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20大学英语六级写作辅导讲座范文
2013年11月21日大学英语六级写作辅导讲义
戚元方
一、六级写作真题
六级真题高分欣赏:
14分
Incontemporarysociety,peopleareconfrontedwithnumerouskindsoftemptation,suchasfortune,fameandpower.Thisphenomenonmakesourgoodhabitsextremelyvulnerable.Inmypointofview,resistingtemptationwillundoubtedlyhelpustocultivategoodhabits.
ThiscanbeevidencedbythestoryofMengZi.InancientChina,MengZi’smothermovedtheirhomethreetimesinordertoprotectMengZifromtheinfluenceofunfavorablesurroundings.Asaresult,MengZidevotedhimselfwholeheartedlytostudyandbecameabrilliantandgreatscholar.
Failuretoresisttemptationresultsinpickingupbadhabitsandstopsusfromachievingourgoals.Forexample,ifweareondietweshouldgiveuptakingtoomuchdeliciousfood.Otherwisewewillbecomeoverweightbecauseofexcessiveeating.
Inanutshell,temptationisthebiggestbarrierwehavetoovercomeonourwaytoacquiringgoodhabits.Wearesupposedtohavenotonlyacleargoalbutalsostrongdetermination.Onlyinthisway,canwesticktoourgoodhabitsandbecomeprospectivebackbonesofsociety.
举一反三:
Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteanessayentitled“WillChinabecomeoldbeforeitgrowsrich?
basedonthefollowingtable.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsbutnomorethan200words.
Year
Numberofseniorcitizens
2003
132million
2015
200million
2050
400million
1.中国老龄化现状
2.社会老龄化对国家发展带来的影响
3.你认为我国会否未富先老
Thetablegivesinformationaboutthenumberofseniorcitizensinourcountry.Ascanbeseenfromthegraph,thenumberofelderlypeoplewillincreasefrom132millionin2003to200millionin2015,andthento400millionin2050,whichmeansbytheyear2050,oneinfourChinesewillbeaseniorcitizen.
WillChinabecomeoldbeforeitgrowsrich?
Theansweriseitheryesorno.Itdependsonwhattobedone.ItistrueasChina’spopulationagesrapidly,theyoungworkforceavailableforeconomicgrowthwilldiminish.Thismayhindernotonlythedevelopmentofthecountrybutalsothequalityoflifeforitspeople.Despitethechallengesthattherapidagingofsocietywillcause,Chinacanadjustitscurrentfamilyplanningpolicywhilemaintainingalowbirthrate.Forexample,Chinawillloosenitsone-childpolicybyallowingcouplestohaveasecondchildifatleastoneofthemdoesnothavesiblings.Retirementwillbedelayedina"progressivemanner,"amovethatwillpartiallyalleviatethestate'spressurecausedbyagingsociety.
Personally,agingsocietywillpresentspecialproblems,butalsouniqueopportunities.Thiscentury’sleadingcountrieswillbethosethatconsidertheiragingpopulationnotasliabilities,butthatwillempowerthemtocontinuetobeactiveparticipantsinthecountry’seconomicgrowth.Thisiswhatsomepeoplenowcall“activeaging.”
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二、六级写作题材和特征
六级写作题材贴近学生生活、社会热门话题,具体格式分为以下五种:
(一)解释性议论文
1.中文提纲式作文
Directions:
Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledTheCertificateCraze.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.
1.现在许多人热衷于各类证书考试
2.其目的各不相同
3.在我看来……
Myopiniononcertificatecraze
Thegrowingtendencyamongcollegestudentstogetallkindsofcertificateshasnowevolvedintoacraze.Justrandomlyaskastudentwhatheorsheisbusilyengagedindoing,quitepossibly,youwouldgettheanswerthatheorsheispreparingforacertificateofsomekind.So,why’sthecraze?
Thereasonbehindthisphenomenoniscommon—theenormouspressureoffindingajob.Facedwithaharshjobmarket,moststudentshavenochoicebuttoseekmorecertificatestoparlaytheirqualifications.Anotherfactoristhatdiplomaandcertificatesstillweighsheavilyintermsofsignifyingone’sability.Forthesakeofincreasingtheiroddsoflandingabetterjob,thestudentsarecompelledtorunfromoneexamtoanother.
ThoughIhaveanopenmindtowardthecrazeoncertificates,Isuggestthatstudentsshouldbemorerationalwhenitcomestocertificates,sincetheydonotnecessarilytelltheirability.Instead,theyshouldbemoreinvolvedinlearningandcapabilityboosting,thus,opportunitieswouldcomequitenaturally.
Practice:
Directions:
Youareallowed30minutestowriteanessayonthetopic“TheStressIFaceonCampus”basedontheoutlinegiveninChinese.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.
1.当今大学生面对着各种各样的紧张或压力(如:
情感,经济,学业等)
2.我最大紧张是……
3.我是如何加以应对的
TheStressIFaceonCampus”basedontheoutlinegiveninChinese
Stresshasnowbecomeaninevitablepartofourstudents’dailylife.Therootsofstresscanbeemotional,economicandacademic.Forexample,somestudentsmayharborapassionforalovelygirl,othersmayhaveproblemswiththeirlivingallowanceandstillothersareunderstressintheiracademicstudy.
Asafreshmanofuniversity,thegreateststressIfaceistheacademiccompetitionsuchaspeerpressureorpressuretosucceed.Beingthebeststudentinmyhighschool,Iamalwaysdreamingofbeingthetoponeincollege.Contrarytomybelief,Ifrequentlyfailtomakemydreamcometrue.Toooftenseeingotherscatchupwithorsurpassme,Iwouldinalterablyfeelstressed.
Whenstressdoesoccur,it’snecessarytorecognizeanddealwithit.Doingphysicalexerciseisagoodremedyforstress.Anotherwaytocombatstressistoshareitwithothers.Forinstance,Ioftentellmyanxietiestomyclosefriendsbywritingblogs,whichmakesmefeelbetter.Thebestwaytotacklethestressistherecognitionoftheindividuallimitation.ItisalmostimpossibleforonetoachievethebestinallaspectsanditisOKaslongaswehavetriedourbest.Onlyinthiswaycanwealleviatethestressinourlife.
2.英语提纲式作文
Directions:
Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteanessayentitledTheWaytoSuccessbycommentingonAbrahamLincoln'sfamousremark,"Givemesixhourstochopdownatree,andIwillspendthefirstfoursharpeningtheaxe."Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsbutnomorethan200.
TheWaytoSuccess
AbrahamLincolnoncesaid,“Givemesixhourstochopdownatree,andIwillspendthefirstfoursharpeningtheaxe.”Inmyopinion,thisremarkcanbeinterpretedinthisway:
ifyouwanttosuccessfullyachieveacertaingoal,youmustbewellpreparedforitatfirst.Agoodpreparationinvolvessufficientlearning,goodstrategies,andahealthymentality.
Tobewellprepared,youmustfirstequipyourselfwiththerequiredknowledgeandskills.Onlyinthiswaycanyoumovesmoothlyinallkindsoftoughandcomplexsituations.Intheprocessofpreparation,youwillformulategoodstrategieswhichcancontributetoreducingthepotentialmistakes,thusleadingtohigherefficiency.Finally,youmustlearntocultivateahealthymentality,fullypreparingforthepossiblesetbacksyoumayencounteranddevoteyourselfwholeheartedlytowhatevergoalyoupursue.
Inaword,successcomestothosewhoarewellpreparedforit.Thereforebysparingnoeffortto“sharpenyouraxe”,youwillsuccessfullyarriveatyourdestination.
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Practice:
Directions:
Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitled “NeverGiveUp”bycommentingonAlbertEinstein’scommonsaying,“Lifeislikeridingabicycle.Tokeepyourbalanceyoumustkeepmoving.”Youshouldwriteatleast 150 wordsbutnomorethan 200 words.
NeverGiveUp
Thecommonsaying,“Lifeislikeridingabicycle.Tokeepyourbalanceyoumustkeepmoving”,unveilsthesignificanceofperseverance.Oneshouldnevergiveupsincethegreatestgloryconsistsnotinneverfallingbutinrisingeverytimewefall.Thisistruenotonlyinourcareerbutalsoinotheraspectsoflife.
AtypicalexampleisAbrahamLincoln.Borninanordinaryfamilywithnoprestigiousfamilybackground,Lincolnmetwithmanysetbacksanddefeatsthroughouthislife.Helosteightelections,failedtwiceinbusinessandsufferedanervousbreakdown.Hecouldhavequitmanytimes-buthedidn'tandduetohispersistence,hebecameoneofthegreatestpresidentsinthehistoryofhiscountryandwonthepopularityworldwide.Ifhestoppedtrying,fewpeoplewouldknowwhoLincolnwas.
Perseverancehasitsprioritysincenothingisdifficultifyouputyourheartonitandnothingiseasyifyoudon’ttryyourbest.Withoutit,wewillamounttonothingevenifwemaysucceed.Meanwhileapersonwhobelievesinitwillkeeptryingtoreachhisgoalnomatterhowmanytimeshefails.Infact,perseveranceisasortofdeterminationandofcourseistheguaranteeforsuccess.
(二)阐述性议论文
1.中文提纲式作文
Direction:
Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledMyViewsonUniversityRanking.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.
MyViewsonUniversityRanking
1.目前高校排名相当盛行
2.对于这种做法人们看法不
3.在我看来……
Inrecentyears,allkindsofUniversityRankingListscanbefoundonsomeeducationalwebsites,ornewspapers.Therankingstandardsalsovary.Theselistshavegreatinfluenceonstudents.Theyareevenbecomingtheonlyscaletoevaluatethecollegesanduniversities.
Peopleholddifferentviewstowardthisphenomenon.Somebelievethattheselistshelpthestudentsalot,especiallyforthosewhowillchoosetheiruniversity.Whilesomeotherprotestvigorously.Intheirpoints,thelistisreallyridiculousandharmful.Inmyview,theuniversityrankingmayhaveitsownreferencevalues,butitsdisadvantagesoverweighitsvalues.
Forthoseuniversity-students-to-be,theyaresupposedtochoosetheschoolaccordingtohisorherownsituation,butnottheso-calledRankingList.What’smore,howabout