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专八作文范文分析

TheregularstructureofaTEM-8article

Thesisstatement

Topicsentence1+supportingfactsorideas.

Topicsentence2+supportingfactsorideas.

Topicsentence3+supportingfactsorideas.

Conclusion.

内容简单化、结构模式化、语言要包装。

Ambition

Ambitionisthedecisiononemakesandtheresolutionwithwhichhecarriesoutthatdecision.Itprovidesuswiththerequireddrivingforcetoaccomplishanyundertakingsinourlife.JustasJosephEpstein,afamousAmericanwriterputit,“Andaswedecideandchoose,soareourlivesformed.”Indeed,oncewemakeupourmindstochoosetodosomething,thenourlifebecomesmeaningfulandspecificallyorientated.Thisnotionoflife,asfarasIobserve,isclosesttotruthanddoesapplytoalmostallaspectsoflife.

Firstthingsfirst,ambitionrendersusasenseofmission.Nomatterwhatdecisionyoumakeyouhavetoberesponsibleforyourchoice.Yourchoiceprocuresyouasenseoforientation,ormorespeciallyasenseofmission.Andonlyastrongmissionmayenableonetoaccomplishgreatness.CaesaroftheancientRomanEmpirewasurgedbyhisambition“Icame,Isaw,Iconquered.”AndbecameanunrivaledempirebuilderinthehistoryofRome.JohnMilton,stimulatedalwaysbyhisambitionthataimedatwritingsome“mightylines”whichEnglandwouldunwillinglyforget,hadinduetimesecuredhispositionasthesecondShakespeareinthehistoryofEnglishliterature.

Inthesecondplace,ambitioncanbringone’spotentialstothefull.Ambitionmaywellserveasacatalystactivatingone’sdormantpotentials.Withoutambitionone’spotentialswillremainslumberinglikeadormantvolcano.AcaseinpointisMsZhangHaidi,aChineseHelenKeller.ItwasherambitiontobeausefulpersonhasturnedthealmostparalyzedZhangHaidiintoawell-accomplishedfigurewhoseachievementswoulddwarfthoseofsomenormalpeopleaimatthesun,though,atworst,theymayprobablylandonthemoon.

Influentialasitisuponus,however,ambitionmustbechanneledintherightdirection.Ifwronglydirected,one’sambitionmaybringhavoconhimandothers.Hitler,whoseambitionwastoconquerEuropebywhateverevilmeans,finallyturnedhimintoademon.ItwasthisdemonthatalmostcastEuropeintoanunfathomableabyssofanguishandsuffering.AnothercaseisMacbethwhoseambitionwastobecomethekingofScotland.However,hisambitionwasmaterializedbythemurderofKingDuncan.Consequently,unbearableguiltandpsychologicalagonydrovehimtohistragicdoom.

Tosumup,ambitioncanbenefitustremendouslyifwiselyandcorrectlychanneled,otherwiseitmayruinothersandourselves.Apoetsays:

lifecanbebad;lifecanbegood;lifecanbedirty;lifecanbesad,;lifecanevenbepainful.Inmymind’seye,apersoncanmakehislifebeautiful,meaningfulandrewardingandstandoutasarespectablepersonageifheismotivatedbyawell-orientatedambition.

Passage1:

Childrenshouldbegintheirformalschoolingatanearlyage.

　　Peoplehavedifferentviewsonwhatchildrenshoulddoataveryearlyage.Somethinkthatchildrenshouldbegintheirformaleducationandstarttospendmostoftheirtimeonstudies.Othersbelievethatitisstilltimeforyoungchildrentoplay.Bothviewsarebasedonrespectiveground.

　　Thosewhoarguefortheplayingtimeforchildrensuggestthatchildrenataveryearlyagearestilltooyoungtofocustheirattentiononlearning.Theirbrainmaynotbereadyforseriousstudiessuchascomprehensionandmemorizinglearningmaterials.Thesepeoplearepartiallyright,foritistruethatyoungchildrencanhardlyconcentrate.Theirattentionononethinglastsfornolongerthan15minutesorso.Butwecanarrangeclassesforshorterperiods,can’twe?

Andwecanshiftteachingsubjects.Throughputtingthemtostudy,youngchildrenareoccupiedwithlearningbutnotwithplaying.

　　Thosewhoargueforchildren’searlycommencementforformaleducationbelievethatbeingputtostudies,childrencandevelopgoodhabitofstudying,fortheprocessoflearninghelpsdevelopchildren’smentalabilitiesliketheabilitytomemorize,theabilitytounderstandandtheabilitytodosimplecalculation.Children’shabitofstudyingandloveforlearningareofgreatimportancetoyoungstersbecausethesetwothingssetupthesoundfoundationfortheirfuturestudies.

Havingchildrenstartformaleducationataveryearlyagebenefitsyoungchildrenmuchmorethansimplylettingthemplaymostoftheirtime.Agoodhabitsneedsalongtimetodeveloptobecomeasecondnature.Moreimportantly,itisbettertodevelopagoodhabitbeforeabadonemaygrow.Similarly,theloveforlearningshouldtaketootsforbeforetheloveforplayingisestablished.

Passage2

Shouldapersonmakeanimportantdecisionalone?

　　Apersonshouldnevermakeanimportantdecisionalone,importantdecisionsshouldbewellthoughtout.Peoplewhoknowyouwell,knowwhatisbestforyou,andclosetoyoucangiveyougoodadvice,giveyouadifferentperspective,orsharetheirownexperience.

　　WhenIhaddifficultydecidingwhichclassestotakeincollage,Italkedtomyteachersandadvisors,theyhadtheknowledgeandexpertisetohelpmedeterminewhichclasseswerethebestonestotakeformyfuturecareer.Withouttheiradvice,Imighthavechosenunsuitablecourses.

　　Incollage,IhadconvincedmyselfthatIwasnotgoodenoughtoactintheschoolplay.Therefore,Idecidednottoauditioneventhoughdramahadalwaysbeenmypassion.Thedayoftheaudition,afriendofmineaskedmewhyIwasnotauditioning.WhenItoldherIdidnotfeelIwasgoodenough,shewasshocked,shewasabletoprovidemewithanotherperspectiveonmyselfandmytalents.Irethoughtmydecisionandtriedout….andgotaleadintheplay.

　　LastyearwhenIwastryingtodecidewhetherornotIshouldstudyoverseas,Italkedtomyfriend.ThiswasthebestthingIcouldhavedone.ThiswasabigdecisionformebecauseIhadneverbeenoverseasonmyownandIwasnotsureifIcoulddoit.Shehadstudiedoverseasthepreciousyear.ShetoldmeaboutthechallengesandopportunitiesImightencounterandhelpedmemaketherightdecision.Iwentanditwasamazing.

　　WheneverIamfacedwithanimportantdecision,IseekadvicefromotherssothatIamwell-informedandhavethebenefitoftheirperspectiveandexperience.

Passage3

Myopiniononadvertisement

　　Advertisementsappeareverywhereinmodernsociety.Therearemanywaystoadvertiseandadscomeindifferentforms.Newspapersandbillboardscarryadvertisements;someproductsareannouncedonTVandradiowhichhaveawideaudience.Advertisingisabigindustryandmanyagenciesaresetupforfurnishavarietyofservicesforit.

　　However,advertisingisnotwelcomesometimes.AmostirritatingthingistowatchadvertisementsbeforeandduringfilmsonTV.Therearesomanyofthemthattheymakeyouforgetwhatyouaresittingtherefor.Theironicalthingisthatadvertisementsofonetypeofthingsareoftenshownoneafteranothersothatyouareconfusedastowhichproductyoushouldchoose.What’smore,advertisingisnotalwaystruthful.Theadvertisersexaggeratethebenefitsofthemerchandisetheywanttosellinordertogainmoreprofits.Thustheconsumerfallsvictimtosuchadvertising.

　　Althoughtherearedisadvantagesofads,wecannotforgettheadvantagesandtheconveniencestheybringtous.First,bytellinguswheresomethingisavailable,theymaysaveusmoneyandtime.Theyguideusinfindingsuitablejobsandotherinformationaswell.Secondly,awiderangeofactivitiesandinstitutionsreceivefinancialsupportthroughadvertising.Withoutthissupportwewouldhavetopaymuchmorefornewspapersandsportsgames.Thirdly,perfectadvertisementsevenprovideentertainment.Aconsiderableamountofeffortgoesintotheirproduction.Soinmostcasesthephotographyistrulyartistic,theslogansaregenuinelywitty,andthesituationsarereallyfunny.

　　Generallyspeaking,advertisementshavebecomeoneofthemostauthoritativevoicesspeakingtoustoday.Letusmakeourlifeeasierbylearningtochooseproperads,andbethemasterofadvertisements,nottheirsalve.

Passage4

Livinginuniversitydormitoriesorapartmentsinthecommunity?

　　Ithinkitisbetterforcollegestudentstoliveoncampusduringtheirfirsttwoyears,andthenmoveintoanapartmentforoff-campuslife,whilejuniorsandseniorsneedtheindependenceofoff-campuslife.Student’sneedschangeoverfouryears,sotheirhousingshouldtoo.

　　Livingon-campusmakesiteasiertogetorientedtothewaythingsaredone.Yougetthewholeuniversityexperience.Plus,youinteractmorewithotherstudents.Thisincludesnotonlyyourroommates,buteveryoneinyourdormitory.Theolderstudentsinthedormitorycanbeabighelpforthenewstudents.Keepingupwithstudiesinyourfirstyearishardenough.Youshouldnothavetoworryaboutfindingyourwayaroundandfiguringouttheuniversitybureaucracy.

　　Livinginthedormitoryalsomakeastudentfeelmoreapartoftheuniversitycommunity.Therearemoreopportunitiesforbecominginvolvedinuniversityactivitiesandnetworkingwithstudentsanduniversityadministration………

　　Livingoff-campus,however,isadefiniteadvantageforolderstudents.Findinganapartment,dealingwithleasesandthelandlord’sregulations,cookingmeals,andfiguringoutbudgetsareallgoodpracticeforlifeaftergraduation.Thiskindofindependencehelpsolderstudentsgrowinadulthood.

　　Off-campushousingalsogivesstudentsabetterperspectiveonwhatisgoingonaroundthem.Campuscanbelikelittleworldsoftheirown.Therearefewchildren