浙江专用届高考英语二轮复习第四部分写作训练专题二读后续写.docx

1、浙江专用届高考英语二轮复习第四部分写作训练专题二读后续写专题二 读后续写Writing 1阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。At the center of the mall was the perfect Santa with a gentle manner and a real white beard.My sixyearold granddaughter，Leah，jumped from foot to foot as we waited in line for her turn to sit on his lap“I dont know what to say

2、，” Leah said，raising her neck around the kids in front of her.“Sure you do，”her mother，Leanne，said.“Its Santa.Hes already your friendYoull do just fine.”“Hell ask you what you want for Christmas，” I said.“And you just tell him.”Wed gone over and over the toys shed ask for.Her mother didnt want surpr

3、ises! Leah repeated the listBut a minute later，she inserted new toys shed just spotted at the mall.“Ive got an idea，” said Leanne，digging into her purse as the line inched forward.“Lets write down your requests so you wont forget them.” I couldnt help but laugh.Going to see Santa was such an importa

4、nt appointment for a sixyearold.No child should have any worries bigger than that.But the night before，on the news，Id seen a village in the Middle East that had come under fire.Many of the wounded were children just like our Leah.Looking around the mall full of magical decorations and happy shoppers

5、 I felt safe，as safe as anyone could be.Everyone in the world should have that kind of security，especially at Christmas.“Okay，” Leanne said.“Now youve got everything you want written down here.If you get nervous you can just give the note to Santa.”Leah nodded and took the list. She read out loud，“A

6、 Chia Pet，Moon Sand and Aquadoodle”“Why dont you add a fourth request，Leah，” I heard myself say.“Ask for peaceonearth” My daughter looked a little surprised by my suggestion.“Whats peace on earth，Grandma？” Leah asked.“Peace on earth means all the people in the world would get along.Thats the true me

7、aning of Christmas.” Leah nodded seriously.“Yes，” she agreed.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1：Finally we reached the head of the line._Paragraph 2：The coming days were filled with _【写作指导】本篇写作是读后续写，要求考生根据所读短文内容，尤其是带有下划线的词或者短语的提示完成作文。

8、在写作此类作文时，第一步，考生要认真阅读所给短文，根据短文线索，找出文章的主人公在接下来所要完成的任务，也就是要做的事情以及做这些事情有哪些条件，要达到什么样的目标；第二步，考生应该将所有的关键词语列出来，然后用这些关键词语来组织语言。写作时要注意：1.并不是所有的关键词语都需要用上；2.所有的语句都必须围绕中心展开。【参考范文】Finally we reached the head of the line.One of Santas helpers waved Leah up to Santa and lifted her lightly onto his knee.Within secon

9、ds he had her chatting like they were old friendsLeah shyly handed him her noteSanta adjusted his glasses and read it over very carefully before placing it on the shelf beside him.Leah jumped off his lap and ran into my arms.The coming days were filled with the lastminute preparations for the holida

10、y.It was all worth it as I watched Leah tear joyfully into her presents on Christmas morning.“I got Aquadoodle！”she screamed.“Its just what I wanted！”It was the perfect Christmas as far as I could see.And then I noticed Leah，looking somewhat unhappy.“Whats wrong，honey？”I asked.Leanne came over，“Didn

11、t Santa bring you everything you wanted？”Leah sighed.“Almost，”she said，“But wheres the peaceonearth？”Writing 2阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。I worked from the time I was four and raised seven children，all of them college graduates.It seemed Id done everything Id ever wanted to do in my life，but I had

12、 one regretI was born in 1898，the oldest of five kids.Papa couldnt spare me to go to school，so I worked in the fields with him till I was 21 years old.Everywhere I went，I learned some hard lessons about what happens to a man who even cant readthealphabetPeople cheat you out of wages.They sell you a

13、ticket to one city，take your money and hand you a ticket to somewhere else.By 1928，Id been wandering for nine years.I met a woman named Elzenia.We fell in love，married and moved to Dallas，where I got work fixing roads for the city.When Amelia，the oldest of our seven children，first wenttoschool，I too

14、k my wife aside.“Elzenia，” I said.“I dont want the kids to know I cant read or write.”In 1938，one day my boss called me in. “George，” he said. “No one knows those machines like you do.Id like to promote you.” But my thrill and surprise were cut short when he said，“Fill out this application and well

15、get you a raise.” I couldnt admitthetruthI thanked him and walked out of his office.I did stay right where I was，until I turned 65 and my boss made me retire.But I didnt stop working.For the next 25 years，I lived a happy life，but it still seemed to me like something was missing.A young fellow handed

16、 me a piece of paper. Its information about adulteducationclasses. People can learn to read and write. Now Im 98. I thought of my friends and neighbors and what they might think if they found out I couldnt read.After all these years，my secret would be out.But all my life Ive wanted to read.It was hi

17、gh time for action.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1：The young man drove me to _Paragraph 2：Im still going to school._【写作指导】本篇写作是读后续写，要求考生根据所读短文内容，尤其是带有下划线的词或者短语的提示完成作文。文章大部分在叙述作者从小因家庭贫困而没有读书，因此在工作中错失晋升的良机。文章最后一段尤其是最后一句“It was high t

18、ime for action.”给出了提示，说明接下来要续写的是作者自己重新走进学校的情况。根据关键词语展开适当的联想即可成文。【参考范文】The young man drove me to an old building.I knew it wellit was where all my children had gonetoschoolI looked into the classroom to get a look at who I would be going to school with the next day.The students all looked like babies

19、 to me.There was a lady in her fifties but most of the rest were in their twenties and thirties.I went back to the school the next day.Id been inside the building so many times before with my children.That old building looked the same，and it smelled the same.But this time it was different because th

20、is time it was going to be my school.First came learning thealphabet，then words.In three months，I was reading.It was not very exciting，but I loved it.Im still going to school.I didnt stop there.After all，now I know why Im here.Im here to learnIm here to tell the students its never too late.Writing 3

21、阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Whenever Mr.Smith goes to Westgate，he stays at theGrandHotelDespite its name，it is really not very “grand”，but it is cheap，clean，and comfortable.Since he knows themanager well，he never has to go to the trouble of reserving aroomThe fact is that he always gets the same r

22、oom.It is located at thefarendofthebuildingOn his last visit，Mr.Smith was told that he could have his usual room，but the manager added apologetically that it might be a little noisy.So great was thedemand for rooms，the manager said，that the hotel had decided to build anewwingMr.Smith said he did not

23、 mind.It amused him to think that the dear old Grand Hotel was making an effort to live up to its name.During the first day Mr.Smith hardly noticed thenoise at all.The room was a little dusty，but that was natural.The following afternoon，he borrowed a book from the hotel library and went upstairs to

24、read.No sooner had he sat down than he heard someone hammering loudly at the wall.At first he paid no attention，but after a while he began to feel very uncomfortable.His clothes were slowly being covered with fine whitepowderSoon there was so much dust in the room that he began to cough.The hammerin

25、g was now louder than ever and bits of plaster were coming away from thewallsIt looked as though the whole building was going to fall.Mr.Smith went immediately to complain to the manager.They both returned to the room，but everything was very quiet.As they stood there looking at each other，Mr.Smith f

26、elt rather embarrassed for having dragged the manager all the way up the stairs for nothing.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1：All of a sudden，the hammering began again and a large brick landed on the floor._Paragraph 2：A year later，w

27、hen Mr.Smith went to Westgate again，_【写作指导】本篇读后续写是一篇记叙文，主要叙述了Mr.Smith入住正在装修的the Grand Hotel时发生的一些意想不到的事。续写短文时，考生要根据文章信息及所提供的关键词进行合理想象，使之构成一个完整的故事。内容上，考生可围绕人物心理变化这条线进行写作；形式上，考生可使用倒装手法和非谓语动词来帮助刻画人物心理活动。写作时，考生还要注意长短句相结合，以使行文更具条理性。【参考范文】All of a sudden，the hammering began again and a large brick landed

28、on the floor.Looking up，they saw a sharp metal tool had forced its way through thewall，making a very large hole right above the bed！So tense was the situation that themanager almost let out a scream.In no time they both felt the whole building was vibrating.Then came more whitepowder and dust droppi

29、ng down.Before Mr.Smith could make out what had happened，the manager was nowhere to be found.A year later，when Mr.Smith went to Westgate again，he was surprised to find a modern building had been set up in what used to be theGrandHotelIt turned out that after he angrily left the place a year ago，the manager decided to pull the building down to make