初一下英语作文导学案.docx

1、初一下英语作文导学案初一英语作文集锦 2018-2019学年度第二学期 School_ Class_ Grade_ Name_初中英语作文高分秘诀1. 动笔之前，认真审题中考考试说明指出，书面表达要切中题意。怎样才能切中题意？就是要认真审题，看到考题后，先不要急于动笔，要仔细看清题目要求的内容。在自己的头脑中构思出一个框架或画面，确定短文的中心思想，不要匆匆下笔，看懂题意，根据图画、图表、提纲或短文提供的资料和信息来审题。审题要审格式、体裁、人物关系、故事情节、主体时态、活动时间、地点等。2. 围绕中心，拟定提纲书面表达评分原则有四条：（1）内容要点；（2）运用词汇和结构的数量；（3）运用语法

2、结构和词汇的准确性；（4）上下文的连贯性。由此可见，要点是给分的一个重要因素。为了防止写作过程中遗漏要点，同学们要充分发挥自己的观察力，把情景中给出的各个要点逐条列出。根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾，设想几个承上启下的连词，将主要句型、关键词语草草记下，形成提纲，写时切忌结构分散，废话连篇，严重跑题。书面表达，内容广泛，题材多样，要弄清考题的要求是写人、叙事、介绍、评论、图表、书信、日记、通知、便条还是看图作文或改写缩写。如果是日记，要写清年、月、日和天气情况；如果是书信，则要注意书信的格式，注意短文字数不要低于或超过规定的字数太多。3. 语言通顺，表达准确(1) 避免使用汉语式英

3、语，尽量使用自己熟悉的句型。几种句型可交替使用，以避免重复和呆板。(2) 多用简单句型，记事、写人一般都不需要复杂的句型。可适当多使用陈述句、一般疑问句、祈使句和感叹句。不用或少用非谓语或情态动词等较复杂的句型。(3)注意语法、句法知识的灵活运用。1) 语态、时态要准确无误。2) 主谓语要一致，主语的人称和数要和谓语一致。3) 注意人称代词的宾格形式。4) 注意冠词用法，例如： He is an honest student.中的an不能写成a。5) 注意拼写、标点符号和大小写，例如：receive, believe, fourteen, forty, ninth, restaurant等。标

4、点符号特别注意汉英的不同，例如： 汉语 英语 A. 句号 。 . B. 省略号 C. 顿号 、 无(4) 描写人物时，要生动具体，例如：1) 外表特征：tall, short, fat, thin, strong, weak, ordinary-looking 等。2) 服饰颜色：red, yellow, blue, white, green, brown, black 等。3) 内心境界：glad, happy, sad, excited, anxious, interested 等。4) 感情描写：love, like, hate, feel, laugh, cry, smile, sho

5、ut 等。5) 动作描写：come, go, get, have, take, bring, fetch 等。(5) 上下文要连贯。上下文的连贯性也是评分的一条原则，因此同学们应把写好的句子，根据故事情节，事情发生的先后次序（时间或空间），使用一些表示并列、递进等过渡词进行加工整理，使文章连贯、自然、流畅。同学们应注意下面过渡的用法：1) 表示并列关系的过渡词：and, as well as, or 2) 表示转折关系的过渡词：but, yet, however 3) 表示时间关系的过渡词：first, second, third, and then, finally, after, befo

6、re, after a few days, at last, at that time, later, in the past, immediately, in the meanwhile, when, while, then, after that 4) 表示空间关系的过渡词：near (to), far (from), in the front of, beside, behind, beyond, above, below, to the right, to the left, on one side, on the other side of, outside 5) 表示比较关系的过渡

7、词：in the same way, just like, just as 6) 表示对照关系的过渡词：but, still, yet, however, on the other hand, in spite of, even though 7) 表示递进关系的过渡词： also, and, then, too, in addition, moreover, again 8) 表示因果关系的过渡词：because, since, then, thus, otherwise, so, therefore ,as a result9) 表示解释说明的过渡词：for example, in fac

8、t, in this case, for, actually 10) 表示强调的过渡词：in fact, indeed, necessarily, certainly, without any doubt, truly, most important 11) 表示目的的过渡词：for this reason, for this purpose, so that, in order that, so as to, in order to, 12) 表示列举的过渡词：for example , such as 13) 表示总结性的过渡词：in conclusion, finally, at las

9、t, in brief, as has been stated, in a word, in general, in all, in a word, generally speaking 4. 不会表达，另辟蹊径中考作文给分是以要点和语言准确度而定，不以文采打分。造句越简单准确越好，造复合句容易出错，容易被扣分，阅卷场上有句话：“错误面前人人平等，文采好不加分”。如遇到个别要点表达不出来或难以表达，可采用变通的办法，化难为易，化繁为简。总之，所造句子要正确、得体、符合英语表达习惯。(1) 迂回而行当汉语词义不会用英语表达时，可以想一个与这个汉语词义相似的几种词义。扩展思路，然后从英语中找出一个

10、与其词义相近的代替。这样可有异曲同工之妙。(2) 小词大用汉语中有些语意看来很复杂很文雅，但在英语中可用一些常用词表达。下面这些词可能在你的书面表达中很有用：take, have, get, make, come, go, do, see, show, happy, nice, kind, help 等。(3) 借花献佛有时书面表达中需要的单词或词组或许在试卷中的其他地方出现。因为刚刚做过题，记忆犹新，那么就可信手拈来，为我所用。5. 锦上添花，量力而行如果你还有时间和精力，想把书面表达写得更好，那么，请注意以下几点：(1) 句型多样化，不要I（We）到底，使人觉得乏味。(2) 适当使用一些并

11、列句或主从复合句。(3) 进一步描绘人或事物时，适当使用定语从句。(4) 适当使用分词或分词短语，烘托谓语动词。(5) 偶尔使用一下倒装句，增加新鲜感。(6) 适当调换一下状语在句子中的位置，使句子不雷同。(7) 上下句子紧接时，其中完全相同的成分可以省略，以节省篇幅。6. 书写工整，卷面整洁字迹要清晰，让阅卷人看得清楚，不可字迹潦草，难以辨认，要保持卷面的整洁。7. 写完之后，勿忘检查中考作文时，由于时间紧、内容多，同学们出错在所难免。因此，改错这一环节必不可少。中考作文评卷是根据要点、语言准确性、上下文的连贯性来给分，根据错误多少来扣分。因此，中考时花几分钟时间用来检查错误显得尤为重要。检

12、查错误应从以下几个方面入手：(1) 格式是否有错。(2) 拼写有无错误。(3) 语言是否用错。(4) 时态、语态错误。(5) 标点错误。(6) 人称是否用错。【注意】此时不宜在卷面上作较大的改动，以免顾此失彼，影响全局。总之，只要平时同学们多练习写作并有意运用上述方法和技巧，合理分配时间，在中考时一定能写出高质量的作文，得到令人满意的考分。中考英语写作方法一审”即审题。主要是看清楚题目要求，读懂题目所表达的含义，抓住要点，注意文体是什么，准备写作的人称和时态：如果是日记和故事，宜采用过去时态；如是简介之类的，宜采用现在时态。 “二写”即列纲。主要是列个提纲，考虑所要选用的单词、词组、句型，要能

13、根据自己的英语水平，尽量扬长避短，避难就易。遇到想不起的词、句时，就用同（近）义词或同义句代替，不要使用没有把握的词句，并且要综合考虑所涉及到的情景、场合，语言要地道。 “三连”即连句成文。根据短文的内容要求，确定先写什么，后写什么，按照表述内容的情节发展和实际需要，重新排列组合已写成的 句子，划分必要的段落，一般分成三段。但要注意句式的灵活运用，长、短句，简单句，复合句要搭配运用。 “四改”即修改润色全文。主要是看全文符不符合题目要求，行文是否流畅，有没有遗漏要点；语法是不是正确，包括单词的拼写、大小写、标点符号、时态、语态、单复数、主谓一致、冠词等。*总之做到三审：体裁、时态、人称； 三思

14、：词汇短语句式；三查：要点、拼写和语法、连贯文章分3段：（1）综述：概括性强，最多2句话引入主题；（2）正文主要内容：层次性强，一定要有过渡型连接词。最多展开3个方面，每个方面最多2句话；（3）结尾：紧扣主题，2句话内结束，尽量升华。一开头用语：A. Just as every coin has two sides, cars have both advantages and disadvantagesB. Compared to letters, e-mails are more convenient.C. Opinions are divided on the advantages and

15、 disadvantages of living in the city and in the countryside.D. As we all know, computers have played an important role/part in our daily life.E. Why do you go to university? Different people have different points of view.FWith the development of internet more and more popularG. As a studentK. as an

16、old saying goes.句式：1.too.to.He is very young. he cant go to school.He is too young to go to school.2.so.that.He is very clever. He can work out the problem.He is so clever that he can work it out the problem.He is clever enough to work out the problem. 3.not only.but also.4.It has many advantages .

17、First, 优点1 Besides, 优点25.However, every coin has two sides. It also brings us bad influences. On the one hand, 缺点1 On the other hand, 缺点2She not only plays well, but also writes music. 她不仅很会演奏，而且还会作曲。Not only the students but also their teacher is enjoying the film. 不仅学生们在欣赏这部影片，他们的老师也在欣赏这部影片。4. It

18、is important（easy,hard,possible,good,bad）for sb. To do sth.还有ratherthan notuntil as well as慢慢的补充连词：1)表层次: first, firstly, second, secondly, third,thirdly, to begin with, to start with, what is more, last, also, and then, next, besides At first; at last; in the end then/next/after thatwhen/while/as s

19、oon as/not until in addtion finally On one hand .on the other hand， each/one coin has two sides，2)表转折；but, however, though, although, after all, in spite of， fortunately，unfortunately，at the same time3)表递近：in addition, besides, moreover, whats more4)因果 because, so, because of, thanks to, due to,for,

20、 since, owing to, as a result(of), hence, thus5)例证 for example, for instance, such as6)表示利弊的：be good/bad for sb.; be harmful to sb.; do harm to sb.; have great/much influence on sb.; sth. benefit sb.; sb benefit from sth.; affect; have an effect on sb.; 表示喜爱的：love/like/enjoy; be fond of; be interest

21、ed in; show great interest in; lose oneself in; put ones heart into; 7)总结 As I see, As for me ，As we all know, in general, generally speaking, I think., in fact , in a word, in brief, in conclusion, in short, in summary, to sum up,十、作文万能句式 I will work hard to make my dream come true. I hope your dre

22、am will come true one day.It takes sb. +时间+to doSb. spend（某种人称时态）+时间/钱+on sth./ (in) doing sth.Its important/necessary/useful/useless/common(for sb.) to vIts nice/kind of sb. to v.Its time for sb. to do sth. Its a waste of time toIts years/days since sb. +ved Its great fun to do=sb. have great fun d

23、oingIts a pity that Its an honor to Im/Were not allowed to Im afraid of making mistakes There be doingGreat changes have taken place in sth is/are well worth v-ing.It seems/seemed that It seems (im)possible to v It is said that and . are different in many ways.too + adj./adv. to do There are many di

24、fferences between and 写作：随着社会的发展，小汽车越来越普遍，有人说方便，有人说它污染环境等等。请你写一篇作文表达你对小汽车的看法。（pollution n 污染 traffic accident交通事故 convenient adj. 方便的 ）How to study English?There are four key points to study English：listening，speaking，reading and writing.Firstly，we should be brave to talk with others in English. By

25、doing this，we can improve ore talking and listening skill. Secondly，we should try to listen to all kinds of English programs as much as possible. In this way，we can gradually improve our pronunciation.Thirdly，we should often read English books. When we come across a new word. We should guess its mea

26、ning through the contest first. Then look it up in the dictionary to have a check. I thin，it is a good way of reading. Fourthly，we should practice our writing skills. Whenever we have any idea，we should get the pen and write it down at once. It is very important to avoid writing in Chinese way and u

27、sing the Chinese grammar.As long as we listen，speak，read and write more，we are sure to make remarkable progress!开头句型1.As far as is concerned 就而言2.It goes without saying that 不言而喻，3.It can be said with certainty that 可以肯定地说4.As the proverb says， 正如谚语所说的，5.It has to be noticed that 它必须注意到，6.Its genera

28、lly recognized that 它普遍认为7.Its likely that 这可能是因为8.Its hardly that 这是很难的9.Its hardly too much to say that 它几乎没有太多的说10.What calls for special attention is that需要特别注意的是11.Theres no denying the fact that毫无疑问，无可否认12.Nothing is more important than the fact that 没有什么比这更重要的是13.whats far more important is t

29、hat 更重要的是衔接句型1.A case in point is 一个典型的例子是2.As is often the case由于通常情况下3.As stated in the previous paragraph 如前段所述4.But the problem is not so simple.Therefore 然而问题并非如此简单，所以5.But its a pity that 但遗憾的是6.For all that对于这一切 In spite of the fact that尽管事实7.Further, we hold opinion that 此外，我们坚持认为，8.However

30、, the difficulty lies in然而，困难在于9.Similarly, we should pay attention to 同样，我们要注意10.not(that)but(that)不是，而是11.In view of the present station。鉴于目前形势12.As has been mentioned above正如上面所提到的13.In this respect, we may as well (say) 从这个角度上我们可以说14.However, we have to look at the other side of the coin, that i

31、s 然而我们还得看到事物的另一方面，即 结尾句型1.I will conclude by saying 最后我要说2.Therefore, we have the reason to believe that因此，我们有理由相信3.All things considered,总而言之 It may be safely said that它可以有把握地说4.Therefore, in my opinion, its more advisable因此，在我看来，更可取的是5.From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion t