大学英语四六级作文写作指导答辩.docx

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大学英语四六级作文写作指导答辩

大学英语四六级作文写作指导

一、现象解释型

①Nowadays/Inrecentyears/Inmodernsociety,总述现象（,whichhasbeenbroughtfocus/hasarousedgreatconcern.②现象表现.Moreover/Inaddition,进一步描述表现.

③Thereasonsforthisphenomenonarevaried.④Therearemanydifferentfactorsdeciding/influencing该现象或相关情况.⑤Amongallthesereasons/factors,原因一playsacriticalrole.⑥进一步说明原因⑦Furthermore/What’smore,原因二.⑧Besides,原因三.

⑨Inmyopinion/Asforme,我的态度.⑩Foronething理由一.⑾Foranother⑿Toconclude/Therefore,总结或建议。

或者是:

⑨Nodoubt/Frommypointofview,对该现象做出总体评价.⑩However,可能存在的问题.进一步描述问题.⑾Allinall/Therefore,总结全文。

TheImportanceofReadingClassics

Classicsplayasignificantroleinourlife.Famousnovels,speechesorpoemstendtobringpeoplecourage,confidenceandwisdom.Sotogetaccesstothosegreatmindsisnodoubtawisedecision.

However,nowadays,fewpeoplefeellikereadingclassics.Alotofreasonsareresponsibleforthisphenomenon.Tobeginwith,mostofthemareintheshadowofpracticalminds.Theseclassicsarelesslikelytomeettheseneedssuchaspossesingaprofessionalskillorfindingagoodjob.What'smore,onlinereadinghelpspeoplegetinformationmoreeasilyandefficiently.Incomparison,readingclassicsismuch

time-consuming.Thelastbutnottheleast,peoplenowadaysaretoobusytoreadortothink.

Ascollegestudents,weshouldfullyrealizetheimportanceofreadingclassics.Inthefuture,wearefacingmanypressureandchallenges,andprofessionalskillisobviousnotasolutiontoalltheseproblems.Thehabitofreadingenlighteningbooksenablesustodealwithcomplexsituationsefficientlybyenlargingourvisionsanddeepeningourthoughts.

二、问题解决型

题目是社会问题,指坏的方面

第一段1引出话题2我的观点

第二段1承上启下2原因+举例

3趋势句

第三段解决段

二、问题解决型

①Nowadays/Inrecentyears,问题is/arebecoming/have/hasbecomeaseriousproblem/问题is/aregettingmoreandmoreconcern/drawingwideattention.②问题表现一.③Evenworse/Besides,问题表现二.

④Therearemanyfactorsresultingin/influencing该问题./Manyreasonscontributeto该问题./该问题isduetothefollowingreasons/factors.⑤Amongthese,原因一playsavitalrole.进一步阐释原因一.⑥What’smore/Inaddition,原因二.

⑦Consideringtheseriousnessof该问题.Ithinkitishightime采取措施/wepaidmoreattentionto该问题.⑧Firstly,/Aboveall,方法一.⑨Secondly/Moreover,方法二.⑩Thirdly/Besides/Inaddition,方法三.⑾Toconclude/Inaword,itiseveryone’responsibilityto解决该问题./Itdependsoncommoneffortsfrom…….Onlyinthisway/throughtheseways该问题才能解决.

TheDamageofPublicFacilities

Withtheimprovementoflivingstandard,moreandmorepublicfacilities,suchaspublictelephoneboothsandATMshavebeeninstalledinthestreets.Itisnecessarythatwehavetopayattentiontothedamageofthesepublicfacilities.Ononething,somepeopleusethemwithoutcare,whichleadstoinconveniencetoothers.Onanother,thedamagedpublicfacilitiesstainthebeautyofthecity.

Therefore,howtopreventpublicfacilitiesfrombeingdamagedisworthpayingattention.Firstly,publicfacilitiesshouldbemadeofhardmaterialssoastobemoredurable.Secondly,somedevicesshouldbeadoptedtoprotectthemfrombeingdamaged.Forexample,likecars,wecaninstallalarmdevicesinpublicfacilities.Thirdly,frommypointofview,itisessentialthatwecivilizeourcitizenstobehavemorally.Inotherwords,weshouldtellthecitizensthatitisshamefultodestroypublicfacilities.

Infact,thewaystoreducethedamageofpublicfacilitiesarecountless.It’stimethatwetookmosteffectiveonestoprotectthem.

三、对比选择型

①Whenitcomesto谈论主题,differentpeoplewillgivedifferentanswers/views/（havedifferentchoices/preferences.②Somepeopletakeitfor

granted/believe/like/choose一种观点或倾向.③However,others

maintain/argue/prefer/wouldrather另一种观点或倾向

④Thosepeoplewhoholdthefirstopinion/maketheformerchoice/havethefirstpreferencebelieve观点一的理由一.⑤Intheireyes/theyinsist/theymaintain/theypointout观点一的理由二.⑥However,stillothersthinksdifferently/havedifferentchoices/preferences.⑦Intheiropinions,观点二的理由一.⑧Besides,theyargue观点二的理由二.

⑨Weighingupthesetwoarguments/choices/preferences,Ipreferto/Iaminclinedto/wouldratherchoosetheformer/thelatterone./Astome,Itendto/preferto/aminclinedto我的观点.⑩Foronething,理由一.⑾Foranother/Furthermore/Moreover/What’smore,理由二或进一步说明理由一.⑿Takingabove-mentionedfactorsintoconsideration,we/Imayreasonablyconclude/Isuggest/Ithink重申观点./Inaword,提出建议.

三.对比选择型

StudyAbroadorinChina?

Thereisnoconsensusofopinionsamongpeopleastowhetherstudentsshouldstudyabroadornot.Somepeopleareoftheviewthattheyouthsshouldgooverseasforfurtherstudyifpossible,whileotherstakeanoppositestand,firmlybelievingthatitisofnonecessityforstudentstostudyinaforeigncountry.

Thosepeoplewhomaintainthatitisgoodforstudentstogoabroadforfurtherstudybelievethatdiverseculturebackgroundcanbroadenstudents’horizon.They

alsoclaimthatoverseasstudycanshapestudents’personalitybecausetheyareforcedtodealwithallkindsofdifficultiesbythemselves.

Nevertheless,theotherpeoplewhocontendthatdomesticeducationisgoodenoughforstudentsarguethatoureducationalqualityhasbeengreatlyimprovedduringthepastdecade.Theyalsopointoutthatdomesticeducationisconvenientandeconomical

AsfarasIamconcerned,theformeropinionholdsmoreweight.Foronething,itcanstrengthenthelearners’abilitiestounderstandandcommunicatewithpeoplefromothercultures.Foranother,thedevelopedcountriesstillhavealotadvancedknowledgewhichisworthourstudy.Whenallthefactorsareexamined,wemayreasonablycometotheconclusionthatstudyingabroadifpossibleisadvisable.

图表作文常用句型

1.Aswecanseefromthechart/graph/table/diagram,…从图表中可以看

…

2.Thechart/graph/table/diagramshows/displaysthat…如图所示…

3.As（canbeshownin/Accordingtothechart/graph/table/diagram,…如图所示......

句型

1thenumberof____hasincreased/decreasedby___from__to__,

asisreflectedinthetable.

2Thepast___yearsfrom____to____haswitnessedanincrease/adeclineof____inthenumberof____.

Thenumberof（privatecarsincreased/rosesuddenly/rapidly/dramatically/substantially/considerably/sharply/steeplyfrom…to…从......到......期间,（私家车的数量有了急剧的增长。

Therewasasudden/rapid/dramatic/substantial/sharp/steepdecrease/drop/reduction/declineinthenumberof（privatecarsfrom…to…从......到......期间,（私家车的数量有了急剧的下降。

原因表达

1,Anumberoffactorsmightcontributeto（leadto（accountforthephenomenon（problem.

2,Therearethreereasonsforthis.

3,Thereasonsforthisareasfollows.

4,Thereasonforthisisobvious.

5,Thereasonforthisisnotfartoseek.

First----Initially,…

Tostartwith,…

Tobeginwith,…

Firstandforemost,…

Second-Third---

Furthermore,…Moreover,..

Inaddition,…Besides,…Whatismore,…

最后一点Finally….

Eventually…

举例部分

Forinstance,——

Onecaseinpointis___

Anothercaseinpointis___

承上启下

1、Severalfactorscanaccountforthisidea/phenomenon.

2、Whydoesittakeplace?

3、Themainreasonswhysuchaphenomenontakesplaceareasfollows.

观点表达

一种观点:

1Somepeoplefrownattheideathat---

2Hearingoftheidea/phenomenonthat----,somepeoplebecomefurious.

3Somepeopletakethenegative/oppositeviewtowardstheidea/phenomenonthat…..

4Somepeopleobject/opposetotheidea/phenomenonthat…..

另一种观点:

1However,otherstaketheoppositestandthat……

2However,otheropinionscanalsobeheardfromallwalksoflife.Theyinsistthat….

3Tastesdiffer.Othersassumethat….

我的观点

观点对比类

1Weighingtheprosandcons,Iaminclinedtoagreethat…

2Frommypointofview,…

3AsfarasIamconcerned,…

4Formyownpart,…

5Inmyopinion,…

总结部分

1、Afteranalyzingallthefactors,Irealizethat__

2、Allthefactorsstatedaboveleadustotheconclusionthat__

3、Aftermeditatingonallthefactors,Irealizethat__.

4、Inconclusion,__.

决心部分

Trytheutmosttodo/Sparenoefforttodo/Tryone’sbesttodo,

Idetermineto/Idecideto/Imakeupmymindto_____.

作文取巧方法

一、主题句原则。

一定要写一个主题句,放在文章的开头或者结尾,让读者一目了然!

Tobeginwith,youmustworkhardatyourlessonsandbefullypreparedbeforetheexam（主题句.Withoutsufficientpreparation,youcanhardlyexpecttoanswerallthequestionscorrectly

二、一二三原则。

1first,second,third,last（不推荐,原因:

俗

2firstly,secondly,thirdly,finally（不推荐,原因:

俗

3thefirst,thesecond,thethird,thelast（不推荐,原因:

俗

4inthefirstplace,inthesecondplace,inthethirdplace,lastly（不推荐,原因:

俗

5tobeginwith,then,furthermore,finally（强烈推荐

6tostartwith,next,inaddition,finally（强烈推荐

7firstandforemost,besides,lastbutnotleast（强烈推荐

8mostimportantofall,moreover,finally

9ontheonehand,ontheotherhand（适用于两点的情况,多有转折之意

10foronething,foranotherthing（适用于两点的情况建议:

不仅仅在写作中注意,平时说话的时候也应该条理清楚!

一、多变句式原则。

1加法（串联都希望写下很长的句子,像个老外似的,可就是怕写错,怎么办,最保险的写长句的方法就是这些,可以在任何句子之间加and,但最好是前后的句子又先后关系或者并列关系。

比如说:

Ienjoymusicandheisfondofplayingguitar.如果是二者并列的,我们可以用一个超级句式:

Notonlythefurcoatissoft,butitisalsowarm.其它的短语可以用:

besides,furthermore,likewise,moreover

（1Thegoatsgrazedpeacefullyinthefarmandwereunawareoftheapproachinghunter.（并列分句（1+2

（2Grazingpeacefully,thegoatsinthefarmwereunawareoftheapproachinghunter.（现在分语短语+简单句

（3Inthefarm,thegoatsgrazedpeacefullyandwereunawareoftheapproachinghunter.（副词短语+并列分句（1+2

（4Thereweregoatsgrazingpeacefullyinthefarm,unawareoftheapproachinghunter.（简单句+形容语短语

（5Asthegoatsgrazedpeacefullyinthefarm,theywereunawareoftheapproachinghunter.（原因副词从句+主句

（1和（5的句式最常见;如果加上其他三种互相交替,句子不是更多样化吗?

2失衡句（头重脚轻,或者头轻脚重

其实就是主语从句,表语从句,宾语从句的变形。

举例:

ThisiswhatIcando.

Whetherhec