1、【解析】写作分析:本文需要按照要求以“阅读”为主题写作,要写出读书的好处、中学生可以读的书、你的读书计划。按照要求逐条描述即可,但要注意增添相关细节使得文章连贯。写作亮点:总起要对reading做一个概括,用到了“plays an important role”(扮演重要的角色)这一搭配,关于读书的好处提到了:open our minds(开阔思维),relax(放松)。关于可以读的书,介绍了几种文本(textbooks, newspapers and magazine),关于介绍读书计划,描述了自己读书的频率,最后,有引用谚语,也是一个亮点。2(海南中考模拟)书面表达年1月以来,琼海市开始推
2、广使用共享单车,你对这一举措有什么看法?请根据下面的表格提示内容写一篇短文,谈谈共享单车的利弊及使用共享单车的建议,以便在英语课上与同学们交流。shared bikesadvantages: save energy, air pollutiondisadvantages: park in wrong places, bike accidentssuggestions: follow the traffic rules, care for bikes, dont bring home1. 语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确,书写规范;2. 必须包含所给提示,但不要逐字翻译,并做适当发挥;3. 行文中不
3、得出现真实人名、校名或地名;4. 词数80左右。(文章开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)Recently shared bikes can be seen everywhere on the street in Qionghai. Many people use them for work, for sport or just for fun. I think Whats your opinion about shared bikes? Will you choose one as your everyday vehicle?【答案】Recently shared bikes can be se
4、en everywhere on the street in Qionghai. Many people use them for work, for sport or just for fun. I think its a good idea. As we know cycling can help us save energy and it can greatly reduce air pollution. Whats more, it costs little to use them. However, some people park bikes in wrong places aft
5、er they use them. Sometimes its hard to find a bike on the street. And bicycle accidents do happen once in a while, so we must be careful when riding. Never ride too fast and always follow the traffic rules. At the same time, everyone is supposed to care for the bikes. Dont bring it home or keep it
6、your own. Whats your opinion about shared bikes?【解析】亮点说明:这篇习作的层次清晰,内容饱满,表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语,例如on the street,a good idea,as we know,help sb. do sth.,save energy,whats more,park bikes,in wrong places,once in a while,be careful,at the same time等。而As we know cycling can help us save energy and it can great
7、ly reduce air pollution./ Whats more, it costs little to use them. / At the same time, everyone is supposed to care for the bikes.等多种插入语句式的运用,丰富了习作内容,使表达多样,是本文的最大亮点。点睛:书面表达题既不是汉译英,也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维,考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以,考生不能遗漏要点,要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式,尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。3(四川成都外国
8、语学校中考模拟)Writing.In the past, most Chinese families have got one child in them. But recently, the government has relaxed the family planning policy, which means each couple are allowed to have two children. Would you like to have a brother or a sister who grows up together with you?Now please write a
9、 passage of about 80-120 words to introduce your opinion. The following points should be included:1. Is it necessary for a family to have more than one child? Give at least two reasons for it.2. Whats the situation in your family? Are you the only child or not? List what makes you happy and unhappy.
10、3. Give at least two suggestions to the families with two children.【答案】First of all, two-child policy is the gift for some only child.For some families. maybe the parents are only child and they can also have only child. Put aside the loneliness of their child, when their child grows up and they gro
11、w older, their child may marry with an only child girl accidentally, the burden on their child and his wife is unimaginable heavy. Their child and his wife have to take care of two old couples.In my family ,my parents have a only child. I also have some happy things.I can enjoy some delicious food b
12、y myself. But I have no playmate in my family. Sometimes. I may feel lonely.If parents have two children, they can share the burden of taking care of their parents. It would be much better. Also, two-child policy can guarantee the number of Chinese population.【解析】亮点说明:文中使用了非常好的短语,例如first of all,grow
13、 up,grow older,marry with,burden on,have to do, take care of,by oneself,have no playmate,the number of等。而For some families. maybe the parents are only child and they can also have only child. / when their child grows up and they grow older, their child may marry with an only child girl accidentally,
14、/ It would be much better.等多种表猜测句式的运用,丰富了习作内容,使表达多样,是本文的最大亮点。4(山东中考模拟)书面表达请务必将短文写在答题卡的相应位置!父母为我们付出了很多,你又做过哪些事情来表达自己的感恩之情呢?请叙述你为父母做过的一件事,并谈谈你的感受。要求: 1. 条理清楚,书写规范整洁,100个词左右。2. 文中不得出现真实的地区、学校及姓名。【答案】Theres no doubt that parents have given me a lot since I was born. With their care, I grow up happily. S
15、o I think it is necessary to do something special for them to show my gratitude.Both of my parents love music. So it would be a great idea to buy a wonderful CD for them. Last Sunday, I went to a bookstore and chose one among the top 10. While we were having dinner together, I played the CD. It was
16、beautiful. With great joy, they gave me a warm hug and a big smile. I felt very sweet.I was really proud that I did something for my parents. Their smiles were the best encouragement for me. I made up my mind to do things like this more often.【解析】考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题,确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。运用适当的短语表达中心思想
17、,增加作文的可读性。完成提示词时也要符合事实。温馨提醒:考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等。5(全国中考模拟)假如你叫李平,是一位成绩优秀的学生。你班班主任在安排座位时,让成绩好的学生和成绩差的学生同桌,这在学生中引起了反响,班会课上大家就此进行了讨论。现在请你根据下表把讨论结果向班主任写一封信反映一下,并说出自己的观点。70%的学生赞成1. 学习成绩不好,但擅长体育、艺术;2. 相互学习,发展友谊;30%的学生反对1. 部分学习差的学生常常上课讲话而不认真听讲;2. 经常问问题,影响别人。你的观点(至少发挥两句)注意:1. 词数:90字左右,短文的开头和结尾已为你写好,
18、不计入总词数;2. 短文需包括表中所有要点,内容可适当发挥,以使行文连贯;3. 参考词汇:成绩差的学生 a slower student Dear Mr. Zhang.We have held a discussion about whether it is good or not for a top student to share a desk with a slower student.Yours,Li Ping【答案】Dear Mr. Zhang,70 percent of the students agree with you. Although they are not good
19、at lessons, they might do well in sports or arts. So they can learn from each other, and they may develop a friendship.However, 30 percent of the students dont agree. They think some slower students always talk in class instead of listening to the teachers carefully. On the other hand, slower studen
20、ts often ask questions and they may influence others.I think Id like to share a desk with a slower student so that we can learn from each other. We can make progress together. Yours【解析】 这是一篇图表,你班班主任在安排座位时,让成绩好的学生和成绩差的学生同桌,这在学生中引起了反响,班会课上大家就此进行了讨论。现在请你根据表格把讨论结果向班主任写一封信反映一下,并说出自己的观点。动笔前先要认真阅读要点,围绕要点组织
21、材料,然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来,在此基础上亦可适当发挥,注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用一般现在时态,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。agree with sb同意某人;be good at擅长; learn from each other互相学习6(山东中考模拟)初中生活即将结束,学校英语俱乐部特邀你写一篇英语短文,给七年级新生的学习生活提几点建议。内容要点如下:1. 初中科目更多,好的学习方法很重要;2. 锻炼身体,保持健康;3. 参加社团活动,使学校生活丰富;4. 多读书,多交朋友;5. 补充一两点个人
22、想法。1. 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称;2. 词数:6080;3. 内容连贯,不要逐条翻译;4. 短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数。参考词汇:method n. 方法club n社团colorful adj.丰富的Welcome to our school!_【答案】I will graduate from my school. Therefore Id like to share something with you. Firstly,because of many subjects in middle school, it is important for you to have you
23、r own study methods. In order to be better at study, you must do more exercise to keep healthy. Secondly, you can join in some club activities to make school life more colorful in your spare time. In other words, please keep balance between school life and study. In addition, it is a good choice to
24、make more friends and read more books. At last, if you have problems in school life, please talk with your teachers or parents. They are always there waiting for you. I hope you will have a wonderful school life.试题分析:这是一篇给材料作文,自己即将毕业,给七年级新生的学习生活提几点建议。结合所给的材料,可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般将来时,以第一人称为主,要注意主谓一致,所写的句子
25、要符合英语语法,用自己熟悉的单词和句式来写。本文结构紧凑,开头两句很自然地过渡到正文上来。用了短语和句式,如:graduate from毕业于;share sth with sb和某人分享某事;wait for等候等,用来一些过渡词或短语,如:Firstly, Secondly,In other words, At last等,上下文衔接很自然。7(河南中考模拟)书面表达你们学校的生活丰富多彩吗?请以“Colorful weekdays”为题,介绍一下你们学校周一至周五(weekdays)都有哪些课外活动。1. 语意连贯,层次清晰;2. 要有评价性描述;3. 词数80左右。【答案】Colorf
26、ul weekdaysIt is my honor to show you our colorful activities and today I mainly tell you something about the part time activities in my school. Here is an introduction of my schools part time activity. Our school has various activities after class. The activities begin at 4:20 and end at 5:20 every
27、 day. The groups on different subjects include sightseeing, speech contests, art festival, volunteer activities, and sports meeting and so on. Among them, I would like to take part in the sightseeing and art festival the most. Because the activities are wonderful.So I really hope that we can have less homework so we can have more time to participate in the part time activities to rel
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