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10.Duringmyparents’divorce,Ifeltlikearagdollbeingtornbetweentwopeople.

Activity,412

1.Athicklayerofdustcoversthetopofourrefrigerator.

2.InJune,saggingChristmasdecorationswerestillhanginginthewindowsoftheabandonedhouse.

3.Thepeopleintheall-nightcoffeeshopseemedwearyandlost.

4.Everyplantinthedimroombenttowardthesmallwindow.

5.Aglaringheadlineabouttheconvictionofalocalcongressmanattractedmyattention.

6.Twoofthebiggeststoresinthemallaregoingoutofbusiness.

7.Themodem’stinyredlightssuddenlystartedtoflicker.

8.AneighborofminedoesallherworkathomeandE-mailsittotheoffice.

9.Thejarofpeppercornstumbledfromthespiceshelfandshatteredonthefloor.

10.ThescarinthehollowofBrian’sthroatistheresultofanemergencyoperationtoclear

hiswindpipe.

ReviewTest,413

1.Withonegracefulmotion,theshortstopfieldedthegrounderandthrewtofirstbase.

2.Likehumanmothers,sheepandgoatmothersdevelopclosebondswiththeirbabies.

3.Beforeclass,AntoniettaandJorgerushedtothecoffeemachineinthehall.

4.Ishifteduncomfortablyonthelumpymattressbeforefallingintoarestlesssleep.

5.Waitinginthelongticketline,Mattshiftedhisweightfromonefoottotheother.

6.AncientEgyptianswerebrandingcattlemorethanfourthousandyearsago.

7.Dogsandcatscrowdedtheveterinarian’sofficeonMondaymorning.

8.ThedriverabruptlyhaltedherJeepandbackeduptowardanarrowparkingplace.

9.DuringtheAmericanRevolution,somebridesrejectedwhiteweddinggownsandworeredasasymbolofrebellion.

10.Thelittlegirl’sfranticfamilycalledapsychictolocatethechild.

24Fragments

Note:

Foreachitemthefragment,orthatpartoftheoriginalfragmentnotchangedduringcorrection,isunderlined.

Activity2（Dependent-WordFragments）,417–418

1.WheneverIspraydeodorant,mycatarchesherback.

2.Wehadagreattimeplayingfootballinthehouseuntilhecamehomefortheweekend.

3.IfKimtakestoolongsayinggood-byetoherboyfriend,herfatherwillstartflickingtheporchlight.

4.Scientistsarestudyingmummifiedremainsthatarethousandsofyearsold.

5.BeforeIturnonthemicrowaveoven,Ihavetoturnofftheoverheadlightinthekitchen.

Activity1（-ingFragments）,419

1.Marble-sizedhailstonesfellfromthesky,flatteningtheyoungplantsinthecornfield.

2.Theycametoastopatmyhouse.

3.ThereasonforthisisthatIampartiallydeaf.

Activity2（-ingandtoFragments）,420

1.Lookingatthewormonthetable,Shelbygroaned.

2.Iputaboxofbakingsodainthefreezertogetridofthemustysmell.

3.Staringattheclockonthefarwall,Inervouslybeganmyspeech.

4.Fantasizingabouttheupcomingweekend,Jeromesatquietlyathisdesk.

5.Togettothebusstationfromhere,youhavetowalktwoblocksoutofyourway.

Activity1（Added-DetailFragments）,421-422

1.Forexample,heseesthenewmoviesfirst.

2.Andhisfingertipsarealwaysblack,likeinkpads.

3.Electronicdevices,suchasvideocamerasandcellphones,keepgettingsmaller.

Activity2（Added-DetailFragments）,422

1.Left-handedstudentsfaceproblems.Forexample,theymustsitatright-handeddesks.

2.Mrs.Fieldsalwayswearsherluckyclothes,suchasablouseprintedwithfour-leafclovers,tobingo.

3.Hundredsofmothswereswarmingaroundthestadiumlightslikelargeflecksofsnow.

4.Forinstance,hebuysandsellscomicbooksandmovieposters.

5.IwondernowwhyIhadtolearncertainsubjects,suchasgeometry.

Activity（Missing-SubjectFragments）,423–424

1.Thenshedoesfiftysit-ups.

2.Ilikeallkindsofpizzabutrefusetoeatfrozenpizza.

3.Theybreakoutinhiveswhentheyeatit,andtheycanevenhavetroublebreathing.

4.Todistractme,thedentisttuggedatacornerofmymouth.Thenhejabbedaneedleintomygumsandinjectedapainkiller.

5.Lastsemester,Itooksixcoursesandworkedpart-timeinadiscountdrugstore.

Reviewtest1Corrections（methodsofcorrectionmayvary）:

p425

2.I’mstartingtothinkthereisnosafeplacelefttorideabicycle.

3.WhenItrytorideinthehighway,inordertogotoschool,Ifeellikearabbitbeingpursuedbypredators.

6.Driverswhippastmeathighspeedsandtrytoseehowclosetheycangettomybikewithoutactuallykillingme.

7.Whentheypullontotheshoulderoftheroadormakearightturn,driverscompletelyignoremyvehicle.

11.Regardlessofanapproachingbikerider,street-sidecardoorswillunexpectedlyopen.

14.Frustrateddriverswhoarestuckintrafficwillmakenastycommentsorshoutoutobscenepropositions.

16.Whilejaywalkingacrossthestreet,thepedestrianwilltreatme,alaw-abidingbicyclist,toawitheringlookofdisdain.

19.Pedestriansmayevencrossmypathdeliberately,asiftoprovetheirhigherpositioninthepeckingorderofthecitystreets.

ReviewTest2,P426

1.Webothbegantotireaswepassedthehalfwaymarkintherace.ButwheneverI’dhearReggie’sfootstepsbehindme,Iwouldpumpmylegsalittlefaster.

2.Ihaveafewphobias,suchasfearofheightsandfearofdogs.Myultimatenightmareistobetrappedinahot-airballoonwiththreeGermanshepherds.

3.Punchingallthebuttonsontheradioinsequence,Philkeptlookingforagoodsong.Hewasinthemoodtocruisedownthehighwayandsingatthetopofhisvoice.

4.Mychildrenjokethatwecelebrate“Hanumas”withourJewishneighbors.WeshareHanukkahandChristmasactivities,includingmakingpotatopancakesattheirhouseanddecoratingourtree.

5.Inoticedtwocartonsofcigarettesstickingupoutofmyneighbor’strashbag.Irealizedthathehadmadeuphismindtogiveupsmokingforthefifthtimethisyear.

6.I’vedecidedtoleavehomeandrentanapartmentwithmybestfriend.Bybeingawayfromhomeandonmyown,Iwillgetalongbetterwithmyparents.

7.Thealleybehindourhousewasflatexceptforawidegrooveinthecenter.Weusedtosailpaperboatsdownthegroovewheneveritrainedhardenoughtocreatea“river”there.

8.Donpassedthecomputerschool’saptitudetest,whichqualifieshimforninemonthsoftraining.Donkiddedthatanyonecouldbeacceptedifheorshehad$4000.

32MisplacedModifiers

Activity,469–470

Theunderlinedpartineachofthecorrectionsbelowshowswhathadbeenamisplacedmodifier.

1.Thepatientonthepsychiatrist’scouchtalkedabouthischildhood.

Or:

Onthepsychiatrist’scouch,thepatienttalkedabouthischildhood.

2.Withswivelingheads,thecrowdwatchedthetennisplayers.

3.Vonnieputfourhamburgerpatties,whichshewascookingfordinner,onthecounter.

4.Stevecarefullyhunginthebedroomclosetthenewsuitthathewouldweartohisfirstjobinterview.

5Annerippedonacardoortheshirtthatshemadeinsewingclass.

Annerippedtheshirtthatshemadeinsewingclassonacardoor.

6.ThelatestTomHanksmoviehasopenedinalmost2,200theatersacrossthecountry.

7.Wearingabulletproofvest,thenewscasterspokesoftlyintoamicrophone.

Thenewscaster,wearingabulletproofvest,spokesoftlyintoamicrophone.

8.Owingtwomonths’rent,thetenantslefttowninadilapidatedoldcar.

Or:

Thetenants,owingtwomonths’rent,lefttowninadilapidatedoldcar.

Or:

Thetenantswhoowedtwomonths’rentlefttowninadilapidatedoldcar.

9.Thewomanwitharthritispickedupaheavyfryingpan.

10.Inthegreenhouse,Idiscoveredanunusualplantthatoozedamilkyjuice.

ReviewTest2,471

1.HenryWadsworthLongfellowwroteinapoemthatrainbowsareflowersthathavediedandgonetoheaven.

Inapoem,HenryWadsworthLongfellowwrotethatrainbowsareflowersthathavediedandgonetoheaven.

2.Ifilledalmostanentirenotebookwithbiologylabdrawings.

3.Withenviouseyes,theapprenticewatchedthemastercarpenterexpertlyfitthedoor.

4.Thephotographerpointedthecameraequippedwithaspecialnight-visionscopeattheshydeer.

Thephotographerpointedattheshydeerthecameraequippedwithaspecialnight-visionscope.

5.Withtiredfaces,thepeopleonthebusstaredattheceilingorreadnewspapers.

33DanglingModifiers

Activity,473–474

1.Theaudiencecheeredwildlyastheelephants,dancingontheirhindlegs,paradedby.

Theaudiencecheeredwildlyastheelephantsparadedby,dancingontheirhindlegs.

2.Thepolicespokespersonsaidthesuspect,lastseenwearingdarkglassesandablondwig,wasstillbeingsought.

3.AsIwaspouringoutthecereal,acouponfellintomybowlofmilk.

4.Iknewthelimousine,whichwasescortedbydozensofpolicemotorcycles,carriedsomeoneimportant.

Becauseitwasescortedbydozensofpolicemotorcycles,Iknewthelimousinecarriedsomeoneimportant.

5.Tiredandexasperated,wehadafightthatwasinevitable.

Becauseweweretiredandexasperated,thefightwehadwasinevitable.

6.Franhaddifficultyremovingtheanchovies,whichwerepackedtig