新高考英语热点01书面表达读后续写学生版.docx

新高考英语热点01书面表达读后续写学生版.docx

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新高考英语热点01书面表达读后续写学生版

热点01书面表达读后续写

【命题趋势】新高考英语科目考试题型有重大变化，其中英语写作分为两部分：

第一节为应用文写作；第二节为读后续写或概要写作。

应用文写作与往年的写作变化不是很大，已为广大师生所熟悉，但是第二节的读后续写或概要写作是一种新题型

1.题型介绍

选材特点

（1）所需阅读的短文词数在350以内；

（2）多以记叙文故事类文章或者夹叙夹议类文章为主，故事情节有曲折、有起伏，但是，故事线索的逻辑性比较强。

阅卷时主要考虑以下内容：

（1）与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度；

（2）内容的丰富性和对所给关键词语的覆盖

情况；

（3）应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性；

（4）上下文的连贯性。

【满分技巧】

（1）所续写短文的词数应为150左右（词数少于130的，从总分中减去2分）；

（2）应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

（3）续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

（4）续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

读后续写以读为辅，以写为主，其目标是考查学生的综合语言运用能力，主要包含以下四个方面：

1.把握短文关键信息和语言特点的能力；

2.语言运用的准确性和丰富性；

3.对语篇结构的把握能力；

4.创造性思维能力。

【热点话题】假期生活；生活小故事；哲理故事；寓言故事；学生生活。

【限时检测】（建议用时：

30分钟）

A

2018年浙江省高考真题）

话题：

假期里发生的故事

难度：

★★

建议用时：

7分

1.Itwassummer,andmydadwantedtotreatmetoavacationlikeneverbefore.HedecidedtotakemeonatriptotheWildWest.

WetookaplanetoAlbuquerque,abigcityinthestateofNewMexico.WereachedAlbuquerqueinthelateafternoon.UnclePaul,mydad'sfriend,pickedusupfromtheairportanddroveusuptohisfarminPecos.

HiswifeTinacookedusadeliciousdinnerandwegottoknowhissonsRyanandKyle.MydadandIspentthenightintheguestroomofthefarmhouselisteningtothefrogsandwaterrollingdowntherivernearby.Veryearlyinthemorning,UnclePaulwokeusuptohavebreakfast."Thedaystartsatdawnonmyfarm,"hesaid.Afterbreakfast,IwenttohelpAuntTinafeedthechickens,whilemydadwentwithUnclePaultotakethesheepouttograze（吃草）.IwasimpressedtoseemydadandUnclePaulridinghorses.Theylookedreallycool.

Intheafternoon,IaskedUnclePaulifIcouldtakeahorseride,andhesaidyes,aslongasmydadwentwithme.Iwasn'tgoingtotakeahorseridebymyselfanyway.So,mydadandIputonournewcowboyhats,gotonourhorses,andheadedslowlytowardsthemountains."Don'latebeforsupper,"UnclePaulcried,"andkeeptothe

tracksothatyoudonge'tlotst!

""OK!

"mydadcriedback.AfterawhileUnclePaulandhisfarmhousewereoutofsight.Itwassopeacefulandquietandthecolorsofthebrownrocks,thedeepgreenpinetrees,andthelateafternoonsunmixedtocreateamagicscene.Itlookedlikeabeautifulwoven（编织的）blanketspreadoutuponthegroundjustforus.

Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.

注意：

（1）所续写短文的词数应为l50左右；

（2）至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语：

（3）续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

（4）续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

Paragraph1:

Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.

Paragraph2:

Wehadnoideawherewewereanditwasgettingdark.

B

山东省2020年普通高等学校招生模拟卷）

话题：

救治流浪狗的故事

难度：

★★

建议用时：

7分

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

续写的词数应为150左右。

Thoughitisoneofthefadedmemoriesofmylifetoday,therearetimeswhenIrememberhisfaceclearly,especiallyhiseyes.AshehadyellowspotsonhiseyeswecalledhimSpotty.Hewouldhavebeenastray（流浪）

dog,untilhecametome.

Iwassevenyearsold.MydadhadjustgotanewjobinNasik.Wehadmovedintoarentedhouse.Itwasrainingveryheavilyonthedaywemoved.

Itwasacolddarknight.Wehadourmealandwenttosleep.SomehowinthemidnightIheardsomestrangesoundsoutsidethemaindoor.IgatheredcourageandlookedoutthroughthewindowandIwasreallyamusedwithwhatIsawoutside.

Therewasasmallpuppylyingonanolddoormatwhichmymotherhadputoutsidethedoor.Itwaswetandtrembling.Atfirstitwasdifficulttoseetheliteone.Itwastheyellowspotsonitseyesthatmademerealizeitspresence.

ItwastryingtogetunderthedoormattoavoidthecoldairoutsideandithadmanagedtogetinasIcouldseeonlyitsheadoutsidethedoormat.Wasitsickorinjured?

Ifeltpityforthepoorsoul.Iwentinandcameoutwithanoldtowel.Iwentneartheinnocentoneandhelditinmyhandandwipedthepuppytillhehadbecomedry.Itookhimintomyroomandmadeabedforhimwithawoolenblanketandasmallpillow.Heseemedveryhealthyandcomfortableinhisnewbedashewenttosleepimmediately.

Thenextmorning,everyoneinthefamilycametoknowabouttheunusualguest“Shalwlekeephimwithus?

"

Iquestionedmymom.

Likeanyotherparentswould,myparentsfirsttallyrefusedmyideabutmysisterandIconvincedthemtokeepSpotty.

SlowlySpottygotonwitheveryoneandbecameoneofthefamilymembers.

Para.1：

Oneday,Spottyreturnedfromhisdailywalkwithabrokenleg.

Para.2:

Almostayearlater,onemidnightweheardSpottybarkingbreathlessly.

2020届新素养大二轮浙京津鲁琼版专题突破卷2）

话题：

Abbie和Mel之间发生的关于乐队的故事

难度：

★★★

建议用时：

7分

阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

“Whatdoyouthinkaboutmyaudition（试奏）yesterday？

Mytrill（颤音）shouldhavebeenbetter，don'tyouthink？

”AbbieaskedMelandclosedthelidofherviolincasebeforeschool.

“It'snobig，deAablbie，”Melsaidastheywalkedoutthedoor.Meldidn'thavewtiomrreytaoboutherlittle

sister'smood.Itturnedouttobeabusyday.Shehadatestinscienceclass.Shehittwohomerunsinsoftball.Afterschool，sheandherfriendstalkedabouttheirsummerplans.

SheforgotabouttheauditionresultsuntilAbbiedraggedhertothemusicroom.Melthoughtshe'dprobablybeinthefirstviolins.

MelandAbbiefoundthelistofnamesontheboard.Abbie.Concertmaster.Abbiescreamed，“Ican'tbelieve

it！

”“Ican'twaittotellMumand！

D”adAbbierushedtowardhome.Melkeptreading.Mel.Secondviolins.What？

Therehadtobesomemistake.She'dfigureouttomorrow.

WhenMelgothome，AbbiewasplayingherauditionpiecethereM.usicpouredfromAbbie'sbowlikewaterfromateapot—pureandperfect.Andthetrillsoundedlikeabirdsinging.Abbiewasgood—reallygood—butthatwasn'thtepoint.M“rBensonmusthavemadeamistak，e”Melthought.

Thenextmorning，Melslippedintothemusicroom.Gatheringhercourage，Melsaid，“MrBenson，Iwanttotalktoyouabouttheorchestra（管弦乐队）seats.”

“Yes—youmustbeproudofyoursister，”MrBensonsmiled.“Abbiiseararestudent.Ifshecontinuesto

practicehardandgrowasamusician，shecouldbecomeaprofessional.Thenwe'lllookbackonourlittleorchestra

andthinkabouthowluckyweare.”

注意：

1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2．至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

Paragraph1：

Melfrozeastherewasn'tanymix-up.

Paragraph2：

Afterschool，MelfoundAbbieonabenchoutside，playingtheviolin.

2019届浙江杭州地区高三冲刺模拟卷14）

话题：

农民RipVanWinkle的故事

难度：

★★★

建议用时：

7分

阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

Onceuponatime,therewasafarmercalledRipVanWinkle.Helivedinavillageinthemountainswithhiswifeandtwoyoungchildren,adaughterandason.Ripwasaveryhappyandkindmanandhegotonwellwithallthechildreninthevillage.Theylovedhimbecauseheplayedgameswiththemandoftentoldthemstorieswhilehe

wassittingoutsidethe

KingGeorge”inn,.thevillage

Hespendalotoftimeintheinnbecausehewasaverylazyman.Insteadofworkingonhisfarm,hewouldgofishingorhunting,orsitinthevillageinntalkingtohisfriends.Hisfamilywaspoorandhiswifeusedtogetangry

withhim.“Whatkindoffarmerareyou?

”Shewouldsayy.ouget“doWwhnytodosnom'etwork,youlazyman!

Afterargumentswithhiswife,Ripalwayswentoffhuntingwithhisdog,Wolf.Oneday,afteranotherargument,Ripwentfurtherthanusualinthewoodsandcametoabeautifulvalley.Suddenly,heheardastrangevoicecallinghisname.Anoldman,dressedinold-fashionedclothes,wastryingtocarryabarrel（木桶）andaskedRiptohelphim.Ripagreed.Theytookthebarreltoacave,wherethereweremorepeople,alldressedinthesamestrangeclothes.Afterthat,theoldmangaveRipadrinkfromthebarrel.Ripimmediatelyfellintoadeepsleep.注意：

所续写的短文词数应为150左右；

1.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

3.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

Para1：

Sometimelater,hewokeupunderatreeinthesamevalley.

Para2：

Whenhegottohishouse,hesawthatitwasoldandabandoned.

2020届浙江杭州市长征中学高三上期中试题）

话题：

寓言故事

难度：

★★★

建议用时：

7分

阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

Therewasathickforestonthesidesofamountain.Manykindsofanimalslivedintheforest.Adeerwaseatinggrassandleaveswithhertwoyoungones.Theyoungoneswanderedhappilyhereandthere.Thedeerfollowedherfawns（幼鹿）intoacave.Thedeerwasfrightenedbecauseitwasatiger'scave.Therewer

deadanimalsalloverthecave.Fortunately,thetigerwasnotinsidethecaveatthetime.

Thedeerwastryingtoleadheryoungonesoutofthecavewhensheheardaloudroar.Shesawthetigeratadistancecomingtowardsthecave.Itwasdangeroustogooutofthecavenow.Shethoughtofaplan.Thedeerraisedhervoiceandshouted,"Mydeeryoungchildrendonotweep.Ishallcapture（捕捉）atigerforyoutoeat.Youcanhaveagooddinner."

Thetigerheardthesewordsandbecamefrightened.Hethought,"Whoseisthatstrangevoicefromthecave?

Adangerousanimalisstayinginsidetocaptureme.Ishallrunawaytoescapedeath."Thetigerbegantorunawayfromthereasfastaspossible.

Ajackal（胡狼）sawtherunningtiger.＂Whyareyourunningingreatfear?

"thejackalasked.Thetigersaid,"Myfriend,apowerfulandfierceanimalisinmycave.Theyoungonesarecryingforatigertoeat.Themotherispromisingtocaptureatigerforthem.So,Iamrunningaway."

Thecunningjackalwasnowsurethetigerwasacoward（懦夫）.Itsaid,"Don'tbeafraid.NoanimalisfiercerorstrongerthanatigerLetusgotogethertofindout.＂

Butthetigersaid,"Idonotwanttotakeachance.Youmayrunaway.Iwillbeleftalonetodie.So,Iwillnotcomewithyou."

Thejackalsaid,"Trustme.Letusknot（打结）ourtailstogether.ThenIwillnotbeab