李辉高分英语作文36计.doc

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高分作文五大关键点

卷面内容分段过渡词遣词造句

1、卷面：

clean&clear辉体字

2、内容：

全+简单

3、分段：

（1）段落结构“T-D结构”（总-分结构）；

（2）每个拓展句前用过渡词引导；

（3）一个“大要点”写成一个自然段；

TTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT.Firstly,DDDDDDDDDDD.Secondly,DDDDDDDDD

DDDD.Thirdly,DDDDDDDDDDD.

4、过渡词

（1）分两点拓展：

TTTTTTTT.Foronething,…Foranother,….

TTTTTTTT.Ontheonehand,…Ontheotherhand,…

（2）分三点拓展：

Firstandforemost,….

首先的也是最重要的一件事儿是,…

Additionally,…./Inaddition,…

更进一步而言，….

Lastbut（certainly）notleast,…

最后的但当然不是最不重要的是,….

（4）分四点拓展：

Tobeginwith,…Besides,…What’smore,…Finally,…

（5）另起一段、改变主题时：

Bytheway,….

【注意】只要翻得通，最好每句话都带上过渡词！

Herearesomeuseful,practicalandeffectivesuggestionsonEnglishstudy.Tobeginwith,youcanreadmoreEnglishmagazines.Beside,youmaylistentosomeEnglishsongsandwatchsomeEnglishmovies.What’smore,youshouldlearnasmanyEnglishwordsaspossible.Finally,you’dbettermakeanAmericanfriend

5、遣词造句

（1）遣词升级方法：

i.换词法

shouldàsbhadbetterdosth

建议sboughttodosth

sbbesupposedtodosth

Whynotdosth?

Itiswiseofyoutodosth.

Itishightimethatyoudidsth.

真的到了你该做某事的时间了。

IfIwereyou,Iwoulddosth.

如果我是你的话，我就会做某事。

likeàsb+befondof+sth/doingsth

sb+becrazyabout+sth/doingsth

sb+havefalleninlovewith+sth/doingsth

wantàsb+wouldlike+todosth.想要做某事

sb+desiretodosth渴望做某事

sb+haveagreatdesiretodosth非常渴望

learnàpickup偶然学到、顺便学到

master掌握

importantàessential必要的

significant至关重要的

vital至关重要

difficultàchallenging有挑战性的

veryàextremely极端地

surprisingly令人惊讶地

goodàexcellent优秀的+人/书/电视节目

outstanding出色的+人/书/电视节目

meaningful有意义的+一件事

educational有教育意义的+一件事

unforgettable难忘的+一件事/人

badàterrible+人/事/物

tiring令人疲惫的

annoying令人烦恼的

boring无聊的

difficultàofgreatdifficulty有难度

differentàofgreatdifference有区别

beautifulàofgreatbeauty有美感

usefulàofgreatuse有用处

alotofàanumberof很多

alsoàaswell,notonly…,butalso…

幽默humorous、热心warm-hearted、随和easygoing、勤奋hard-wording、有主见independent、乐观optimistic

ii.添词法

{1}名词前面添加一个或多个形容词

Ihaveakind,patientandconsideratemom.

Englishisauseful,essentialandentertainingsubject.

Ireadameaningful,educationalandentertainingbookyesterday.

{2}名词后面写一个同位语。

Wemiddleschoolstudents….

teenagers….

Englishlearners….

eg.WeshouldlearnEnglish.

WeteenagersaresupposedtomasterEnglish,auseful,essentialandmeaningfullanguage.

{3}能并列时需并列。

Youshouldunderstandyourmom.à

Youshouldunderstand,respectandappreciateyourmom.理解尊重感激

（2）造句升级方法：

i.黄金圣衣句型（加强语气、凑字神器）

{1}Itisclearthat… 很明显 “清”

{2}Itisobviousthat…. 很明显 “明”

{3}Thereisnodoubtthat… 毫无疑问 “疑”

{4}Noonecandeny… 不容否认 “否”

{5}Needlesstosay,… 不用说 “不用”

{6}Itgoeswithoutsayingthat… 不用说 “走”

【例子：

我们要多读书】

Thereisnodoubtthatwearesupposedtoreadmorebooks.Asforthereason,firstandforemost,itisobviousthatbooksareuseful,whichcancultivateourinterests,broadenourhorizonsandenrichourafterschoollife.Addistionally,itgoeswithoutsayingthatbooksarenotonlymeaningfulbutalsoentertaining.Lastbutnotleast,noonecandenyweneedtopasssalotofexams;asaresult,weneedtheknowledgelearnedfrombooks

ii.白银裤衩句型（“…”表示“完整的句子”）

{1}因为…...,for…. …,consideringthat… …,inthat…

{2} 所以……;consequently,… …;therefore,… …;asaresult,…

{3} 以防……,incase……,forfearthat…

{4}为了去做某事…todosth. …inordertodosth.

{5}如果：

…,if…

{6}以便……sothat… ...inorderthat…

{7}只要…aslongas… …

{8}这件事儿……,which…

{9}关于/至于Asfor…

{10}不但…而且…Notonly…butalso…

{11}比如suchas

{12}越…越..themore..,themore,themore…,thebetter…;theharder…,themore..

【例句：

】

我们要学好英语，因为英语很重要。

WeshouldlearnEnglishwell,inthatEnglishisimportant.

我们要学好英语，以防我们将来找不到工作。

...................,incasewecan'tfindajobinthefuture.

我们要学好英语，所以我们天天背单词。

...................,asaresult,welearnEnglishwordseveryday.

我们要学好英语，为了我们将来能出国。

...................,inorderthatwecangoabroadinthefuture.

我们要学好英语，如果我们想成功。

...................,ifwewanttosucceed.

我们要学好英语，只要我们想成功。

...................,aslongaswewanttosucceed.

我们要学好英语，这件事很重要。

...................,whichisveryimportant.

Aslongaswewanttoenjoyabetterlife,weshouldlearnEnglishwell,inorderthatwecanfindagoodjobinthefuture,inthatEnglishwillbeusefulthen,Whichweallknow.

Noonecandenythat（圣衣）englishisimportant,which（裤衩）isknowtoall.First,itisobviosthat（圣衣）weneedEnglishtotalkwithforeigners,inthat（裤衩）Englishisconsideredtobethemostwidelyusedlanguage,sothat（裤衩）ourhorizonscanbebroaden.

Asforherappearance,sheisatallgirlwithblonehairandbuleeyes.Sheisnotonlycleverbutalsowarm-hearted.Sheishard-workingandgoodatEnglishandwritingaswell.Shehasanumberofhobbies,suchasplayingcomputergames,swimmingandreading.Shealwaysspednsanhourpracticingdancingintheevening

【九大万能利】

1.挣钱Wecanearnsomepocketmoneytobuyourfavoritebooks.

2.利用好时间Wecanmakegooduseofoursparetimetodosomevaluablethings

3.提供能力NotonlyourEnglishbutalsoourinterpersonalskillscanbeimproved

4.交朋友 Wecanmakesomeclosefriendswithcommoninterststosharewitheachotherourlifeexperience

5.有益身心Itisbeneficalforourphysicalandmentalhealth

6.既有意义又有趣Itisnotonlymeaningfulbutalsoenteraining

7.既有挑战又有收益Itisnotonlychallengingbutalsorewarding

8.培养兴趣，开阔视野，丰富课余生活

Itcancultivateourinterests,broadenourhorizonsandenrichourafterschoollife

9.面对困难，克服挑战，达成目标，实现梦想

Itcanenableustofacedifficulties,overcomechallenges,achieveourgoalsandrealizeourdream

【九大万能弊】

1．浪费时间，浪费精力Notonlyourpreioustimebutalsoourenergywillbewasted

2．浪费金钱Itcostssomuchmoneythatmanyordinaryfamilyescannotevenaffordit

3．影响身心Itneverfailstodoalotofharmtoourphysicalandmentalhealth

4．影响学习Ourstudymayalsobenegativelyaffected

5．影响人际Itisalsobadforourinterpersonalrelationship

6．让人上瘾Itmaygradually/eventuallygetyouaddictedtoit

7．污染环境Itmaycauseseriousairpollutiontothisworld,whichisalreadyfarfromperfect

8．不可预测麻烦Itmayendupwithsomeunexpectedtroublesandproblems

9．让我们忘记XXX的意义WemayforgetthetruemeaningofXXX

【重要性功能段落】

（1）重要性

Needlesstosay,XXXisofgreatsignificane/importanceforourlife/society.Asforthereasons,firstandforemost,…Additionally,…Lastbutnotleast

（2）我的观点

AsfarasIamsoncerned,…Theresonissimple:

justasanoldCubasayinggoes,…

（3）解释原因

Therearethreemainreasonswhysbdosth.Firstandformost,…Additionally,…Lastbutnotleast…

（4）建议措施

Herearesomesuggestions.123

Practicalandeffectivemeasuresmustbeputintopractiveimmediatelytoimprovethecurrentsituation.123

（5）万能结尾

我希望Hopefully,sbwoulddosb

我相信Ihavetheconfidencethatsbwilldosth

感谢你Thanksforreadingmyletterinsuchahotsummer

请回信Iamlookingforwardtoyourearliestreply

只有才Onlyinthisway/bydoingsocanyouhavethechanceofachievingyourdreams/livingabetterlife

难避免Withthesesuggestionscarriedout,amuchbrightfuturewillbenotnolypossiblebualseinevitable.

【小结】高分作文遣词造句36计

5组过渡词

10组换词法

3个添词法

6个黄金圣衣

12个白银裤衩

Youshouldunderstandyourmother.

Thereisnodoubtthatyou,a17-year-oldteenagerwhocannotliveallbyyourself,aresupposedtounderstand,respectandappreciateyourkind,patientandconsideratemother,whogavebirthtoyou,hasbroughtyouupandlovesyouthemostintheworld,sothatyourfamilywouldcertainlybefilledwithendlessharmonyandhappiness,inthatagoodfamilyrelationshipwillcontributetoyourhappyandhealthygrowth,whichwillbebeneficialforyourfuturedevelopment.

第一段：

为什么要学英语。

T-D

第二段：

怎样学好英语。

T-D

OnEnglishStudy

ItisessentialforusteenagerstomasterEnglish.Asforthereasons,foronething,Englishisnotonlysimplebutalsouseful;consequentlyitisusedbypeoplefromallovertheworld.Foranother,weneedtopassalotofEnglishexams,whichwillcontributetoourfuturedevelopment.

TherearemanywaysforustolearnEnglishwell.Firstandforemost,wearesupposedtoreadmoreEnglishbooksandlistentomoreEnglishsongs,whichisgoodforourhappyandhealthygrowth.Additionally,wehadbetterdomoreexercises,inthatpracticemakesperfect.Lastbutcertainlynotleast,itishightimethatwecommunicatedwithourfriendsinthisbeautifullanguage.Onlyinthisway[shallwehavethechanceofrealizingourdreams.

保护环境

第一段：

为什么要保护环境T-D

第二段：

保护环境我们能做什么T-D

Onenvironmentalprotection

Frommyperspective,itisessentialforusmodernindividualstoprotecttheenvironment.Asforthereasons,foronething,nowadays,noonecandenythereistoomuchpollutionontheearth;inthatthereismoreandmorepopulationintheworld.Foranother,wearesufferingfromdirtyairandpollutedwatereveryday,whichisbadforourhappyandhealthygrowth.

Therearemanywaysforusteenagerstoprotecttheenvironment.Firstandforemost,thereisnodoubtthatitishightimethatwestartedtosavewaterandelectricity.Additionally,wearesupposedtoreducethrowinglitters.Lastbutcertainlynotleast,itgoeswithoutsayingthatwehadbetterridebicyclesmoreanduselessplasticbags.

Onlyinthiscanwehaveabetterfuture.

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完型：

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作文：

（1）高分作文5大要点

（2）遣词造句36计

（3）十大万能利+十大万能弊

（4）高分作文三大特征

学好英语两大秘密：

1、超前学习：

想学好初中的知识，必须提前学点儿高中的内容；

2、高原训练：

要想比别人学