BEC高级写作实用技巧以及真题范文.docx

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BEC高级写作实用技巧以及真题范文

图表作文写作要领

（1）注意总-分结构的使用。

中心句概括总趋势。

总增长：

典型数据/区间：

therearesomefluctuationstothisgeneraltrend;

Withinthisgeneraltrend,therearesomefluctuations,forexample…

（2）注意分水岭的描写,即把整个图表的变化趋势分成两个或三个变化阶段来整体描写。

（3）注意语言的多样化，多用同义词替代，避免重复用词。

（4）注意数据的内部逻辑关系，确定描写线索。

即确定以某个数据的变化来贯彻全文。

图表作文句型总结：

1.基本功:

叙述表格/图表（重点）

（1）组成：

consistof..,bemadeupof..,becomposedof..,

（2）比例：

accountfor%,represent%,make/takeup%..,或者直接说%of….

（3）上升（by..to…），增加，提高：

a.普通：

increase,grow,rise,expand

b.渐渐上升：

climb,edgeup,ascend,trendup.

c.猛增，激增：

jump,surge,soar,proliferate（数量）,leap,shotup

d.词组：

achieveanincreasein….by…to…

Continueitsupwardstrend;trendup

Ontherise,ontheincrease.

Onconsecutiverise:

保持连续增长

n.名词：

increase,rise,growth,expansion,

ascendance渐渐增加,

slightincrease,rise,growthin..

bump-up（突然增加）,proliferation（激增）,jump,leap,surge,boom

（4）减少，下降，减缓

a.普通：

decrease,fall,drop,reduce,shrink,（shrinkage）

b.逐渐变少：

slide,dwindle,decline,edgedown

c.骤减：

collapse,slump,plummet,plunge

d.经济衰退，停顿：

slump,collapse,stagnate,stagnant,stagnation,

sluggish,sluggishness,slack,

crisis,recession,slowdown,downturn,

e.词组：

falloff,dropoff,godown,continueitsdownwardtrend,trenddown,onthedecline,onthedownturn.

（5）保持平稳，不变：

Remainstable,/steady,/unchanged

Leveloffvi上升，或减退至平稳水平

Subsidevi减退至平稳水平standstilln/adj停滞不前

（6）起伏波动：

Riseandfall,

fluctuateslightly/dramatically,

fluctuatebetween….and…,aminorfluctuation,

smallrisesandfalls/fluctuations.

（7）形容趋势程度

a.剧烈，显着，明显

Dramatically,sharply,considerably,rapidly,suddenly,greatly,alarmingly,significantly,enormously,steeply,massively,incredibly,hugely,amazingly,substantially;atanalarmingrate;byawidemargin.

b.缓慢/逐渐

Gradually,steadily,slightly,gently,marginally,slowly,moderately,inamoderateway,bytheleastamount.

（8）表示倍数：

a.（使）增几倍于：

double,triple,quadruple【'kw?

drupl】，

b.几倍的，几倍地：

fivefold,sixfold,sevenfold….

c.ad.几倍：

　twice,three/four/fivetimes….

e.几分之几：

2/3：

two-thirds,etc.（atafractionof…）

（9）比较数据as…as…

a.three/fourtimesasmany.做主语或定语成分

Eg.%morepeoplepreferredthedietcherryversionandnearlythreetimesasmanypreferredthedietstrawberryversion.

b.“A+be+XXtimes+as+adj+as+B”。

eg.Thistreeisthreetimesastallasthatone.

Eg.Hisfatheristwiceasoldashe.

c.“A+be+XXtimes+计量形容词比较级+than+B”

eg.TheYangtzeRiverisalmosttwicelongerthanthePearlRiver.

=TheYangtzeRiverisalmostthreetimesaslongasPearlRiver.

Eg.Thedictionaryisexactlyfivetimesmoreexpensivethanthatone.

d..“A+be+倍数+the+计量名词+of+B”

eg.Thenewlybroadenedsquareisfourtimesthesizeofthepreviousone.

新扩建的广场是未扩建时的四倍大。

e.“The+计量名词+of+A+be+倍数+that+of+B”

eg.Thesizeofthenewlybroadenedsquareisfourtimesthatofthepreviousone.

（10）从不同方面分析数据;inviewoftheturnover….,Intermsofgrowth,…就营业额方面来说。

。

。

，就增长方面来说；

2.描述时间点或时间段

（1）时期泛指:

overtheperiodXXXtoXXX,overtheyearsXXXtoXXX,fromXXtoxx;over/duringthepastXXyears;inthelastXXyears（最近X年），overthelast15to20years.inthenextXXyears,duringaXX-year/month/weekperiod,throughout..,allthewaythrough,fortheyear..XXX.

（2）时期特指：

duringthesameperiod,overtheperiodinquestion,over/duringtheperiodstudied,fortherestoftheperiodsstudied,inthetwosubsequentperiods,inthefollowingperiod,allthewaythrough,

（3）连续下降/上升的某个时期：

itisthesecond/third/fourthconsecutivequarter/year/month/weekthatXXXhasfallen

（4）时间点:

until,bytheyearXXX,since,fromtheyearXXX,uptonow,atagivenmoment,overtheperiodendedonxx/endedinXX

（5）年代：

duringthe1980s;duringthe70sand80s.,

3.开头：

thisgraph/reportdescribes/outlines/shows/compare…with…/suggests,

4.总趋势句型

（1）Ifwelookatthegrowthin…,wecanseethereisasteadyincreaseinXXfrom..to…/ariseinXXofXXX…

（2）fromthegraph,wecanseethereis…./ifwetakingtheXXfirst,wecanseethatthereis…

（3）XXwasonconsecutivegrowthonthewholeovertheperiodinquestion（except…）

（4）XXshowsarelativelysteady/upward/downwardtrendinthelastXXyears.

（5）XXshowsatrajectoryofgrowth/fall….

（6）xx,ontheotherhand,showsadifferenttrend.

（7）XXXhasbeengrowingconsistentlywithXXinthepastXXyears.

（8）XXXwitnessed/sawsomeriseandfall/fluctuationsovertheperiod…

（9）duringthesameperiod,XXalsorose,butfluctuatedgreatly.

（10）XXdidn’tvarymuchandremainedjustover/belowxxOrbetween..and..

（11）XXshowsthesameperformance/trendalthoughatlevel4bnhigherthanimports.

5.增长幅度、增长额

（1）..,thereisariseinXXofXX/byxx%/from..to…

（2）ThefigureshowsariseofXXwithinthewholeperiodandnofluctuationsaretoberemarked.

（3）XXrosefrom…to…,sufferingminorfluctuationsallthewaythrough.

（4）XXincreasedslightly/rosesteadily.etc,endingtheperiodaroundXXovertheirstartinglevel.

6.最大涨/跌幅，最高点，最低点

（1）XXXwiththebiggestincrease/decreasecomingbetween…and…,

（2）Itwentuptothe（7-yearetc.）peakat….in…./

（3）TheXXXpeakedat..in…./reached/hitapeakin…./peakingat…

（4）TheXXrosetothehighest,climbedtoaseven-monthhigh,（priceetc.）advancedtoarecord$1000on….,

（5）theXXrose/surge/climbtoXXX,thehighestsince….

（6）骤升shot-up,surge,rocket,upsurge,uplift,proliferationsoar,boom骤降：

slump,plunge,plummet（vi）,nose-divevi

5.起始点

（1）startingoffat…./from,saleswillincreaseto..during…,andremainstableatduring…,onlytodecreaseto…during.

（2）DuringXXX,itstartedaroundXXinthefirstquarter…

6.典型数据/区间

（1）Profitswillshopupdramaticallyto2,000in2004,fromwhichitwillgoupsteadilyfromyeartoyear…

（2）Itwillgodowntothelowestat…in…whereitwillbegintopickup/rebound/

（3）From1985to1997,XXXwerebetweenXXandXXX.

（4）After…theXXincreased/decreasedsignificantly.

（5）thexxxroseupsteadilyuntil….

（6）however,therearesomefluctuationstothisgeneral/withinthisgeneraltrend,forexample….

7.描写fluctuations

（1）from/startingoffat…,XXXincreasedto..during..andremainstableat..during..,onlytodecreaseto..during…

（2）XXXincreased/soaredfromxxtoXXXin…followedbyasharpdropto…in…

（3）soaragain,fallbackto,dropbackto…andthenmaintainedthispositionthroughout….

（4）itstartedaroundXXinxx,increasedslowlytoXXin..,andthenfelltoXXattheendoftheyear.

（5）ItstayedstableataroundXXduringxxxandxxx,thendecreasedtoXXXin…,beforerecoveringat/toXXXattheendof…

8.对比，比例的描写

（1）倍数关系描写（见1）;

（2）分数关系：

one/afifthof,8outof10,atafractionof…

（3）组成：

consistof,bemadeupof…,becomposedof…

（4）比例：

accountfor..,represent,takeup..,

（5）对比：

comparedto,incomparisonwith…,relativeto…,theratiois….

Eg.Femaleexecutivesdominateintheagegroupbetween24and39,wheretheratiois42to10.（Thefirstrepresentingthenumberofwomenandlatter,men）.

Eg.Itdecreaseshalfingroup60to69where10womenholdtoppositionincomparisonto/with21men.

Eg.Thegraphsshowsthenumberofcarsper100peopleovertheperiod1980to2020relativetothegrowthoftheworld’spopulation.

9.大小的比较

（1）差：

spread（差价）,margin,split,difference,

差额为正/负：

xxxremainedpositive/negative

（2）占多数，a.XXXdominateintheXXgroup/amongst….

b.Intheagerangeabove…,XXXarein/sliding/majority.

（3）超过:

a.XXXexceeded/outstrippedXXXbutnotbythesamemargin,

b.XXXexceededXXbyXXpercent,outnumberxxxbyXXX.

c.exceedXX-level.WiththeearningsexceedingXXX.

（4）比例相等：

a.anequalnumberofboth…and…

b.XXXtakeanequalproportionin….

（5）从小到大描述数据：

followedby

Eg.44%ofoursalesincomecamefromUS,followedbyEurope（26%）,andsouthAmerica（19%）

（6）排序的描写：

ranked2;Thesecond/thirdlargest…;beinthefirst/second/thirdplace.

10.表示预测的句子;belikelyto…/isexpectedto…./issupposedto…/isestimatedto../isprojectedto…/will/willbe

11.叙述受访者态度

（1）XXXreceivedXXpositiveresponsesandXXnegativeresponses..

（2）XXpeoplegaveapositiveresponse/commenton..

（3）Askedabout….,XXpeoplerespondedpositively/negativelywhereasXXpeoplesaysthnegativeaboutit.

（4）XXofxxrespondentscomplainedabout….whileXXthoughitpositively,/thoughtittobesatisfactory

12.Distribution

（1）xx%,morethanhalfXX,XXoutofXX…

（2）therespondentsarealmostequallydividedbetweenXXXandXX（differentstances）

（3）XXandxxxtakeasimilarproportioninXXgroup/range

13.dataandcompare的中心句

（1）Thecompanyemploysalmostanequalnumberofexecutivesofbothsexes.However,thereareremarkabledifferencesdependingontheagerangeconsidered.

（2）TheoverallresultofthisinternationalsurveyonplannedITexpenditureforthenextyearshowssignificantdifferencesbetweenEuropeandAisa.

（3）ThesituationinXX,however,isquitedifferent.

（4）however,theXXvarygreatlyontheXX…

IDataandChange

1.此类报告有两个目的，呈现数据，描写变化趋势，自己的主观发挥较少或者没有发挥。

不要发挥图表里不存在的内容。

一般会要求呈现多个item的变化情况，可以用小标题分段。

重点如下：

一、首先把握图表的大趋势；

二、描述重要变化点，例如suddengrowth,abruptdrop,drasticshrinkage…,proliferationetc.

三、起始点和衔接点的描述【turningpoint】

四、需重点掌握的有：

描写变化的句型，及以上一、二、三。

五、条形图和线性图都一般都涉及到这种类型。

Samples

1.销售预测：

BarChart,趋势，最大值，最小值，变化值

ReportonSalesForecastfornextyear

Introduction

Thisreportsetsouttooutlineandcomparethesalesforecastsforfridges,TVs,andcookersofTollerElectricalLtdfornextyear.

Findings

Theunitsalesoffridgesis/AREexpectedtostay/remainsteadilyat5,000throughoutthefourquartersofnextyear.

ThesalesofTVs,ontheotherhand,willbeonconsecutiverise,startingoffat5,00