诗歌翻译-translation-of-poetry.ppt

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,TranslationofLiteraryWritingsPoetry,LanguageFeaturesofEnglishPoetry,Contents,1,TranslatabilityandUntranslatability,2,ReproductionofOriginalSoundinPoems,3,TranslationofPoeticImage,4,TheTranslationofAncientPoem,5,LanguageFeaturesofEnglishPoetry,01part,KindsofPoetryFootMetreTheRhyme,3）DramaticPoems（戏剧诗）,2）NarrativePoems（叙事诗）,1）LyricalPoems（抒情诗）,1.KindsofPoetry,

（1）Intermsofcontent,Songs（韵文）odes（颂诗）Elegy（挽诗）,Epics（史诗）（heroicpoems）ballads（民谣）e.g.DivineComedy神曲,Usuindialogue；inblankverse,

（2）Intermsofmetre（韵律）:

1）MetricalPoems（格律诗）,RegularRhyme;RegularRhythm;DefiniteNumberofLines,2）FreeVerse（自由诗）,IrregularRhymeandRhythm;IrregularNumberofLines,3）BlankVerse（无韵诗）,WithoutRhyme;WithRhythm,2.Foot（音步）,thenumberofintervals（间隔）withinaline,dimeter（双音步）,monometer（单音步）,tetrameter（四音步）,trimeter（三音步）,pentameter（五音步）,heptameter（七音步）,hexameter（六音步）,octometer（八音步）,e.g.tetrameter（四音步）,ThesunisnotabedwhenIAtnightuponmypillowlie.,1,2,3,4,ThesunisnotabedwhenIAtnightuponmypillowlie.,3.Metre（格/韵律）,1）Iambus（抑扬格）/IambicFoot（抑扬音步）,抑/轻/非重读扬/重/重读,Thearrangementofunstressedandstressedsyllables（音节）,抑,扬,抑,扬,Anapaest（抑抑扬格）,Thestreamwillnotflow,andthehillwillnotrise,Andthecolourshaveallpassedawayfromhereyes,抑抑扬,3）Trochee（扬抑格）,扬抑,4）Dactyl（扬抑抑格）,扬抑抑,扬抑抑,4.TheRhyme（押韵）,Alliteration（头韵）,Assonance（腹韵）,Consonance（尾韵）,timeandlight,Atonceavoicearoseamongwnsvs,1）InternalRhyme（行内韵）,Pleasepickuptheprettypinkpillsforpalepeople.,Rhymeistherepetitionofthesameorsimilarsoundsoftenoccurringatsetintervals,repetitionwithinalines,2）EndRhyme（脚韵）,IfallbetruethatIdothink,Therearefivereasonsweshoulddrink.,Workwhileyouwork,andplaywhileyouplay,Forthatisthewaytobehappyandgay.Allthatyoudo,dowithyourmight,Thingsdonebyhalvesareneverdoneright.,e.g.,repetitionoftheendingwordsoflines,3）RhymingScheme（押韵格式）,c）aabb（连续韵）:

Workwhileyouwork,andplaywhileyouplay,aForthatisthewaytobehappyandgay.aAllthatyoudo,dowithyourmight,bThingsdonebyhalvesareneverdoneright.b,b）abab（交叉韵）:

Howdoyouliketogoupinaswing.aUpintheairsoblue?

bOh,IdothinkitthepleasantestthingaEverachildcando!

b,a）abba（首尾韵）,Iholdittrue,whateerbefall;aIfeelitwhenIsorrowmost;bTisbettertohavelovedandlostbThannevertohavelovedatall.a,TranslatabilityandUntranslatabilityofPoetry,02part,UntranslatabilityofpoetryTranslatabilityofpoetryPrinciplesofpoetrytranslationExample,1.Untranslatabilityofpoetry,Asweallknow,ChineseandEnglishbelongtodifferentlanguagefamilies.ChinesebelongstotheSino-Tibetan,EnglishbelongstotheIndo-European.DifferencesbetweenChineseandEnglishareasfollows:

PhoneticsystemChineseistonallanguage,whileEnglishissyllabic（音节的）language.WritingstructureTheyhavedifferentgrammaticalstructures.Rhetoric（修辞手法）寻寻觅觅，冷冷清清，凄凄惨惨戚戚。

声声慢李清照,1.Untranslatabilityofpoetry,Besidesthedifferencesinlanguage,therearemanydifferencesincultures.biblestoryancientGreekmythology（神话）Buddhistculturegeographyculture,PoetryTranslation,InChineseculture,summermeanshot,passionate.WhiletheUnitedKingdomistypicaloceanicclimate,thusthesummerinShakespearespoetryislikeamoderateandbeautifulgirl.,Anexampleofgeographyculturaldifference:

ShallIcomparetheetoasummersday?

Thouaremorelovelyandmoretemperate.Shakespearessonnet（十四行诗）我想将你比作迷人的夏日，可是你却比她更加可爱迷人。

1.Untranslatabilityofpoetry,Therefore,lotsofscholars,suchasZhuGuangqian,ShelleyandRobertFrost,holdtheopinionthatpoetrycantbetranslated,i.e.theuntranslatabilityofpoetry.,PoetryTranslation,Ontheotherhand,manyscholarsbelievesthatitispossible,thoughquitedifficult,totranslatepoemssatisfactorilyandsuccessfully.Asamatteroffact,thereexistmanythingsincommonamongmen.thethinkingpowertoreasonlogicallythefeelingstoexpressjoyorsorrowliveinthesameworldregardlessofraceAsaconsequence,poetry,aproductofmind,isunderstandableandtranslatable.,2.Translatabilityofpoetry,PoetryTranslation,Poetrycallsforbeautyinform,soundandmeaning.Atranslatorshouldnotbesatisfiedwiththemereconveyingofconceptionandstyleintheoriginal,butmuststriveforthereproductionoftheoriginalbeauty.RetaintheoriginalmeaningandemotionMakethetranslationbearacertaindueform,rhythmandthyme,3.Principlesofpoetrytranslation,PoetryTranslation,4.Example,哎！

希腊啊！

希腊啊你本是和平时代的爱娇你本是战争时代的天骄撒芷波歌声高女诗人热情好更有那德罗士菲波士两神明荣光常照此地是艺术旧垒技术中潮即今在否？

除却太阳光线万般没了梁启超译,PoetryTranslation,BeautyinformBeautyinsenseBeautyinsound,TheislesofGreece,theislesofGreece!

WhereburningSappholovedandsung,Wheregrewtheartsofwarandpeace,WhereDelosrose,andPhoebussprung!

Eternalsummergildsthemyet,Butall,excepttheirsun,isset.byLordByron,ReproductionofOriginalSoundinPoems,03part,RhythmandEndRhymeTranslationofReduplicatedWordsinClassicalChinesePoetryTranslationofOnomatopoeia,1.RhythmandEndRhyme,庐山仙人洞（七绝）（毛泽东）暮色苍茫看劲松，乱云飞渡仍从容。

天生一个仙人洞，无限风光在险峰。

TheImmortalsCaveAsturdypine,asviewedintwilightdimandlow,Remainateasewhileriotouscloudscomeandgo.TheFairyCavesawonderwroughtbyNatureshand,Theviewfromperilouspeakissublimeandgrand.（许渊冲译）,Inthisexample,XusuccessfullyrepresentthebeautyinrhythmbyapplyingcorrespondingmetricalpatternsinEnglishpoetry.Theoriginalsimplerhymeschemeisturnedintoaabbrhymescheme.,1.RhythmandEndRhyme,1）SwitchofRhyme（换尾韵）:

LoveSheweptwithpityanddelight,Sheblushdwithloveandvirginshame;And,likethemurmurofadream,Iheardherbreathemyname.,爱情窦初开羞答答，怜爱欣喜落泪花；犹如梦呓低声语，红云满面呼唤他。

1.RhythmandEndRhyme,2）RearrangetheLines（诗行调整）:

PartingatMorningRoundthecapeofasuddencamethesee,Andthesunlookdoverthemountainsrim;Andstraightwasapathofgoldforhim,Andtheneedofaworldofmenforme.,晨别送君过呷角，浪海扑面涌；太阳偷眼看，山顶红彤彤。

君有阳光道，笔直一条线；我有小天地，心系情爱中。

2.TranslationofReduplicatedWordsinClassicalPoetry,青青河畔草，Green,greenriversidegrassshesees,郁郁园中柳。

Lush,lushthegardenswillowtrees.盈盈楼上女，Fair,fair,shewaitsinpaintedbower,皎皎当窗牖。

Bright,brightlikeawindow-framedflower娥娥红粉妆，Inrosy,rosydressshestands,纤纤出素手。

Sheputsforthslender,slenderhands.,Byusingreduplicatedwords,literatureworksmayseemmoreimpressiveandrhythmic.Reduplicatedwordshavemoreforceofexpressionthanplainwordsandcouldstronglyemphasizethesubjectofliterature.,3.TranslationofOnomatopoeia,Englishonomatopoeiaorimitativewordsasaveryusefulfigureofspeech,itcannotonlyimitateorechothenaturalsounds,butalsocanportraypeopleanddepictscenery,stirimaginationandarouseinterestofthereader,ElegyWritteninaCountryChurch-YardThebreezycallofincense-breathingmorn,Theswallowtwitteringfromthestraw-builtshed,Thecocksshrillclarion,ortheechoinghorn,Nomoreshallarousethemfromtheirlowlybed.,墓园挽歌香气四溢的晨风轻松的呼召，燕子从茅草棚子里吐出的呢喃，公鸡的尖喇叭，是山鸣谷应的猎号，在不能唤醒他们在地下的长眠。

TranslationofPoeticImage,04part,TheCharacteristicsofimageTheimportanceofPoeticImageTheKindofPoeticImageThekeyofPoeticImage,1.TheCharacteristicsofimage:

ImplicitlyConcisenesssubtlenessAfullreflectionofthoughtsandfeelings,2.TheimportanceofPoeticImage:

TheaestheticpursuitSensationandsceneThekeyofpoetrytranslation.,1）ParallelImage（并列式意象）,MineoldfriendleaveththeWestFromtheYellowGraneTower.InthisfloweryAprilclimeForthicklypeopledYangzhou.AsolitarysailsdistantspeckVanishethintheclearblue:

WhatcouldbeseenheavenwardFlowingisbuttheLongRiver.,3.TheKindofPoeticImage,黄鹤楼送孟浩然之广陵故人西辞黄鹤楼，烟花三月下扬州。

孤帆远影碧空尽，惟见长江天际流。

2）SuperimposedImage（叠加式意象）,译文：

ISing,thewildmoonwandersthesky,Idance,myshadowgoestumblingabout.,月下独酌我歌月徘徊，我舞影凌乱。

3）DisconnectImage（脱节式意象）,译文：

SoDim,sodark,sodense,sodull,sodamp,sodank,sodead.,声声慢寻寻觅觅，冷冷清清，凄凄惨惨戚戚。

4）SynaestheticImage（通感式意象）,。

译文：

Gatewaydeepintheflowers,gatewaytoadreaminadream.There,beneaththesettingsunssilentstare,theswallowsthathavefoundtheirwaybacklookdoleful.TheCurtainisdown,itshookyetquiveringwithremembranceofaperfumedhandstendertouch.Quietfallstheflossofwillowsweepingoverspringsdeparture.Slowlypasstheshadowsofkindlycloudsveilingabashfulmoon.Why,theeastwindtonightischillasanautumnblast-moreso,howso?

浣溪沙门隔花深旧梦游，夕阳无语燕归愁，玉纤香动小帘钩。

落絮无声春坠泪，行云有影月含羞，东风临夜冷于秋。

4.ThekeyofPoeticImageReproducetheoriginalimagesAccuratelyandconciselyTransfertheoriginalculturalconnotationThesameaestheticperceptionreproducetheoriginalbeauty,TheTranslationofAncientpoem,05part,TitlesPhraseologySyntaxsentencesTotalverseShare,1.Titles,TheTranslationofAncientpoem,静夜思（李白）-Musingsonaquietnight游子吟（孟郊）-Forhersonwhowillbeaway春晓（孟浩然）-Springmorn相思（王维）-lovesyearnings夜雨寄北（李商隐）-Alettersentnorthaboutthesenightrainsinbashanmountain绝句（杜甫）-？

2.phraseology,僧言古壁佛画好，以火照来所见稀Hebroughtalightandshowedme,andIcalledthemwonderfulHebroughtalightandshowedme,andIcouldseelittleofthem.,TheTranslationofAncientpoem,Logo,3.syntax,天净沙.秋思（马致远）枯藤老树昏鸦；小桥流水人家；古道西风瘦马；夕阳西下；断肠人在天涯。

Driedvine（s）,（an）oldtree,eveningcrow（s）;（A）Smallbridge,flowingwater,menhome（s）;（An）ancientroad,westwind（s）,（a）leanhorse;Sunslantswest;Aheart-tornmanatskysend.,Oldtreeswreathedwithrottenvineflyeveningcrows;Neathtinybridgebesideacotaclearstreamflows;Onancientroadinwesternbreezealeanhorsegoes;Westwarddeclinesthesun;Far,farfromhomeistheheartbrokenone.（叶维廉）,TheTranslationofAncientpoem,4.sentences,有朋自远方来，不亦乐乎？

（rhetoricalquestion）Howhappyweare,tomeetfiendsfromafar!

但愿人长久，千里共婵娟Wewisheachotheralonglifesoastosharethebeautyofthisgracefulmoonlight,eventhoughmilesapart.学而不厌，诲人不倦Neverbecont