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2.高考读后续写高分技巧

（2018·浙江高考）

阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。

续写的词数应为150左右。

Itwassummer,andmydadwantedtotreatmetoavacationlikeneverbefore.HedecidedtotakemeonatriptotheWildWest.

WetookaplanetoAlbuquerque,abigcityinthestateofNewMexico.WereachedAlbuquerqueinthelateafternoon.UnclePaul,mydad’sfriend,pickedusupfromtheairportanddroveusuptohisfarminPecos.

HiswifeTinacookedusadeliciousdinnerandwegottoknowhissonsRyanandKyle.MydadandIspentthenightintheguestroomofthefarmhouselisteningtothefrogsandwaterrollingdowntherivernearby.Veryearlyinthemorning,UnclePaulwokeusuptohavebreakfast.“Thedaystartsatdawnonmyfarm,”hesaid.Afterbreakfast,IwenttohelpAuntTinafeedthechickens,whilemydadwentwithUnclePaultotakethesheepouttograze（吃草）.IwasimpressedtoseemydadandUnclePaulridinghorses.Theylookedreallycool.

Intheafternoon,IaskedUnclePaulifIcouldtakeahorseride,andhesaidyes,aslongasmydadwentwithme.Iwasn’tgoingtotakeahorseridebymyselfanyway.So,mydadandIputonournewcowboyhats,gotonourhorses,andheadedslowlytowardsthemountains.“Don’tbelateforsupper,”UnclePaulcried,“andkeeptothetracksothatyoudon’tgetlost!

”“OK!

”mydadcriedback.AfterawhileUnclePaulandhisfarmhousewereoutofsight.Itwassopeacefulandquietandthecolorsofthebrownrocks,thedeepgreenpinetrees,andthelateafternoonsunmixedtocreateamagicscene.Itlookedlikeabeautifulwoven（编织的）blanketspreadoutuponthegroundjustforus.

注意:

续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好。

　　Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.__________________

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　　Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.

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练考场审题

Step1:

精准审题　谋篇布局

文体

记叙文

时态

一般过去时

原文分析

第一段:

交代故事的背景。

介绍了度假的原因和地点

第二段:

简单地介绍了旅途

第三段:

对在农场的日常活动的简单介绍

第四段和续写故事的展开有很大的关系。

这一段讲到了如何发生了我和爸爸去骑马的故事。

而续写的内容就是在此基础上展开

写作思路

　　根据第一段所给首句Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.这一句是故事发展的转折点,可从rabbit出现后带来的反应扩展开,可以写马的反应,也可以写人的反应,但要注意与第二段首句相呼应

　　第二段首句是Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.这一句呼应前文UnclePaul的叮嘱——不要误了吃晚饭,可从如何寻路返回农场去写

Step2:

头脑风暴　字字珠玉

（1）美词:

previous;invain;atthepointofdesperation;afaintvoice

（2）佳句

①FrightenedasIwas,Itriedtokeepmybalancetopreventmefromfallingoff.

②Fortunately,minuteslater,thehorsestoppedbeforeariver,outofbreath,andsodidI.

③Whatwecoulddowastogobackalongtheprevioustrackslowly.

Step3:

斟酌词句　妙笔生花

要点1:

这个出其不意的出场让我的马疯狂地跑起来。

一般表达:

Thisunexpectedappearancemademyhorserunwildly.

句式升级（定语从句）

Thisunexpectedappearancefrightenedmyhorse,whichmadeitrunwildly.

要点2:

尽管我很害怕,我努力不（让自己）掉下马来。

一般表达:

AlthoughIwasfrightened,Itriednottofalloffthehorse.

　　句式升级（倒装句）

FrightenedasIwas,Itriedtokeepmybalancetopreventmefromfallingoff.

要点3:

我们只能沿着之前的路慢慢走回去。

一般表达:

Wecouldonlygobackalongtheprevioustrackslowly.

句式升级（主语从句）

我们所能做的只有沿着之前的路慢慢走回去。

Whatwecoulddowastogobackalongtheprevioustrackslowly.

Step4:

衔接过渡　斐然成篇

　　Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.Thisunexpectedappearancefrightenedmyhorse,whichmadeitrunwildly.Itriedmybesttocontrolit,butinvain.FrightenedasIwas,Itriedtokeepmybalancetopreventmefromfallingoff.Fortunately,minuteslater,thehorsestoppedbeforeariver,outofbreath,andsodidI.Atthatmoment,mydadalsocameup.SeeingIwasOK,hewasquiterelieved.Butitwasclearthatwegotlost.

　　Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.Wedidn’tknowwherethefarmhousewas.Whatwecoulddowastogobackalongtheprevioustrackslowly.Butitwasreallydifficultforusinsuchadarksituation.Justaswewereatthepointofdesperation,weheardafaintvoicefromthedistance.“ItmustbeUnclePaul,”Isaid.Sowecriedbackwithexcitement.Finally,UnclePaulsafelybroughtusbackhome.Whatanamazingride!

　　　　　　　　　　　1世纪金榜导学号

　　阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。

续写的词数应为150左右。

AVacationwithMyMother

Ihadaninterestingchildhood.Itwasfilledwithsurprisesandamusements,allbecauseofmymother—loving,sweet,yetabsent-mindedandforgetful.OnestrangefamilytripwetookwhenIwaseleventellsalotabouther.

MytwosetsofgrandparentslivedinColoradoandNorthDakota,andmyparentsdecidedtospendafewweeksdrivingtothosestatesandseeingallthesightsalongtheway.Asthefirstdayofourtripapproached,David,myeight-year-oldbrother,andIunwillinglysaidgood-byetoallofourfriends.Whoknewifwe’deverseethemagain?

Finally,themomentofourdeparturearrived,andweloadedsuitcases,books,games,campingequipment,andatentintothecarandbravelydroveoff.Webravelydroveoffagaintwohourslaterafterwe’dreturnedhometogetthepurseandtraveler’schecksMomhadforgotten.

DavidandIwerealwaysalittlenervouswhenusinggasstationbathroomsifMomwasdrivingwhileDadslept:

“Youstandoutsidethedoorandplaylookout（放哨）whileIgo,andI’llstandoutsidethedoorandplaylookoutwhileyougo.”Ihadterriblepicturesinmymind:

“Honey,wherearethekids?

”“What?

Oh,Gosh...Ithoughttheywerebeingawfullyquiet.”Wewereneveractuallyleftbehindinastrangecity,butweweren’tabouttotakeanychances.

Onthefourthorfifthnight,wehadtroublefindingahotelwithavacancy.Afterdrivinginvainforsometime,Momsuddenlygotagreatidea:

Whydidn’twefindahousewithalikely-lookingbackyardandaskifwecouldsetuptentthere?

DavidandIbecamenervous.Toourgreatrelief,Dadturneddowntheidea.Momnevercouldunderstandourobjections（反对）.Ifastrangefamilyshoweduponherfrontdoorstep,Momwouldhavebeendelighted.Shethinkseveryoneintheworldisasniceassheis.Wefinallyfoundavacancyinthenexttown.

注意:

续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好。

　　Thenextdaywerememberedthebrand-newtentwehadbroughtwithus.

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　　Wedrovethroughseveralstatesandsawlotsofgreatsightsalongtheway.

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【参考范文】

　　Thenextdaywerememberedthebrand-newtentwehadbroughtwithus.Wedecidedtocampalongtheriver.Theviewsthereweresurprisinglybeautiful—thewarmsunshine,thefreshair,thecleanwater.Wesatonthegrass,enjoyingthesplendidnature.However,whenDadwasabouttoputupourtent,hewasdisappointedtofindthatithadbeenleftinthehotel.Well,Dadhadtogobacktofetchittocontinueourcamping.

　　Wedrovethroughseveralstatesandsawlotsofgreatsightsalongtheway.Everytimewegottoanewplace,Momwouldcheeruplikeachild.Shewouldgetoffthecarexcitedly,laughinganddancingaround.Togetherweenjoyedthemodernsightsinthebigcities,thehistoricalbuildingsinthesmalltownsandtheamazingsceneryinnature.Whenwecamebacktothehotelafterthetiringbutexcellentvisit,Momwouldhugusandkissusonourfaces.Howsweetshewas!

Absent-mindedandforgetfulasshewas,sheneverforgottoexpressherlovetous.

阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。

续写的词数应为150左右。

OneweekendinJuly,Janeandherhusband,Tom,haddriventhreehourstocampovernightbyalakeintheforest.Unfortunately,onthewayanunpleasantsubjectcameupandtheystartedtoquarrel.Bythetimetheyreachedthelake,JanewassoangrythatshesaidtoTom,“I’mgoingtofindabetterspotforustocamp”andwalkedaway.

Withnopathtofollow,Janejustwalkedonforquitealongtime.Aftershehadclimbedtoahighplace,sheturnedaround,hopingtoseethelake.Tohersurprise,shesawnothingbutforestand,farbeyond,asnowcappedmountaintop.Shesuddenlyrealizedthatshewaslost.

“Tom!

”shecried.“Help!

”

Noreply.IfonlyshehadnotlefthermobilephoneinthatbagwithTom.Janekeptmoving,butthefarthershewalked,themoreconfusedshebecame.Asnightwasbeginningtofall,Janewassotiredthatshehadtostopforthenight.Lyingawakeinthedark,JanewantedverymuchtobewithTomandherfamily.Shewantedtoholdhimandtellhimhowmuchshelovedhim.

Janeroseatthebreakofday,hungryandthirsty.Shecouldhearwatertrickling（滴落）somewhereatadistance.Quicklyshefollowedthesoundtoastream.Tohergreatjoy,shealsosawsomeberrybushes.Shedrankandateafewberries.Neverinherlifehadshetastedanythingbetter.Feelingstrongernow,Janebegantowalkalongthestreamandhopeitwouldleadhertothelake.

Asshepickedherwaycarefullyalongthestream,Janeh

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