1、必备英语书面表达知识点总结必备英语书面表达知识点总结一、中考英语书面表达汇编1(江苏中考模拟)书面表达 某英语教育网站正在举办有关分享的主题征文活动,请你根据图示内容,结合自己的经历写一篇题为“Sharing”的英语短文。注意:1.短文需包括图示内容,并适当发挥。2.词数80左右,短文的开头已经给出,不计入总词数。3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。SharingIts very important for us to learn to share with each other. 【答案】Its very important for us to learn to s
2、hare with each other. Therere many things to share in our lives. We can share our happiness or trouble. Some of us like sharing face to face while others prefer to share online like QQ or Wechat.Once, I failed in a Math test. I had difficulty cheering myself up, but I realized keeping worries to mys
3、elf would make it worse. After sharing it with my friend, I felt much better. Moreover, his words encouraged me a lot. In my opinion, sharing is really helpful. It can bring us more joy and provide us with useful suggestions.【解析】此篇书面表达的话题是“分享”。首先我们根据给出的图表确定要写的内容的提纲,包括:分享什么?为什么分享?怎么分享?然后根据每个提纲给出的一些关键
4、词,列出写作要点及每个要点可能用到的表达,拓展思维,写出自己的看法。最后,我们还要注意“分享”的情感教育,让我们学有所获。文章时态要用一般现在时和一般过去时,人称主要用第一人称。在写作的时候,注意紧扣主题,连句成篇,保持文章的连贯性。同时要注意准确运用时态,语言的表述应该符合语法的结构,造句应该符合英语的表达习惯;尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,最好不要写太长的复合句;尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词,确保正确率;词汇、句式要丰富多样,可以为文章增色添彩。最后必须认真检查是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等。2(陕西西北工业大学附属中学中考模拟)假如你是李华,初中生活即将结束,在步入高中学校学习之际
5、,你思绪万千。请你根据 下面的提示,写一封信表达你对老师由衷的感激。提示:1. 生活上的照顾 2.精种上的支持 3. 学习上的帮助 要求:1. 参考提示内容,可适当发挥;2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;3. 文中不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、班级)4. 词数:不少于 80 词。(开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。) Dear teachers, My junior high school life is coming to an end. Now, Id like to show my thanks to you for what youve done to me these years.【
6、答案】My junior high school life is coming to an end. Now, Id like to show my thanks to you for what youve done to me these years. You take great care of me in life. Last year, when I was ill, You took me to see a doctor and took good care of me. Im very grateful. When I encounter difficulties, you alw
7、ays encourage me to face them bravely and help solve them. You supports me in sperm. when I have difficulties in studying , You are always willing to help me.【解析】【详解】考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题,确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词,使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒:考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等。【点睛】这篇短文不使用了大量的的短语,可见该生英语功底
8、扎实。如:You take great care of me in life. Last year, when I was ill, You took me to see a doctor and took good care of me.给文中增色不少。3(广东中考模拟)近年来,我国校园欺凌事件屡有发生,而遭受校园欺凌的学生容易情绪抑郁、焦虑,不 敢去学校,甚至会出现心理问题等严重后果。 请以 “My opinions about school bullying” 为题, 写一篇英语短文,谈谈你的看法。提示:1. What do you think of school bullying?2.
9、 What will you do if you are bullied or you see somebody else being bullied?要求:1. 所给提示信息应全部包括,可适当发挥,以 使行文连贯;2. 80词以上。参考词汇:心理问题mental health problems . My opinions about school bullying_【答案】My opinions about school bullyingSchool bullying is a big problem that has got more and more attention in socie
10、ty. Being bullied can make students feel scared or upset. Some students are afraid of going to school. School bullying can even lead to more serious mental health problems. So how should we stop school bullying?If I see somebody being bullied or I am bullied, I will tell the teachers or my parents a
11、t once. It is not a good idea to do any bad things to the bullies on my own.【解析】【详解】本文属于话题作文,谈谈你对校园欺凌的看法。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑,可适当增加内容。亮点说明:这是一篇优秀的作文,很好的完成了试题规定的任务,语言表达符合英语习惯,准确运用时态、主谓一致,特别使用一些亮点词句,如make sb do, be afraid of, lead to, mental health problem, at once, on ones own, it is not a
12、good idea to do any bad things to the bullies on my own中it作形式主语以及“比较级and比较级”。增强逻辑关系,增加上下文意思连贯,用词准确,句子通顺,行文连贯。【点睛】写作时可以从以下几个方面做起:认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求,抓住要点,词数符合要求。构思提纲。有了提纲,我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的,而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥,因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。初写短文。一切都准备就绪,就可以动笔写作了,在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、
13、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词,使句子衔接自然。修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外,还要检查语法结构是否合理,有无重复、啰嗦的语言,大小写是否正确,格式是否正确,词数是否符合要求等。4(江西中考模拟)健康的体魄离不开好的生活习惯。同样,对于学生来说优异成绩的取得也需要好的学习习惯。请根据以下要点提示,以“How to Develop Good Study Habits”为题写一篇英语短文谈谈自己的看法。提示:1. 养成好的学习习惯的好处;2. 学生中不良学习习惯的表现;3. 对养成好的学习习惯的建
14、议(至少提三条建议)。要求:1. 内容必须包括以上提示要点可以,适当发挥;2. 90词左右,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。How to Develop Good Study Habits Every student wants to study well, but its not easy._【答案】How to Develop Good Study HabitsEvery student wants to study well, but it s not easy. Good study habits help us learn better and more quickly. Howeve
15、r, not all students have developed good study habits. Some are too lazy to finish their homework on time. Some always want to play instead of studying. So how can we develop good study habits?First, you should pay attention to the study time. The best time to study is when you arent feeling sleepy.
16、Second, find a comfortable place to study, but not too comfortable or you may go to sleep! Third, youd better ask for help when having trouble studying.Always remember these suggestions and follow them. Then youll find it not so hard to study well.【解析】【分析】这篇书面表达要求学生写出如何培养良好的学习习惯。【详解】考生要根据提示的3点进行发挥。在
17、内容方面,首先要写出好的学习习惯的好处,也就是为什么要培养好的学习习惯;其次是在学习中发现的不好的学习习惯;最后提出自己对养成好的学习习惯的建议;在语言方面,使用考生自己熟悉的句型,简洁无错;在规范方面,注意单词拼写,标点防护好的正确使用。5(河南中考模拟)书面表达。同学们,从小到大,会有很多不同的人物伴随着你成长,他们可能是你的家人、老师、朋友、同学甚至是路人。他们或许对你产生了重要影响,进而给你留下深刻印象。请以 “A person who impressed me a lot” 为题写一篇英语作文,描述一位给你留下深刻印象的人物。要求:1. 结构清晰,内容完整,语言流利。2. 文中不得出
18、现真实的学校,姓名等个人信息。3. 80词左右。A person who impressed me a lot 【答案】There were so many people in our memory. Some went lost while some impressed us deeply. Now, I want to introduce the one who impressed me a lot.Five years ago, I was a primary school student. My family had to move to another city because of
19、 my fathers work. I was sent to a new and strange school. I was not an outgoing girl, so it was not easy for me to make new friends. When I felt lonely and sad, a little girl in a red dress came to me. She asked me if I needed any help in a soft and beautiful voice. I was surprised but happy. We bec
20、ame good friends and our friendship has lasted till now. The time I spent with her was the best hours in my life. I believe she will be my friend throughout my life.【解析】【详解】本文属于话题作文,描述一位给你留下深刻印象的人物。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑,可适当增加内容。亮点说明:这是一篇优秀的作文,很好的完成了试题规定的任务,语言表达符合英语习惯,准确运用时态、主谓一致,特别适用一些亮点词句,
21、如because of,be sent to, it is adj for sb to do sth, make friends, in a red dress, last, till now以及spend with等。增强逻辑关系,增加上下文意思连贯,用词准确,句子通顺,行文连贯。【点睛】写作时可以从以下几个方面做起:认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求,抓住要点,词数符合要求。构思提纲。有了提纲,我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的,而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥,因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。初写短文。一切都
22、准备就绪,就可以动笔写作了,在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词,使句子衔接自然。修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外,还要检查语法结构是否合理,有无重复、啰嗦的语言,大小写是否正确,格式是否正确,词数是否符合要求等。6(辽宁中考模拟)现在手机是人们生活的必需品,在给我们提供便利的同时,也有很多负面作用。很多人成了“手机控”。请你根据要求谈谈对自己的看法:1. 手机的正面作用;2. 手机给人们带来的烦恼;3. 如何防止成为“手机控”。【答案】 Phones can h
23、elp us communicate more easily and know about whats happening around the world. Today many people, especially young people, are phone freaks. Depending on mobile phones too much is bad for health. Looking at mobile phones too often is bad for our eyes. Playing with mobile phones is a waste of time a
24、nd harmful to study. I think young people should spend more time doing sports or being with their family and friends. They should also pay more attention to their studies. If they fill their time this way, they wont have too much spare time to think about phone entertainment.【解析】【详解】这是一篇开放性话题作文,针对很多
25、人成了“手机控”这一现象,结合自己的亲身经历,谈一谈自己的观点。考生首先要阅读前面的提示去认真审题,确定出文章的中心,用一般现在时态来表达。要求从三个方面去完成写作:1. 手机的正面作用;2. 手机给人们带来的烦恼;3. 如何防止成为“手机控”。需要自由发挥的地方较多,比如手机的正面作用可以写有利于我们的沟通与交流,通过上网了解世界上所发生的事情,手机的负面作用可以写手机对健康的危害,对学生学习的影响等等。最后总结并发出呼吁。另外,写作时,还需注意语句间的衔接,使文意连贯,表达流畅。7(北京中考模拟)环境保护人人有责, 如果我们每一个人都能珍爱美丽地球 保护自然资源,相信我们的家园会越来越美好。某英文网站正在开展以“Going Green”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈我们面临的主要环境问题是什么,为改善环境我们能做什么,以及你的期望。提示词语: pollution, protect, save, recycle, take action提示问题: What are the main environmental problems we have? What can we do in our daily life? Whats your wish?Now there are many environmental problems._
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