如何写好初一期末英语作文分析.docx

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如何写好初一期末英语作文分析

如何写好初一期末英语作文分析

一basicrules（写作规则）

1.信息提取—找全信息2.信息加工–-重组信息（适当的加入细节）

3.列提纲—确定句式，关联词，过渡词，较高级的句型和词汇

方法一:

善用词汇甚至善用高级词汇

A.Theylistenedtothemusiconthebeach.

B.Theyenjoyedthemusiconthebeach.

AIwishyoucanhelpme.

BI’mlookingforwardtoyourhelp.

ATheyarrivedearly.

BTheyarrivedasearlyastheycould.

AHisdogwassavedatlast.Hewasverysurprised.

BTohissurprise,hisdogwassavedatlast.

AIthinklearningEnglishisinteresting.

BIfinditreallyfuntolearnEnglish.

AWeshouldprotecttheenvironment.

BIt’sourdutytoprotecttheenvironment.

方法二:

活用多种句型

ASheisveryyoung.

Shecan’tcarrytheheavybox.

BSheistooyoungtocarrytheheavybox.

CSheissoyoungthatshecan’tcarrythe…

DSheisnotoldenoughtocarrythe…

表示并列或递进:

and,aswellas,both…and,what’smorenotonly…butalso,neither…nor

2.表示选择:

or,either…or

3.表示转折:

but,however,althoughhough,afterall,anyway

4.表示因果:

because,so,therefore,since,for,asaresult

5.表示条件:

if,unless

6.表示对比:

instead,not…but,while,inthesameway,ontheonehand…ontheotherhand

7.表示解释:

forexample,forinstance,suchas,thatistosay,inotherwords,to___thetruth

8.表示顺序:

tobeginwith,firstly,first（ofall）,second（ly）,next,later,sincethen,fromthenon,finally,intheend

9.表示强调:

also,besides,especially,actually,infact

10.表示结论:

allinall,altogether,inaword,generallyspeaking,inshort

用恰当的连词，连接下面各句。

HowdopeoplespendtheirvacationWemadeasurveyandhereisourreport.

Aordingtoit,alotofpeopletravel.Andsomepeoplestayathome.TheywatchTVorsurftheInter.Alsosomeotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.However,afewpeoplework.Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.

增加连接词：

HowdopeoplespendtheirvacationWemadeasurveyandhereisourreport.Aordingtoit,alotofpeopletravel.Andsomepeoplestayathome.TheywatchTVorsurftheInter.Alsosomeotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.However,afewpeoplework.Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.

美文赏析：

Weinterviewedpeopleaboutthewaystospendthevacationandhereisourreport.Aordingtoit,mostpeoplechoosetotraveltogetawayfromthebusyworldduringtheholidays.Thensomepeopleliketostayathome,watchingTVorsurfingtheIntertohaveagoodrest.Andto

visitfriendsorparentsalsomakesthemrelaxed.However,afewpeoplehavetowork.Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.

增加后的效果。

Aordingtoit,mostpeoplechoosetotraveltogetawayfromthebusyworldduringtheholidays.Thensomepeopleliketostayathome,watchingTVorsurfingtheIntertohaveagoodrest.However,afewpeoplehavetowork.Asthesayinggoes,―AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.‖Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.

谚语总结：

However,afewpeoplehavetowork.____________________________________________

Asthesayinggoes,“Allworkandnoplaymakes____________________________________________

Jackadullboy.”Comeandenjoyyourvacation.People____________________________________________

whorelaxwellworkwell.____________________________________________

方法四:

妙用引文和例子（多用于―第二段‖）

Weteenagersshoulddowhatwecantoprotecttheenvironmentandsavetheearth.Forexample,wecanuserecyclablebagsinsteadofplasticbags,stopusingnapkins,plantmoretreesandsavewaterandenergy.

Ioftenhelpmyparentsdohousework,suchaswashingdishes,foldingtheclothes,takingoutthetrashandsoon.

方法五结尾：

提出倡议或号召

Let’s…

Doitnow!

/Don’tdoitagain!

Asstudents,weshouldstartfromourselves.

Don’twait.Joinusnow!

Starttojoinusnow!

Don’tputitoff!

Beeavolunteertoday!

Howamazing!

Ican’twait!

Saveanimals!

SaveOurselves!

Saveourpla!

Don’thesitate（犹豫）.Itwillbegreatfun!

怎样保护动物的优美语句

1.weshouldn’teatwildanimals.Weshouldkeepthemawayfromourdinner.Inthisway,therewillnotbewildanimalsonsale.Ithinkthehuntersandkillerswillbeefewerandfewer.

2Weneedtoprotectanimalsbetter.Weshouldgivethemfreshwatertodrink.Weshouldmaketheforestsbiggerforanimalsindangertolivein.Weshouldadvicepeoplenottokillanimalsbeacausetheyareourfriends!

3weshouldprotecttheenvironment.Weshouldstoppeoplefromcuttingtreesdown.Withouttrees,wildanimalswilllosetheirhome.Andwewillloseouranimalfriends.Allofusshouldtryourbesttoprotectanimals.

有关音乐的优美语句

1.Almosteveryoneisfondofmusic.Iamamusiclover.

2.Listeningtomusicisahobbyinmylife.

3.Listeningtomusicwillmakemefeelrelaxed.

4.WheneverIfeelsad,Icanjustturnontheradioandlistentosomemusic.

5.MusiccancheermeupwhenIamsad.

6.feelingsofcountrypeople.Popmusiccanmakeusexcitedandhappy.

7.Iamwillingtosharetheirhappinessandtrouble.8.Musicesfromtheheartandflowsintotheheart.

9.Musicisakindoflanguagethatallthepeopleintheworldcanunderstandit

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