托福写作高分满分范文点评和思路解析.docx

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托福写作高分满分范文点评和思路解析

托福写作高分满分范文点评和思路解析

为了让大家更好的准备托福考试，给大家了托福考试满分范文,下面就和大家分享，来欣赏一下吧。

托福写作难点话题一览

Landforhumanneedsorendangeredanimals

Somepeoplethinkthathumanneedsforfarmland,housing,andindustryaremoreimportantthansavinglandforendangeredanimals.Doyouagreeordisagreewiththispointofview?

Whyorwhynot?

Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouranswer.

写作思路展开结构分析

虽然两边立场都可以选，但一般来说按照政治正确的思路还是建议选择站濒危动物这一边，中国考生比较容易relate到的例子就是熊猫了吧。

所以认为选择不同意更好写一些。

大家可以列举两三个保护endangeredanimals的重要性。

同时不要忘了说明人类也确实需要更多的土地。

只不过不能只顾眼前利益（shorttermbenefits）而已。

这样就能两边都兼顾到一些了。

本话题高分范文赏析

Whenmakingdecisionsaboutlanduse,somesaythathumanneedsshouldebeforeanimalneedsineverycase.WhileIagreethathumanneedsshouldhaveprimaryconsideration,humanshaveaspecialresponsibilitytoprotectthelandthatendangeredanimalscallhome.Animalsadaptveryslowlytosuddenchangesintheirenvironments.Manyendangeredanimalscanonlyliveinoneplace,orinaspecifictypeofplace.Humans,ontheotherhand,haveaspecialabilitytoadaptquicklytochangingandhostileenvironments.Forinstance,ifhumansneedtoliveinaverydryenvironmenttheycanusetechnologytolocateanddrillforwater,orbuildpipelinestobringinwaterfromoutside.ThousandsofyearsagotheresidentsofXinjiangprovincedugundergroundtunnelshundredsofkilometerslongtocarrywatertooasistownslikeTurpan.Becausehumansarethusflexiblewhilemanyanimalsarenot,humansshouldmakeanefforttouseupallavailablespacebeforeencroachinguponthehabitatsofendangeredanimals.Oneoftheimportantreasonstoprotectendangeredanimalsisthatthedelicateecologicalbalanceofanareamightbeirreparablyharmedbytheirextinction.Forexample,ifhumanschopdownforestsandusethelandtogrowcorn,theymightsimultaneouslydestroythehabitatsofakindofbirdthateatslocusts.Thenextyearbecausethelocustpopulationcangrowunchecked,locustsmightdestroytheentirenearbycorncrop.Notonlydothebirdslosetheirhomes,buthumansarealsoharmed.Theecologicalbalanceofmanynaturalhabitatsisstillnotwellunderstoodandhumansinterfereinitattheirperil.Finally,humanshavemuchtolearnfromendangeredspecies.Oneexampleisinthefieldofmedicine.ByobservingaparticularspeciesofendangeredmonkeysinSouthAmerica,scientistshavediscoveredthatmonkeyseatacertainkindofplantwhentheygetsick.Throughresearchthescientistsdiscoveredthatthisplantalsohasmedicinalvalueforhumans.Ifthemonkey'shabitathadbeendestroyedtocreatemorefarmland,notonlywouldwelosetheplantsandthemonkeys,wewouldalsoloselife-savingmedicinesandthepotentialformedicalresearch.

托福写作难点话题一览

Doweneed"Never,nevergiveup"?

Theexpression"Never,nevergiveup"meanstokeeptryingandneverstopworkingforyourgoals.Doyouagreeordisagreewiththisstatement?

Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouranswer.

写作思路展开结构分析

这道题目比较狡猾，很多人可能一看到never就马上选好边准备反对了，但觉得大家最好还是结合题目的实际情况来分析。

never的确是一个绝对词，但是由于这道题目说的是nevergiveup，本身是一个积极向上的说法，所以，认为比较合理的态度是“很大程度上同意”。

比如大家可以说永不放弃的前提是“制订一个现实、可行、并有意义的计划”等等。

本话题高分范文赏析

NeartheendoftheSecondWorldWar,Churchilldeliveredhismostfamousandtheshortestspeech:

Never,NeverGiveUp.TheBritishandpeopleinmanyothercountriesweretremendouslyencouraged,andfinallywentthroughthehardestperiodinhumanhistory."Nevergiveup"representsastrongandpositivelifeattitude.Somepeoplearereadytoquitwhentheyfeeltheycannotendurethedifficultiesofsomeworkortheythinktheycannotfindawaytofinishtherequiredtask.Suchpeopleusuallybeeupsetanddisappointedandlosetheirself-confidence,althoughtheyvirtuallycandoeverythingwellsimplybytryingoncemore.Incasessuchasacquiringsecondlanguage,mostpeoplefailedsimplybecausetheyhadgivenup.Acquiringsecondlanguagemightbetheeasiesttaskamongdiverseacademiccurriculums,becauseonecanbesuessfulonlybyplainrepetition,thoughitispainstakingandtime-consuming.Nevergiveup.Suchstrongbeliefoftengivesusthesecondchance.Thefactthatwefail-somewheredoesnotmeanwearegoingtofaileverywhere,andespeciallyitdoesnotnecessarilymeanthatwearedeprivedofopportunitiestowinthere.Thereprobablyisasecondchance.Manysuessfulpeopledidfailbefore.YuMinhong,thefounderofNewOrientalSchool,wasabletostudyinPekingUniversityonlyafterthreeattempts.Hewasn'treckonedassuessfulaftergraduation,amongmanysignsisthefactthatalmostallhisclassmateswentabroadwhilehew~eachandeverytimerefusedbyofficialsinvisa-grantingofficeforunexplainedreasons.Yethenevergaveup,whichmakeshislatersuessinevitable.Psychologyteachesusthatwedogetwhatwewant,ifweknowexactlywhatwewantandwanttherightthing.Firstofall,wemustmakesurethatourclearlydefinedgoalsareachievable,andthatourcarefullydesignedmeansarepracticable.AsuperficialclaimlikeIwanttobeamillionairebringsnothing.Andanunrealisticgoallikeinventingaperpetualmotionmachineisabsolutelymeaningless.Butifwewanttoacquireasecondlanguage,itisbothrealisticandmeaningful.Bycarefulplanning,andrelevantpersistencewehavenoreasontofail.Andnumerousexamples___usthatevenifthemethodsareproblematic,manystillfinallyattaingreatachievements.Therefore,inmostcases,thebelief"Never,nevergiveup"isreallysomethingthatweshouldalwaysbearinmind.

托福写作难点话题一览

Shouldhistoricbuildingsbepreservedorbereplacedwithmodernbuildings?

Shouldacitytrytopreserveitsold,historicbuildingsordestroythemandreplacethemwithmodernbuildings?

Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouropinion.

写作思路展开结构分析

保留历史建筑的必要性在于其文化意义、教育意义和商业意义（比如开发旅游业）。

而拆除则是出于城市土地需求的现实性来考虑，比如开发住房和商业场所。

至于要不要保留，也往往是看哪一个价值更大，并且要具体情况具体分析。

Theanswerdependsontheconcreteanalysisofconcreteconditions。

本话题高分范文赏析

Tallglasstowers,whoseshinyfacadesareascoolastheirair-conditionedinsides,arebeingpartofcityscapesfromSouthAmericatoNorthEastAsia.Intheprocess,oldbuildingsaremakingroomfortheseeminglyunstoppableadvancementofmodernity.Thusthefaceoftheglobalcityischanging,andcityplannersarefacingthedifficultchoiceofeitherpreservinghistoricbuildingorreplacingthemwithmodernones.Astherearestrongargumentsforeitheroption,thefinaldecisionwilldependonathoroughanalysisofthespecificsituationathand.Itisimportanttopreservehistoricbuildingsandpartsofcitiesbecausetheyarepartoftheculturalheritagethatgivesidentitytoamunity.Oldhomesandlivingquartersareapartofhistory,and,oncedestroyed,leveled,andburiedunderthousandsoftonsofconcreteandsteel,theywillbelostforever.Theconstructionserectedintheirplacesintoomanycaseslackanysortofconnectiontotheplace.Thesebuildingsareanonymousandculturelessedificesthatcouldstandtallinanyotherpartoftheworld.Theylackthecharmandcharacteroftheirhistoricpredecessors.

Yettheconstructionofnewbuildingsisasignofmodernization.Notonlywillmanypeoplefindworkintheprocessofbuildingthesestructures,buttheirexistencewillattractfutureinvestmentsandthusgreatlybenefittheeconomyofanareaorcountry.Inaddition,thesenewbuildingsoftenhavelowermaintenancecostsinparisontotheagedconstructions.Moreimportantly,newlydevelopmenthomesandofficespacesincludethefortsofmodernlife,e.g.air-conditioningandmodernkitchens,arethusfortabletolivein.

Sweepinggeneralizationsareimpossiblehere.Acitygovernmentshouldtryitsbesttopreservetheold,historiccharmofacityanditspeople.Yetatthesametime,theyhavetolookforwardandmodernizeold,rundownbuildingsinanefforttomaketheircityamorefortableplacetoliveinandamoresuessfulplacetodobusiness.Therefore,acityshouldthinkaboutitsgeneralinterestsandgoalsandthentrytomakespecificdecisionsinindividualsituations.

Isliteracymoreimportanttodaythaninthepast?

Istheabilitytoreadandwritemoreimportanttodaythaninthepast?

Whyorwhynot?

Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouranswer.

写作思路展开结构分析

一定程度上，同意这个说法。

（Inasense,itistruethat…）阅读并理解（Comprehend）的能力，在信息过度丰富的今天，更加重要。

现代人的阅读量要比过去高出许多倍（过去大学生就是很高的学历，现在博士后[postdoctoral]才算是高学历）。

需要更多的能力去辨别真伪。

写作的能力更是如此，比如在工作中，写报告是一项重要内容，公司的规模越大，越是如此。

没有写作能力，就等于没有升迁机会。

本话题高分范文赏析

Astheworldbeessmallerandsmallerduetotheprocessofglobalization,itbeesmoreandmoreimportantthateveryonelearnshowtoreadandwrite.Ifoneistokeepupwiththefastpaceoftheworld,literacyskillsareofutmostimportance.

Technologyisexpandingatanever-increasingrate.Computers,andtheInter,havebeemontermsinalmostallnationsintheworld.Ifonewantstobeabletomunicatewithothersusingthisefficientmethod,onemustlearnthebasicsofreadingandwriting.Theobjectswehaveinourhomearealsobeingincreasinglymoreplicated.Forexample,ifonewantstouseaDVDplayerwiththeirtelevision,onemustbeabletoreadthemanualtolearnhowtoworkit.Eventhemostbasictechnologiesewithaninstructionguide:

ifoneisunabletoread,theywillconstantlybestrugglingtofigureouthowtoworkthesetechnologies.

Asmentionedabove,theworldisbeingmuchsmaller.Morepeoplearefindingitnecessarytoleavetheirhomesinsmalltownsandvillages,movingtothebigcitieswherethereismoreopportunity.Someofthesepeoplefinditquitedifficulttonavigatearoundthecity,asonemustknowhowtoreadinordertounderstandthestreetsigns.Ifon