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英语六级作文范文及解析汇总

2011年6月英语六级作文范文及解析汇总

英语六级作文题目

　　Directions:

Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayonthetopicofCertificateCraze.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:

　　1.现在许多人热衷于各类证书考试

　　2.其目的各不相同

　　3.在我看来

2011年6月英语六级作文范文及评析1

　　PartIWriting

　　Myopiniononcertificatecraze

　　Thegrowingtendencyamongcollegestudentstogetallkindsofcertificateshasnowevolvedintoacraze.Justrandomlyaskastudentwhatheorsheisbusilyengagedindoing,quitepossibly,youwouldgettheanswerthatheorsheispreparingforacertificateofsomekind.So,why’sthecraze?

　　Thereasonbehindthisphenomenoniscommon—theenormouspressureoffindingajob.Facedwithaharshjobmarket,moststudentshavenochoicebuttoseekmorecertificatestoparlaytheirqualifications.Anotherfactoristhatdiplomaandcertificatesstillweighsheavilyintermsofsignifyingone’sability.Forthesakeofincreasingtheiroddsoflandingabetterjob,thestudentsarecompelledtorunfromoneexamtoanother.

　　ThoughIhaveanopenmindtowardthecrazeoncertificates,Isuggestthatstudentsshouldbemorerationalwhenitcomestocertificates,sincetheydonotnecessarilytelltheirability.Instead,theyshouldbemoreinvolvedinlearningandcapabilityboosting,thus,opportunitieswouldcomequitenaturally.

　　文章点评：

　　这是一篇“中等偏上”的学生作文。

本文先对学生的考证热进行简介，引出全篇;接着分析这一现象背后的原因;整体看思路清晰，逻辑严密，行文流畅，句式多变，用语较为地道。

　　本篇亮点表达：

　　Thegrowingtendency…hasnowevolvedinto…

　　bebusilyengagedindoing

　　Thereasonbehind…

　　harshjobmarket

　　havenochoicebutto…

　　parlaytheirqualifications

　　sth.weighsheavilyintermsof…

　　increasingone’soddsof…

　　beinvolvedindoing…

　　becompelledtodo…

　　haveanopenmindtoward…

　　capabilityboosting

　　本文有待提高之处：

　　1.文章结构上，能看得出该同学试图采用议论文的“三段式”（提出问题、分析问题、解决问题）。

逻辑严谨，论证严密;句式表达灵活，用语较为地道。

　　2.微观语言点方面，有个主谓一致的方面的错误（diplomaandcertificatesstillweighsheavily）;有些语句稍显啰嗦，比quitepossibly,youwouldgettheanswerthat…大可简化成you’dmostlikelybetoldthat…更好，意思没有丝毫减损，表达力反而增强许多;另外某些用语多重复，比如job多次出现;为了避免此类现象，文中的theenormouspressureoffindingajob不妨改为theenormouspressureofgettingemployed。

　　从整体看，本篇文章不错，值得参考借鉴，不过用语方面还有待提高。

2011年6月英语六级作文范文及评析2

　　PartIWriting

　　Thejobmarkettodayisincreasinglysophisticated,requiringworkerstohavespecializedknowledgeintheirfields.Asaresult,becomingcertifiedisatrendamongtoday’sjobseekingyouth.Moreandmorepeople,studentsespecially,lookatobtainingcertificationasameanstogettingabetterjoband,therefore,enjoyingbrighterfuture.

　　Thereareasmanycertificatesastherearefieldsofstudy.LawyerswilltaketheLSAT,businessmajorswilltaketheGMATtofurthertheirstudyintheUS,andthosewhostudyaforeignlanguage,likeEnglish,mighttaketheTOEFL,TOEIC,oranynumberofEnglishcertificationexams.

　　Isthisnecessary?

Or,isthe“certificationcraze”justatrendthatwilleventuallypass?

Imyselfhaveobtainedtwodifferentcertifications:

oneinJapanese（N2）andanotherinteachingEnglishasaforeignlanguage（TEFL）.Bothofthesecertificationshavebeenbeneficialingettinggoodjobs.Therefore,itismyopinionthat,trendornot,theresultsofbecomingcertifiedarerealandcanbeinvaluableinopeningupfutureopportunities.

　　作文点评：

　　1.逻辑结构上，本文大体也是按照“提出问题（考证热的现象）”“分析问题（背后的动力）”和“解决问题（个人的观点）”的结构展开。

2.本文的亮点非常多，用语非常地道，用英语思维催动出来的英语文章，才是真正的极品。

相比用中式思维催动出来的英语文章，这篇文章是很美味的，强烈建议大家背诵下来。

大家记得《天龙八部》吗?

鸠摩智用小无相功催动出的招式是敌不过藏经阁里的扫地和尚的。

总之，我们大可不必刻意使用难词难句，其实表意明确，用语地道的文章，就肯定可以拿到高分。

2011年6月英语六级作文范文高分版1

　　Certificatecraze

　　Recentlythephenomenonofcertificatecrazehasbecomeabigconcernofthepublic.Itisalsoanewcrazeintheuniversity,whichseemslikearoutineactivityoncampus,forcertificatesdoplayavitalrolewhenstudentslookforadecentjob.

　　Admittedly,therearedifferentpurposesbehindthisphenomenon.Somepeopleaimatcertificatesbecauseoftheemploymentpressure.Withtheadmissionexpansionofcolleges,agreatmanygraduateshavetofacethefiercecompetitioninthejobmarket.Soitisthecertificatesthatcanmakethemmorecompetitive.However,someothersconsiderallthediplomaandcertificatesimportantstandardsbywhichaperson’sabilitycanbemeasured.Theysparenoefforttogetthecertificatesforthesolepurposeofprovingthattheyarequalifiedinacertainfield.Moreover,therearethosewhojustwanttoenrichtheirlifebypreparingforthecertificatesbecausetheyreallyenjoytheirprogress.

　　Frommypointofview,weshouldbemorerationalwhenitcomestocertificates,sincecertificatesdonotnecessarilyproveone’sability.Beingcrazyingettingcertificationsblindlyisnothingbutwastingtime.Toconclude,weshouldfocusonimprovingourabilitybutnotmerelygettingacertificate.

　　点评：

　　本次六级作文探讨的是考生比较熟悉的话题——高校考证书热;本次试题延续了以往的考试风格，关注点仍然放在与学生息息相关的话题上;从选题角度来说，考生还是比较好把握的。

需要注意的是由于第二部分可能需要列出多点原因，考生在该部分需要注意论述的条理性;此外，在保证句法通顺的前提下，尽可能做到表达的多样化。

　　首先，在考生拿到题目的时候，应该先认真审题，心里大致对接下来文章的安排有一个底。

提起证书热的话，很多考生都会联想到就业压力，学校给予的压力以及学生自身的需求;因此，全文可做如下安排;

　　第一段，考生可以整体阐述一下该话题，陈述下目前存在的考证热现象;

　　第二段，考生可以对考证热背后存在的各种各样的目的进行拓展;比如说由于日益严重的就业压力，以及有的学校时不时给学生灌输的压力;或者是学生自身从身边感受到的一些压力，都可能导致考证热的产生。

　　第三段要求考生对于该现象给出自己的理解，考生应在这里持一种客观的态度。

因为考证本身并不是一种错误，但是考生应当注意从题目“考证热”出发，重点放在“热”字上，对这一现象做出最理性的评述。

综合来讲，本篇文章观点明确，思路清晰;在第二段给出的例证具有代表性;此外，文章中有用到不少的亮点词汇;唯一比较遗憾的是，由于时间和篇幅的限制，论证的展开还未完全挖掘出来，但在如此有限的条件下，可以称得上佳作了。

2011年6月英语六级作文范文高分版2

　　ForagrowingnumberofChinesepeople,themostproductivethingtodowithone'ssparetimeistostudyforsomekindofcertification.Fromlanguagestobusinessskillstoteaching,certificationsactasproofthatyouareskilledinsomethingveryspecific.Moreandmore,aresumewithdegreesandworkexperienceslooksabitboring;certificationsarelikeaccessories–theycompletetheoutfit.

　　Certificationsaccomplishseveralpurposes.First,theyshowemployersthatyou'rediversified;youhavemadeanefforttolearnskillsoutsideofyourmajororoccupation.Also,certificationsshowthatyouareproactive;youdon’tsitaroundinyoursparetime.Instead,you’reconstantlylookingtoimproveyourself.Thisiswhatsetsapplicantsapartfromtherestwhenapplyingforasought-afterposition.

Inmyopinion,certificationsareattractive,butshouldnotbeover-emphasized.Communicationskillsareequallyasimportant,andcanbehonedandstrengthenedwithoutpayingforaclass.Afterall,interviewsareconcernedwithmorethanwhatisonthepaper.

2011年6月英语六级作文范文（新东方版）

　　1.现在许多人热衷于各类证书考试

　　2.其目的各不相同

　　3.我的看法

TheCertificateCraze

　　AlmostnooneinChinahasfailedtonoticethephenomenonthatagrowingnumberofpeopleareenthusiasticaboutpursuingvariouskindsofcertificates.Takingalookaround,onecanfindnumerousexampleswithease.Acommoncaseinpointisthatstudentsspendagreatdealoftimeandenergyattendingagreatvarietyofcertificate-orientedtrainingcoursestoensureabetterscore。

　　Thepurposeofacquiringcertificatesvariesfromindividualstoindividuals.Forstudents,asthejobmarketcompetitionisbecomingincreasinglyfierce,notonlycanacertaincertificateprovetheircapabilities,butalsowillputtheminafavorablepositionintheemploymentmarketandthedevelopmentoftheircareer.Whenitcomestowhite-collaredworkers,morejob-relatedcertificatesoftenguaranteegreateropportunitiesforasalaryraiseandpromotion.What’smore,itisalsoaidealwaytoenhancetheirjobtechniquesandsharpentheircompetitiveness。

Frommyperspective,themeritsofpursuingcertificatesareself-evident.However,weshouldalsobearinmindthatitisthepracticalskills,suchasmanagement,cooperation,communication,ratherthancertificatesthatguaranteeone’saccomplishmentincareer.Accordingly,wemightaswellattachgreatimportancetobothcertificatesandtheimprovementofone’scomprehensiveabilities。

2011年6月六级作文范文高分版（新东方版）

TheCertificateCraze

　　Thereisnodenyingthefactthatithasbecomeaprevailingtrendforpeopletotakepartinvariousexamswiththepurposeofobtainingcertificatesofmanykinds:

thatforCET-4orCET-6,thatforcomputerlevel,thedriver’slicense,etc。

　　Ofcoursepeoplepursuecertificatesforvariouspurposes.Someclaimthatowningthesecertificatescangivethemmoreedgeincompetition.Onemorecertificatemeansabitmorechanceofwinninginthejobmarket.Others,however,merelytakethispracticeasastimulusforthemtostudyorstudyharder.Theyassertthat,byworkingforthosecertificates,theycanbroadentheirhorizonandenrichtheirknowledge。

Personally,Ibelievethatoneshouldchoosetolearnwhatheorshetrulylikesorreallyneeds,insteadofmerelyworkingforsomecertificates.Asforme,Ishallfocusmyenergyonafewfields,forIbelieveconcentrationofattentionandenergyisthekeytosuccess.Besides,keeninterestisthestrongestmotivationforstudy.Tobespecific,IwouldliketolearnkungfuandBeijingOperainmysparetime.Imayattendsomerelevanttestsandbeawardedcertaincertificates,buttheyarejustanaturalresultofmystudy,insteadofmymotivation。

2011年6月18日六级考试真题作文优秀范文（文都）

2011年6月18日六级考试真题作文优秀范文

　　Directions:

Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayonthetopicofCertificateCraze.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:

　　1.现在许多人热衷于各类证书考试

　　2.其目的各不相同

　　3.在我看来

　　CertificateCraze

　　Inrecentyears,togetacertificatehasbecomeahottopicamongpeople，especiallyamongtheyoungandheateddebatesarerightontheirway.

　　Anumberoffactorscouldaccountfortheproblem,butthefollowingarethemostcriticalones.Collegestudentsingrowingnumbersarebeginning