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MyFriendFalls，ILaugh；MyPhoneFalls，ICry.

Nowadays，everyonehaveaphone.Wecan’timaginewhatlifewouldlikewithoutphones.But，Ithinksometimesweattachtoomuchimportanttoourphonessothatweignoreourfriends.Ifafriendisinneed，wewon’treachoutourhandsontime.Bycontrast，ifourphonesarelosing，wewillbeverysad.

Withthistechnology，manypeoplearelosingtheopportunitytotalktofriendsbyfacetoface.It’shightimethatweworktogethertochangethesituation.Asthesayinggoes，“Alifewithafriendisalifewithoutthesun.”Friendsarelessimportantthanphones.

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Hi，Sharon，

ThisisLiXia.IlearnedfromyourpostthatyouwantimproveyourMandarin.Iamquiteinterestinginit.IthinkI’mfitforit.Asastudent，IhavebeenlearningMandarinformanyyears.Inaddition，IamChinese，thatmeansMandarinisamustformetocommunicatewithothersinmydailylife.SoI’mquiteconfidentthatIcanhelpyoulearnMandarin.

LearnMandarintakestime,soifyouwanttolearnitwell，youshouldspendmanytimepracticingMandarineveryday.Asthesayinggoes，practicemakesperfect.Beside，youcanalsoreadsomebooksinChinese，seesomeChinesefilmsandlistentosomeChineseradioprogrammes.Speakingandlisteningwereveryimportantforlanguagelearning,whichyouaresuretomakegreatprogress.

Inyourpost，yousayyoucanteachEnglishasareward.ItisjustwhatIwantit.I’meagertoimprovemyEnglish.So,ifyouallowmetohelpyoulearnMandarin，youcanalsohelpmeimprovemyEnglish.WecancontacteachotherbyvideochateverynightforhalfanhourinEnglishandhalfanhourinChinese，sothatwecanimproveyouroralspeaking.

Hopeforyourearlyreply!

LiXia

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Oct.4thFridayFine

HereIaminFlorence，aworld-famoustouristcityinthemiddleofItaly.ItisnotonlyamostfamousculturalartcenterinEurope，butalsothehomeoftheRenaissance.Firstly，IcametothePiazzaleMichelangelo,whereIlookedoverthebeautifulsightofthewholecity.Then，standinthemiddleofthesquareisthesculptureofDavid,whatisthesymbolofthecity.Icouldn’thelpshowmyrespecttotheancientartists.Atthelast，IcametotheUffiziGallery，wherealotofartworksaredisplayedbygreatartists.

IamsuchattractedbythemthatIreallywanttostaythereforafewmoredays.Therefore，ImustleaveforVenice，anotherfamouscityinItalytomorrowmorning.

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GreatChanges

Iamdeeplyimpressedbythegreatchangesthathavetakentheplaceintheschooloverthepastthreeyears.

OnMay12,2008，asevereearthquakedestroyalmosteverythingintheschool，leavingbadlydamagedbuildings.Itisnow，therefore，takingonanewlook.Tallbuildingshaveputup，includingclassroomsandlaboratorybuildings，andalibrary.Thereisalsoanewlybuiltstandardplayground.Inthenewenvironment，teachersandstudentsarelivinghappyandworkinghard.Itisreallyamazingwhentheonceruinedplacehasnowbeenturnedintoabeautifulschool，fulloflife.

Obviously，withthehelpofthewholesociety，therewouldbenonewschooltoday.Itisloveandconcernthathavebroughtaboutthegreatchanges.Muchhandsmakelightwork.Wecanworkwonderifweuniteasafamily,caringforeachotherandhelpingthoseinneed.Unionisstrong.

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LifeofMotherTeresa

MotherTeresaisoneofgreatestwomenintheworld.

ShewasborninYugoslaviain1910.Intheageof20，shewenttoIndia.Thereshefirstworkedforateacher.However，in1946MotherTeresalefttheschoolandafterthat，shewastrainingtobecomeanurse.Shewassuchkindthatshebeganhelpedthepoor，thesickandthehomelessinIndia.Besidesit，MotherTeresaopenedmanyschoolsandhospitalsinpoorcountry.Whileshewastraveling，shecalledonpeopletohelptheseintrouble.In1979，shewasawardedtheNobelPeacePrizefortheloveandtheserviceshehadgiventofortunatepeople.

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TheGreatWall，thatismorethan6,000kilometerslong，isthelongestwallintheworld.Ithashistoryofmorethan2,000years.Itismadefromstoneandbricksandalmostalltheconstructionwasdonebyhandwithoutsomemachine.Forthewallwasbuilttodefendthecountryagainstforeigninvaders，therewaswatchtowerseveryfewhundredmeteralongthewall.Now，theGreatWallistheoneofthemostfamousplacesofinterestinChinaanditattractsmanyvisitorseveryyear.

Ifyouhadachancetovisitit，youwillbedelightwiththegreattouristattraction.

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Lastterm，Itookpartamarathonwhichwashostedbytheschool.SogoodamIatrunningthatIhadconfidencetowinthematch.Whenapproachthefinishline，Ifoundthatoneofmycompetitorfelldownandgotinjured.Icouldhavechosetoleavehimaloneanddashedtotheend，andIstoppedtohelphim.Therewasnodoubtthattheresultwasnotsogoodandpeoplecalledmealoser.

Therefore，IfoundthatIwasalsoverydelightedandsatisfyingthoughIwasnotawinner.Sometimesitiskindnessratherthangradeswhichplaysamoresignificantroleinourlife.ThoughIwasaloserinthematch，butIwasawinnerinmylife.

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DearJim，

Ireallyfeelworryingaboutyou.Youusedtodowellinyourlessonsandtookactivepartintheactivitiesatschool，butnowyoutakenointerestinyourschoolworkanddon’tlistentoteachersascarefulasbeforeinclass.Also，youaresocrazyaboutthecomputergamesthatyoucan’thandinyourhomeworkontime.Perhapsplaycomputergamescanmakeyoufeelrelaxed，butifyouspendtoomanytimeonit，youwillhavelesstimetostudy.Anditmaydoharmtoyourhealth.Forexample，itcanhurtyoureyeandneck.

Ihopeyoushouldachieveabalancebetweenyourschoolworkandyourhobbies.Whynotjoininginsomeoutdooractivitieswhenyoufeelbored?

Withyourfriend，I’llbegladtoshareyourhappinessandsad.

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DearSirorMadam，

I’mastudentfromChongqing，China.TodayIamwritingtoyoutoaskforyouhelptoimprovethesituationthefinlessporpoise（长江江豚）isfacingwithintheYangtzeRiver.

Becausethebehaviorofourhumanbeings，thefinlessporpoiseintheYangtzeRiverhasbeengreatinfluencedandwillbeendangered.Accordingtothereport，itstotalnumberismorethan1,000now.Inordertopreventthemfromdyingout，wehavefoundaproject，butwehavedifficultyinrunningitforalackoffund.

Ifyouwouldliketohelp，youcanprovideitfornecessarymoney.Besides，youcangiveusrelevanttraininginprotectingthem.Withyourhelp，webelievewecanimprovethelivingenvironmentofthefinlessporpoisesoon，thusincreaseditsnumber.

Ifwecangetyourhelp，wewillbeverythank.We’relookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.

Yourssincerely，

LiHua

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DearFreddy，

I’mgladtotellyouthatJustinBieber，myfavoritesinger,cometoourcitytoperformnextmonth.

I’msuchpleasedatthenewsthatIdecidetoformaJustinBieberfanclubwithsomeofmyfriendsrecent.Allofuslikeheandenjoyhissongsverymuch.Heisverycharmandfantastic!

Hissongsmakeustofeelthetruelove.Wecansingmostofhissongsandwouldliketoknowlessabouthim.Andwedon’tknowwhatweshoulddo，andwhenwecanpickupsomeusefulinformationabouthimandhisperformingplans.Couldyougiveussomeadvices?

Lookforwardtoyourreply.

Bestwishes，

LiHua

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TheMidAutumnFestivalisatraditionfestivalofChina，whichisfullofusculturalfeatures.

Thefestivaliscelebratingonthe15thofthe8thlunarmonthinChinaandtheotherAsiancountries.Inthatday，peoplewhoareawayfromhomecomebacktogettogetherwiththeirrelatives.Inaddition，weareaccustomedtoeatmooncakeswhatstandforthereunionofthefamily.However，themostimportantactivityisthewholefamilygettogethertohaveabigmealandenjoythebeautyofthemoon，inaatmosphereoflove，harmonyandpeace.

Allinall，theMidAutumnFestivalisoneofthemostimportanttraditionalfestivalinChina.

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DearSir，

I’mwritingtotalkabouttheproblemsoffoodsafetynowadays.Inordertoreducethecostandmakingmoreprofits，somefoodcompanydon’ttakenecessarysafetymeasurestoguaranteethefoodquality.Foraresult，moreandmorelowqualityfoodflowintothemarket，doingalotofharmtoconsumers’health.

Inmyopinion，foodisessentialtohumanbeing.Wecanlivewithoutproperfood.Ifnonoticeweretakenoffoodsafety，thehealthyofthewholenationwillsuffer.SoIcallonthewholesocietytotakeanactionandputanendtothelowqualityfood.Onlybythiswaycanweliveahealthierlife.

Yourstruly，

LiHua

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MarkTwain（1835～1910），oneofthebestknownAmericanwriterinthe19thcentury，wasborninMissouriintheMidwestoftheUS.

MarkTwain’shometownlieonthebanksoftheMississippiRiver.Whenhegrewup，heonceworkedforasailoronariverboat.MarkTwainishispenname，butitwastakenfrom“twomark”．Hewasnotwealth.Itdidn’tspoilhimsuperbsenseofhumor，witandreputation.

MarkTwainwrotemanywellknownnovels，oneofthemisTheMillionPoundBankNote.Someofhisworkshavetranslatedintomanylanguages.Hiswritingsaredeeplylovedbythereadersthroughouttheworld.

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Thisreporttellusthatmorethan60millionstudentsandteacherswillattendaspeciallivelectureaboutphysics，thatwillbegivenbyWangYaping，thefemaleastronautinTiangong1，outofthespace.

Asweallknow，sincethefirstlandingonthemoon，menhaveneverlosttheirenthusiasmfortheouterspaceexploration.Billionsfundshavebeenspent，quitesomelifehavebeensacrificed，andmeanwhilesecretsoftheuniversehavebeengraduallydiscovered.

However，people’sviewsonouterspaceexplorationaregreatlydifference.Ontheonehand，somepeoplethinkitismeaninglesstoallocatelargebudgettostudysuchissu