从五种基本句型开始提高英语写作能力附答案文档格式.docx

1、 Anyone should be honest and helpful to his families, teachers and classmates. As is in China, the weather is different from area to area. It is a fact that they cant pass the exam. The dish tastes delicious. （taste, feel, sound, smell等词作连系动词时，无被动语态）运用以上三种句型翻译下列句子1.我收到了笔友从澳大利亚寄来的信。 2.对他们来，骑自行车到那里去很不

2、容易。3.几个月以后，李明变得和以前一样健康。4.你这样说真是太好心了。5.和陌生人一块儿度假不是个好主意。6.我爷爷早晨起得很早。7.布朗夫人看起来很健康。8.每天下午有许多学生到图书馆来借书。9.你们必须在两周内看完这些书。基本句型4 双宾语结构 由“主语+及物动词+间接宾语人+直接宾语事物”组成。但若要先说出直接宾语（事物），后说间接宾语（人），则要借助于介词to或for。 He brings me cookies every day. He brings cookies to me every day. She bought me a beautiful skirt. She boug

3、ht a beautiful skirt for me.用to侧重指动作的方向，表示朝着，向着，对着某人。用for指动作的受益者，表示为了某人，替某人。常跟双宾语的动词有：（需借助to的） bring, give, lend, hand, offer, pass, pay, promise, return, send, show, teach, tell, write, ask等；（需借助for的） buy, call, cook, choose, draw, find, get, make, order, sing, save, spare等。运用上述句型翻译下列句子1.奶奶昨晚给我讲了一个

4、有趣的故事。2.Mary把钱包交给校长了。3.他把车票给列车员看。4.这个学期我已经给父母写过三封信了。5.我父亲已经给我买了一辆新自行车。基本句型5 复合宾语结构 由“主语+及物动词+宾语+宾语补足语”构成。宾语与宾语补足语之间有逻辑上的主谓关系或主表关系，若无宾语补足语，则句意不够完整。可以用作宾补的有：名词，形容词，副词，介词短语，动词不定式，分词等。 Suddenly I heard my neighbour shouting and laughing loudly. And then I saw a yellow car drive up along the Third Street

5、 and turn right into Park Road.常用的含宾语补足语的句式如下： see sb. / sth. do sth. 符合这个句式的动词有：watch, notice, observe, look at, hear, listen to, feel, have, make, let等 see sb. / sth. doing sth. 符合这个句式的动词有：watch, notice, observe, look at, catch, hear, listen to, feel, have, keep, leave, find, get等 find it + adj. /

6、 n. +to do sth. 符合这个句式的动词有：feel, make, think, consider等运用基本句型4和5翻译下列句子1.我们要使学校变得更美丽。2.每天早晨我们都听到他大声朗读英语。3.我要你把真相告诉我。4.我要请人把我的录音机修理一下。5.我从来没看见这个字这样用过。6.他感到很难跟你交谈。7.我想乘船去那里更舒服些。8.我认为有可能用另一种方法解题。基本句型6 There be句型 由“there + be + 主语”构成，用以表达存在关系。它其实是倒装的一种情况，主语位于谓语动词be之后，there仅为引导词，并无实际语意。一般地说，全句意为：“某地有某物/某人

7、”。 There was an old man sitting quietly on a bench nearby. Once upon a time there was a farmer who worked hard in the fields every day.另外，除了be外，live, stand, come, go, lie, exist等动词也能用于这个句型，表示存在。在there引导的存在句中，谓语与最靠近的主语在人称和数上一致，并有时态和情态变化。 There stand two huge trees in the middle of the park. Once upon

8、 a time there lived and old king in the town. There is / lies a river in front of my house.be的时态和情态变化有：将来有there will be；there is / are going to be现在已经有there has / have been可能有there might be肯定有there must be；there must have been过去曾经有there used to be似乎有there seems / seemed to be碰巧有there happen / happen

9、s / happened to beThere must be a use for my talent. 天生我材必有用。1.明天下午在报告厅开会。2.天气预报说下午有大风。3.灯亮着，办公室里肯定有人。4.战前这儿一直有家电影院的。5.恰好那时房子里没有人。提示：在书面表达中，“有”这个含义，我们会情不自禁地使用There be和have结构来表达。虽然能表达出原意，可是千篇一律，总会显得俗气呆板。试比较下面句子的翻译，便可见分晓。学校的体育中心有三个运动区域。a.There are three athletic areas in the school sports centre.b.The

10、 school sports centre contains three athletic areas.With结构也有“有”的含义。a.Its a small flat of 25 square metres, with a bedroom, a bathroom, and a kitchen,b.He sat in a chair, with a newspaper in his hands.c.He arrived at a mountain, with a tower standing at the top.d.With winter coning on, its time to bu

11、y warm clothes.完成下列句子1. Guangzhou is an ancient city （有2200多年的文明历史）。2. （随着2008奥运会的来临）, more and more foreigners are eager to know about China.3. （随着汽车工业的发展）, the economy in China is developing rapidly too.同义优选句型和精彩的复杂句式 有些简单句表达，在语法上没有什么错误，意思也很明白，但缺少文采，可以通过以下方法增加语言表达精彩度。 同义优选 用比较好的表达方式来替换原始的单词。 He ga

12、ve us some useful advice. （offered） He tried to make his parents happy. （please） A new railway is being built in this city. （under construction） 复杂句式 1） 分词作状语在英语中出现频率极高。一方面，使句式多样化；另一方面，使句子更简练。 They worked hard together, pushing the bus slowly forward. Hearing this, a few people began to run after hi

13、m. Chatting online, students can more freely express their feelings and opinions. Located in Guangzhou, Guangdong province, Zhongshan University was set up by Sun Zhongshan in 1924.2） 倒装结构，置于众多的主谓结构中，显得新颖独特。 Only in this way can you improve your oral English.3） 强调句型It + be + 被强调部分 + 其它 It was Mr. Le

14、e who saved my life.4） with / without结构 He left without saying goodbye. 通篇提升 有些句子表达，在语法上没有错误，意思也很明白，但是整体看来比较零散、不够整齐，所以我们把一些小句子整合起来，变成一个整齐有文采的句式。这也是当前基础写作的重点考察内容。Elvis Presley （猫王）, who was born in 1935 and died in 1977, was a world-famous pop star and will always be loved by his fans from different

15、countries.（改写后）Born in 1935, Elvis Presley was world-famous as a remarkable pop star. Despite his death in 1977, he will always be well-received by his fans from all the corners of the world.按要求改写句子1. School was over and the students rushed out. （改成倒装句）School was over and .2. I have never seen such

16、a wonderful film before. （改成倒装句） 3. She lay in bed and she was awake. She was listening to music. （改成伴随状语）She lay in bed, 4. Yang Lan was born in 1958. She began her career as the popular “Zheng Da TV Show”. （用过去分词改写） , Yang Lan began her career as the popular “Zheng Da TV Show”.5. When we see from

17、the mountain, we can see the river running through the city. （分词短语） , we can see the river running through the city.6. The computer center, which was open last year, is really popular among the students in this school. （分词短语）The computer center, , is really popular among the students in this school.

18、7. “Mama!” he cried suddenly, and his tears rolled down his cheeks. （with结构）”Mama!” he cried suddenly, .2.如何写好并列句并列连词的意义与作用 由两个或两个以上的简单句并列连接起来的句子叫做并列句。并列句的基本句型是：简单句+并列连词（或连接副词）+简单句。不同的并列连词或连接副词表示不同的关系。所以，要写好并列句，头等必须了解每个并列连词的意义和功能。下表是对所有并列连词（或连接副词）的归类与功能的概括。并列连词其它意思相似的并列连词在句子中表示的意思andfurthermore, bes

19、ides, in addition, moreover, also, likewise, not onlybut also“此外，而且”，表示并列或递进关系but, yethowever, nevertheless, still, in contrast“但是，然而”，表示对比关系forbecause, as, since“因为”，表示原因orotherwise“或者，否则，不然的话”，表示选择soconsequently, therefore, thus, accordingly, then“因此，所以”，表示结果norneither“也不”，表示否定选择请选择恰当的并列连接词填空1. I

20、dont agree with you, dose my partner.2. Find out where they are going this evening ask if we may join them.3. He was very seriously ill; doctors have almost given up hope of his recovery.4. They go to concerts of pop music they really like it.5. She cant hope to pass the exam in December, shell have

21、 to wait till June.6. He broke the rules of the school; he had to leave.7. I dont know anything against the man; I dont trust him.8. Ill buy a new suit when I get the cheque for the work I did; , Im afraid this old one will have to do a bit longer.9. is your answer wrong mine is.10. You must work ha

22、rder; you will be put into another class.辨清不同功能的并列连词 有同学认为，并列句十分简单，就是将两个简单句用并列连接词连接起来。其实不然，在写作中，我们必须认真分析两个被连接起来的简单句之间的逻辑关系，然后选择恰当的并列连接词，才能真正写出质量好的并列句。请认真研读以下并列句，分析其逻辑关系。试试看，如果用别的功能的并列连词替换，逻辑关系是否仍然成立？a. He works hard, and he plays hard too.分析：在分句1的意思基础上有递进。其含义相当于： He not only works hard, but also pla

23、ys hare. 或 He plays hard as well as works hard.b. I was tired, but I felt happy.分句2的意思不是分句1意思的顺接，而是出现转折的结果。c. We stayed at home, for it was raining.分句2是对分句1的原因的补充。d. It was cold, so we decided to stay at home.分句2是分句1的结果。e. Hurry up, or youll be late for class.分句2是与分句1的结果相反的结果。由以上分析可见，并列连词的选择也要遵循句子间的

24、逻辑关系的，如果不小心，同样会犯逻辑错误。请根据所给的句子信息及所提供的并列连接词完成句子。1. You have to learn English, and .2. You should read some English every day, or .3. Many students do quite well in the recitation, but .4. Most of the students are afraid of speaking English in class, so .5. Some students cant tell the difference betwee

25、n thirteen and thirty, for .6. Many of the students do not like writing, nor .运用不同功能的并列连词写并列句 在高考评卷时，阅卷的老师常常会读到这样的文章，文章将内容要点都覆盖了，但通篇都是简单句，结果得分不高。新高考的基础写作，要求用5个句子表达多于5个的内容要点。因此，如能适当地使用并列句，当可提高文章的可读性与质量。其实，方法很简单，可根据各要点形成几个简单句，再将简单句中有内在逻辑联系的句子用适当的并列连词合并成并列句。（一）请根据并列句的逻辑关系，加上恰当的并列连词，将两个句子合并为一个并列句。1. Thi

26、s will cost quite some money. Its worthwhile in a long run.2. He would have won the game easily. He fell and broke his leg.3. Shakespeare was a writer. Shakespeare was also an actor.4. He had failed many times. He was confident that he would succeed in the end.5. Donna was not satisfied with her own

27、 achievement. Donna was not satisfied with the teams performance.6. Girls are jealous of Mary. Mary is very beautiful and successful.7. The chance is slim. They never give up hope.8. The moon was hidden entirely behind the dark clouds. Not a single star could be seen.（二）用并列句翻译下列句子。1. 昨天我生日。很多同学送给我礼物

28、。（so）2. 书籍增长了我们的见识，开拓了我们的视野。（not onlybut also）3. 地震中有10人死亡，3000多人无家可归。（and）4. 兄弟俩很不同。一个喜欢看书，另一个喜欢运动。（while）5. 宠物通常很脏，甚至有的会伤人。6. 追求时尚没有什么不好，但我们要把注意力集中在学习上。（however）7. 过去，我们不但没有时间休息，而且没有时间做自己想做的事情。（nor）8. 通过做兼职，我们不但可以学到书本以外的东西，而且可以积累重要的社会经验。（besides）用并列句巧建基础写作小段落 在新高考的基础写作中，要求同学们用五个句子表达多于五个句子的意思。因此，同学样必须要用到并列句。并列句用好了，文章就流畅自然，可读性强