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高三英语读后续写最后冲刺含参考例文
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(1)
Itwastimetogohome.“Remembertoworkonyourclassspeechesforhomework.”MissWalkercalled,aseveryonestartedtalkingandpackingtheirschoolbags.Jennyfeltsick.Shehatedhavingtoreadaloudinclass.Shewassureeveryonegotreallyboredwithlisteningtoher.Once,whenJennywasreadingoutherholidaydiary,Leewasevenlookingathiswatch,asilverandblueonewhichseemedjustmagical.
JennywatchedLeewalkaheadofherastheyleftschool.Heseemedsoclever,andhehadacertainsortofshiningconfidence.Hewasjustoneofthosepeoplewhoweregoodateverything.Jennysighed.Assheturnedthecorner,shesawLee’swatchlyingrightinthemiddleofthepath.
Jennyknewsheshouldjustpickitupandreturnittohim,butshedidn'twanttorunafterhim.Jennybentdownquickly,pickedupthewatchandranhome.Onarrivinghome,Jennyputitonalmostwithoutthinking.Shewassurpriseditfittedsowell.Shewalkedtothemirrorandstartedpractisingherspeech.Wordsjustfloodedoutofher.“I’mgoingtotalkaboutswimming.Ihavebeenlucky.I’vewonlotsofcompetitions.ButwhenI’minarace,I’mnotreallythinkingaboutwinning.I’mjustlovingthefeelingofbeinginthewater…”Jennylaughedwithexcitement.Shewalkedacrosstheroom.Shesuddenlyseemedtohaveacertainsortofconfidence.Turningbacktothemirror,Jennysawaflashoflightfromthewatchintheglass.Theflashofsilverseemedalmostmagical.SomaybeLee’swatchreallyDIDhavesomethingmagicaboutit.
Thenextday,asthelessonbegan,MissWalkeraskedwhowasgoingtobebraveandgofirst.Nobodymoved.Jennyslowlyraisedherarm.BeforeMissWalkercouldsayanything,therewasashoutfrombehind.“She’sstolenmywatch!
”Leesaidangrily.“Itwentmissingatschoolyesterday.”
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EverybodywasfixingtheireyesonJenny,waitingforanexplanation.Jennydidn'tanswer.Howcouldsheexplainaboutthewatchanditsmagic?
Noonecouldunderstand.Noonecouldbelieve.“ButIsawyouwearingityesterday,’’MissWalkergentlyremindedLee.ForamomentLeeremainedsilentandthenheapologizedhehadjustrememberedthat.Jennywasrelievedtosayshehadfounditonthewayhomeanddecidedtoreturnitafterthespeech.Everybodywaspuzzledandaskedwhy.Jennyagainwasspeechless.
MissWalkersmiledandaskedtheclasstolistentoJenny’sspeechfirst.Jennywalkedslowlytothefront.Shecouldn’tthinkproperly.Allroundher,aseaoffaceswerewatching.Shefeltsofrightenedandthewatchdidn’tseemmagicalatall.SuddenlyshesawMissWalker’sencouragingeyes.Jennytookadeepbreath.“I’mgoingtotalkaboutswimming…”TenminuteslaterthewholeclassstoodupapplaudingJenny’swonderfulspeech.Jennysmiledassheeventuallyrealizedtherealsourceofconfidence.
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EverybodywasfixingtheireyesonJenny,waitingforanexplanation.Embarrassed,Jennydidn’tsayanything.Deadsilencesuddenlyfell.ThencameMissWalker’svoice:
“WhyisLee’swatchonyourwrist?
”Jennyhesitatedforawhileanddecidedtotelleverybodyaboutthetruth.However,thinkingofthewell-preparedspeech,themagicofthewatch,shechangedhermind.“ButMissWalker,couldIgivethespeechfirstandthenexplain?
”Shemadearequestinatoneofbegging.
MissWalkersmiledandaskedtheclasstolistentoJenny'sspeechfirst.Jennymadeherwaytotheplatformwithconfidence.Wordsbegantofloodoutofher.“Howcouldshemakeit?
We’veneverseenJennygivesoterrificaspeech.”Whisperswentaroundtheclassroom,andevenMissWalkernoddedwithapproval.ImmediatelyJennyfinishedherspeech,astormofapplauseeruptedfromtheclass.Relieved,Jennytoldeveryonethetruth,andespeciallythemagicofthewatch.“Butit’sJustanordinarywatchwithnomagic,”Leeannounced.
1.珍妮笑了,她终于意识到自信的真正来源。
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2.“但是,沃克小姐,我可以先发言,然后再解释吗?
”她用乞求的语气提出了一个请求。
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3.詹妮刚一讲完,全班就爆发出一阵暴风雨般的掌声。
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4.死一般的寂静突然降临。
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(二)
Alittleboysellingmagazinesforschoolwalkeduptoahousethatpeoplerarelyvisited.Thehousewasveryoldandshabbyandtheownerhardlyevercameout.Whenhedidcomeout,hewouldnotsayhellotohisneighborsorpassers-bybutsimplyjustglareatthem.
Theboyknockedonthedoorandwaited,sweatingfromfearoftheoldman.Theboy’sparentstoldhimtostayawayfromthehouse,andalotoftheotherneighborhoodchildrenweretoldthesamethingfromtheirparents.
Ashewasreadytowalkaway,thedoorslowlyopened.“Whatdoyouwant?
”theoldmansaidimpatiently.Thelittleboywasveryafraidbuthehadaquota(份额)tomeetforschoolwithsellingthemagazines.Sohegotupthecourageandsaid,“Uh,sir,Iamsellingthesemagazinesanduh,Iwaswonderingifyouwouldliketobuyonefromme.”
Theoldmanjuststaredattheboywithoutaword.Theboycouldseeinsidetheoldman’shouseandsawthathehaddogfigurines(小雕像)onthefireplacemantle.“Doyoucollectdogs?
”Thelittleboyasked.“Yes,Ihavemanycollectionsinmyhouse.TheyaremyfamilyhereandtheyareallIhave.”Theboythenfeltsorryfortheman,asitseemedthathewasaverylonelysoul.
“Well,Idohaveamagazinehereforcollectors.Itisperfectforyou.Ialsohaveoneaboutdogssinceyoulikedogssomuch.”Theoldmanwasreadytoclosethedoorontheboyandsaid,“No,boy.Idon’tneedanymagazinesofanykind,nowgoodbye.”
Thelittleboywassadthathewasnotgoingtomakehisquotawiththesale.Hewasalsosadfortheoldmanbeingsoaloneinthehousethatheowned.Theboywenthomeandthenhadanidea.Hehadalittledogfigurinethathegotsomeyearsagofromanaunt.Thefigurinedidnotmeannearlyasmuchtohimsincehehadareallivedogandalargefamily.
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Theboyheadedbackdowntotheoldman’shouse.Heknockedonthedooragainandthistimetheoldmancamerighttothedoor.“Boy,IthoughtItoldyounomagazines!
”Theoldmanstaredathimangrily.“Iknowthat,sir.Ijustwantedtobringyouagift.”Thelittleboyhandedhimthedogfigurine.Lookingattheboy,theoldmanwastoosurprisedtosayanythingandsimplysmiledintears,asnoonehadevershownhimsomuchkindness.
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Fromthatdayonsomethingchangedinsidetheoldman.Hestartedcomingoutofthehouseandtalkingtohisneighbors.Soon,heandtheboybecamefriends.Theboyvisitedtheoldmanfrequentlyandbroughthisreallivedogtohishouseonceinawhile.HeeveninvitedtheoldmantojoinhisfamilyforChristmasdinner.Withtheboy'scompany,theoldmanwasnolongeralonelysoul.Asmallactofkindnesscanmakeabigdifferencetoothers.
1.老人望着男孩,惊讶得说不出话来,只是含泪微笑,因为从来没有人对他这么好。
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2.一个小小的善行能够对别人产生大的影响。
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(三)
ItwasChristmasDay.Robinwasworkingalonefixinganoldlanterninthebackroomwhenheheardtheringingofhisbellontheshopdoor.Thebell,whichproducedauniquelypleasantsound,hadbeeninRobin'sfamilyforoverahundredyears.Hevalueditdearlyandenjoyedsharingitssongwithallwhocametohisshop.Althoughthebellwashungontheinsideofthemaindoor,Robinhadtiedawiretothescreendoorsothatitwouldringwhethertheinnerdoorwasopenornot.Hearingthebellring,heleftthebackroomtogreethiscustomer.
“HowcanIhelpyou,littlelady?
”Robin'svoicewasjoyful.
“Hello,sir.”Thelittlegirlspokealmostinawhisper.ShelookedatRobinwithherbigbrowneyes,andthenslowlyscannedtheroominsearchofsomethingspecial.Shylyshetoldhim,“I'dliketobuyapresent,sir.”
“Well,let'ssee,”Robinsaid.“whoisthispresentfor?
”
“Mygrandpa.It'sformygrandpa.ButIdon'tknowwhattoget.”
Robinbegantomakesuggestions.“Howaboutapocketwatch?
It‘singoodcondition,missy.”Thelittlegirldidn’tanswer.Shewalkedtothedoorwayandputhersmallhandonthedoor.Sheshookthedoorgentlytoringthebell.Robin‘sfaceseemedtoglowashesawhersmilingwithexcitement.
“Thisisjustright,”thelittlegirlsaid.“Mommasaysmygrandpalovesmusic.”Justthen,Robin'sexpressionchanged.Fearfulofbreakingthelittlegirl'sheart,hetoldher,“I'msorry,butthat'snotforsale.Maybeyourgrandpawouldlikethislittleradio.”
Thegirllookedattheradio,bowedherhead,andsadlysighed,“No,Idon'tthinkso.”Inanefforttohelpherunderstand,Robintoldherthatthebellhadbeenhisonlycompanion,fortherestofhisfamilywereallgonenow,exceptforhisestranged(疏远的)daughterwhomhehadnotseenfornearlyadecade.
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Withagianttearinhereye,thelittlegirllookedupathim.Shemanagedaforcedsmile,murmuring“Thankyou,anyway”andturnedtowardthedoorway.SuddenlyRobinthoughtofhisdaughter.Lookingattheleavinggirl,Robincalledout,“Howmuchhaveyougottospend,missy?
”Hearingthat,thelittlegirlemptiedherpurseontothecounter—twodollars.Afteraquickstruggleinhismind,Robinsaid,“TodayisChristmasDayandthisisyourluckyday.Thebellcostsexactlytwodollars.”Holdingthespecialbellclosetoherchest,thegirldancedout.
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LaterthateveningwhenRobinwasc