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七、图表类作文
典例
请根据你对以下两幅图的理解,以“ActionsSpeakLouderthanWords”为题,用英语写一篇作文。
参考词汇:
banner横幅;stump树桩
你的作文应包括以下内容:
1.简要描述两幅图的内容;
2.概述你对两幅图中不同做法的理解;
3.举例说明两幅图对你的启示。
注意:
1.可参照图片适当发挥;
2.作文词数150左右;
3.作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。
ActionsSpeakLouderthanWords
满分作文
ActionsSpeakLouderthanWords
PeoplecelebrateEarthDaydifferently.InPicture1,amanistryingtoputupabanneronalonelytreesurroundedbystumps,butinvain,whilePicture2showsacouplehappilyplantingtrees.
Themessageconveyedhereisclear:
“Actionsspeaklouderthanwords.”Ourearthissufferingseveredamage.Shouldwejustpaylipserviceortakepracticalmeasurestoprotectit?
Theanswerisdefinitelythelatter.Immediateactionsshouldbetakenlikestoppingcuttingdowntreestobettertheenvironment.
Actionsareimportantinotherfields,too.Insteadofshoutingemptyslogans,itismoremeaningfultodonatebooksandsportsgoodstochildreninneed.Weshouldstrictlyandvoluntarilyfollowtrafficrules,stoppingattheredlightratherthancomplainingaboutthetrafficjams.Onlywhenwematchourwordswithactionscanwemakeadifferenceinwhateverwehopetoaccomplish.
阅卷老师点评
本文内容充实、语言规范、句子连贯、用词贴切。
段落层次分明。
第一段:
描述两幅图的内容;第二段:
概述对两幅图中不同做法的理解;第三段:
发表启示:
举例说明图画给的启示。
1.过渡自然
本篇习作中使用的过渡词不多,但是整个段落安排井然有序。
PeoplecelebrateEarthDaydifferently...;Themessageconveyedhereisclear...;Actionsareimportantinotherfields,too...使得作者娓娓道来。
2.高级词汇和丰富句式的使用
习作中使用了高级词汇如putupabanner,sufferseveredamage,takepracticalmeasures,bettertheenvironment,donatebooks,followtrafficrules;高级句式如Only引导的倒装句:
Onlywhenwe....canwe...。
图表式书面表达包括图画和图表式两类,主要是以图画(图表)为载体,附带少量文字提示或说明,要求考生从观察入手,通过对图画(图表)所含的信息的理解,发挥想象力,按照一定的顺序把图画(图表)的内容准确、生动地表述出来。
这就要求考生需要具有一定的观察能力、推理能力和语言组织能力。
其写作技巧有:
1.读图。
在读图时务必关注四个方面:
(1)题目。
漫画的标题是漫画的眼睛,透过这个“眼睛”,可以洞察整幅漫画的主题。
(2)画面。
漫画画面上的每一个细节都对表达漫画的寓意有提示作用。
(3)语言。
漫画为了表达其寓意,常常配有言简意赅、画龙点睛的语言文字,思考这些语言文字中所隐含的作者的观点。
(4)夸张。
漫画为了说明某种观点,常常对人物行为或场景进行夸张描绘,以引起读者共鸣。
夸张之处往往是漫画的弦外之音,是漫画所要表达的寓意所在。
2.解意。
在理解和阐释漫画含义时要关注三点:
(1)确定作者的基本态度,是属于夸张褒扬还是批评讽喻;
(2)运用想象力,合理地把漫画所描述的现象和实际生活相联系;
(3)要特别注意除图片外的文字提示部分,它往往暗示了行文的方向和重点,必须仔细阅读。
3.谋篇。
英语漫画类作文在行文时往往分为三个部分:
(1)describethepicture
(2)interpretthepicture(3)giveyouropinions
这样的结构可以使文章逻辑清晰,脉络分明。
同时,这三个部分都有一些套语可以使用,熟记这些套语可以帮助学生明显提高文章的档次。
如:
(1)读图描写句式
①Thepictureistalkingabout/shows...
②Thepictureshowsacommonphenomenon.
③Thepicturedescribesaninterestingphenomenon.
④Inthepicture,thereare/is...
⑤Thepictureaboveisabout...
⑥Let’slookatthepictureabove/first.
(2)解图描写句式
①Itseemsveryridiculousthat...However,thiskindofstoryisperformedeverywhere.
②Thepictureshowsthat...Itistheexactreflectionof...
③Thepictureindicatesthatwe...Nowadays,itisacommonphenomenonthat...
④Thisisasatirical(讽刺的)cartoonwhichdescribesvividlyakindofcommonphenomenonamong...
(3)个人观点描写句式
①Ithink/believethat...
②AsfarasI’mconcerned,...
③Inmyopinion,...
④Frommypointofview,...
(2018·扬州高三期末)
Youdon’thavetolookfartofindconcernsabouthowtechnologywillstealourjobs.It’sbeenwidelynoticedthatautomation(自动化)ismakingmachinesmorepowerfulandshorteningthelistofcurrentjobsthatonlyahumancando.MartinFord’snewbook,RiseoftheRobots,looksathowfarmachineshavecome.
Atthesametime,somepeoplearegettingmoreoptimisticabouttheoutlook(前景)ofhavingarobotathometohelpsharetheburden.Whenitcomestodoinghousework,mostofAmericanswouldliketodoitbetterwhilesomeoneelsejustdiditforthem.
写作内容
1.用约30个单词概述以上图文信息的主要内容;
2.用约120个单词阐述你对机器人进入人类生活的看法,并用2~3个理由或论据支撑你的看法。
写作要求
1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;
2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3.不必写标题。
评分标准
内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。
参考范文1
Withthedevelopmentoftechnology,robotsarecomingforourcurrentjobs.Whensomepeopleshowtheirconcernabouttheissue,77%ofAmericansconsideritnormaltohavearobotintheirhomes.
I’mtotallyinfavorofowningrobotsinourdailylife.Firstofall,theycanfinishtasksfasterthanhumanswithmoreaccuracy.What’smore,theydonotcareaboutthecomfortandsecurityoftheirsituation,thereforesavingworkersfromboringandevendangeroustasks.Lastbutnotleast,theycanworkataconstantspeedwithnobreaksandperformassignmentsatasteadyhighlevel.
Tobehonest,whatweshouldreallyworryaboutisnotthepresenceofrobotsthemselvesbuttheabsenceofnecessaryknowledgeaboutthem.Therefore,itisdefinitelywiserforpeopletobecomemorefamiliarwithourfuturehelperratherthanconsideritaquestionofrobotswinningandhumanslosing.
参考范文2
Withthedevelopmentoftechnology,robotsarewidelyused.While77%ofAmericansconsideritnormaltohavearobotintheirhomes,somepeopledon’tthinkitawisepractice.
I’magainstrobotscomingintowidespreaduseinourdailylife.Firstofall,convenientasitmaybetoemployrobots,theymaytakeoverthejobsnowdonebyhumans,resultinginmanypeoplelosingtheirjobs.What’smore,ifoperatingsystemsinrobotsgotinfectedwithviruses,robotswouldnotperformwellasdesigned,evencausingadisaster.Lastbutnotleast,Ibelievehumanshavebetterjudgementindealingwithsomecomplexmattersespeciallywhenthereisnotoneclearanswer.
Tobehonest,eventhoughemployingrobotswidelymaybeanirresistibletrend,wecannotturnablindeyetoitspossiblethreatanditssideeffects.
专题强化练(二十六)
Ⅰ.任务型阅读
1
Justafewdecadesago,whentheworkdayendedat5∶00PM,workerspackedupandturnedtheirmindsofffortheevening.However,becauseofourconstantconnectionthroughtechnology,clientemails,proposalsandprojectshavebecomeapartoftimespentoutsideoftheoffice.Theseextrahoursandinabilitytostepawayfromworkhavecausedmanyindividualstocallforawork-lifebalance.
Thefollowingmayhelpyoudealwithyourworkandpersonallifemorereasonablybothinsideandoutsideoftheoffice:
Incorporatingphysicalactivityintoyourroutineisanimportantpartofmaintainingawork-lifebalance.Physicalactivitynotonlyhelpstorefreshbothyourmindandbody,butalsoprovidesmentalclarityduringatimeofstressatwork.Inadditiontothis,itkeepsyourbodyinidealphysicalshape,whichmakesyoumorehealthy.Ifyourscheduledoesnotallowforgoingtothegymbeforeorafterwork,considermakingthisapartofyourworkday.Stepawayfromyourdeskandtakeawalkwithaco-workertogainanewperspectiveandexerciseyourmuscles.
Anotherimportantaspectofmaintainingawork-lifebalanceisseparatingfromelectronicdevicesduringeveningsandweekends.Ifyoufeeltheneedtocompleteextraworkorrespondtoemailsoutsideoftheoffice,designateaspecifictimefortheseresponses.Forexample,allowyourselftocompleteworkintheeveningsfrom6-8andthencloseyourlaptop.Or,respondtoemailsonSaturdaymorningandthentakeSundayoff.Findwhatworksbestforyouandyourscheduleandmakeapointtoseparatefromelectronicdevicesandclearyourmind.
Workplacecommunicationthatpreviouslytookplaceintheformoflongmeetingsandphonecallshasbeenreplacedbyquickemailandinstantmessageexchanges.Whiletheuseoftechnologyforcommunicationhassavedustime,itcanoftenserveasadistractionaswell.Itisimportanttokeepthisinmindattheoffice.Whenyouareatwork,spendyourhourscompletingprojectsandassignmentsinsteadofsurfingtheWeborcheckingFacebook,whichcanimproveyourworkefficiencytoagreatextent.Considerlistingyourworkplanstomonitoryourworkandstayontask.
Takesometimetodowhatyoulove.Havinganactivesociallifeoftenassociateswithhavingapositiveworklife,somakesuretoinvestinwhatmakesyouhappyoutsideoftheoffice.Thiswillprovideyouasenseofmeaningandallowyoutodefineyourselfoutsideofwork.Feelingoverwhelmedbyasituationorprojectatwork?
Sometimesthebestideascomewhenyourmindisrefreshedandfocused.Grabbingdinnerwithafriendanddiscussingyoursituationmayprovideasolutiontoyourproblem.
Topic:
HowtoMaintainaHealthyWork-LifeBalanceintheAgeofTechnology
Reasonsforthework-lifembalance
★Theboundariesbetweenworkandlifebecome1.becauseofyourconstantconnectionthroughtechnology.
★Workingovertimebecomesthenewnormalinthedigitalage.
2.onhowtobalanceworkandlifewell
IncorporatePhysicalActivityintoYourRoutine
★Get3.bothphysicallyandmentallythroughphysicalactivity.
★Takeabreakforexercisingtogainanew4.duringworkhours.
SeparatingfromElectronicDevices
★Spendyoureveningsandweekendswithyourfamilyandfriendswithoutelectronicdevices.
★Selecta5.timetocheckyouremailsoutsideoftheoffice.
MakeWorkMore6.
★7.ontheworkinsteadofsurfingtheWeborcheckingFacebookwhenyouareatwork.
★Makea8.ofwhatyouneedtodotomanageyourtimeproperly.
IncorporateDowntimeintoYourRoutine
★Setasidesometimetodevelopa9.andtakeanactivepartinsociallife,whichwillhelpyourealizeyourvalueoutsideoftheoffice.
★Takeadvantageofyourdinnertimetodiscussyourproblemwithfriends,whichcan10.toasolutiontoyourproblem.
1.答案 unclear/unobvious/vague
解析 转换词汇题。
根据第一段中的“becauseofourconstantconnectionthroughtechnology,clientemails,proposalsandprojectshavebecomeapartoftimespentoutsideoftheoffice”可知,由于通过科技即时联系,客户的电子邮件、提案和项目已经成为办公室以外时间的一部分,也就是说工作和生活之间的界限变得模糊了。
2.答案 Suggestions/Tips/Advice
解析 概括词汇题。
根据第二至六段的内容,尤其是第二段“Thefollowingmayhelpyoudealwithyourworkandpersonallifemorereasonablybothinsideandoutsideoftheoffice:
”及表格右栏的内容可知,此处讲的是平衡工作与生活的建议。
3.答案 refreshed
解析 转换词汇题。
根据第三段中的“Physicalactivitynotonlyhelpstorefreshbothyourmind