高考英语书面表达讲解(示范课课件).ppt

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Welcometomyclass!

高三2部杨晓玉,Welcometomyclass!

高三2部杨晓玉,Howtomakeyourwritingbetter?

让你的作文起来,“亮”,Whatisagoodpieceofwriting?

1.neatwriting书写,2.content内容,3.structure结构,4.language语言,Goodfirstimpression,Wellorganizedandsmoothlydeveloped,Everythingrequiredincluded,NoChinglishNoGrammaticalmistakesUsegoodwordsandmoresentencepatterns,一，改变句子的开头方式,二，句型转换,A.合并为简单句,把其中一句改为分词短语,把其中一句改为介词短语,B.合并为复合句,三，避免只使用一两个句式，要灵活运用诸如倒装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语、with复合结构等.,四，注意使用高级词汇代替一些单词，以增加文采。

Task1:

Makeyourlanguagebetter,一.改变句子的开头方式，不要一味地都是主语开头，接着是谓语、宾语，最后再加一个状语。

可以把状语置于句首.,2.Theboyisveryhungryandhehurriedhome.,Hungry,theboyhurriedhome.,Task1:

Makeyourlanguagebetter,1.Thevolleyballplayerspracticedveryhardtowinthematch.,Towinthematch,thevolleyballplayerspracticedveryhard.,二.Transformationofsentencesinwriting（写作中的句型转换）,A.合并为简单句,1.把其中一句改为分词Hehadfinishedsupper.Hewentouttohaveawalkthen.,Havingfinishedsupper,hewentouttohaveawalk.,2.把其中一句改为介词短语Hewasbroughtin.Hishandsweretiedbehindhisback.,Hewasbroughtinhishandstiedbehindhisback.,with,B.合并为复合句1.TheChineseartistsweretoperformherethatnight.Thenewscheeredeveryoneofus.（同位从）,ThenewsthattheChineseartistsweretoperformherethatnightcheeredeveryoneofus.,2.Inrecentyears,Beijinghasbeenadvancingveryfast.Allthesemakepeopleslivesconvenient,pleasantandcolorful.（非限制定从）,which,Inrecentyears,Beijinghasbeenadvancingveryfastmakespeopleslivesconvenient,pleasant,三.在整篇文章中，避免只使用一两个句式，要灵活运用以下句型：

倒装句,强调句,主从复合句,分词状语,With复合结构,.,感叹句,1.Thoughheiswealthy,heworkshard.,Wealthyasheis,heworkshard.,Inspiteof/Despitehiswealth,heworkshard.,2.Hedidntgetupuntil7oclock.,Itwasnotuntil7oclockthathegotup.,Notuntil7oclockdidhegetup.,3.Itisnicetohearfromyouagain.,Hownicetohearfromyouagain!

2.Ihadagoodidea.,Agoodideaoccurredto/struck/cameto/hitme.,Icameupwithagoodidea.,注意使用词组、习语谚语、表强调的词来代替一些单词，以增加文采。

四.use“complicated/advancedwords”,1.Illthankyouifyouthinkaboutmyapplication,Illappreciateitifyoucantakemyapplicationintoconsideration.,一，改变句子的开头方式,二，句型转换,A.合并为简单句,把其中一句改为分词短语,把其中一句改为介词短语,B.合并为复合句,三，避免只使用一两个句式，要灵活运用诸如倒装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语、with复合结构等.,四，注意使用高级词汇代替一些单词，以增加文采。

Task1:

Makeyourlanguagebetter,Task2:

Makeyourstructurebetter文章结构,1.Inconclusion,weshouldtakeintoaccounttheproblem.（结论）2.Imagainstsmokingforthefollowingreasons.First,itsharmfultooneshealth.Second,itsawasteofmoneytobuycigarettes.Lastbutnotleast,itcausesairpollution.（顺序）3.Inadditiontothebeautifulscenery,touristscanenjoyavarietyofactivities.（递进）,2.有效使用，过渡自然，连贯通顺，使文章结构紧凑。

1.通常使用段式。

三,连接词,A.Second,twentyyearsago,teenagerslistenedtomusicwithtaperecorders.Differently,todayweusemp3,mp4andevenmp5whichareeasytotake.B.Anotherchangeisincommunication.Insteadofwritingletters,teenagersnowadayspreferwritinge-mailsorcallingtokeepintouchwithfriends.C.First,teenagersoftwentyyearsagolearnfromLeiFengandZhangHaidi,whilenowweconsiderBillGatesandasourrolemodels.D.Whatgreatchangestheyare!

E.Greatchangeshavetakenplaceinteenagerslifeduringthepasttwentyyears.rightorder:

_,ECABD,Example:

国外某网站举办新的一轮网上讲座活动，正面向全球中学生征集话题。

假设你是新华中学的学生李华，经常访问该网站。

现请你用英文给该网站发送一封电子邮件，向其推荐话题。

内容包括:

自我介绍写信目的话题：

我们应该感恩（thankful）.推荐理由预祝活动成功注意：

1.词数100左右;2.邮件格式已为你给出；3.邮件出不能出现本人信息；4.在答题卡上作答。

MynameisLiHua.IamastudentandIstudyinXinHuaMiddleSchool.Ioftenvisityourweb,andfromitIknowyouarefindingthemesfromstudentsallovertheworld.Now,IwritethisletterbecauseIwanttorecommandatheme.Weshouldbethankfulisagoodtopic.Ourfatherandmotherthrowthickandthinraiseus,weshouldbethankfultothem.Ourteachersteachushowtostudy,leadingalotofknowledgeintoourhead.weshouldthanktothem.asaChinese,weshouldbethankful,becausewherethereisthankful,thererehopestomaketheworldbetter,andwithathankfulheart,wecanrealizehowbeautifullifeis.Ireallyhopeyoucanchoosemytheme.Iwishtheactivitywillhaveansuccessfulend.,As,lookingfortopics,recommend,topic,topic,throughthickandthin,thankfulness,分,16,1.MynameisLiHua.IamastudentandIstudyinXinHuaMiddleSchool.,2.Ioftenvisityourweb,andfromitIknowyouarelookingfortopicsfromstudentsallovertheworld.,IamLihua,astudentfromXinHuaMiddleschool.,Makethesentencesbetter!

Ioftenvisityourwebsite,whereIgotthenewsthatyourelookingfortopicsfromstudentsallovertheworld.,（同位语）,（定从+同位从）,1.Weshouldbethankfulisagoodtopic.2.Ourfatherandmotherthroughthickandthinraiseus,weshouldbethankfultothem.3.Ireallyhopeyoucanchoosemytopic.4.Iwishtheactivitywillhaveasuccessfulend.5.Withathankfulheart,wecanrealizehowbeautifullifeis.6.Now,IwritethisletterbecauseIwanttorecommendtopic.,Haveatrytomakethesentencesbetter!

ourshowtime,Now,Letscheckwhetherourwritinghasbeenbetter?

我们的文章亮起来了么？

ImLihua,astudentfromXinHuaMiddleSchool.Ioftenvisityourwebsite,whereIgotthewonderfulnewsthatyourelookingfortopicsfromstudentsallovertheworld.Here,Imwritingtorecommendone.Inmyopinion,thatweshouldbethankfulisagoodidea.Firstly,itisourparentswhobroughtusupthroughthickandthin,soweshouldthankthem.Besides,weshouldthankourteachers,forwecouldntbewhowearenowwithouttheirhardwork.Whatsmore,thankfulnessisalsoourtraditionalChinesevirtue.Wherethereisthankfulness,therearehopestomaketheworldbetter.Onlywithathankfulheart,canwefullyrealizehowbeautifullifeis.Idappreciateitifmytopicwillbechosen.Wishtheactivityagreatsuccess.,24-25分,TipsinyourdailyEnglishlearning:

1.Collectgoodwords/phrases/sentences;2.Readmore;3.Practicemakesperfect;4.Beconfidentanytime.,HomeworkHaveatry!

每年12月你们学校都要举行为期一个月的体育节，在今年体育节来临之际，请给学校体育节组委写一封信，表达你对体育节的看法和建议。

主要内容如下：

1推荐至少两项活动；2说明开展这些活动的理由；3谈谈你对体育节的看法；注意：

1词数不少于120个2可适当发挥适当想象，增加细节，以便行文连贯。

writingsteps写作六部曲,step1topicexploring审题,step2wording构词,step3sentencemaking成句,step4essaywriting成篇,step5checking修订,step6copying藤抄,HomeworkHaveatry!

每年12月你们学校都要举行为期一个月的体育节，在今年体育节来临之际，请给学校体育节组委写一封信，表达你对体育节的看法和建议。

主要内容如下：

1推荐至少两项活动；2说明开展这些活动的理由；3谈谈你对体育节的看法；注意：

1词数不少于120个2可适当发挥适当想象，增加细节，以便行文连贯。

三段式,总,inbrief,分,indetail,总,inbrief,写信目的,内容123（列举理由）,谈谈你的看法和建议,Attention,1.格式2.人称3.时态4.要点5.语法6.字数7.书写,Doyou,includeenoughinformation?

useproperlinkingwords?

makeanyspellingorgrammarerrors?

Isyourhandwritingclearenoughtoread?

check,Romeisnotbuiltinoneday.,Practicemakesperfect!

Mayyousucceed!

Thankyou！