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北京市高考英语各区模拟情景作文整理
2017各区模拟情景作文整理
一、评分原则:
1.本题总分为20分,按5个档次给分。
2.评分时,先根据文章的内容和语言质量初步确定其档次,然后以该档次的要求来衡量,确定或调整档次,最后给分。
3.评分时应考虑:
内容要点的完整性、上下文的连贯、词汇和句式的多样性及语言的准确性。
4.拼写、标点符号或书写影响内容表达时,应视其影响程度予以考虑。
英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。
5.词数少于60,从总分中减去1分。
二、各档次的给分范围和要求:
第一档
完全完成了试题规定的任务。
·覆盖了所有内容要点;
·运用了多样的句式和丰富的词汇;
·语法或用词方面有个别错误,但为尽可能表达丰富的内容所致;体现了较强的语言运用能力;
·有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,所写内容连贯、结构紧凑。
完全达到了预期的写作目的。
18分-20分
第二档
完全完成了试题规定的任务。
·覆盖了所有内容要点;
·运用的句式和词汇能满足任务要求;
·语法和用词基本准确,少许错误主要为尽可能表达丰富的内容所致;
·使用了简单的语句间连接成分,所写内容连贯。
达到了预期的写作目的。
15分-17分
第三档
基本完成了试题规定的任务。
·覆盖了内容要点;
·运用的句式和词汇基本满足任务要求;
·语法和用词方面有一些错误,但不影响理解。
基本达到了预期的写作目的。
12分-14分
第四档
未恰当完成试题规定的任务。
·漏掉或未描述清楚主要内容;
·所用句式和词汇有限;
·语法或用词方面的错误影响了对所写内容的理解。
未能清楚地传达信息。
6分-11分
第五档
未完成试题规定的任务。
·明显遗漏主要内容;
·句式单调、词汇贫乏;
·语法或用词方面错误较多,严重影响了对所写内容的理解。
1分-5分
0分
未能传达任何信息;所写内容与要求无关。
西城期末
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。
上周,你班同学为迎接新年的到来,为元旦联欢会精心策划准备。
请你按照以下四幅图的先后顺序,以“PreparationsforNewYear’sParty”为题,给校刊写一篇英文稿件,介绍准备联欢会的全过程。
注意:
词数不少于60。
LastMonday,realizingthenewyearof2017wascoming,someofmyclassmatesandIcameupwithanideathatweshouldholdapartytocelebrateit.Withoutanydelaywehadaheateddiscussionaboutwhattoprepareandputdownallthethingsneededonalist.Rightafterschool,weheadedtothenearbysupermarketforshopping.Besidesthedecorations,wealsoboughtsomefruitanddrinks.
Thedaybeforetheparty,westartedtodecoratetheclassroom.WhileIwaswriting“HappyNewYear”ontheblackboard,myclassmatesputupthepaperfestoonsandballoons,cleanedthefloor,andarrangedthedesksandchairs.Soon,thewholeclassroomtookonanewlook.Atthesightofthescene,ourheadteachergaveusathumbs-up.
Whatajoyfulpartywoulditbe?
Abigsmilespreadacrossourfaces.
东城期末
假设你是红星中学高三
(1)班的学生李华。
你和同学们在学校观看神舟十一号载人飞船发射直播。
请按照以下四幅图的先后顺序,给校刊“英语角”写一篇英文稿件,介绍当天的活动。
注意:
1.词数不少于60。
2.开头已给出,不计入总词数。
提示词:
点火:
ignite
LastMondayIhadanunforgettableexperience.IwatchedthelaunchofShenzhouXImannedspacecraftthroughTVatschool.
内容要点:
1.等待2.观看3.讨论4.出板报
LastMondayIhadanunforgettableexperience.IwatchedthelaunchofShenzhouXImannedspacecraftonTVatschool.
Earlyinthemorning,wegatheredontheplaygroundanxiouslywaitingforthelaunch.Wealllookedatthebigscreenattentively.Hearing“5,4,3,2,1.Ignite!
Go!
”,Ifeltmyheartbeatingfast.Withamassoforangeflames,thespacecraftgraduallyflewintospace,carryingourChineseDream.Themomentitwasannouncedthatthelaunchwassuccessfullyaccomplished,weburstintoapplause.Weweresothrilledthatwejumped,cheeringthelaunch.
Laterthatday,wehadaheateddiscussionaboutwhattodotocelebratethelaunch.Wefinallyreachedanagreementtomakeawallnewspaper.Whenthedesigningwasdone,wesetaboutworkingonit.Allofusdidourbitandthewallnewspaperwassoonfinished.
I’llneverforgetthispreciousmoment.Themagnificentlaunchnotonlyimpressesusdeeplybutmotivatesustodoourbestatschoolsothatwecanalsomakesomecontributionstoourcountry.
海淀期末
假设你是红星中学高三
(1)班的学生李华。
请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,给校刊“英语角”写一篇英文稿件,记述你在小区发现并救助流浪狗的全过程。
注意:
词数不少于60。
提示词:
流浪狗straydog
内容要点:
1.发现流浪狗;2.检查(打针);3.寻求领养人;4.交给领养者。
Onedayafterschool,justbeforeIarrivedhome,Inoticedapuppybesidethecommunitygate.Seeingitshiveringinthefreezingwind,Ifeltsympatheticforitanddecidedtohelp.
Concernedthatitmightbesick,Irushedittotheneighborhoodvet.Onseeingtheskinnydogwithdirtyhair,thevetrecognizeditasastraydog.Hepraisedmeformykindnessandofferedtoexamineitforfree.Fortunately,thedogwasfineexceptforbeingalittleunderweight.SinceIcouldn’taffordthetimeandenergy,thelovingvetagreedtokeepituntilIfounditahome.
Thatnight,Ipostedseveralpicturesofthepuppywithadescriptiononalocalwebsite,hopingsomeonewouldadoptit.Tomygreatsurprise,withinafewhoursmypostreceivedhundredsofclicksanddozensofnetizensappliedtobetheowner.
Afterseveraltelephone“interviews”,acouplebecamemyfinalchoicesincetheyhaverichexperienceindograising.Wemetthenextdayatthevet’s.Forthecouple,itwasloveatfirstsight.Thepuppy,asifawareofwhatwasgoingon,keptonwaggingitstail.AsIwavedthecontentedfamilygoodbye,Ifeltaloadoffmymindandprideinmyheart.Ifeveryonecantreatanimalswithlove,theworldwillsurelybeanicerplace.
西城一模
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。
上周爷爷过生日,请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,写一篇周记。
记述你自制相册作为礼物并送出的过程。
注意:
词数不少于60。
1.记起生日2.思考礼物3.制作相册4.送出相册
LastMonday,whilecheckingthecalendar,Irealizedmygrandpa’sbirthdaywasapproaching.Whatwouldbeagoodsurprisegiftforhimthisyear?
WhileIwasrackingmybrainforanidea,memoriesofthetimeIspentwithGrandpafishingandplayingfootballorchessallfloodedback.ItsuddenlyhitmethatIcouldmakeaphotoalbumtorecordthosepreciousmoments.Withoutanydelay,Ithrewmyselfintothecreationofthealbum.Iturnedonthecomputer,carefullyselectedsomephotosanddesignedeachpage.Finally,analbumoflovewasborn.Lookingateachphoto,Icouldn’thelpimagininghowdelightedGrandpawouldbe.
Atthebirthdayparty,whenIpresentedthealbumtoGrandpa,hehuggedmeaffectionately,tearswellingupinhiseyes.Myparentssmiledhappily.
ThealbumservesnotonlyasagifttoshowmyrespectandappreciationtomydearGrandpaonthisspecialday,butremindsmethatIshouldspendmoretimewithhim.
东城一模
假如你是红星中学高三1班的李华。
请按以下四幅图的顺序,给你校“英语园地”投稿,介绍上个月你们班参加学校组织的“原创诗词大赛”的比赛过程。
注意:
词数不少于60。
Lastmonth,ourclasstookpartintheCampusPoetryContestheldinourschool.
1.获悉比赛2.创作、排练3.朗诵表演4.公布成绩
Lastmonth,ourclasstookpartintheCampusPoetryContestheldinourschool.
Ourheadmasterannouncedthestartofthecontestandthetopic–OurColorfulSchoolLife.Healsorequiredthateveryclassshouldcreateonepoemofanylengthandanytypeandthenpresentitinfrontofthewholeschool.Welistenedattentively,showinggreatinterest.
Whenwewerebacktoourclassroom,wediscussedwhattowriteaboutourpoem.Someofmyclassmatescontributedbrilliantideas,otherssetaboutwriting.Rightafterourpoemwascompleted,westartedtopracticeforthecomingshow.Everybodyworkedhardanddidourbit.Ourteacheralsoofferedushelp.
Finallythebigdaycame.Thehallwasfullofexcitement.Whenitwasourturn,I,standingonthestagewithmyclassmates,ledthereadingofourpoem.
Intheend,whenourheadmasterannouncedthewinners,thewholeplaceburstoutwithclappingandcheering.
Itwasreallyfun!
海淀一模
假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华。
上周你接待了加拿大交换生Jack。
请按照以下四幅图的先后顺序,以“ATasteofBeijingRoastDuck”为题,给校刊“英语园地”写一篇稿件,介绍你和家人陪Jack去了解、品尝北京烤鸭的过程。
注意:
词数不少于60。
1.到达全聚德;2.介绍品牌历史;3.观看烤鸭制作;4.品尝烤鸭。
Lastweek,myfamilyhostedanexchangestudentJackfromCanadaandtogetherweexploredmanyplacesinBeijing,amongwhichtheexperienceoftastingBeijingRoastDuckinQuanjudestoodout.
WhenwearrivedatthegateofQuanjude,JackwasimmediatelyattractedbyitsChinese-stylearchitecturedesign.Andaswewalkedin,hewasevenmoresurprisedtofindaphotowall.Seeinghisconfusionaswellasinterest,IintroducedtohimthelonghistoryofBeijingRoastDuckandhowthistime-honoredbrandpursuedperfectionincooking,whichmadeJackmoreeagertohaveatry.
Afterenteringthedininghall,weimmediatelyorderedanall-duckbanquetandbeforeitwasserved,theducksbeingprocesseddrewourattention.Theshiningcoloroftheducksinthehungovenwassomouth-wateringandthechef’sskillofslicingtheduckwasjustlikeanartperformance.Seeingallthese,Jackcouldn’thelpexpressinghisamazementfromtimetotime.
Themomentfinallycameforustoreallyhaveatry!
ConsideringJack’sinexperience,pancakeinhand,Iledhimtotakeapieceofmeat,dippingitinthesweetbeansauce,andthenputitinwithsomespringonionandcucumber.Withjustonebite,hefellinloveandsharedwithusthetasteofitscrispyskinandtendermeatmeltinginhismouth.Weweresogladthatheloveditandtalkedmerrilyoverthewholedinner.
ThismealleftJackadeepimpressionandinspiredhisloveforChinesefoodaswellasrespectforChinesepeople’spursingperfection,whichIcan’thelpfeelingproudofandwilltrymybesttoinheritandpromote.
西城二模
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。
请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,以“GoBeyondYourself”为题,给校刊“英语角”写一篇英文稿件,记述你刻苦训练,成功通过体育测试长跑项目的过程。
注意:
词数不少于60。
提示词:
体育测试PhysicalFitnessTest
1.得知测试2.刻苦训练3.参加测试4.庆祝成功
Lastweek,IsuccessfullypassedthePhysicalFitnessTest.
DuringaPEclassonemonthago,ourteacherinformedusthatwewouldtakethetestonApril12th.Uponhearingthenews,Ifeltmyheartsink,wonderinghowroughthewayaheadwouldbe.However,Ihadtofaceit.Everydayafterschool,Iwenttotheplaygroundandpracticedthe1000-meterrun,whichwasalwaysanightmareforme.Eachtimewhenmylegsalmostgaveoutandaninnervoiceluredmetogiveup,myteachersandclassmateswerealwaysaroundme,comfortingmeandencouragingme.Theirpositivewordsandrunningfigurespushedmeforward.
Thenfinallycamethetestday.Asthestartinggunsoundedfortheracetobegin,Icalleduponallmybody’sstrengthandspeed.Iranwithpurpose.Afterenduringthelongrun,Iapproachedthefinishline.Quickeningmysteps,Iwasconfidentandhopeful.ThemomentIroundedthelastturn,IknewIhadmadeit.Aftercrossingthefinishline,Iwassooverjoyedtoseemycheeringclassmates.Ireceivedtheircelebratoryhigh-fivesproudlyandtearsofhappinessstreameddownmycheeks,asmyteachershookmyhand.
Fromthisexperience,IhavelearnedthatIshouldfacemyfearsbravelyandappreciatethosewhoarealwa