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改错英语全国卷
2001—2015年全国卷英语短文改错
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2001年(全国卷II)
Likemostofmyschoolmates,Ihaveeitherbrothersnorsisters.Inanyotherwords,Iamanonlychild.
MyparentslovemedearlyofcourseandwilldoalltheycanmakesurethatIgetagoodeducation.
Theydidnotwantmetodoanyworkatfamily;theywantmetodevoteallmytimetomystudiesso
thatI’llgetgoodmarksinallmysubject.Wemaybeonefamilyandliveunderasameroof,butwedo
notseemtogetmuchtimetotalkabouttogether.Itlooksasifmyparentstreatmeasavisitoranda
guest.Dotheyreallyunderstandtheirowndaughter?
Whatthingsareinotherhomes,Iwonder.
2002年(全国卷II)
LastweekmyparentsandItookatwo-daytriptoEmeiMountaininSichuan.Aseveryoneknows,
it’sfamousmountainwithallkindsofplantsandanimal.Theweatherwasfine.Itwasabout
noonwearrivedatthefootofthemountain.Thethreeofthemwereveryexcited.Asweclimbedthe
mountain,wefedmonkeys,visitingtemplesandtoldstories.OnthewayIwasbusytakingpicturesince
thescenerywassobeautiful.Thetimepassesquickly.Eveningcamedown.Wespentthenightina
hotelatthetopofthemountain.Thefoodwasexpensiveandtheservicewasgood.IwassotiredthatI
fellasleepatthemomentmyheadtouchedthepillow.
2003年(全国卷II)
WhenIfirstlearnedwriteinEnglish,Iranintomanydifficulties.ThemainproblemwasinthatI
alwaysthoughtinChineseandtriedtotranslateanythingintoEnglish.Myteacheradvisedmetokeep
mydiary.Ifollowedherandshouldputdown100wordsorsoeachday.SoonIbegantoenjoy
talktomyselfonpaperasIwaslearningtoexpressmeinsimpleEnglish.OnedayIwrotealittle
storyandshowedtomyteacher.Shelikeditverymuchandreadsittotheclass.Allsaidthestorywasa
goodone.Theirwordwereagreatencouragementtome.
2004年(全国卷II)
DearRalph,
I’manewcomerhereofasmalltown.Iwoulddescribemyselfasshyandquietly.Beforemy
classmates,itseemsalwaysdifficultformetodothingswellasthem.I’msuretheywilllaughtome
andseemeasfool.SoIfeelunhappyeveryday.Besides,Ihavefewfriends.Idon’tknowthatthey
don’tliketotalkwithme.Sometimes,wetalkedtoeachotherverywellinclass,butafterclasswe
becomestrangeratonce.Iamtryingtoimprovethesituationsinceitdoesn’tseemtowork.Canyoutell
meaboutwhatIshoulddo?
2005年(全国卷III)
DearMr.Brown,
Iamwritingtothankyouwithyourkindhelp. Beforeyoucametoteachus,Ihadnotinterest
in English.Mypronunciationwasterribly.Icould onlyspeakafewwords.Butoneandahalfyear
later,InowthinkEnglishfuntolearn.Igotalotoffromyour encouragingwords.Iwillalways
rememberwhatyou said,“Ifyoutryto,youcanbeNo.1!
”Ihopeyou’ve hadpleasantjourneyhome
andwillcometoChina againsometimesinthefuture.Iwillwriteagain andsendyouthephotoswe
taketogether.
2006年(全国卷II)
WehadguestslastnightwhohavenotstayedinaB&Bhotelago.Theydidnotwant
breakfastbecausethattheyweregoingoutearlyinthemorning.Theycamebacklatelyandhadsome
tea.Icameinthelivingroomandsawoneofthemjustgothroughthekitchendoorbutturnonthe
light.Hewaslookingforaglassthecupboard.Hehadnoideasthatthekitchenwasnotforguests.Ijust
smiledtomeandthought,“WhatcanIdo?
Weareguestsafterall.”
2006年(全国卷III)
AnAmericanandaFrenchmandecidedtocrosstheseabetweenFranceandEngland
intheballoonin1784.Highoverthewater,theydiscoveraholeintheballoon.Theholebecamebigger
andbigger.Theairkeepstheballoonupwasescapingquickandtheballoon
wascomingup.Thetwomenthrewalltheirequipmentintothewatertomaketheballoonlight.
Itstartedtorisehigheragain.Soitwasstilltooclosetothewater.Finally,themen
threwawaymostofhisclothestosavethemselves.Thecrowdwaitingfortogreetthem
inEnglandwasverysurprisedseethiswhentheballoonlandedinfrontofthem.
2007年(全国卷II)
DearGrandpa,
Thankyouforyourletter.Myschoolisorganizingabasketballteamandthere’sjustachancewhichI
canjoinit.I’mlittleofcourse,butterriblyquickandbravely.Whiletheothersarejumpingaboutinthe
air,Icanrunundermylegsandgettheball.Itwillbelotsoffunforpracticingoutintheplayground
intheafternoonwiththetreearoundusallredandyellowandeverybodylaughingandshout.
ThesearethehappiergirlsI’veeverseenandI’mthehappiestinall!
Imeantto
writelongletterandtellyouallthethingsI’mdoingatschool,butthebellwasringing,
soIjusthavetostophere.
2008年(全国卷I)
DearAlice,
Ihavejustgotsomegoodmewstotelltoyou.Iwinanationalprizeforpaintinglastweek.My
fatherwassopleasingthathesuggestedIgotoEnglandforaholiday.I’dliketostayingthere
forhalfamonth,visitingplaceofinterestorpracticingmyEnglishaswell.We’vebeen
writingtoeachfornearlyayearnow.Ihaveoftendreamedoftalkfacetofacewithyou.Iimagine
you’llbeatvacationyourselfbythattime.Perhapswecouldgooutdosomesightseeingtogether.
2008年(全国卷II)
IfIhavethehonortobechosetoworkforthe29thOlympicGames,IwillatfirstimprovemyEnglish
sothatIcantalkeasilyaboutforeignvisitors.Second,IwilllearnmoreabouthistoryoftheOlympics
asgoodasthe2008OlympicGames.Third,sinceIwasfamiliarwithBeijing,Icanhelpvisitorsfind
theirwaysinthecity.Finally,Ishouldbeabletotellvisitorsaboutourhistoryandcultureorshow
themtheirgreatachievements.Inshort,IwilldomybesttohelpmakingtheGamesasuccess.
2009年(全国卷II)
HiSusan,
I’msorrythatIwasn’tabletoreturntoyourbikeontimeyesterday.Imeantogiveitback
toyoubeforefourintheafternoon,andIwasholduponmywayback.JustbeforeI
turnedcornerofParkStreet,Ihappenedtoseeaaccident.Thelittlegirlwashurtandhermother
neededhelp.SoIhelpedthemgoingtothenearesthospital.Istayedhereforoneanda
halfhourandmadesurethatthegirlwasallright.WhenIgotback,itwerealready6pm.
Ihopeyouunderstand.
2010年(全国卷I)
Itwasachanceofalifetimetowinthefirst prizeontheStoryWritingShow.AllIhadtodo wasto
writeastoryorpresentit.Myteachers havebeentellingmehowgreatmywritingwas.
Soiftheyhadsaidwastrue,Iwouldhaveachance ofwinningtheprize.Whatwerebetter,Ihad
useful help.TherewasUncleChen,gentlemanliving nearmyhouse,whowasaverymuchfamous
writer. Heagreedtoreadingmystoryandgivemesome advicesonhowtowritelikearealwriter.
2010年(全国卷II)
Christiewasoneofmybestfriendathighschool.Atthattime,weoftenspendtimetogether.
Thanktoherhelp,Imadegreatprogressinmystudy.Lastyear,shedecidedtostudytoabroad.Inother
words,wewouldbeseparatedlongtime.Beforeherleavingoff,Ipreparedagifttoshowmybest
wishestohim.Shesaiditwasthebestgiftshehaseverhad.Fromthenon,we’ve
kepttouchwitheachotherthroughe-mails.Ilookforwardtoseeheragaininthenearfuture.
2011年(全国卷I)
Oneofmyunforgettablememoryofmyschoolin Xinjiangisthatofluncheswebroughtfromour
homes. Iholdmylunch-boxinmyhandwhenIwasgoingto school.Thesmellfromitwasverygood.
Sincethelunch bellfinallyrang,myfriendsandmemetunderatalltree andhadourlunches.Mybest
friendAiguliewasused toshareherNangwithme.Nangisaspeciallykindof cakeinXinjiang.Ilike
themverymuch.Now Aigulieand Istudyatdifferentcollegesorwecanonlyseeeachother duringthe
summervacation.IthinkoverheralotandImiss thefoodandthegoodtimewehadtogether.
2011年(全国卷II)
DearGeorge,
It’sbeenaweekafterweleftyourfamilyandwearenowbackhome.Thankyouverymuchfor
showingthemaroundyourcityandprovidingusforthewonderfulmeals.Afterwesaidgoodbyeto
you,wewenttoWashingtonD.C.,thatwestayedforthreedays.Mybrotherwassomuchfondofthe
museumstherethathebeggedmyparentstostayinganothercoupleofday.However,myfatherhadto
returntoworkonMondaysoweflybacklastSaturdayafternoon.Itwasreallyaniceexperience.If
you’dliketomaketriptoourcitysomeday,Iwillbebetterthanhappytobeyourguide.
2012年(全国卷I)
Everyoneofuscanmakeagreateffortstocutofftheuseofenergyinourcountry.Tobeginwith,allof
uscanstartreducingtotheuseofoilbydrivingonlywhenwehavearealneed.Thatwon’teasy,I
know,butwehavetostartanywhere.What’smore,wecangotoworkbybikeonceandtwiceaweek,
andwecanalsobuysmallercarsthatburnlessoil.Otherwayistowatchoureverydayuseofwaterand
electricathome.Forexample,howmanytimeshaveyouwalkedoutofaroomandleavethelightsor
televisionwhennooneelsewasthere?
2012年(全国卷II)
DearEditor,
I’mwritingtotellyouopinionaboutwatersaving.Waterisimportant.We,aswellasanimal,cannot
livewithoutwaterandneitheragricultureorindustrycangowithoutit.Yetitseemedwateris
becominglessandless.Manycountriesintheworldfindwedon’thaveenoughwater.Todealwitha
problem,Ithink,weshouldfirstgoallouttoplanttreesthoughtreeswillhelpsavewater.Next,no
drinkingwatershouldleftrunning.Third,weshouldfindwaystoreusethewater