1、邓佑红郴州市第十五中学,Writing:Healthy life,Objectives,Review the words,phrases and sentences about healthy life.Write a composition about healthy life.Improve writing skills.Develop good habits to keep healthy.,Whose life do you like?Why?,Tony and Jack,Healthy life,Healthylife,Exercise,Relaxing ways,Eating ha
2、bits,学校将举办英语演讲比赛,请你以“Living a healthy life”用英语写一篇短文,与同学们分享你对健康生活方式 的认识。,提示:健康饮食;多做运动;学会放松;,Living a healthy lifeIts important for us to live a healthy life.,要求:文章需包含提示的信息,并作 适当发挥;词数:80词左右。开头已给出,不计入总词数。,How to write a composition?,审,列,写,改,topic,person,tense,Outline(提纲),Analyze,List,Write,Correct,时态:一
3、般现在时,Back,学校将举办英语演讲比赛,请你以“Living a healthy life”用英语写一篇短文,与同学们分享你对健康生活方式的 认识。提示:健康饮食;多做运动;学会放松;Living a healthy lifeIts important for us to live a healthy life.话题:Living a healthy life人称:we,学校将举办英语演讲比赛,请你以“Living a healthy life”用英语写一篇短文,与同学们分享你对 健康生活方式的认识。,eating habits,learn to relax,要求:1.文章需包含提示的信息
4、,并作适当发挥;2.词数:80词左右。开头已给出,不计入总词数。,1.健康饮食 have healthy,2.多做运动 do more exercise,3.学会放松,eat more fruit and vegetables,dont eat junk foodclimb mountains play basketballlisten to music,Make sentences.,do exercise,Back,relax,have healthy eating habits,do more sports/exercise,have healthy eating habits,lear
5、n to relax,Living a healthy life,Write,Living a healthy lifeIts important for us to keep a healthy life.,Back,eat more fruit and vegetables dont eat junk foodclimb mountains play basketballlisten to music,Correct,等,分值,具体要求,中考作文评分标准(简表),vegetables and less junk food.,Second,as the saying goes:“life l
6、ies in sports”,so its necessary for us to do more exercise.Because it is not only good for our body,but also for our mind.Finally,lets learn to relax.For example,we can listento music,watch TV,or talk to others.Getting enough sleep,is also a good way to relax.,Body,Ending,BeginningIts important for
7、us to keep a healthy life.How to live a healthy life?Here are some suggestions for you.First of all,keeping a good eating habit is an importantway to live a healthy life.We should eat more fruit and,saying,example,Living a healthy life,If we do these,we will live a healthier life!conjunctions,A good composition:,结构完整:beginning,body,ending要点齐全:points(要点)思路清晰:conjunctions(连词)适当补充:add examples(举例)画龙点睛:proverbs/sayings(谚语),Homework,校园生活是丰富多彩的。请以“Colorful school life”为 题,写一篇作文。提示:学习生活;课外生活;其他减压方式 要求:不要逐条 翻译,可适当发挥;词数:80词左右。开头已给出,不计入总词数。,Enjoy English,enjoy writing!,Healthy life,wealthy life!,
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