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,书面表达写作技巧,词汇,句型(高级)和语法多样化(较复杂),1.覆盖了所有的要点2.应用了较多的语法结构和词汇3.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑4.语言得体,要点全,连接词,如何算是一篇好文章?
语言地道,规范,acomposition,topicsentence(主题句),supportingsentences(扩展句),ending(结尾句),过渡词:
first,second,finally,and,besides,also,but,however,whatsmore,Writingacompositionisjustlikemakingasandwich.,一改变句子的开头方式,不要一味地都是主语开头,接着是谓语、宾语,最后再加一个状语。
可以把状语置于句首.,Theboyisveryhungryandhehurriedhome.,Hungry,theboyhurriedhome.,Theboy,hungry,hurriedhome.,二.Transformationofsentencesinwriting(写作中的句型转换),A.合并为简单句,把其中一句改为分词短语Hehadfinishedsupper.Hewentouttohaveawalkthen.,Havingfinishedsupper,hewentouttohaveawalk.,二.Transformationofsentencesinwriting(写作中的句型转换),2.把其中一句改为介词短语Hewasbroughtin.Hishandsweretiedbehindhisback.,Hewasbroughtinwithhishandstiedbehindhisback.,B.合并为复合句TheChineseartistsweretoperformherethatnight.Thenewscheeredeveryoneofus.,ThenewsthattheChineseartistsweretoperformherethatnightcheeredeveryoneofus.,2Inrecentyears,Beijinghasbeenadvancingveryfast.Allthesemakepeopleslivesconvenient,pleasantandcolorful.which,Inrecentyears,Beijinghasbeenadvancingveryfast,makespeopleslivesconvenient,pleasant,C.把复合句改为简单句,1.把从句改为分词短语,Shewasanxioustofindajobaftershefinishedherstudies.,Havingfinishedherstudies,shewasanxioustofindajob.,2.把从句改为介词短语,Iinsistedthatheshouldgo.,Iinsistedonhimgoing.,三.在整篇文章中,避免只使用一两个句式,要灵活运用以下结构:
倒装句,强调句,主从复合句,分词状语,With复合结构,Thoughheiswealthy,heworkshard.,Wealthyasheis,heworkshard.,Inspiteof/Despitehiswealth,heworkshard.,Hedidntgetupuntil7oclock.,Itwasnotuntil7oclockthathegotup.,Notuntil7oclockdidhegetup.,Ihadagoodidea.,Agoodideaoccurredto/struck/cametome.,Icameupwithagoodidea.,注意使用词组、习语谚语、表强调的词来代替一些单词,以增加文采。
四.use“complicated/advancedwords”,A.Second,twentyyearsago,teenagerslistenedtomusicwithtaperecorders.Differently,todayweusemp3,mp4andevenmp5whichareeasytotake.B.Anotherchangeisincommunication.Insteadofwritingletters,teenagersnowadayspreferwritinge-mailsorcallingtokeepintouchwithfriends.C.First,teenagersoftwentyyearsagolearnfromLeiFengandZhangHaidi,whilenowweconsiderBillGatesandasourrolemodels.D.Whatgreatchangestheyare!
E.Greatchangeshavetakenplaceinteenagerslifeduringthepasttwentyyears.CorrectOrder:
_,ECABD,一,改变句子的开头方式,二,句型转换,A.合并为简单句,把其中一句改为分词短语,把其中一句改为介词短语,B.合并为复合句,C.把复合句改为简单句,把从句改为分词短语,把从句改为介词短语,三,避免只使用一两个句式,要灵活运用诸如倒装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语、with复合结构等.,四,注意使用高级词汇代替一些单词,以增加文采。
五.有效使用连接词,过渡自然,连贯通顺,使文章结构紧凑。
1汉式英语2句式单一平铺直叙3基础词汇掌握不牢4书写不规范,Commonmistakes,9分,6分,24分,Writingsteps:
Attention,1.格式2.人称3.时态4.要点5.语法6.字数7.书写,书面表达(满分30分)你校学生会准备办一期英语墙报,主题为:
保护环境从我做起。
请你根据下图所示写一篇英语短文。
注意:
1.词数100左右,开头语已为你写好;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
WhatcanIdoforourenvironment?
Everyonecandosomethingforourenvironment.,saveelectricity,turnoffthelights,protectourforests,usepaperwisely,notusethingslikepapercupsordisposablechopsticks,usebothsidesofpaper,Doyou,includeenoughinformation?
useproperlinkingwords?
makeanyspellingorgrammarerrors?
Isyourhandwritingclearenoughtoread?
check,ourshowtime,WhatcanIdoforourenvironment?
Everyonecandosomethingforourenvironment.Tolovetheenvironmentistoloveourselves.Astome,IwilltrytosaveelectricityinmydailylifebyrememberingtoturnoffthelightswhenIamthelastpersontoleavetheclassroomintheevening.Inordertoprotectourforests,Iwillusepaperwisely.Itisbothsidesofpaperthatshouldbeusedwheneveritispossible.Whatsmore,neverwillIusethingslikepapercupsordisposablechopsticksbecausetheyaremadeofwood.,Inaword,withdoingallthesesmallthings,wewillnotonlyimproveourenvironmentbutalsohelpmakeourworldabetterplacetolivein.,Romeisnotbuiltinoneday.,Practicemakesperfect!
Mayyousucceed!