如何才能写好一篇托福独立写作作文.docx

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如何才能写好一篇托福独立写作作文

如何才能写好一篇托福独立写作作文

　　托福独立写作是托福写作考试中的重头戏，也是整场托福考试的压轴项，那么大家应该如何备考托福独立写作，下面就和大家分享如何才能写好一篇独立写作作文，希望能够帮助到大家，来欣赏一下吧。

　　托福独立写作备考攻略丨如何才能写好一篇独立写作作文?

　　一.托福独立写作要点把握

　　1.写作主体

　　这里的主语我们可以理解成是题目中语法里的主语，即动作的发出者，句子所论述的主体。

既然是主语，我们就只能从主语出发去思考和论述问题。

　　2.限定性

　　指的是通过一道独立写作题目我们会发现题目有限定的人群或者范围，如果脱离开题目限定的人群或者范围，显然属于跑题。

　　3.写作点

　　每一道独立写作题目论述都会有一个归题点，就是表述的内容是归在什么地方，是为了突出重要性或者为了某个目的或者达到某个目标，所以我们作文的点也要落在重要性，某个目的或者目标上。

　　二.托福独立写作要点把握实力解析

　　现在我以一道独立写作题目为例，做详细的陷阱剖析，方便同学们的理解。

　　比如下面这道题目：

　　Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement?

　　Themostimportantaspectofajobisthemoneyapersonearns.

　　Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouranswer

　　首先，主语显然是Themostimportantaspectofajob，即工作中最重要的一方面，所以我们不管同意还是不同意这个观点，我们探讨的主语也得是工作中的某个方面，或者承认工作中的钱确实重要，或者论述工作中的其它方面，比如：

培训机会，工作环境，地点，竞争空间等比钱重要。

总之我们不能脱离开工作的某个方面去谈，否则就是跳进了陷阱，属于跑题。

　　其次，考虑这道题目限定的人群或者范围。

这道题目没有涉及人群，那就默认是针对于所有people,所以对我们破题没有阻碍，但是因为人群很泛，所以可以考虑是否可以对people进行分类，我们可以思考一下：

对于什么样的人工作中的钱是最重要的，对于什么样的人工作中的其它方面比钱重要，这是陷阱也是我们的破题点。

　　另外，除了限定的人群还应该考虑限定的范围即除人以外的限定。

那就是moneyapersonearns，这个地方是重点，因为不是只有money一个词，而是有限定的apersonearns所以这里的钱是指的工资，而非大范围的金钱，money有很多种****并不一定是工作所得，所以不要随意去扩展限定的范围，很多学生在这个表述上失分。

　　最后，归题点，这道题最后要归在important重要性上。

所以不管是承认薪资的重要还是认为工作中其它方面比钱重要，都要落脚在重要性上。

　　托福考试作文独立写作范文：

演艺明星的高薪

　　Somefamousathletesandentertainersearnmillionsofdollarseveryyear.Doyouthinkthesepeopledeservesuchhighsalaries?

Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouropinion.

　　写作范文：

　　Nowadays,theannualincomesofmanysportsstarsandfilmstarscometomillionsofdollars.Somepeopleclaimthattheirsalariesaretoohigh.Yet,inmyopinion,suchsalariesarewelldeserved.Theyworkhardtobecomefamous,provideentertainmentforus,andwinhonorsfortheircountries.

　　First,famousathletesandentertainersmakepainstakingeffortstoachievefame.Fameisawonderfulthingtohave,butitseldomappearsovernight.Famouspeoplehaveworkedhardforyearstoachievetheirfametodayandtheyhavetocontinuetheirgoodworktomaintainit.Fortheirhardwork,sportsandentertainingstarsdeservetobegenerouslyrewarded.Unfortunately,peopletendtofocusonthehugeamountsofmoneymadebythem.Theyrarelyappreciatetheeffortsthatathletesandentertainershavetomakeinordertoachievethefamethattheyhavetoday.Forexample,inordertowinthefirstplaceina100-meterdash,anathletehastocoverhundredsofmilesduringtraining.Famousstarsdeservetheirhighsalariesbecausetheyhaveworkedhard.

　　Second,sportsandentertainingstarsprovideuswithgoodentertainment.Onweekends,manyofusattendafootballmatchthatincludesBeckham,seeamoviethatstarsJuliaRoberts,orgotoaconcertthatfeaturesCelineDion.Thesepeoplehelpusmakegooduseofourfreetimebyentertainingus.Asaresult,wefeelinspiredaswellasrelaxed.Inotherwords,wefeelenergeticagainafterattendingtheevents.Weevenfeelthatwehavemoretoenjoyinlifeandhavenewaspirations.Forsuchreasons,thesepeopleareworththeirhighsalaries.

　　Third,athletesandentertainerswinhonorsfortheircountries.Forexample,afterfouryears’hardwork,manyathleteswingoldmedalsattheOlympicsGames.Theyareabletomakemillionsofdollarsayearafterthegames.Suchhighsalariesarejustified,becausetheseathleteshavewonhonorsfortheircountriesinthemostcompetitivearenaandhavemadetheirpeopleproud,somethingfewpeoplecanevendreamof.Thisistrueforentertainersaswell.ManyactorsandactressesreceivehighsalariesaftertheyhavewonOscarsorprizesatCannesFilmsFestival.Thosepeoplealsodeservehighsalaries,becausetheyhavemadeanameinfilmsfortheircountryandhavemadetheircountrybetterknownbypeopleelsewhereintheworld.

　　Allinall,famousathletesandentertainersmerittheirhighsalaries,fortheirhardwork,entertainmenttheyprovide,andtheircontributiontotheircountry.IfIhadachance,Iwouldbeafamousstarwhocanmakemillionsofdollarsayear.

　　托福考试作文独立写作范文：

中学生应该在上大学前花时间工作旅行吗

　　Studentsshouldspendatleastoneyearworkingortravellingbeforetheygototheuniversity.

　　【题目大意】：

中学生是否应该在上大学之前拿出至少一年去工作或旅行。

主观点可以同意，因为一让学生放松，二可以让学生学到新的技能。

　　题目：

Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement:

　　Studentsshouldtakeatleastayeartoworkortravelbeforebeginningcollege.

　　Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement:

Afterhighschool,studentsshouldhaveatleastoneyeartoworkortravel.Itsbetterthanattendinguniversitystraightaway.

　　范文参考一:

　　Theprevailingnotionisthathighschoolstudentsareunderhugepressure.Thenappearsacontroversywhetherstudentsshouldhaveoneyeartoengageinotherthingsbeforetheyattendtheiruniversity.Afterweighingtheprosandcons,Iamfavoroftheopinionthathavingagapyearcanproducemanybenefits.

　　Firstoff,studentscanbenefitalotfromtraveling.Aseveryoneknows,tomaintainstrongcompetitiveness,highschoolstudentsarerequiredtoaccomplishawiderangeofeitherrequiredoroptionalcurriculumsatschoolandtherightstodeveloptheirowninterestshavebeendeprivedrelentlessly,whichhasproventobeadetrimentoftheirgrowth.Insteadofpursuingtheirbachelordegreewithoutpauseinthecollege,travelingcanhelpthemregainchancestocultivateandperfecttheirpersonalitiesandreleasepressure.Forinstance,manymorecollegegraduatesarereportedtobeindifferenttothesocietyandshownomercyonthoseinneed,partofwhichowesalottothefactthatschoolslaymoreemphasisoncultivatingstudents’academicabilitiesanddownplaytheimportanceofdevelopingtheiroverallqualities.Travelingtothoseplacesinpovertycangivestudentsasightofthoseimpoverishedfamiliestocallonthesenseofresponsibility.Besides,bypayingavisittosomeplacesofinterestliketheGreatWallorthepyramidinEgypt,studentscanapproachthegreatnessofdiverseculture.What’smore,thedirectaccesstothenaturalworldcanappeasestudents’inneruproar.Accordingly,agapyearcanbeagreatassetforhighschoolgraduates.

　　Secondly,bytakingpart-timejobs,notonlycanstudentsaccumulatesufficientsocialexperiencebutalsoearnsomemoneytoreducefinancialstressontheirfamilies.ThougheconomyinChinakeepsgrowingatarateofalmost9percentintherecent,averagecitizensstillsufferhugepressureespeciallywhentheslumpofstockmarkettookaheavytollonthemandthemajorityofstockinvestorswithdrewtheirmoneyandreinvesttotherealestate,furtherincreasingpressureontheordinarybecauseoftheincreasingpricesofhousing.Formostfamiliesfromsmallcitiesandruralareas,collegetuitionstillappearstobeagreatburdenonthemandbytakingpart-timejobs,studentscanearnsomewagestorelievefinancialpressure,suchasservingasarestaurantattendantthatenablesstudentstobetterdeveloptheircommunicationtechniquesandlearnmoreabouthowtomeetthedemandsofconsumersorworkingasasalesmanthatwillbeanentirelydifferentexperiencefromhighschoolsandcanleadtothecultivationoftheabilityofpresentingcustomerstheadvantagesofproducts.Obviously,agapyearmeansalottohighschoolgraduates.

　　Admittedly,thereisanothervoicethathighschoolstudentsaresupposedtostarttheircampuslifeimmediatelyaftergraduationfromhighschools.Tobemorespecific,maintaininghigh-efficiencystudycanleadstudentstobebetteracclimatedtotheircollegelife.Insteadofgoingtocollegesoon,agapyearmaydisrupttheirstudyscheduleandweakentheirlearningskills.Itappearstobesensible,however;theultimategoalofattendingauniversityistoseekadecentjobandgainingsocialexperienceinadvancemakesstudentsmoreconsciousofwhichkindofareatheyaremoreinterestedininthenearfuturesuchastheservingindustryorhigh-techfields.

　　Inconclusion,highschoolgraduateshadbetterliveadifferentlifetemporarilybeforetheygotocollege.

　　写作参考二:

　　Gapyear,abreakbetweenhighschoolandcollege,hasbecomeatrendamongmanyAmericanandEuropeanstudentsthesesyears.Asthepopularityofgapyearhasgrown,sotohasitsappeal.Generally,itcanbeconstructed（workinginacompany,takingtimeofftoimprovecodingskills,learningalanguage,workingonpersonalprojects）orunconstructed（travelling,figuringoutwhattodoasitcomes）.Theideaofgapyearhasbeenstronglyquestionedbysomenervousparents,however,somesupporterscontendthatitwillbealifelongtreasurewhichenablesonetohavethefullcommandofhislife.Frommyperspective,takingayeartoworkortravelbeforecollegebringsaboutmoreadvantagesthanshortcomings.

　　Tobeginwith,agapyearhelpsguidestudents’futureeducationandlifegoals.Mostofyoungstudentsdonotknowexactlywhattheywantedtodooncetheylefthighschoolorevenhalfwaythroughcollege.Workingortravellingayearwillgivethemsome“realworldexperience”aswellasinsightintotheirinterestsandstrengthswhichwillhelpthemshapeapathtoasuccessfulcareer.Oncestudentslearnawholelotaboutthemselves,theyarelikelytotakefulladvantageofcollege.TakeanAustralianboyforanexample.EnjoyinghisgapyearinNepal,hehelpsthelocalsinPokharatobuildtheirorganicfarms.Heissopassionateaboutwhatheisdoingnowandhedecidedtopursueenvironmentalscienceafterhecomesbacktouniversity.Theinternshipsandprofessionalexperiencegainedoverthegapyearwillhavemuchmoreinfluenceonthedevelopmentofone’sfuturethancollege.

　　Inaddition,takingayearoffcanrefreshthetired-outhighschoolgraduates.Ingeneral,itwilltakeatleasttenyearsbeforejumping