1、浙江高考读后续写真题范文赏析2018-2019浙江高考读后续写真题范文赏析One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she sa
2、id to Tom. Im going to find a better spot for us to camp and walked away.With no path to follow,Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place. she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mount
3、ain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost.Tom! she cried. Help!No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the n
4、ight. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling (滴落somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To
5、her great joy,she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now. Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter.
6、 Is that for me? Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.应使用5个以上短文文中标
7、有下划线的关键词语:3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.Paragraph 2 It was daybreak when Jane woke up. 2019.6On a bright, warm July afternoon, Mac Hollan, a primary school teacher, was cycling from his home to Alaska with his fr
8、iends. One of his friends had stopped to make a bicycle repair, but they had encouraged Mac to carry on, and they would catch up with him soon. As Mac pedaled (骑行) along alone, he thought fondly of his wife and two young daughters at home. He hoped to show them this beautiful place someday. Then Mac
9、 heard quick and loud breathing behind him. Man, thats a big dog! he thought. But when he looked to the side, he saw instantly that it wasnt a dog at all, but a wolf, quickly catching up with him. Macs heart jumped. He found out his can of hear spray. With one hand on the bars, he fired the spray at
10、 the wolf. A bright red cloud enveloped the animal, and to Macs relief, it fell back, shaking its head. But a minute later, it was by his side again. Then it attacked the back of Macs bike, tearing open his tent bag. He fired at the wolf a second time, and again, it fell back only to quickly restart
11、 the chase追赶。Mac was pedaling hard now. He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful not to show down. He saw a steep uphill climb before him. He knew that once he hit the hill, hed be easy caught up and the wolfs teeth would be tearing into his flesh.At this moment, Paul and Beeky were drivi
12、ng their car on their way to Alaska. They didnt think much of it when they saw two cyclists repairing their bike on the side of the road. A bit later, they spotted what they, too, assumed was a dog running alongside a man on a bike. As they got closer, they realized that the dog was a wolf. Mac hear
13、d a large vehicle behind him. He pulled in front of it as the wolf was catching up fast, just a dozen yards away now.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.应使用5个以上短文文中标有下划线的关键词语:3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1The car abrubtly stopped in front of him.Paragraph 2 A few minutes later,the ot
14、her two cyclists arrived.2019 11. 浙江高考 Avacation with my mother I had an interesting childhood: It was filled with surprise and amusements, all because of my mother-loving, sweet, and yetabsent-mindedandforgetful. One strange familytripwe took when I was eleven tells a lot about her. My two sets of
15、grandparents lived in Colorado and North Dakota, and my parents decided to spend a few weeks driving to those states and seeing all the sights along the way. As the first day of our trip approached,David, my eight-year-old brother, and I unwillingly said good-bye to all of our friends. Who knew if w
16、ed ever see them again? Finally, the moment of our departure arrived, and we loaded suitcases, books, games,campingequipment, and atentinto the car and bravely drove off. We bravely drove off again two hours later after wed returned home to get the purse and travelers checksMomhad forgotten. David a
17、nd I were always a little nervous when using gas station bathrooms if Mom was driving whileDadslept: You stand outside the door and play lookout while I go, and Ill stand outside the door and play lookout while you go. I had terrible pictures in my mind: Honey, where are the kids? What?! Oh, Gosh I
18、thought they were being awfully quiet. We were never actually left behind in a strange city, but we werent about to take any chances.On the fourth or fifth night, we hadtroublefinding a hotel with a vacancy. After driving in vain for some time, Mom suddenly got a great idea: Why didnt we find a hous
19、e with a likely-looking backyard and ask if we could set up tent there? David and I became nervous. To our great relief, Dad turned down the idea. Mom never could understand our objections.If a strange family showed up on her front doorsteps, Mom would have been delighted. She thinks everyone in the
20、 world as asniceas she is. We finally found a vacancy in the next town.注意:1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3. 续写部分分为两段,每段开头语已为你写好;4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Para1: The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us.Para2: We drove through several states and saw lots of gre
21、at sights along the way.2019 6 It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon. Uncle Paul, my dads frien
22、d, picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos.His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby. Very early in th
23、e morning, Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast. The day starts at dawn on my farm, he said. After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens. while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze(吃草). I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked r
24、eally cool. In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a hose ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me. I wasnt going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains. Dont be late fo
25、r supper, Uncle Paul cried, and keep to the track so that you dont get lost! OK! my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his fam house were out of sight. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a ma
26、gic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven(编织的blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.注意:1. 所续写短文的词数应为l50左右;2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语:3. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. We had no idea where we were and it got dark.参考范文一: P
27、aragraph 1 But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Jane had to stay alone in the forest for another cold night. At that moment (时间), she felt a little sad, but she wasnt so frightened (情感). She reminded herself constantly, (心理) Tom must have called for those helicopters. Maybe (情
28、感) he was in one of them and will return soon(动作)! I have to guide him tomorrow. She felt asleep (动作) and dreamed of seeing Tom (动作).Paragraph 2 It was daybreak when Jane woke up. She ate some berries and then(时间) walked along the stream, hoping (心理) to find a suitable place to guide the helicopter.
29、 She walked and walked,exhausted but full of hope. Suddenly (时间), she spotted (动作) a huge flat rock. She managed (动作) to climb onto it and waited with patience. The moment (时间) the helicopter appeared (动作) again. The nearer it got (动作), the more she waved (动作) the yellow blouse. To her great joy, (情
30、感) the helicopter didnt miss Jane this time and it landed near the big rock slowly. Tom jumped off the helicopter and rushed (动作) towards Jane. They hugged each other tightly (情感) and burst into tears (情感).参考范文二:The car abrubtly stopped in front of him.Mac jumped off his bicycle and dashed for the b
31、ack door of the car. It was locked. He then ran around to the passenger door, but it was locked, as well, so he began to climb through the open window.When spotting this ,Paul quickly unlocked the door, and the frightened man dived in,slamming the door behind him.Paul looked out the back window and
32、saw the wolf standing over Macs bike as if it were a kill. Shortly after, the animal ran off. A few minutes later,the other two cyclists arrived .Mac emerged from the car and hugged his friends. I thought I was going to die, Mac cried to them.Mac retrieved取回 his bicycle, and the three men resumed(继续 their road trip, agreeing to keep in one anothers sight line. A few miles down the road, Mac pulled over and burst into tears.The rest of the trip was amazing, but I had to let the former
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