15年考研英语大作文范文.docx

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15年考研英语大作文范文

PartB

　　52.Directions:

　　Writeanessayof160-200wordsbasedonthefollowingdrawing.Inyouressayyoushould

　　1）describethedrawingbriefly

　　2）explainitsintendedmeaning,and

　　3）giveyourcomments

　　YoushouldwriteneatlyonANSWERSHEET.（20points） 

1.推导图画寓意

手机的出现给生活带来了巨大的变化，对人际交往的负面作用逐渐呈现，如何抵制这样的影响是现代人需要关注的问题。

2.罗列关键词

tablen.餐桌dishn.菜

seatv.坐playwithphones玩手机

smartphone智能手机

face-to-facecommunication面对面交流

contactinreallife真实生活中的交流

3.优秀范文赏析

手机时代的聚会

【参考范文】

Fourfriendsgettogethertohaveadinner.What’sweirdisthatthefourappeartobestrangertoeachother,nottalkingwithfriendsseatedbesidebuttotallyindulginginsmartphones.

Thepicturerevealsatypicalsceneformodernpeople.Wheneverpeoplehaveachancetorelax,theywillfishoutphonestoplayforawhile.Thewarmface-to-facecommunicationwhichwastakenforgrantedhasbeenviolentlyruinedbysmartphonesandbecomesaluxury.Itischallengingorevenimpossibleformanypeopletokeepconcentrationonface-to-facecommunication.Asthequalityofemotionalinteractionbetweenpeoplesufferanannoyingdramaticdeterioration,moreandmorepeoplearriveatanapprovalthatpeopleshouldshutdownmobilephoneswhenbeingwithfriendsorrelatives.Unfortunately,itisonlyatheoreticalopinion.Fewpeopleapplyit.

Thesmartphoneisreallythemostcontroversialmoderninvention,bringingenjoyablerelaxationandgreatconvenienceononehandandcausingproblematicphoneaddictionandconsequentinterpersonalisolationontheotherhand.Rationalattitudeshouldbepaidtothemobilephone.Weshouldnotsquanderonalifelessmachinethelimitedandprecioustimewithfriendsandrelatives.Dueimportanceshouldbeattachedtothecontactinreallife.

批判词汇：

weird，indulgein,

beviolentlyruinedby,impossible,

sufferanannoyingdramaticdeterioration,

unfortunately,controversial,problematicaddiction,

interpersonalisolation,

squandertimeon...,

takearationalattitudeto,

holdarationalattitudetoward,

attachdueimportancetosth.

[精彩句式]

1.What’sweirdisthatthefourappeartobestrangertoeachother,nottalkingwithfriendsseatedbesidebuttotallyindulginginsmartphones.

句子成形步骤：

1）写出简单句

Thefourseemnottoknowabouteachother.

Theydon’ttalkwithothers.

Theyonlyplaywithsmartphones.

Itisweird.

2）整合简单句

Itisweirdthatthefourseemnottoknowabouteachother,becausetheydon’ttalkwithothersandonlyplaywithsmartphones.

3）增加表达精确性和美感

What’sweirdisthatthefourappeartobestrangertoeachother,nottalkingwithfriendsseatedbesidebuttotallyindulginginsmartphones.

2.Asthequalityofemotionalinteractionbetweenpeoplesufferanannoyingdramaticdeterioration,moreandmorepeoplearriveatanapprovalthatpeopleshouldshutdownmobilephoneswhenbeingwithfriendsorrelatives.

句子成形步骤：

1）Thequalityofcommunicationdeclines.

Peoplearewithfriendsorrelatives.

Peopleshouldshutdownmobilephones.

Moreandmorepeopleagreeaboutit.

2）整合简单句

Asthequalityofcommunicationdeclines,moreandmorepeopleagreethatpeopleshouldshutdownmobilephoneswhentheyarewithfriendsorrelatives.

3）增加表达精确性和美感

Asthequalityofemotionalinteractionbetweenpeoplesufferanannoyingdramaticdeterioration,moreandmorepeoplearriveatanapprovalthatpeopleshouldshutdownmobilephoneswhenbeingwithfriendsorrelatives.

3.Thesmartphoneisreallythemostcontroversialmoderninvention,bringingenjoyablerelaxationandgreatconvenienceononehandandcausingproblematicphoneaddictionandconsequentinterpersonalisolationontheotherhand.

句子成形步骤：

1）写出简单句

Thesmartphoneiscontroversial.

Thesmartphonecanmakepeoplerelaxed.

Thesmartphonebringsconvenience.

Thesmartphonewillmakepeopleaddicttothephone.

Theaddictiontothephonecausesinterpersonalisolation.

2）整合简单句

Thesmartphoneiscontroversial,whichcanmakepeoplerelaxed,bringconveniencebutwillmakepeopleaddicttothephone,whichcausesinterpersonalisolation.

3）增加表达精确性和美感

Thesmartphoneisreallythemostcontroversialmoderninvention,bringingenjoyablerelaxationandgreatconvenienceononehandandcausingproblematicphoneaddictionandconsequentinterpersonalisolationontheotherhand.

consequentadj.随之发生的；作为结果的必然的

抵挡作文进阶演练

低档作文（7分）

修改范例（15分）

Thepictureabovedepiction1thattwogirlandtwoboy2sit3nearatablehaving4adinnertogether.However,allthem5looking6masseges7intheirmobiles8insteadofeatandtalk9.Howhorribleitis!

Thepictureabovedepicts1thattwogirlsandboys2aresitting3nearatabletohave4adinnertogether.However,allofthem5arechecking6messages7intheirmobilephones8insteadofeatingdishesandtalkingtoeachother9.Howhorribleitis!

Thepicturereflect8whathappening9morefreqently10innowsociety11.It1send2aprofoundmassege3thatyoung4areaddict5tophone6forgetsometimeforrealperson7.They12rather13talkingorplaying14withstranges15ontheinternetthantalkingorplaying16withfriendsorfamilies17.Thisisthehightechnologycanbeadoublesword.18Ononehand,itgivegreatconvenientfor19lifeandwork,butontheotherhand,itgetpeoplefurtherandfurtheraway20.

Thepicture1conveys2aprofoundmessage3thatyoungpeople4areaddicted5tophones6andforgettosparesometimetocommunicatewithrealpersons7.Whatthepicturereflects8happens9morefrequently10intoday’ssociety11.Youngpeople12wouldrather13talkorplaywith14strangers15ontheinternetthando16withfriendsorfamilymembers17.Themobilephonereallyisadouble-edgedsword.18Ononehand,itbringsgreatconvenienceto19lifeandwork,butontheotherhand,itmakespeopledistantfromeachother20.

Ithinkitbestifweuse1ourphone2properandwise3.Whatscreendisply4neverreplace5thefeel6amonghuman7.

Ithinkweshoulduse1ourphones2properlyandwisely3.Whatisdisplayedonthescreen4canneverreplace5thewarmcommunication6amongpeople7.

　　Unfoldedintheelaboratelypaintedcartoonisathought-provokingscene:

fouryoungstersaresittingtogethertohavetheirgatheringfeast.However,muchoftheirattentionhasbeenattachedtotheirmobilecellphones,totallyforgettingwhattheyaregatheringfor.Justasisputinthecaptionofthiscartoon,itistypicallya“Dinnerpartyinmobileera.”

　　Thispictureisnaturallyassociatedwithawide-spreadingphenomenonincontemporarysociety—toomuchaddictiontothemobilephones.Indeed,wehaveallsteppedintoaneraofgettingandstayingintouchwithothersthroughtelecommunication.Eachofusseemsclosetoanotherunderthiscircumstance,butwehavetolookattheside-effectofthetechnology:

thehigh-techelectronicproductsalsocutofftheface-to-facecommunication.Tobespecific,inourdailylife,it’snotuncommonthatonbusesorsubways,orwalkingontheroad,weareallplayingwithphonesorpadsforrecreation,suchasreadingnovels,watchingvideosormovies,surfingtheInternet,andsoon,eventhoughwetravelwithourfriends,parentsorlovedone.

　　Evidently,weshouldtakearationalattitudetowardsthisissue,buthow?

Themediashouldpromotetheawarenessofhealthylifestyleamongthepublic,especiallytheyoung.Meanwhile,socialactivities,eitherincommunitiesoroncampuses,shouldbelaunchedsothatpeoplecangetbacktotherealworld.