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1、中考英语书面表达点+例题全面解析2020-2021年中考英语书面表达点+例题_全面解析一、中考英语书面表达（含答案详细解析）1假定你是David，来自美国，你的QQ好友Li Ming想要在今年的暑假去做志愿者，他来信向你了解有关这方面的情况。请认真阅读下面的邮件，并根据信中的内容和实际用英语回复，可以有适当的发挥。To: davidwoodlandschoolFrom: limingsunshineschoolSubject: VolunteeringDear David， Im writing to ask you for advice. I know you often do volunt

2、eer work in your free time. Im interested in it very much. Im going to do some this summer vacation. But I know little about it. Could you help me answer the following questions? Why do you want to be a volunteer? What kind of vo1unteer work is suitable for us students? Do you have any problems with

3、 volunteering? If my parents dont allow me to do so, what should I do? Im looking forward to hearing from you soon. Best wishes， Li Ming注意：1.词数90左右。回复信的开头和结尾己经写好，不计入总词数;2.回复中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。Dear Li Ming,Thanks for your letter. Im glad you would like to be a volunteer. Now let me answer your questi

4、ons._I hope you love volunteering and do well in it. Looking forward to your good news.Best wishesDavid【答案】Dear Li Ming,Thanks for your letter. Im glad you would like to be a volunteer. Now let me answer yourquestions.I volunteer because I enjoy helping others and can learn a lot from others. As stu

5、dents, we can take part in some interesting activities, such as looking after animals and working for sports matches. Also, we can join charity organizations to help protect the environment and so on.Its OK to have problems, because volunteering takes much time and energy. Sometimes I cant balance m

6、y study and work. If your parents dont allow you to volunteer, you should have a good talk with them. Try to let them understand you.I hope you love volunteering and do well in it. Looking forward to your good news.Best wishesDavid【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，给好友Li Ming回信，介绍暑假做志愿者的情况。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，三人

7、称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：Im glad，we can，Its OK to，If your parents dont allow you to.，you should，I hope等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头为你想要成为一名志愿者而感到高兴，接下来介绍我们可以从事的志愿者工作以及志愿者工作带来的一些问题，最后我希望你喜欢志愿者工作。此处would like to, enjoy doing sth, learn from, take part

8、 in, such as, look after, allow sb to do sth, let sb do sth, look forward to 等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。2书面表达你即将升入高中，面临寄宿（a boarding school）和走读（a day school）两类学校的选择。请你以“A boarding school or a day school”为题。写一篇短文，内容须包括：读寄宿学校的利和弊；读走读学校的利和弊；你的选择和理由（不得与上述两点内容重复）。注意：1. 词数;100词左右（文章开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等

9、信息；3. 文章必须包含提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥。A hoarding school or a day schoolWe are going to graduate from our middle school, _【答案】We are going to graduate from our middle schools, and we will make a choice to enter a boarding school or a day school. Both kinds of school have their advantages and disadvantages.If

10、 we choose a boarding school, we will save time to study. However, we may have less time to stay with our family. If we choose a day school, parents can know more about our studies. At the same time computer games and TV plays may make a bad influence on us. As for me, I prefer a boarding school. We

11、 should pay attention to our studies to get good grades in the high school.【解析】【分析】整体分析：这是一篇给材料作文。可以分三段写。第一段要写总体交代你即将升入高中，面临寄宿（a boarding school）和走读（a day school）两类学校的选择。第二段要写详细叙述读寄宿学校的利弊；读走读学校的利弊。第三段要表述作者自己的选择和理由。【详解】写作之前要1.审清题目，看看有哪些要求？哪些时态？人称？2.确定文章类型，记叙文？说明文？议论文？看图？还是应用文？3.确定时态，单一还是混合。4.写下关键词、短语

12、、句型。5.列出提纲和段落，并运用适当的句型和过渡词衔接。6.根据提纲和段落结构句型及关键词句完成文章。写完后反复阅读修改推敲润色，人称、时态、单复数一致等。运用自然过渡法和自然衔接法来是文章更为地道、通顺、纯正。用的短语、句型：both kinds of、If we choose a boarding school、At the same time、As for me, I prefer a boarding school、pay attention to、来增加了文章的亮点。【点睛】这类作文的写作方法要注意认真审题，注意过渡性语言的使用。做到：要点要全，表达要清晰明确，使用短语，句型要准确

13、，注意避免拼写和语法错误。3Life is just like a mirror, you smile at it, and it smiles at you, too. 请你以“Learn to Smile”为题，根据下表所列的要点写一篇100词左右的文章（文章开头已给出）。学会对自己微笑1、面对困难与烦恼学会微笑（考试失利、被别人误解等）。2、使你自信，击败你的人有时就是你自己。3、有益于身心健康。学会对他人微笑1、便于与他人之间的交流。2、给别人带来快乐,自己也快乐。微笑是一种语言人人都能懂，传递友谊，拉近距离。1、参考词汇： 对某人微笑 smile at sb. 误解 misunder

14、stand2、短文必须包括所有内容要点，不要逐字翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯通顺。 Learn to SmileI remember a song by Westlife, the first sentence of it is “Just a smile and the rain is gone.” Do you like smiling? I think you should learn to smile ._【答案】Learn to SmileI remember a song by Westlife, the first sentence of it is “Just a smile

15、and the rain is gone.”Do you like smiling? I think you should learn to smile .First, learn to smile at yourself when something unpleasant happens in your life. If you fail an exam or you are misunderstood by your friends, dont be sad. Just smile at yourself . Smiling at yourself brings back your con

16、fidence . Sometimes the one who beats you is not others, but yourself. And smile can also keep you healthy. Second, learn to smile at others. It will make you communicate better with people. Smiling at others makes yourself happy as well. In a word, smile is a kind of language belonging to everyone.

17、 It passes love and friendship and helps shorten the distance between you and other people. Living with a smile ,every day will be shiny.【解析】这是一篇表格式的作文，要点是一表格的形式出现，首先要研究表格，找出需要表达的要点，然后加以整合，也可以适当增加使意思更连贯，但要点一定要全，不能漏掉。写作时要注意遣词造句，不能受汉语的影响，要用地道的英语表达，注意时态，语态，单词拼写，语法等问题，用好简单句，适当用复杂句。可以用一些高级词汇。还要注意句子的关联。4书

18、面表达根据要求完成短文写作，请将作文写在答题卡指定的位置上。每年春节，每个孩子都能收到来自长辈的压岁钱（lucky money）。随着生活水平的提高，大部分孩子得到越来越多的压岁钱，有些甚至通过微信（WeChat）或支付宝（Alipay）收压岁钱。同学们该如何管理自己的钱，让自己的钱用得更有意义？请结合自己的实际写一篇文章，词数 80 词以上，文中不能出现真实校名和人名。内容包括如下：1. 你的压岁钱的来源和用途；2. 对合理使用压岁钱的建议（至少 3 点）；3. 呼吁大家节约用钱，把自己的压岁钱用在最需要、最有意义的地方。【答案】Every Spring Festival I receive

19、 a lot of lucky money from my parents and relatives. Now I even get it through WeChat or Alipay. I usually buy some of my favorite books, school things and some fancy clothes. Sometimes I also buy some gifts for my parents.In order to make good use of the lucky money, I think we can do the following

20、 things. First, we should save part of the money for our study instead of wasting it on video games. Second, it is a good idea to buy something useful for our parents or teachers so that we can show our love to them. What is more, why not donate our lucky money to the poor kids in need? Helping othe

21、rs makes us happy.All in all, let us manage our lucky money properly. We should use our money in a meaningful way.【解析】【详解】每年春节，每个孩子都能收到来自长辈的压岁钱（luckymoney）。随着生活水平的提高，大部分孩子得到越来越多的压岁钱，有些甚至通过微信（WeChat）或支付宝（Alipay）收压岁钱。同学们该如何管理自己的钱，让自己的钱用得更有意义？这是一篇给材料作文，本题所给材料比较详细，写作中注意将所给内容表达出来，不能逐字翻译。通过阅读材料可知这篇短文主要使用的

22、人称就是第一人称，时态为一般现在时态，注意谓语动词的变化。动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。【点睛】文章使用了很好的短语和句子：In order to make good use of the lucky money, I think we can do the following things. First, we should save part of the money for our study instead of wasting it on video games.这些给文章增色不少。5书面表达假如你是李明，你的英国

23、笔友Jack来信询问你的家乡是否有雾霾天气，情况如何。请你按照以下提示给他回一封e-mail。内容如下：1. 由于大气污染程度十分严重，去年已发生数次雾霾天气；2. 人们已经意识到雾霾天气的危害，正在采取各种措施减少其发生；3. 你在日常生活中打算为此做些什么。参考词汇：雾霾haze注意：1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；2. 语言通顺，句子连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；3. 词数80左右，信件的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jack,Im glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your caring for the weat

24、her and my health. Now Id like to tell you something about the haze. _ Yours,Li Ming【答案】Dear Jack,Im glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. Now Id like to tell you something about the haze.The hazy weather has occurred a lot of times in my hometown

25、since last year. It was bad for our daily life. More and more people have to go to see the doctor due to the serious diseases caused by the haze. A great number of people have to stay at home .People all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather now. The government suggests tha

26、t people go to work or school by public transport, such as the bus and the subway.As for me, I will go to school by bike or on foot. In addition, I will tell the people I meet to protect the environment. Would you like to tell me some good ideas? Im looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Ming【解析】【详解】这篇作文要求我们以李明的身份给自己的英国笔友写信，告诉他关于家乡雾霾的情况。题目中列出了三个要点，我们应根据这些要点提示，来组织语言，充实内容。首先介绍去年家乡的雾霾情况严重；然后介绍为减少雾霾人们采取了一些措施；最后介绍一下你自己在日常生活中应该怎么做