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书面表达高分技巧突破2

书面表达高分突破技巧

银川一中魏凤玲

一．高级词汇替换普通词汇

1．occur替换thinkof

SuddenlyIhadanideathatsomeonehadbrokenintomyhouse.→

Anideaoccurredtomethatsomeonehadbrokenintomyhouse.

Itoccurredtomethatsomeonehadbrokenintomyhouse.

2．devote替换spend

Hespendsallhissparetimeinreading.→

Hedevotesallhissparetimetoreading.

3．seek替换want/lookfor

Theysought（wanted）tohidethemselvesbehindthetrees.

4．average替换ordinary

I’manaverage（ordinary）student.

5．but替换very

Thefilmwesawlastnightwasveryinteresting.→

Thefilmwesawlastnightwasnothingbutinteresting.

Thefilmwesawlastnightwasanythingbutboring.

6．seat替换sit

Onhiswaytoschool,hefoundanoldladyseated（sitting）bytheroad,lookingworried.

7．suppose替换should

Heissupposedto（should）havedrivenmoreslowly.

8．appreciate替换thank

Thankyouverymuchforyouhelp.→

Weappreciateyourhelpverymuch./Yourhelpismuchappreciated.

9．thecase替换true

Idon’tthinkitisthecase（true）.

10．on替换assoonas

Assoonashearrived,hebeganhisresearch.→

Onhisarrival,hebeganhisresearch..

11．dueto替换becauseof

Hearrivedlatedueto（becauseof）thestorm.

12．cover替换walk/read

Aftercovering（walking）10miles,weallfelttired.

13．contributeto替换behelpful/useful

PlentyofmemoryworkisundoubtedlyhelpfultoEnglishstudy.→PlentyofmemoryworkwillundoubtedlycontributetoEnglishstudy.

14．roundthecorner替换comingsoon/nearby

①Thesummervacationisroundthecorner（coming）.Doyouhaveanyplans?

②LiMingstudiesinaschoolroundthecorner（nearby）.

15．cometolight替换discover

Thefamilyweresopleasedwhentheydiscoveredthelostjewels.→Thefamilyweresopleasedwhenthelostjewelscametolight.

16．haveaball替换haveagoodtime/enjoyoneself

Aftervisitingtheworkshop,wewentbacktoschool.Everyoneofushadaball（hadagoodtime）.

17．comeupwith替换thinkof

Jackisveryclever.Heoftencomesupwith（thinksof）newideas.

18．setaside替换save

Somestudentsthinkthattheyshouldsetasidesomeoftheirpocketmoneyforbooks.（2004天津卷）

19．beof+n.替换adj.

Theproductsareofhighquality（verygood）andaresoldeverywhereinChina.

20．referto替换talkabout/of,mention

Theprofessoryoureferredto（talkedabout）isveryfamous.

21．cannotbut/cannothelpbut替换havetodo

Icouldnotbut（hadto）gohome.

22．moreoftenthannot替换usually

Moreoftenthannot（Usually）,themeaningofmanywordscanbeeasilyguessed.

23．lest替换sothat/inorderthat

IwrotedownhistelephonenumbersothatIwouldnotforgetit.→

IwrotedownhistelephonenumberlestI（should）forgetit.

24．belongforsth./belongtodosth.替换wanttodosth./wishfor

Iwanttoseeyouverymuch.→Iamlongtoseeyou.

25．becaughtupin/becrazyabout/beabsorbedin/beaddictedto替换beinterestedin

Heiscaughtupin（veryinterestedin）collectingstamps.

26．morethan替换very

①I’mverygladtolearnthatyouarecominginSeptember.→I’mmorethangladtolearnthatyouarecominginSeptember.（NMET2003）

②IfthereisanythingIcandoforyou,Iwouldbemorethangladtohelp.（2004全国卷）

27．perfect（ly）替换good/verywell

Hespeaksperfect（good）English./HespeaksEnglishperfectly（verywell）.

28．dosba/thefavor替换help

Wouldyoupleasedomethefavor（helpme）toturndowntheradio?

29．theotherday替换afewdaysago

TheotherdaymybrotherandIwenttothecinemabybicycle.

30．inthecourseof替换during

Inthecourseof（During）themountain-climbing,pleasehelpeachotherandpayspecialattentiontoyoursafety.

31．themajorityof替换most

Themajorityof（Mostof）theintervieweespreferwatchingTVathometogoingtothecinema.

32．consistof替换bemadeupof

Ourclassconsistsof（ismadeupof）50students.

33．bewornout替换betired/broken

①Afterfivehours’non-stopwork,wewereallwornout（tired）.

②Myshoesarewornout（broken）.Pleasebuymeanewpair.

34．becomeof替换happen

Whatdothinkhasbecomeof（happenedto）him?

35．attendto替换lookafter

36．onconditionthat替换aslongas

37．nevertheless替换however

38．expressone’ssatisfactionwith替换besatisfiedwith

39．sparenoeffortstodo替换tryone’sbesttodo

40．manya替换many

41．berushedoffone’sfeet替换bebusyindoing

42．ahandfulof替换alittle/some

43．meanwhile替换atthesametime

44．gettoone’sfeet替换standup

45．beneath替换under

46．occasionally替换sometimes/onceinwhile

47．forinstance替换forexample

48．seldom替换notoften

49．wealthy替换rich

50．amazing替换surprising

51．asamatteroffact替换infact

二．高级句型结构

◆It句型

①Itwillbe+sometime+before…

Itwon’tbelongbeforehumansvisittheMars.

②Itis+adj./n.+forsbtodosth.

Itisveryimportantforustolearncomputerwell,becauseithaschangedourlifesomuch.

HesaidsinceitwasanewmodelinChina,itwasimpossibletofixitwithouttherightspareparts.（2008年湖北卷）

③Itis+被强调部分+that…

1）ItiswhatYangLiweihasdonethatencouragesusalot.

2）Thosewholikereadingextensivelysayitisthroughreadingthatwegetourknowledge.

◆more…thananyother表示最高级

Amongtheoptionalcourses,spokenEnglishandcomputerstudyaremorepopularthananyoneelse.

◆名词从句

①Itwouldmeanagreatdealtometolistentothetapeandlearnwhatiscoveredinthetalk.

②Myhometownisnolongerwhatitusedtobe.

◆（非限制性）定语从句

①TheflatisinabuildingonFangcaoStreet.ItisnotfarfromJianxinChineseSchool.→

TheflatisinabuildingonFangcaoStreet,whichisnotfarfromJianxinChineseSchool.

②Itwasquiteanexperienceforusboth,whichI’llneverforgetfortherestofmylife.

◆分词结构

①Idon’tknowaboutothers,butIusedtohavetoworkevenatweekendsdoingendlesshomeworkandattendingclassesaswell.

②We’llmostlystayathomeintheeveningwatchingTV,playinggames,andmeetingpeople.

③Hearingthis,afewpeoplebegantorunafterhim.（2004辽宁卷）

BorninAmerican,ThomasEdisonwasagreatscientistandinventor.

◆with结构

①Aterribleaccidenthappenedyesterday,withninepeoplekilledandalmosteightyinjured.

②Hewascarryingabedrollandalargebagonhisshoulder,withalargesuitcaseinhislefthand.

◆倒装句

①Thelibraryistotheeastoftheteachingbuilding.→

Eastoftheteachingbuildingisthelibrary.

②Althoughwearetired,wearehappy.→

Tiredasweare,wearehappy.

③Onlyinthiswaycanhegrowtobeausefulman.

Mayallyourdreamscometrue!

Mayourfriendshiplasttilltheendoftheuniverse.!

◆被动语态

①Opinionsaredividedonthequestion.

②Allclassesaretaughtbyteacherswithrichexperienceinteachingforeignstudents.

③Newfactories,housesandroadshavebeenbuilt.（2004江苏卷）

◆巧妙的改写

（1）．Only改成noonebut

OnlyTompassedtheexamlastweek.→NoonebutTompassedtheexam.

（2）assoonas改成Nosooner…than…/Hardly…when…/Immediately…/ThemomentNosoonerhadwearrivedatthecinemathanthefilmstarted.

（3）．havesb/sthdo/done

Thegirlwasknockedoffherbicycleandhadherlegbroken（herlegwasbroken.）.

（4）．变换插入语的位置

①However,theysuggestfeesshouldbechargedlow.→Theysuggest,however,feesshouldbechargedlow.②Ithinkthisisagoodchanceforyoutoshowyoursingingtalent,andhowwellyou’velearnedChinese.→

Thisisagoodchanceforyou,Ithink,toshowyoursingingtalent,andhowwellyou’velearnedChinese.

（5）.用同位语代替非限制性定语从句

Meimei,whoissevenyearsold,hasbeenlearningtorideabicycleforseveraldays.→

Meimei,agirlofthirteen,hasbeenlearningtorideabicycleforseveraldays.

Shakespeare,asonfromapoorfamily,amanoflittleeducation,wroteplaysandpoemsthatarereadallovertheworld.

◆其它

（1）注重句子的开头

①用with复合结构开头

Withthesunsettinginthewest,wehadtowavegoodbyetotheworkers.

Withhishelp,we'velearnedhowtoanalyzeandsettleproblems.

Withthefunctionsofinserting,deleting,movingandcopying,itenablesustoedittest,browsewebpageanddownloadwhatwewant.

②用非谓语动词形式开头

ⅰ）InordertoimproveourEnglish,ourschoolheldanEnglishcontest.

ⅱ）Walkingtowardsthecinema,hemetaforeigner.

（2）长短句交错使用（注意：

应突出主题句；长句子并非越长越好）

◆◆相关过渡语

1）.表示时间顺序:

first,then,afterwards,meanwhile,later，firstofall,finally,atlast…

2）.表示空间顺序:

near,nextto,farfrom,infrontof,ontheleft,ononeside…

3）.表示比较、对照:

like,unlike,suchas,but,however,ontheotherhand,onthecontrary,nevertheless,otherwise…

4）.表示因果关系:

because,for,asaresult,therefore,thus…

5）.表示递进关系:

besides,what’smore,whatwasworse,moreover,furthermore,inaddition,ontopof…

6）.表示并列关系:

and,aswellas,also…

7）.表示总结性:

ingeneral,inaword,inshort,onthewhole,tosumup,inbrief,toconclude…

提高英语写作分数的88个词组

1.经济的快速发展therapiddevelopmentofeconomy

　　2.人民生活水平的显著提高/稳步增长theremarkableimprovement/steadygrowthofpeople’slivingstandard

　　3.先进的科学技术advancedscienceandtechnology

　　4.面临新的机遇和挑战befacedwithnewopportunitiesandchallenges

　　5.人们普遍认为Itiscommonlybelieved/recognizedthat…

　　6.社会发展的必然结果theinevitableresultofsocialdevelopment

　　7.引起了广泛的公众关注arousewidepublicconcern/drawpublicattention

　　8.不可否认Itisundeniablethat…/Thereisnodenyingthat…

　　9.热烈的讨论/争论aheateddiscussion/debate

　　10.有争议性的问题acontroversialissue

　　11.完全不同的观点atotallydifferentargument

　　12.一些人…而另外一些人…Somepeople…whileothers…

　　13.就我而言/就个人而言AsfarasIamconcerned,/Personally,

　　14.就…达到绝对的一致reachanabsoluteconsensuson…

　　15.有充分的理由支持besupportedbysoundreasons

　　16.双方的论点argumentonbothsides

　　17.发挥着日益重要的作用playanincreasinglyimportantrolein…

　　18.对…必不可少beindispensableto…

　　19.正如谚语所说Astheproverbgoes: