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高中英语高考满分作文
2021年高考英语满分作文
2021年高考全国甲卷
假定你是李华。
你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会,并在英文网站展示。
请你写一封邮件给外国朋友Chris,向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人。
邮件内容包括:
1.阐明写信事由;
2.征求建议;
3.表示感谢。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【满分范文】
DearChris,
WordcamethatourschoolisgoingtoholdaclassmeetingwhosetopicisrelatedtoChinesetraditionalcustoms.BecausethisactivitywillbepresentedontheEnglishwebsite,Isincerelywantyoutooffermesomeadvice.
Asfarasweknow,thereisahugeculturaldifferencebetweenChinaandthewesterncountries.Inordertogetmoreclicks,you’dbettertellmewhichChinesecultureyouwesternersprefer.What’smore,ifIwanttodecoratemywebsitewithsomeChineseelements,whatshouldIdo?
KnowingyouareinterestedinChina,Idobelieveyoucanhelpmesolvethesepuzzles.
Ifpossible,youcanreplytomeassoonaspossible.Iwilltakeyouradviceintoconsideration.Ireallyappreciateyourhelp.
Yours,
LiHua
2021年全国高考乙卷
你校将举办英语演讲比赛。
请你以Besmartonlinelearners为题写一篇发言稿参赛,内容包括:
1.分析优势与不足;
2.提出学习建议。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.题目和首句已为你写好。
【策略分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生以Besmartonlinelearners为题写一篇发言稿参赛。
1.词汇积累
充分利用:
makefulluseof→makethemostof
扩宽,丰富:
broaden→enrich
各种各样:
allkindsof→varietiesof
不完美:
imperfection→defect
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:
Inconclusion,weshouldhaveagoodunderstandingofitsadvantagesanddisadvantagesandfindaproperwaytomakeourstudymoreefficient.
拓展句:
Inconclusion,weshouldhaveagoodunderstandingofitsadvantagesanddisadvantages,findingaproperwaytomakeourstudymoreefficient.
【满分范文】
Besmartonlinelearners
Networklearninghasincreasinglybecomeanimportantmeansforpeopletoacquireknowledgeandsolveproblems.Butbeingsmartonlinelearnershasitsadvantagesanddisadvantages.
Firstofall,assmartonlinelearners,wecanmakefulluseofthemostextensiveeducationalresourcestobroadenthehorizon.Besides,Wecantaketheinitiativeinourstudybyourselveswithouttimeandspacelimit.
Ofcourse,thesedisadvantagesareasfollows.Facedwithallkindsofinformationontheinternet,Wecan'ttellthedifferencebetweenthetrueandthefalse,whichmaybeharmfultoourstudyandlife.Ontheotherhand,onlinelearningitselfhassomeimperfections,makingitdifficultforusnottobeaffected.
Inconclusion,weshouldhaveagoodunderstandingofitsadvantagesanddisadvantagesandfindaproperwaytomakeourstudymoreefficient.
2021年新高考I卷
你校英文报Youth正在庆祝创刊十周年。
请你写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1.读报的经历;2.喜爱的栏目;3.期望和祝福。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式写字答题卡的相应位置作答。
YouthandMe
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【策略分析】
本文是一篇应用文,向校刊Youth表达自己的经历,并送上自己的祝福。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
建立:
found→establish
沮丧的:
upset→depressed
得到:
receive→obtain
赏析:
enjoy→appreciate
2.句式拓展
同义句改写
原句:
Thesestoriescanrelievemystressandbroadenmyhorizon.
拓展句:
Notonlycanthesestoriesrelievemystress,butalsotheycanbroadenmyhorizon.
【满分范文】
YouthandMe
Ithasbeen10yearssinceYouthwasfounded.Inmymemory,itisYouththataccompaniesmethroughmywholehighschool.Whenfeelingdepressed,Ioftenchoosetoenjoythenovelpartwhichincludesalotofimaginativestories.Thesestoriescanrelievemystressandbroadenmyhorizon.Besides,IevensubmittedmyownfictiontoYouth.RefusedasIwas,Istillreceivedsomegreatencouragement,whichgivesmeconfidencetobeawriter.
IdoexpectYouthcanpublishmoreclassicworksandhaveapromisingfuture.
2021年3月天津卷
假设你是晨光中学的李津。
我市为外国友人提供生活信息的某英文网站新增了《最美中华》栏目,请你给该栏目投稿,介绍一个国内你喜欢或去过的地方。
内容包括:
(1)该地方的基本情况(如名称、地理位置等);
(2)该地方的特色(如文化、景点等);
(3)你对该地方的印象和感受。
注意:
(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。
ABeautifulPlaceinChina
March19,2021
ByLiJin
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【策略分析】
本篇书面表达属于说明文,要求给英文网站《最美中华》栏目投稿,介绍介绍一个国内你喜欢或去过的地方。
第一步:
审题
体裁:
说明文
时态:
一般现在时
结构:
总分法
第一段是文章的总起段,说明四川省有很多著名的景点;第二段介绍景点九寨沟和都江堰灌溉工程,第三部分说明你对该地方的印象和感受。
要求:
1.说明四川省有很多著名的景点
①四川的地理位置:
中国西南部
②著名景点:
九寨沟、都江堰灌溉工程
2.介绍景点九寨沟和都江堰灌溉工程
①九寨沟是自然保护区
②给人印象最深的层层叠叠的瀑布和五颜六色的湖泊,有很多珍稀动植物
③都江堰灌溉工程始于2000多年前,现在仍然起着灌溉的作用
3.你对该地方的印象和感受:
九寨沟的美景和都江堰灌溉工程的建造会让你惊叹
第二步:
列提纲(重点词组)
belocatedin;world-famous;placesofinterest;anaturereserve;impressive;multi-levelwaterfalls;haveachancetodo…;rareanimals;scenicspot;datefrom;playanimportantpartin;beamazedby
第三步:
连词成句
(1)SichuanProvinceislocatedinsouthwesternpartofChina.
(2)Itenjoysmanyworld-famousplacesofinterest,suchasJiuzhaigouandDujiangyanIrrigationproject.
(3)JiuzhaigouNationalParkisanaturereserveinthenorthofSichuanProvince.
(4)Whatisthemostimpressiveisitsmanymulti-levelwaterfallsandcolorfullakes.
(5)Walkinginthenaturereserve,youhaveachancetoseerareanimalssuchasgiantpandas,goldenmonkeys.
(6)Therearemanyspeciesofrareplantsprotectedhere.
(7)AnotherfamousscenicspotisDujiangyanIrrigationProject.
(8)Itdatesfromover2,000yearsago.
(9)Itisstillplayinganimportantpartinirrigationtoday.
(10)I’msurethevisitorswillbeamazedbyitsconstruction.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:
连句成篇
1.表递进关系:
whatismore
2.表转折关系:
however
3.表示列举:
suchas,like
【满分范文】
ABeautifulPlaceinChina
March19,2021
ByLiJin
SichuanProvinceislocatedinsouthwesternpartofChina.Itenjoysmanyworld-famousplacesofinterest,suchasJiuzhaigouandDujiangyanIrrigationproject.
JiuzhaigouNationalParkisanaturereserveinthenorthofSichuanProvince.Whatisthemostimpressiveisitsmanymulti-levelwaterfallsandcolorfullakes.What’smore,walkinginthenaturereserve,youhaveachancetoseerareanimalslikegiantpandas,goldenmonkeys.Therearealsomanyspeciesofrareplantsprotectedhere.AnotherfamousscenicspotisDujiangyanIrrigationProject.Itdatesfromover2,000yearsago.However,itisstillplayinganimportantpartinirrigationtoday.
I’msurethevisitorswillbeamazedbythebeautifulsceneryinJiazhaigouaswellastheconstructionDujiangyanIrrigationProject.
2021年1月浙江卷
第一节:
假定你是李华,下周有新西兰学生访问你校,你将作为学生代表致欢迎辞。
请为此写一篇发言稿,内容包括:
1.表示欢迎;
2.介绍活动安排;
3.表达祝愿。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【策略分析】
本文是一篇应用文,要求考生写一篇发言稿,向即将到校的新西兰学生致欢迎辞。
第一步:
审题
体裁:
应用文
时态:
根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构:
总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:
1.表示欢迎;
2.介绍活动安排;
3.表达祝愿。
第二步:
列提纲(重点词组)
onbehalfof;wouldliketo;convey;sincerewelcome;beofsignificance;splendid;beworthyof;appreciate;teachingmethods;canteen;extremelyexpect;unforgettable
第三步:
连词成句
1.Onbehalfofourschool,Iwouldliketoconveymysincerewelcomeforyourvisiting.
2.Atfirst,itisofsignificancetofullyunderstandtheschool.
3.Asscheduled,allofyouwillvisitthemuseum,whichcontainsthesplendidhistoryofourschool.
4.Furthermore,ourclassesareworthyofbeingattended,becauseyoucanappreciatethedifferencesbetweenChineseandwesternteachingmethods.
5.Afterthat,itisatcanteenthatyoucanhaveaspeciallunchwithourstudents.
6.Asmentionedabove,Iextremelyexpectyourcoming.
7.Mayyouhaveanunforgettableexperience.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:
连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:
atfirst
2.表并列补充关系:
Furthermore
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
【满分范文】
Distinguishedguests:
Onbehalfofourschool,Iwouldliketoconveymysincerewelcomeforyourvisiting.
Atfirst,itisofsignificancetofullyunderstandtheschool.Asscheduled,allofyouwillvisitthemuseum,whichcontainsthesplendidhistoryofourschool.Furthermore,ourclassesareworthyofbeingattended,becauseyoucanappreciatethedifferencesbetweenChineseandwesternteachingmethods.Afterthat,itisatcanteenthatyoucanhaveaspeciallunchwithourstudents.
Asmentionedabove,Iextremelyexpectyourcoming.Mayyouhaveanunforgettableexperience.
第二节:
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
Pumpkin(南瓜)carvingatHalloweenisafamilytradition.WevisitalocalfarmeveryOctober.Inthepumpkinfield,Icompetewithmythreebrothersandsistertoseekoutthebiggestpumpkin.Mydadhasarulethatwehavetocarryourpumpkinsbackhome,andastheeldestchildIhaveanadvantage-Icarriedan85-pounderbacklastyear.
Thisyear,itwashardtotellwhethermyprizeortheonechosenbymy14-year-oldbrother,Jason,wasthewinner.Unfortunatelyweforgottoweighthembeforetakingouttheirinsides,butIwasdeterminedtoprovemypoint.Allofuswerehardatworkatthekitchentable,withmymomfilmingtheannualevent.I’munsurenowwhyIthoughtforcingmyheadinsidethepumpkinwouldsettlethematter,butitseemedtomakeperfectsenseatthetime.
Withthepumpkinrestingonthetable,holeuppermost,Ibentoverandpressedmyheadagainsttheopening.AtfirstIgotjammedjustabovemyeyesandthen,asIwentonwithmytask,unwillingtoquit,mynosebrieflypreventedentry.FinallyImanagedtoputmywholeheadintoit,likeacork(软木塞)forcedintoabottle.Iwasabletostraightenupwiththehugepumpkinresting