16年改革后英语专四考试新题型材料作文模拟练习及范文分析.docx

16年改革后英语专四考试新题型材料作文模拟练习及范文分析.docx

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16年改革后英语专四考试新题型材料作文模拟练习及范文分析

专四新题型写作

自2016年起，专四考试写作部分改革，要求根据所给的题目、图表或阅读材料等，写一篇200词左右的作文。

出现的新题型命题+材料作文对考生的阅读理解及归纳能力提出了更高的要求。

考生可以采取“简短概述材料—评论—总结”的写作模式。

值得注意的是，在写作过程中，概述材料和进行评论缺一不可，否则将可能被扣分。

例题1

PARTVIWRITING

ReadcarefullythefollowingexcerptandthenwriteyourresponseinNOLESSTHAN200WORDS,inwhichyoushould:

1）Summarizethemainmessageoftheexcerpt,andthen

2）Commentonwhetherstudentslearnmorefromclassesthanfromotherresources

Youcansupportyourselfwithinformationfromtheexcerpt.

Markswillbeawardedforcontentrelevance,contentsufficiency,organizationandlanguagequality.Failuretofollowtheaboveinstructionsmayresultinalossofmarks.

Dostudentslearnmorefromclassesthanfromotherresources?

WiththeadventoftheInternetandothertelecommunicationstechnologies,thereisavastlygrowingwealthofresourcesavailablefromanimmenserangeofmediaoutlets.Studentshavetheabilitytoabsorbinformationinaquickerandmoreefficientwaywhenresearchingontheirownthroughreadingpublicationsorbrowsingwebpagesonline.Asaresult,somepeoplearguethatstudentsnowlearnmorefromotherresourcesthanfromclasses.

Conductingresearchwithonlinematerialsisanactiveprocess,whichallowsyoungsterstofocusingreaterdetailratherthanpassivelylisteningtoalectureinalargeclassroom.

TheInternetandTVarealsoeasilyaccessibleplatformsforstudentsintheremoteplaceswhereteachingresourcesarenotasabundantasthoseinmoredevelopedregions.

However,teachershavethecapabilityofexplainingtheknowledgeinadeeperwayandnotonlyprovidetheoreticalexplanationbutalsopracticalexperienceaboutlife.Theyhaveaccumulatedalargebodyofintelligencethatisprofoundlymoreprecisethanothersources.Teachersnotonlyfunctionasinitiatorswhoimpartknowledgebutalsoserveassupervisorsorguardians.Theconventionalroleofinstructors,inthisdayandage,hasevolvedtobecomeevaluatorsandfacilitators,guidingstudentsintheiracademicandpersonalefforts.

范文1

Intheinformationage,thetraditionalstudent-teacherrelationshiphasbeenaffecteddeeplyandpeoplebegintodoubtwhetherstudentscanlearnmorefromclassesthanfromotherresources.（介绍背景）Accordingtotheconventionalview,teachersarestilltheprimarysourcefromwhichstudentsobtainprofessionalknowledge,timelyclassinteraction,andeffectivesupervisionfromteachers.（总结第一种观点）Onthecontrary,nowadays,manypeoplebelievethatstudentscanlearnmorefromotherresourcessuchasInternetandTVsincetheyaremoreaccessibleandengagestudentsmoreactivelyinresearch.（总结第二种观点）

Forme,Iaminfavorofthefirstview.（表明立场）Teachersplayanirreplaceableroleineducation,whetherit’sinthepastoratpresent,sincetheynotonlyimpartknowledge,butalsoeducatepeople.（总论据）Foronething,whatstudentslearnfromtheirclassesismoreprecisethanfromotherresourceswhichprovideanenormousamountofdataneededtobesiftedthroughtodeterminewhichinformationisaccurate.（理由一）Foranother,teachersinschoolputtheshapingofpersonalityinaplaceasimportantastheteachingofknowledge,whichishardforstudentstoobtainfromotherresource.（理由二）

Inconclusion,thedevelopmentofcutting-edgetechnologyexertsabigimpactonmoderneducation.However,itcannevereliminatetheneedforhigh-qualityprofessionalsinclassroom.（重申论点）（213words）

例题2

PARTVIWRITING

15、在显微镜下，我们看到了叶细胞中的叶绿体，还看到了叶表皮上的气孔。

ReadcarefullythefollowingexcerptandthenwriteyourresponseinNOLESSTHAN200WORDS,inwhichyoushould:

1）Summarizethemainmessageoftheexcerpt,andthen

2）Commentonwhetherpeopleshouldchoosetobecomeindoorsy

Youcansupportyourselfwithinformationfromtheexcerpt.

Markswillbeawardedforcontentrelevance,contentsufficiency,organizationandlanguagequality.Failuretofollowtheaboveinstructionsmayresultinalossofmarks.

22、绿色植物的一些细胞能进行光合作用，制造养料，它们好像是一个个微小的工厂。

2、1969年7月，美国的“阿波罗11号”载人飞船成功地在月球上着陆。

Shouldpeoplechoosetobecomeindoorsyinmodernworld?

InmoderntimeswhenwecanbuyeverythingweneedontheInternet,andcommunicateandevenworkthroughtheInternet,becomingindoorsymenorwomenissimplyachoiceofdifferentlifestyle.Inthepast,ifyouwanttobuysomething,youneedtogooutofyourhouse,gotothestore,andspendanhourortwochoosingtheproductyouwanttobuy.Butnowyoucanjustsitinfrontofacomputerandclickyourmouse,andtheproductcanbedeliveredtoyou.Beingindoorsycansavepeoplealotoftime.

Beingindoorsycanallowpeopletothinkandworkinapeacefulenvironment.Forexample,writerscanbequitecreativewhentheyarealoneathomewithoutbeinginterrupted.

Somesociologistswarnthattheindoorsylifestylewillmakepeoplebecomeself-centeredandnaive.Ifpeoplestayathomeforalongtime,theywillhavelittleinterpersonalcontactwithothers.Theydonotknowhowtohaveface-to-facecommunicationwithothers,andtheymaybecomeshy,uncomfortable,orself-centeredwhentheyareinvolvedinreal-lifecommunication.Thisindoorsylifestylewillhaveabadeffectontheirnormalinterpersonalrelationshipandtheirnormalwork.

答：

这个垃圾场不仅要能填埋垃圾，而且要能防止周围环境和地下水的污染。

Indoorsymenorwomenspendmostoftheirtimesittinginfrontofacomputer,andtheyseldomattendoutdooractivities.Watchingthecomputerscreenforalongtimewilldogreatharmtotheireyes.Also,manyindoorsypeopledonotliketoattendsportsactivities,andinthelongrun,theirhealthwillgetworse.

13、以太阳为中心，包括围绕它转动的八大行星（包括围绕行星转动的卫星）、矮行星、小天体（包括小行星、流星、彗星等）组成的天体系统叫做太阳系。

13、以太阳为中心，包括围绕它转动的八大行星（包括围绕行星转动的卫星）、矮行星、小天体（包括小行星、流星、彗星等）组成的天体系统叫做太阳系。

15、为了便于辨认，人们把看起来不动的星星分成群，划分成不同的区域，根据其形态想象成人、动物或其他物体的形状，并且给它们命名。

天空中这些被人们分成的许多区域就称为星座。

11、显微镜的发明，是人类认识世界的一大飞跃，把有类带入了一个崭新的微观世界。

为了看到更小的物体，人们又研制出了电子显微镜和扫描隧道显微镜。

电子显微镜可把物体放大到200万倍。

范文2

审题思路

本题讨论“宅”生活是否可取。

在具体行文方面，考生应首先简要概述正方观点：

“宅”是现代的一种新型生活方式。

然后概述反方观点：

“宅”有种种弊端。

接下来给出自己的观点：

现代科技是把双刃剑，我们要把握好，适当利用可以使我们的生活更便利，但过度依赖则会对身体有害。

最后总结全文，重申观点。

ShouldWeEmbraceIndoorsyLifestyle?

Withtheglobalizationofmoderntechnology,especiallytheworld-wideaccesstoInternetservice,people’slifestylehasbeengreatlyinfluenced.（介绍背景）Someenjoyindoorsylifestyle.Theyholdthatindoorsylifestyleistime-savingandpeaceful.Incontrast,thoseagainsttheideaclaimthatkeepanindoorsylifestylewilldoharmtopeoplebothpsychologicallyandphysically.（总结材料）

7、月球的明亮部分，上半月朝西，下半月朝东。

AsfarasIamconcerned,moderntechnologyisadouble-edgedsword.（点明观点）Ifweconsideritasausefultooltoimproveourlife,itwillcertainlybringunprecedentedconveniencetous.WiththeassistanceoftheInternet,onecansavehistimethroughworking,shopping,orcommunicatingwithothersathome.（正方理由一）Also,solitudeisn’talwaysequaltoloneliness.Freefromoutsideinterruption,onecanbecreativeandkeephismindsharp.（正方理由二）Ontheotherhand,toomuchrelianceonorindulgenceintheInternetwillcertainlyhaveanimpactonournormallifeandwork.Forinstance,indulginginsocialnetworkonlinemaycorrodepeoples’socialskills.Tobespecific,theymayfeellostwhentalkingwithpeopleface-to-face,whichmayaffecttheirnormalrelationshipwithfamilymembersandfriends.（反方理由一）What’sworse,sittinginfrontofacomputeralldaylongmeanslittleoutdooractivities,whichmaydamageone’shealth.（反方理由二）

答：

烧饭时米变成了饭；写字时纸上留下了字迹；下雨后路上的积水慢慢地变成水蒸气消失在空中；岩石风化变成沙子等。

Inconclusion,whileenjoyingallthebenefitsthevirtualworldhasbroughttous,indoorsypeopleshouldalsostepoutoftheirhomeandengagethemselvesintherealworld.（总结上一段）（234words）