浙江专用届高考英语二轮复习第四部分写作训练专题二读后续写Word下载.docx

1、“Hell ask you what you want for Christmas，” I said.“And you just tell him.”Wed gone over and over the toys shed ask for.Her mother didnt want surprises! Leah repeated the listBut a minute later，she inserted new toys shed just spotted at the mall.“Ive got an idea，” said Leanne，digging into her purse

2、as the line inched forward.“Lets write down your requests so you wont forget them.” I couldnt help but laugh.Going to see Santa was such an important appointment for a sixyearold.No child should have any worries bigger than that.But the night before，on the news，Id seen a village in the Middle East t

3、hat had come under fire.Many of the wounded were children just like our Leah.Looking around the mall full of magical decorations and happy shoppers I felt safe，as safe as anyone could be.Everyone in the world should have that kind of security，especially at Christmas.“Okay，” Leanne said.“Now youve go

4、t everything you want written down here.If you get nervous you can just give the note to Santa.”Leah nodded and took the list. She read out loud，“A Chia Pet，Moon Sand and Aquadoodle”“Why dont you add a fourth request，Leah，” I heard myself say.“Ask for peace on earth” My daughter looked a little surp

5、rised by my suggestion.“Whats peace on earth，Grandma？” Leah asked.“Peace on earth means all the people in the world would get along.Thats the true meaning of Christmas.” Leah nodded seriously.“Yes，” she agreed.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。P

6、aragraph 1：Finally we reached the head of the line._Paragraph 2：The coming days were filled with _【写作指导】本篇写作是读后续写，要求考生根据所读短文内容，尤其是带有下划线的词或者短语的提示完成作文。在写作此类作文时，第一步，考生要认真阅读所给短文，根据短文线索，找出文章的主人公在接下来所要完成的任务，也就是要做的事情以及做这些事情有哪些条件，要达到什么样的目标；第二步，考生应该将所有的关键词语列出来，然后用这些关键词语来组织语言。写作时要注意：1.并不是所有的关键词语都需要用上；2.所有的语句都

7、必须围绕中心展开。【参考范文】Finally we reached the head of the line.One of Santas helpers waved Leah up to Santa and lifted her lightly onto his knee.Within seconds he had her chatting like they were old friendsLeah shyly handed him her noteSanta adjusted his glasses and read it over very carefully before placin

8、g it on the shelf beside him.Leah jumped off his lap and ran into my arms.The coming days were filled with the lastminute preparations for the holiday.It was all worth it as I watched Leah tear joyfully into her presents on Christmas morning.“I got Aquadoodle！”she screamed.“Its just what I wanted！”I

9、t was the perfect Christmas as far as I could see.And then I noticed Leah，looking somewhat unhappy.“Whats wrong，honey？”I asked.Leanne came over，“Didnt Santa bring you everything you wanted？”Leah sighed.“Almost，”she said，“But wheres the peace on earth？”Writing 2I worked from the time I was four and r

10、aised seven children，all of them college graduates.It seemed Id done everything Id ever wanted to do in my life，but I had one regretI was born in 1898，the oldest of five kids.Papa couldnt spare me to go to school，so I worked in the fields with him till I was 21 years old.Everywhere I went，I learned

11、some hard lessons about what happens to a man who even cant read the alphabetPeople cheat you out of wages.They sell you a ticket to one city，take your money and hand you a ticket to somewhere else.By 1928，Id been wandering for nine years.I met a woman named Elzenia.We fell in love，married and moved

12、 to Dallas，where I got work fixing roads for the city.When Amelia，the oldest of our seven children，first went to school，I took my wife aside.“Elzenia，” I said.“I dont want the kids to know I cant read or write.”In 1938，one day my boss called me in. “George，” he said. “No one knows those machines lik

13、e you do.Id like to promote you.” But my thrill and surprise were cut short when he said，“Fill out this application and well get you a raise.” I couldnt admit the truthI thanked him and walked out of his office.I did stay right where I was，until I turned 65 and my boss made me retire.But I didnt sto

14、p working.For the next 25 years，I lived a happy life，but it still seemed to me like something was missing.A young fellow handed me a piece of paper. Its information about adult education classes. People can learn to read and write. Now Im 98. I thought of my friends and neighbors and what they might

15、 think if they found out I couldnt read.After all these years，my secret would be out.But all my life Ive wanted to read.It was high time for action.The young man drove me to _Im still going to school._文章大部分在叙述作者从小因家庭贫困而没有读书，因此在工作中错失晋升的良机。文章最后一段尤其是最后一句“It was high time for action.”给出了提示，说明接下来要续写的是作者自

16、己重新走进学校的情况。根据关键词语展开适当的联想即可成文。The young man drove me to an old building.I knew it wellit was where all my children had gone to schoolI looked into the classroom to get a look at who I would be going to school with the next day.The students all looked like babies to me.There was a lady in her fifties

17、but most of the rest were in their twenties and thirties.I went back to the school the next day.Id been inside the building so many times before with my children.That old building looked the same，and it smelled the same.But this time it was different because this time it was going to be my school.Fi

18、rst came learning the alphabet，then words.In three months，I was reading.It was not very exciting，but I loved it.Im still going to school.I didnt stop there.After all，now I know why Im here.Im here to learnIm here to tell the students its never too late.Writing 3Whenever Mr.Smith goes to Westgate，he

19、stays at the Grand HotelDespite its name，it is really not very “grand”，but it is cheap，clean，and comfortable.Since he knows the manager well，he never has to go to the trouble of reserving a roomThe fact is that he always gets the same room.It is located at the far end of the buildingOn his last visi

20、t，Mr.Smith was told that he could have his usual room，but the manager added apologetically that it might be a little noisy.So great was the demand for rooms，the manager said，that the hotel had decided to build a new wingMr.Smith said he did not mind.It amused him to think that the dear old Grand Hot

21、el was making an effort to live up to its name.During the first day Mr.Smith hardly noticed the noise at all.The room was a little dusty，but that was natural.The following afternoon，he borrowed a book from the hotel library and went upstairs to read.No sooner had he sat down than he heard someone ha

22、mmering loudly at the wall.At first he paid no attention，but after a while he began to feel very uncomfortable.His clothes were slowly being covered with fine white powderSoon there was so much dust in the room that he began to cough.The hammering was now louder than ever and bits of plaster were co

23、ming away from the wallsIt looked as though the whole building was going to fall.Mr.Smith went immediately to complain to the manager.They both returned to the room，but everything was very quiet.As they stood there looking at each other，Mr.Smith felt rather embarrassed for having dragged the manager

24、 all the way up the stairs for nothing.All of a sudden，the hammering began again and a large brick landed on the floor._A year later，when Mr.Smith went to Westgate again，_本篇读后续写是一篇记叙文，主要叙述了Mr.Smith入住正在装修的the Grand Hotel时发生的一些意想不到的事。续写短文时，考生要根据文章信息及所提供的关键词进行合理想象，使之构成一个完整的故事。内容上，考生可围绕人物心理变化这条线进行写作；形式上

25、，考生可使用倒装手法和非谓语动词来帮助刻画人物心理活动。写作时，考生还要注意长短句相结合，以使行文更具条理性。All of a sudden，the hammering began again and a large brick landed on the floor.Looking up，they saw a sharp metal tool had forced its way through the wall，making a very large hole right above the bed！So tense was the situation that the manager a

26、lmost let out a scream.In no time they both felt the whole building was vibrating.Then came more white powder and dust dropping down.Before Mr.Smith could make out what had happened，the manager was nowhere to be found.A year later，when Mr.Smith went to Westgate again，he was surprised to find a modern building had been set up in what used to be the Grand HotelIt turned out that after he angrily left the place a year ago，the manager decided