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1、”“OK!”my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of sight. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven（编织的）blanket spread out upon th

2、e ground just for us. 注意: 续写部分分为两段, 每段的开头语已为你写好。Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. _We had no idea where we were and it got dark. 练考场审题Step 1: 精准审题谋篇布局文体记叙文时态一般过去时原文分析第一段: 交代故事的背景。介绍了度假的原因和地点第二段: 简单地介绍了旅途第三段: 对在农场的日常活动的简单介绍第四段和续写故事的展开有很大的关系。这一段讲到了如何发生了我和爸爸去骑马的故事。而续写的内容就是在此基础上展

3、开写作思路根据第一段所给首句Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. 这一句是故事发展的转折点, 可从rabbit出现后带来的反应扩展开, 可以写马的反应, 也可以写人的反应, 但要注意与第二段首句相呼应第二段首句是We had no idea where we were and it got dark. 这一句呼应前文Uncle Paul的叮嘱不要误了吃晚饭, 可从如何寻路返回农场去写Step 2: 头脑风暴字字珠玉（1）美词: previous;in vain;at the point of desperation;

4、a faint voice （2）佳句Frightened as I was, I tried to keep my balance to prevent me from falling off . Fortunately, minutes later, the horse stopped before a river, out of breath, and so did I. What we could do was to go back along the previous track slowly. Step 3: 斟酌词句妙笔生花要点1: 这个出其不意的出场让我的马疯狂地跑起来。一般表

5、达: This unexpected appearance made my horse run wildly. 句式升级（定语从句）This unexpected appearance frightened my horse, which made it run wildly. 要点2: 尽管我很害怕, 我努力不（让自己）掉下马来。Although I was frightened, I tried not to fall off the horse. 句式升级（倒装句）Frightened as I was, I tried to keep my balance to prevent me

6、from falling off. 要点3: 我们只能沿着之前的路慢慢走回去。We could only go back along the previous track slowly. 句式升级（主语从句）我们所能做的只有沿着之前的路慢慢走回去。What we could do was to go back along the previous track slowly. Step 4: 衔接过渡斐然成篇Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. This unexpected appearance frightened

7、 my horse, which made it run wildly. I tried my best to control it, but in vain. Frightened as I was, I tried to keep my balance to prevent me from falling off. Fortunately, minutes later, the horse stopped before a river, out of breath, and so did I. At that moment, my dad also came up. Seeing I wa

8、s OK, he was quite relieved. But it was clear that we got lost. We had no idea where we were and it got dark. We didnt know where the farm house was. What we could do was to go back along the previous track slowly. But it was really difficult for us in such a dark situation. Just as we were at the p

9、oint of desperation, we heard a faint voice from the distance. “It must be Uncle Paul, ” I said. So we cried back with excitement. Finally, Uncle Paul safely brought us back home. What an amazing ride! 1阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。A Vacation with My MotherI had an interesting childhood. I

10、t was filled with surprises and amusements, all because of my motherloving, sweet, yet absent-minded and forgetful. One strange family trip we took when I was eleven tells a lot about her. My two sets of grandparents lived in Colorado and North Dakota, and my parents decided to spend a few weeks dri

11、ving to those states and seeing all the sights along the way. As the first day of our trip approached, David, my eight-year-old brother, and I unwillingly said good-bye to all of our friends. Who knew if wed ever see them again? Finally, the moment of our departure arrived, and we loaded suitcases,

12、books, games, camping equipment, and a tent into the car and bravely drove off. We bravely drove off again two hours later after wed returned home to get the purse and travelers checks Mom had forgotten. David and I were always a little nervous when using gas station bathrooms if Mom was driving whi

13、le Dad slept: “You stand outside the door and play lookout（放哨）while I go, and Ill stand outside the door and play lookout while you go. ” I had terrible pictures in my mind: “Honey, where are the kids?” “What?! Oh, Gosh. . . I thought they were being awfully quiet. ” We were never actually left behi

14、nd in a strange city, but we werent about to take any chances. On the fourth or fifth night, we had trouble finding a hotel with a vacancy. After driving in vain for some time, Mom suddenly got a great idea: Why didnt we find a house with a likely-looking backyard and ask if we could set up tent the

15、re? David and I became nervous. To our great relief, Dad turned down the idea. Mom never could understand our objections（反对）. If a strange family showed up on her front doorstep, Mom would have been delighted. She thinks everyone in the world is as nice as she is. We finally found a vacancy in the n

16、ext town. The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us. We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way. 【参考范文】The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us. We decided to camp along the river. The views there were surprisingl

17、y beautifulthe warm sunshine, the fresh air, the clean water. We sat on the grass, enjoying the splendid nature. However, when Dad was about to put up our tent, he was disappointed to find that it had been left in the hotel. Well, Dad had to go back to fetch it to continue our camping. We drove thro

18、ugh several states and saw lots of great sights along the way. Every time we got to a new place, Mom would cheer up like a child. She would get off the car excitedly, laughing and dancing around. Together we enjoyed the modern sights in the big cities, the historical buildings in the small towns and

19、 the amazing scenery in nature. When we came back to the hotel after the tiring but excellent visit, Mom would hug us and kiss us on our faces. How sweet she was! Absent-minded and forgetful as she was, she never forgot to express her love to us. 2One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had

20、driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom, “Im going to find a better spot for us to camp”and walked away. With no path t

21、o follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place, she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost. “Tom!”she cried. “Help!”No reply. If

22、 only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family

23、. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him. Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling（滴落）somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy, she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. N

24、ever in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now, Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake. As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me?Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her