyone in our hometown should play a part in cleaning it up. We should write to the

20、government ,they should close down the factories. Trees are very helpful and important for the environment .We can plant more trees and more trees in order to live better and more healthy .Now, Our hometown has started to face the problem, I believe we can make our country a better place if we keep

21、trying.【解析】【详解】环保话题是人们最关心的话题之一，请以Change for a better China为主题，结合自己家乡的变化写一篇英语短文。要求中已经给出了部分提示，动笔先应先认真阅读提示，确定写作内容。写作中注意表达观点时的常用句式，注意在表达不同观点时，连词的使用。内容上应注意描述的全面性；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。【点睛】本文紧扣要求对家乡做了简单介绍，内容完整，用了表格中的信息。2.句式丰富。表述灵活。衔接自然，顺畅。文中用到了一些好的句型：The air is badly polluted because there are more

22、 cars on the road these days.；We can plant more trees and more trees in order to live better and more healthy.给文中增色不少。5（江苏中考模拟）书面表达随着中国国际地位的日益提高，越来越多的外国友人开始关注中国。假定你是李明，你最近认识的澳大利亚笔友David给你发了一封电子邮件，想更多地了解中国。请认真阅读下面的邮件，并根据信中的内容及你的了解用英语回复。To: Li Ming 163. comFrom: David bigpond. comDear Li Ming,How are

23、you? Is everything going smoothly? Its February. Its very hot in Australia nowand Im having a long summer vacation. Im making a trip plan to China these days. Would youplease tell me more about China?Whats the season in China now?Whats the most popular festival at this time of the year and what do y

24、ou do during thefestival?Which city in China is worth a visit and what can I do there?What gifts can I choose for my Australian friends and relatives?I look forward to hearing from you soon.Best wishesDavid注意事项:1.回复须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，要求语句通顺、意思连贯;2.词数在90个左右，信的首尾已给出，不计入总词数;3.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。Dear David,

25、Im really happy to tell you something interesting about China. China is a country with a long history. Im sure youll have a wonderful time here.Yours sincerely,Li Ming【答案】Dear Thomas,Im really happy to tell you something interesting about China. China is a country with along history.It is winter now

26、 and Spring Festival is the most popular at this time of year. Family members get together and then have a big dinner, After that, they watch lion dances and fireworks.“East or west, Gulin landscape is best.” Guilin is worth a visit if you like natural views. You can take a boat trip along the Lijia

27、ng Rive or ride around the countryside. It is great fun.Guilin is a special city with strong local colour. You can choose many excellent gifts there, such as Chinese paintings, paper fans and colorful clothes. Im sure youll have a wonderful time here.Yours sincerely.Li Hua【解析】【详解】这是一篇书信作文，根据电子邮件中的相关

28、信息向澳大利亚笔友David介绍一下中国。所提供的材料中问到了关于中国的几个问题：Whats the season in China now? Whats the most popular festival at this time of the year and what do you do during the festival? Which city in China is worth a visit and what can I do there? What gifts can I choose for my Australian friends and relatives? 主要从这

29、几个方面去介绍。时态为一般现在时，人称为第三人称。注意作文中必须包含电子邮件上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。【高分句型一】Guilin is worth a visit if you like natural views. 如果你喜欢自然风光，桂林值得一游。句子if you like natural views.是由if引导的条件状语从句。【高分句型二】Im sure youll have a won

30、derful time here. 我相信你会在这里过得很愉快。youll have a wonderful time here. 是宾语从句。6（浙江中考模拟）书面表达 假如你是Li Ming, 最近你的英国笔友Susan要来温州体验中国的传统文化，请你为Susan设计温州一日游的活动，帮助她体验温州的文化习俗。请根据以下要点用英语给她写一封电子邮件：1.计划去的地方；2.一日游的活动安排；3.阐述安排的理由要求：1. 不能出现真实的个人身份信息；2. 词数：110词左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Susan,Im glad to hear that you are coming to Wenzhou._