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1、中考专项训练书面表达经典例题中考专项训练书面表达经典例题一、中考英语书面表达汇编1（江苏中考模拟）书面表达无锡被评为内地最宜居城市。假设你班对此进行了一次班级讨论，请你根据讨论主题并结合所给信息，以“Be a Beautiful City”为题写一份发言稿，号召广大学生为建设美好城市作贡献。内容提示如下：1政府修建了很多新路、大桥，甚至还有地铁；2新添了很多露天开放公园，每到周末和节假日，人们常常去那里野餐，游玩；3私家车越来越多，停车已成了大问题；4城市变化有利有弊；5你的希望：注意事项：1发言稿须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；2第5个要点须用2至3句话展开合理想象。作适当发挥；

2、3词数90左右，发言稿的开头已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数；4发言稿内容必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。Be a Beautiful CityThere have been great changes in Wuxi in the past few years_【答案】Be a Beautiful CityThere have been great changes in Wuxi in the past few yearsThe government has built lots of new roads, bridges and even undergroundsThere have been

3、a number of open parksPeople often go there to have a picnic and have fun on weekends and holidaysMore and more people have their own cars and its becoming difficult to park carsThe changes have brought both advantages and disadvantagesI hope the government can deal with the problemOur hometown can

4、be more and more beautiful in the future【解析】这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了大量短语，例如in the past few years，lots of，a number of，open parks，have a picnic，have fun，on weekends and holidays，more and more，both and，deal with the problem，in the future等。而More and more people have their own cars and its becoming diff

5、icult to park cars./ Our hometown can be more and more beautiful in the future.等多种more and more句式结构的运用，使本文内容丰富，表达流畅，是短文的亮点。点睛：这是一篇材料作文，根据提示内容可知用现在完成时和一般现在时，可把提示内容结合实际展开合理的想象，把它们拓展成一个个英文句子。还要注意在行文中使用一些常见的短语，会给习作增色。2（河北中考模拟）为了让同学们认识到安全的重要性，网上进行了一项安全问题调查。以下是100名 学生伤亡的原因，请根据表格内容用英语写篇调查报告，就中学生应当如何做好自我保 护

6、这一问题谈谈你的看法。要求：80词左右。题目自拟，文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。PercentageThe placeThe reason63%Streets or roadsCar accident18%Rivers or lakesSwimming without adults10%Food stalls （摊点）Unhealthy snacks9%School yardsInjury while playing or exercising_【答案】A Report on Childrens Injury and DeathRecently we did a survey among 10

7、0 students. They were injured or dead. The reasons are different. Heres the result of our survey.Car accidents are the most dangerous. About 63 students were injured or died in the streets or on roads. And 18 students lost their lives in rivers or lakes while they were swimming without adults. 10 st

8、udents were hurt because they had the unhealthy snacks at the little food stalls. 9 of them were injured in the school yard while playing or exercising.So we must pay more attention to road safety in daily life. Many rules should be made to reduce this kind of accidents. In one word, safety is a big

9、 problem. All of us should look out.After all, life is not a small matter.【解析】【详解】本文是一篇给材料作文。为了让同学们认识到安全的重要性，网上对100名学生的伤亡原因进行了一项安全问题调查。要求根据表格中的内容提示用英语写篇调查报告，就中学生应当如何做好自我保护这一问题谈谈自己的看法。本文时态主要用一般现在时和一般过去时，人称主要用第一、第三人称。首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。在写作时，要注意连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性；要将

10、表格内提示信息用英语正确的表达出来，要涵盖表格中提到的所有要点，同时注意理顺要点，防止漏写。语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。3（北京中考模拟）善待他人是中华民族的传统美德。某英文网站正在开展以“团结友善”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请你用英文写一篇短文投稿，说说你对善待他人的看法，你曾经友善待人的经历，以及你的感受。提示词语： important, help, happy提示问题： What do you think of b

11、eing kind to others? What did you do? How do you feel?Being kind to others is a traditional virtue （美德） of Chinese people. _【答案】Being kind to others is a traditional virtue of Chinese people. I think its veryimportant for everyone. When I started middle school, my friend Peter failed in theEnglish e

12、xam last year. He was so sad that he wanted to give up. When I knew this, Iencouraged him and gave him some advice. Every day we did homework together,when he met some difficult English problems, I would help him to work them out.Little by little, with my help, he improved his English skills. At the

13、 end of this term,he made a great progress. He was very happy, I was also proud.【解析】试题分析：本题要求谈谈对善待他人的看法，曾经友善待人的经历，以及你的感受。短文要覆盖提示的所有要点，并适当发挥。文中正确使用时态（过去时）来描述过去的经历以进行表达，使用第一人称形式进行写作。但也要注意在总结自己的感受，谈论观点的时候要使用一般现在时表明看法。写作亮点：短文开始就引入话题；提出了善待别人是传统美德，借助动名词做主语（Being kind to others is），之后介绍了一段自己的经历，表意清晰，中心明确，动

14、词过去时使用正确。有几个短语和结构的使用堪称亮点，如：sothat; give up, give sb some advice, work out, little by little, with my help，丰富的短语交错使用，使得故事表达清晰具体，切合主题，主旨鲜明突出。4（海南中考模拟）“美丽的琼海我的家，人人都要保护她”。自双创以来，我们的生活环境得到了很大的改观，人人积极参与双创活动，让人点赞的文明行为随处可见。作为一名中学生，请你写一篇短文号召大家加入到双创活动中来。要求：1.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；2.必须包含所给提示，并做适当的拓展；3. 行文中不得出现真实人

15、名、校名或地名；4. 词数80左右，（短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；Since the government created the civilized and healthy city, our living environment has improved a lot. Everyone plays an important role in building our city, so good behaviors can be seen everywhere.As junior high students,_Lets take action now. Our actions ca

16、n make a difference and lead to a more beautiful city.【答案】Since the government created civilized and healthy city, our living environment has improved a lot. Everyone plays an important role in building our city, so good behaviors can be seen everywhere.As junior high students, on the one hand, ther

17、e are a lot of things we can do. We should be polite to others and try to behave well. Its kind of you to help people in need. Meanwhile, We can help clean up our city in order to make it clearer and tidier. Also, we can plant more trees and keep off grass. On the other hand, there are many things w

18、e shouldnt do. We shouldnt make a lot of noise loudly in the public. We cant spit anywhere and we shouldnt throw rubbish everywhere. At the same time, we shouldnt break traffic rules.Lets take action now. Our actions can make a difference and lead to a more beautiful city.【解析】【详解】琼海正在进行“双创”活动，即创建文明城

19、市、创建健康城市，城市的生活环境有了很大的改变。这篇作文要求我们用英语写一篇短文，号召中学生们都参加到“双创”活动中来。题目中并没有规定具体的写作内容，而是用图表的形式，列出了写作的提纲。通过审题可知，这篇短文我们应从两个方面来叙述：即应该做什么；不应该做什么。根据这个内容，写作时，把短文分成两个层次，这样可以使文章结构清晰、条理。整篇短文应使用一般现在时态，第一人称we来叙述。写作时应注意：首先英语的表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语，而应从句子的整体结构考虑，使用恰当的词汇、短语和句型，以常见的主谓宾或者主系表构成的简单句为主，穿插使用并列句或者复合句，改变文章节奏，提升

20、文章档次。语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯、流畅。【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，向中学生们发出号召，共同参与到城市“双创”活动中来。首先短文的内容完整，文章根据题目中列出的图表，补充了具体的写作内容，从应该做的和不应该做的两个方面，对中学生的日常行为提出了要求。文章条理清晰，有层次。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，语言准确，语句通顺，符合英语的表达习惯。短文中句子结构以简单句为主，也使用了并列句和复合句以及一些较复杂的高级句式，语句之间也使用了较好的连接成分，如We should be polite to others and try to behave

21、well. 、Its kind of you to help people in need. 、Meanwhile, We can help clean up our city in order to make it clearer and tidier.、We cant spit anywhere and we shouldnt throw rubbish everywhere. At the same time, we shouldnt break traffic rules.等等。5（山东中考模拟）书面表达请务必将短文写在答题卡的相应位置！父母为我们付出了很多，你又做过哪些事情来表达自己

22、的感恩之情呢？请叙述你为父母做过的一件事，并谈谈你的感受。要求: 1. 条理清楚，书写规范整洁，100个词左右。2. 文中不得出现真实的地区、学校及姓名。【答案】Theres no doubt that parents have given me a lot since I was born. With their care, I grow up happily. So I think it is necessary to do something special for them to show my gratitude.Both of my parents love music. So i

23、t would be a great idea to buy a wonderful CD for them. Last Sunday, I went to a bookstore and chose one among the top 10. While we were having dinner together, I played the CD. It was beautiful. With great joy, they gave me a warm hug and a big smile. I felt very sweet.I was really proud that I did

24、 something for my parents. Their smiles were the best encouragement for me. I made up my mind to do things like this more often.【解析】考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。运用适当的短语表达中心思想，增加作文的可读性。完成提示词时也要符合事实。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。6（全国中考模拟）假如你叫李平，是一位成绩优秀的学生。你班班主任在安排座位时，让成绩好的学生和成绩差的学生同桌，这在

25、学生中引起了反响，班会课上大家就此进行了讨论。现在请你根据下表把讨论结果向班主任写一封信反映一下，并说出自己的观点。70%的学生赞成1. 学习成绩不好，但擅长体育、艺术；2. 相互学习，发展友谊；30%的学生反对1. 部分学习差的学生常常上课讲话而不认真听讲；2. 经常问问题，影响别人。你的观点（至少发挥两句）注意：1. 词数：90字左右，短文的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；2. 短文需包括表中所有要点，内容可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；3. 参考词汇：成绩差的学生 a slower student Dear Mr. Zhang.We have held a discussion about whether it is good or not for a top student to share a desk with a slower student. Yours，Li Ping【答案】Dear Mr. Zhang,We have held a di