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雅思A类小作文范文赏析
Thechartbelowgivesinformationaboutglobalsalesofgamessoftware,CDsandDVDorvideo.
Writeareportforauniversitylecturerdescribingtheinformation.
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Thechartshowsthechangesinthesalesofvideomaterial/DVDs,gamessoftwareandCDsaroundtheworldinbillionsofdollarsoverathree-yearperiod.Itcanbeseenthatthesalesofvideos/DVDsandgamessoftwarehaveincreased,whilethesalesofCDshavegonedownslightly.
Between2000and2003,thesaleofvideosandDVDsrosebyapproximately13billiondollars.In2000,justunder20billiondollarsworthoftheseitemsweresold,butin2003,thisfigurehadrisentoalittleover30billiondollars.
Thesalesofgamessoftwarealsoroseduringthisperiod,butlesssharply.Salesincreasedfromabout13billiondollarsin2000tojustunder20billiondollarsthreeyearslater.Bycontrast,duringthesametimeperiod,thesaleofCDsfellfrom35billiondollarsin2000toabout32.5billiondollarsin2003.
Eatingsweetfoodsproducesacidinthemouth,whichcancausetoothdecay.(HighacidlevelsaremeasuredbylowpHvalues)
Describetheinformationbelowanddiscusstheimplicationsfordentalhealth.
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Anyonewhohasvisitedadentisthasbeentoldthateatingexcessiveamountsofsweetsrisksharmingtheteeth.ThisisbecausesweetslowerpHlevelsinthemouthtodangerouslevels.
WhenthepHlevelinthemouthiskeptabove5.5,acidityissuchthatteethareunlikelytobeindangerofdecay.Sweetfoods,however,causepHinthemouthtodropforatime,andthelongerpHlevelsremainbelow5.5,thegreatertheopportunityfordecaytooccur.
Bycomparingfruitsugar,canesugarandhoney,whichareallcommoningredientsofsweetfoods,wefindthatcanesugarlowerspHlevelsforthelongestperiod,thusproducingthegreatestriskofthethree.Approximatelyfiveminutesaftfterconsumingcanesugar,pHlevelsdroptoaslittleaspH3.5.Theythenbegintoriseslowly,butdonotriseabovepH5.5untilatleast30minuteshaveelapsed.Bycontrast,fruitsugar,whichcausesthemouth'saciditytofalltojustabovepH4,posesadangerforashorterperiod:
toothdecayisunlikely20minutesafterconsumption.Honeyappearsanevenlessriskysubstance.ThoughacidityfallstoaboutpH4.75withinfiveminutesofconsumption,itreturnstoabovepH5.5inunderfifteenminutes.
Theimplications,then,arethatpeoplewhoinsistoneatingsweetfoodsshouldbeawareoftheingredients,andthatfruitsugarorhoneyappearpreferabletocanesugar.
Writeareportforauniversitylecturerdescribingtheinformationinthetwographsbelow.
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ThepiechartscomparethehighestlevelofeducationachievedbywomeninSomelandacrosstwoyears,1945and1995.ItcanbeclearlyseenthatwomenreceivedamuchhigherlevelofeducationinSomelandin1995thantheydidin1945.
In1945only30%ofwomencompletedtheirsecondaryeducationand1%wentontoafirstdegree.Nowomenhadcompletedpost-graduatestudies.Thissituationhadchangedradicallyby1995.In1995,90%ofwomeninSomelandhadcompletedsecondaryeducationandofthose,halfhadgraduatedfromaninitialdegreeand20%hadgoneontopostgraduatestudies.Attheotherendofthescalewecanseethatby1995allgirlswerecompletinglowersecondary,although10%endedtheirschoolingatthispoint.Thisisinstarkcontrastwith1945whenonly30%ofgirlscompletedprimaryschool,35%hadnoschoolingatalland35%onlycompletedthethirdgrade.
Inconclusion,wecanseethatinthe50yearsfrom1945to1995therehavebeenhugepositivedevelopmentstotheeducationlevelsofwomeninSomeland.
Writeareportforauniversitylecturerdescribingtheinformationinthetablebelow.
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ThetableshowshowpeopleindifferentagegroupsspendtheirleisuretimeinSomelandoverthecourseofayear.Itcanbeclearlyseenthattheamountofleisuretimeavailablevariesconsiderablyacrosstheagegroupsandthatpeopleofdifferentagelevelshaveverydifferentwaysofspendingtheirleisuretime.
Accordingtothefigures,aspeopleageinSomelandtheirsociallivesreduce.Teenagersandpeopleintheirtwentiesspendonaverage500hoursperyearonsocialisingand350hoursofthattimeiswithagroupofmorethan4people.Althoughthetotalhoursofsocialisingintheir30s,40s,50sand60sisfairlyconstant(between300-350),socialisingwithmorethan4peopledropsdramaticallyto50hoursinthe30sand40sagegroupsandonly25from50yearsold.Groupandindividualexercisefollowasimilarpattern.
PeopleofallagesspendagoodpartoftheirleisuretimeonentertainmentsuchasTV/videoviewingandcinema.Inbothcases,teenagersandretiredpeoplespendaroundtwiceasmuchtimeasthosewhoareatworkingage.Homeentertainmentrangesfromjustoverathousandhoursforteenagersandretiredpeopleandanaverageof600hoursforeveryoneelse.Cinemaaccountsfor100hoursoftheteenagersandretiredpeople’sleisuretimeand25-50hoursfortherest.
Inconclusionwecanseethereisasignificanttrendtowardssolitaryandsmallergroupactivitiesaspeoplegrowolderandthatteenagersandretiredpeoplespendalotmoretimeonentertainmentthanthoseofworkingagedo.
ThemapbelowisofthetownofGarlsdon.Anewsupermarket(S)isplannedforthetown.Themapshowstwopossiblesitesforthesupermarket.
Summarisetheinformationbyselectingandreportingthemainfeatures,andmakecomparisonswhererelevant.
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Thefirstpotentiallocation(S1)isoutsidethetownitself,andissitedjustoffthemainroadtothetownofHindon,lying12kmstothenorth-west.Thissiteisinthecountrysideandsowouldbeabletoaccommodatealotofcarparking.ThiswouldmakeitaccessabletoshoppersfrombothHindonandGarlsdonwhocouldtravelbycar.AsitisalsoclosetotherailwaylinelinkingthewhotownstoCransdon(25kmtothesouth-east),apotentiallylargenumberofshopperswouldalsobeabletotravelbytrain.
Incontrast,thesuggestedlocation,S2,isrightinthetowncentre,whichwouldbegoodforlocalresidents.Theoricallythestorecouldbeaccessedbyroadorrailfromthesurroundingtowns,includingBransdon,butasthecentralareaisano-trafficzone,carswouldbeunabletoparkandaccesswouldbedifficult.
Overall,neithersiteisappropriateforallthetowns,butforcustomersinCransdon,HindonandGarlsdon,theout-of-townsite(S1)wouldprobablyoffermoreadvantages.
Thediagrambelowshowsthetypicalstagesofconsumergoodsmanufacturing,includingtheprocessbywhichinformationisfedbacktoearlierstagestoenableadjustment.
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Mostconsumergoodsgothroughaseriesofstagesbeforetheyemergeasfinishedproductsreadyforsale.
Rawmaterialsandmanufacturedcomponentscomprisetheinitialphysicalinputinthemanufacturingprocess.Onceobtained,thesearestoredforlaterassembly.Butassemblyfirstdependsupontheproductionplanningstage,whereitisdecidedhowandinwhatquantitiesthestoredmaterialswillbeprocessedtocreatesufficientquantitiesoffinishedgoods.Theproductionplanningstageitselffollowstherequirementsofthegoods'designstagethatproceedsfromextensiveresearch.Afterassembly,theproductsareinspectedandtestedtomaintainqualitycontrollThoseunitsthatpasstheinspectionandtestingstagesarethenpackaged,despatchedandofferedforsaleinretailoutlets.Thelevelofsales,whichistheendpointofthemanufacturingprocess,helpsdetermineproductionplanning.
Aproduct'sdesignisnotonlytheresultofproductresearch,butisalsoinfluencedbytestingandmarketresearch.Ifthetestingstage(afterassemblyandinspection)revealsunacceptableproblemsinthefinishedproduct,thenadjustmentswillhavetobemadetotheproduct'sdesign.Similarly,marketresearch,whichexaminestheextentandnatureofthedemandforproducts,hastheroleofguidingproductdesigntosuitconsumerdemandswhichmaychangewithtime.Marketresearch,whileinfluencedbyproductsales,alsoservestofosterfuturesalesbydevisingsuitableadvertisingforthegoods.
Thustherealityofconsumergoodsmanufacturinggoeswellbeyondasimplelinearproductionprocess.
【系列】雅思A类小作文范文合辑(第一辑):
ThechartandgraphbelowgiveinformationaboutsalesandsharepricesforCoca-Cola.
Writeareportforauniversitylecturerdescribingtheinformationshownbelow.
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ThepiechartshowstheworldwidedistributionofsalesofCoca-Colaintheyear2000andthegraphshowsthechangeinsharepricesbetween1996and2001.
Intheyear2000,Coca-Colasoldatotalof17.1billioncasesoftheirfizzydrinkproductworldwide.ThelargestconsumerwasNorthAmerica,where30.4percentofthetotalvolumewaspurchased.ThesecondlargestconsumerwasLatinAmerica.EuropeandAsiapurchased20.5and16.4percentofthetotalvolumerespectively,whileA