定语从句在写作的简单应用公开课.ppt

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UsingAttributiveClauseinWriting,定语从句在写作的简单应用,Enjoythenicesayings&translate,Heavenrewardsthosewhoworkhard,andflowersinspringcometofruitioninautumn.天道酬勤，春华秋实。

（出处书大诰）（摘自中国国家主席习近平应邀出席博鳌亚洲论坛2018年年会开幕式的重要主旨演讲：

“天道酬勤，春华秋实”。

中国人民坚持聚精会神搞建设、坚持改革开放不动摇，持之以恒，锲而不舍，推动中国发生了翻天覆地的变化）,学“习”语，知典故,Enjoythenicesayings,Successcomestothosewhoshareinonepurpose.上下同欲者胜（出处孙子.谋攻）（摘自2017年习近平新年贺词：

“上下同欲者胜”。

只要我们13亿多人们和衷共济，只要我们党永远同人民站在一起，大家撸起袖子加油干，我们就一定能走好我们这一代人的长征路）,学“习”语，知典故,Enjoythenicesayings,Heroesarethosewhoknowthemselvesandcanovercometheirowndifficulties.自知者英，自胜者雄。

（出处中说.周公）（摘自2016.10.21习近平在纪念红军长征胜利80周年大会上的讲话：

“自知者英，自胜者雄”，民族复兴梦想越接近，改革开放任务越繁重，越要加强党的建设）,学“习”语，知典故,Whathaveyoulearnedlastweek?

WHAT？

Revision,1.构成要素先行词：

被定语从句修饰的_或_关系词：

分为_和_定语从句：

修饰_或_的从句，一般紧跟在_的后面。

2.结构：

_词+_词+从句3.分类：

_和非限制性定语从句4.应用：

可以用来描述_和_5.翻译：

“的”,名词,代词,名词,代词,关系副词,关系代词,先行词,关系,先行,事物,人物,限制性,引导非限制定从，指代整个主句的内容,主语或宾语,宾语,定语，表所属关系,状语,IamastudentfromXiaoshengMiddleSchool,_issurroundedbymanygreentrees.,which,Practice1:

在空格中填入合适的关系词,Thereason_IwanttointroducemyschoolisthatitisoneofthemostbeautifulschoolsinShantou.,why,Therearemodernbasketballcourtsandplayground_areavailable（可利用的）forustotakeexercise.,that/which,Icanwellremembertherewasatime_ablueskyandthegreentreeshavekeptmespellbound.,when,Whatsmore,therearemanyfriendlyclassmates_Icouldgetalongwell.,withwhom,Moreimportantly,Ihavemetagreatnumberofexcellentteachers_haverichteachingexperience.,that/who,Iwillneverforgettheclassroom_westudytogether.,where,Thisisthebeautifulschool_Iwillspendthreehappyyears.,where,Practice2把下列每组题中的简单句合并为一个含有定从的复合句,IliketheMid-autumnFestival.TheMid-autumnFestivalisasimportantastheSpringFestival.,Peoplewilltrytogohomeforthefamilyreunion.Peopleworkfarfromtheirhomes.,Thereisakindofspecialfoodforthisfestival.Thenameofthefoodismooncake.,1）IliketheMid-autumnFestivalwhichisasimportantastheSpringFestival.,3）Thereisakindofspecialfood,thenameofwhichismooncake.3）Thereisakindofspecialfood,whosenameismooncake.,2）Peoplewhoworkfarfromtheirhomeswilltrytogohomeforthefamilyreunion.,Tip1:

写出两个简单句,主句,从句,主句,主句,从句,从句,Tip2:

在一个简单句中找出一个要修饰的词汇（这个词在两个简单句中都有）,Tip3:

把另一个简单句改成定从，从句要紧跟先行词（特别注意引导词的选择）,who,which,which,定语从句运用于写作,WhydowelearntheAttributiveClauses?

WHY？

写作中定语从句的主要作用：

1.增加词数,Todaysometeachersarevisitingourclass.TheteachersarefromXiaoshengMiddleSchool.TodaysometeacherswhoarefromXiaoshengMiddleSchoolarevisitingourclass.,IwanttoplaybasketballintheNBA.,2.可连接两个包含同一事物的句子，避免单词重复和句式单一,3.补充细节，以丰富文章内容,Thisismyuncle,adoctor.Thisismyuncle,whoisadoctor.,IwanttoplaybasketballintheNBA,whichisalwaysmydream.,HowdoweusetheAttributiveClausesinwriting?

HOW？

定从的使用情况,一：

两个（以上）简单句的合并,Johnismybestfriend.Johngavemeagift.HeboughtthisgiftfromUSA,gavemeagift,John,whichheboughtfromUSA.,mybestfriend,（题干中出现两句（以上）涉及同一事物的简单句）,定从的使用,我们班是一个大家庭。

这个大家庭包括35个女孩和40个男孩。

Ourclassisabigfamily.,Thefamilyconsistsof35girlsand40boys.,Ourclassisabigfamily,whichconsistsof35girlsand40boys.,consistof,Practice:

二：

插入语的使用,众所周知：

如上所述：

Asweallknow：

Asismentionedabove：

定从的使用,众所周知，中国有世界上最多的人口,Asweallknow,Chinahasthelargestpopulationallovertheworld.,Chinahasthelargestpopulationalloverrtheworld,asweallknow.,China,asweallknow,hasthelargestpopulationalloverrtheworld.,正如上面所提到的，定语从句用处很大。

_,theAttributiveClauseisofgreatuse.,Asismentionedabove,如上所述，我支持后者的观点。

infavorof,I,asismentionedabove,aminfavorofthelatterview.,正如我们所期待的，她取得了第一名。

She,asweallexpect,gotthefirstprize.,三：

非限指代整句的使用,我们不应玩手机，这会影响学习。

我们应该每天锻炼，这对身体好。

Weshouldnotplaythemobilephone,whichhasabadeffectonourstudy.,Weshouldtakeexerciseeveryday,whichisgoodforourhealth.,定从的使用,Forexample:

Myschoolisabeautifulplace.,Myschoolisabeautifulplace，wheretherearegreentrees,beautifulflowers,singingbirdsandfreshair.,Solution:

找到这个简单句中的中心词，用定语从句将其丰富,我的学校是个美丽的地方。

有多美丽？

因何美丽？

题干中只有一个孤立的简单句。

四：

定从在要点增加上的使用,定从的使用,（2013年高考山东卷）描述你的假期打算（包括兼职、旅游、志愿者等）,Iwouldliketodoapart-timejob,whichwillhelpmeearnmoneyandaccumulateworkingexperience.,Practice:

用定语从句增添做这些事情的原因,Travelingisoneofmychoices,whichwillenrichmylifeandbroadenmyhorizon.,Iwouldliketodovoluntarywork,whichwillmakeagreatcontributiontosociety.,Translatethefollowingsentences.,1.我总是会参观一些博物馆，这些博物馆于拓宽视野、丰富知识来说是不应错过的。

2.你知道，中国结非常受中国人的喜欢。

（Chineseknot）,3.当今，父母为他们的独生子女做所有的事情，这使得这些独生子女非常依赖于父母。

4.人们可以一边吃月饼一边赏月，月饼是这个节日的特殊食品。

1.Iwouldvisitsomemuseumswhichshouldnotbemissedtowidenmyhorizonsaswellasenrichmyknowledge.（2013山东高考满分作文）,我总是会参观一些博物馆，这些博物馆对于拓宽视野、丰富知识来说是不应错过的。

2.Asyouknow,ChineseknotsareverypopularwithChinesepeople.（2013新课标全国卷满分作文）,你知道，中国结非常受中国人的喜欢。

4.Peoplecanenjoythemoonwhileeatingmooncakes,whicharethespecialfoodforthisfestival.（2013辽宁高考满分作文）人们可以一边吃月饼一边赏月，月饼是这个节日的特殊食品。

3.Nowadaysparentshavedoneeverythingfortheirsinglechildren,whichmakesthechildrenrelyontheirparentsbadly.（2013福建高考满分作文）,当今，父母为他们的独生子女做所有的事情，这使得这些独生子女非常依赖于父母。

作文中是不是越多定语从句就越好,？

2017年全国卷假定你是李华，想邀请邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸（paper-cutting）艺术展。

请给他写封邮件，内容包括：

1.展览时间、地点；2.展览内容。

注意：

1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

DearHenryImLiHua,whoistheleaderofthepaper-cuttingclubinourschool.LasttimeyoutoldmeyoulookedforwardtolearningmoreabouttraditionalChineseculture.NowImgladtotellyoutherewillbeaChinesepaper-cuttingexhibitionwhichisheldbyourschool.Isincerelyhopeyoucansetasidesometimefortheartfeast.Theexhibition,thethemeofwhichisbeautyofChina,willtakeplaceintheschoolhallfrom2to5ontheafternoonofJune21.Ourclubsworkswillbedisplayed,andwehaveavaluablesetofpaper-cuttingwhichiscreatedbyafamousartistofthisfield.Besides,therewillbealotofusefulandinterestingactivities,fromwhichyoucanhaveaclearerpictureofChineseculture.Iwouldappreciateitifyouacceptmyinvitation.Imsureitcanleaveawonderfulimpressiononyou!

Imlookingforwardtoyourreply.Bestwishes!

Yours,LiHua,DearHenry,ImLiHua,theleaderofthepaper-cuttingclubinourschool.LasttimeyoutoldmeyoulookedforwardtolearningmoreabouttraditionalChineseculture.NowImgladtotellyoutherewillbeaChinesepaper-cuttingexhibitionheldbyourschool.Isincerelyhopeyoucansetasidesometimefortheartfeast.Theexhibition,thethemeofwhichisbeautyofChina,willtakeplaceintheschoolhallfrom2to5ontheafternoonofJune21.Notonlywillourclubsworksbedisplayed,butwealsohaveavaluablesetofpaper-cuttingcreatedbyafamousartistofthisfield.Besides,therewillbealotofusefulandinterestingactivities,fromwhichyoucanhaveaclearerpictureofChineseculture.Iwouldappreciateitifyouacceptmyinvitation.Imsureitcanleaveawonderfulimpressiononyou!

Imlookingforwardtoyourreply.Bestwishes!

Yours,LiHua,1,2,3,Pleaseaddanythingyoulikeandanythingyouwant,Pleaseaddanythingyoulikeandanythingyouwant,Pleaseaddanythingyoulikeandanythingyouwant,contents,DearHenryImLiHua,whoistheleaderofthepaper-cuttingclubinourschool.LasttimeyoutoldmeyoulookedforwardtolearningmoreabouttraditionalChineseculture.NowImgladtotellyoutherewillbeaChinesepaper-cuttingexhibitionwhichisheldbyourschool.Isincerelyhopeyoucansetasidesometimefortheartfeast.Theexhibition,thethemeofwhichisbeautyofChina,willtakeplaceintheschoolhallfrom2to5ontheafternoonofJune21.Ourclubsworkswillbedisplayed,andwehaveavaluablesetofpaper-cuttingwhichiscreatedbyafamousartistofthisfield.Besides,therewillbealotofusefulandinterestingactivities,fromwhichyoucanhaveaclearerpictureofChineseculture.Iwouldappreciateitifyouacceptmyinvitation.Imsureitcanleaveawonderfulimpressiononyou!

Imlookingforwardtoyourreply.Bestwishes!

Yours,LiHua,范文一,1,3,2,4,5,1,2,3,Pleaseaddanythingyoulikeandanythingyouwant,Pleaseaddanythingyoulikeandanythingyouwant,Pleaseaddanythingyoulikeandanythingyouwant,contents,DearHenry,ImLiHua,theleaderofthepaper-cuttingclubinourschool.LasttimeyoutoldmeyoulookedforwardtolearningmoreabouttraditionalChineseculture.NowImgladtotellyoutherewillbeaChinesepaper-cuttingexhibitionheldbyourschool.Isincerelyhopeyoucansetasidesometimefortheartfeast.Theexhibition,thethemeofwhichisbeautyofChina,willtakeplaceintheschoolhallfrom2to5ontheafternoonofJune21.Notonlywillourclubsworksbedisplayed,butalsowehaveavaluablesetofpaper-cuttingcreatedbyafamousartistofthisfield.Besides,therewillbealotofusefulandinterestingactivities,fromwhichyoucanhaveaclearerpictureofChineseculture.Iwouldappreciateitifyouacceptmyinvitation.Imsureitcanleaveawonderfulimpressiononyou!

Imlookingforwardtoyourreply.Bestwishes!

Yours,LiHua,范文二,高考英语满分作文“黄金三定律”:

行文清晰、准确、简洁三点,1,2,heldbyourschool.,名词短语作同位语,createdbyafamousartistofthisfield.,过去分词做后置定语,notonlybutalso倒装句,作文中是不是越多定语从句就越好,？

TwoorthreeAttibutiveClausesareenoughinonecomposition!

除定语从句外，我们可以用并列句，非谓语做后置定语或状语，用介词短语（with+宾语+宾补），名词性从句等复合句，强调句，倒装句,重写这次月考作文:

1、12分以下，先用简单句，再用1-2句定语从句整合句子；2、12-16分至少使用2句以上的定语从句；3、16分以上，尽量句式多样化。

Homework,THANKYOU,