托福独立写作满分范文30篇.doc

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Whichonedoyouprefer,tosolveproblemsonyourownexperienceandknowledge,ortoaskothersforadvice?

Asknowledgeandexperienceserveastwimtowersinproblem-solving,oneisoftenpresentedwithtwomajorpathsthatpavethewayforfinalfulfillment,eitthertowrackhisbrain,justlikewhathappenedtoNeuton,siitingformanyyearsunderanappletreeandeventuallyfiguringoutondofthegreatestuniversalrulesthatgovernthewholeglobe,ortoseekforothers’widsomthroughtheiradvice,justasinthecaseofBenjininFranklin,gatheringgreatmindsunderoneroofandthenestablishingamostworld-renownlibray.Bothwayswork.Whenapracticalgoalisinvolved,however,BenjiminFranklinmaybestberegarededasarolemodelinthisrespectandaskingpeopleforadviceoftenturnouttobetheprimealternative.

Experienceandknowledgeborrowedorlearnedfromothers’advicecontributegreatlytoeffectivenessandeffeciencyforagoal-accomplishment.Notallexperienceandknowledgerelatedtoproblem-solvingcanbeobtainedbypersonaleffortaloneduetolimitationsofmindandcapabilitiesofeachindividual.Asinglethoughtinsomeone’smindis,moreoftenthannot,farlessshiningcomparedwithgroup’swisdom.Thatexplainsthefamousoldsayingthatoneseesfurtherwhenstandingupontheshoulders’ofpastgreatgiants;thatexplainswhyagreatleaderisalwayswithgreaterminds;thatalsoexplainswhyteamworkincorperationishighlyemphasizedinthe21stcentury.Brainstormandexchangeofideasbetweendifferentthoughtsneverfailtoenhancecapabilitiesofeachindividulainvolved,ateam,acompany,aninstitution,acountry,oreventheentireglobalvillage.

Askingothers’adviceinsteadofgettingeverythingdoneonone’sownpromotesdemocracyandcommunicationtoo.Intermsofdemocracy,itisnecessarytogiveothersrightsandchancestospeaksincetheproblemmayconcernthemindifferentways,andtheirsayinginturnreflectsourrespecttowardfreedomofspeechaswellastheirwisdom.Intermsofcommunication,ideaexchangesometimesfocusesmorethansolutions,andherebybettermutualunderstandingaboutperspectives,principles,praticalitiesandpersonalitiesofeachother.

Admittelyturningtoothersforhelpandsuggestionbynomeansreferstoabsoluteandirresponsibledependence.Considerationupondifferentthoughtsandideasbroadensourmind,enlargesourvision,furthersunderstanding,enhancesmoreeffectiveandefficientbrainstorm,andstressesmutualrespectingroupsandcommunities,whichundoubtedlygivesrisetobetter,ifnotthebestsolutions.AsisparaphrasedfromJohnFKenedy,brainstormed,thereislittlewecannotdowhiledivided,thereislittlewecando.

托福写作辅导：

托福考试满分作文欣赏

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CaseofBenjininFranklin,gatheringgreatmindsunderoneroofandthenestablishingamostworld-renownlibray.Bothwayswork.Whenapracticalgoalisinvolved,however,BenjiminFranklinmaybestberegarededasarolemodelinthisrespectandaskingpeopleforadviceoftenturnouttobetheprimealternative.

Experienceandknowledgeborrowedorlearnedfromothers'advicecontributegreatlytoeffectivenessandeffeciencyforagoal-accomplishment.Notallexperienceandknowledgerelatedtoproblem-solvingcanbeobtainedbypersonaleffortaloneduetolimitationsofmindandcapabilitiesofeachindividual.Asinglethoughtinsomeone'smindis,moreoftenthannot,farlessshiningcomparedwithgroup'swisdom.Thatexplainsthefamousoldsayingthatoneseesfurtherwhenstandingupontheshoulders'ofpastgreatgiants;thatexplainswhyagreatleaderisalwayswithgreaterminds;thatalsoexplainswhyteamworkincorperationishighlyemphasizedinthe21stcentury.Brainstormandexchangeofideasbetweendifferentthoughtsneverfailtoenhancecapabilitiesofeachindividulainvolved,ateam,acompany,aninstitution,acountry,oreventheentireglobalvillage.

Askingothers'adviceinsteadofgettingeverythingdoneonone'sownpromotesdemocracyandcommunicationtoo.Intermsofdemocracy,itisnecessarytogiveothersrightsandchancestospeaksincetheproblemmayconcernthemindifferentways,andtheirsayinginturnreflectsourrespecttowardfreedomofspeechaswellastheirwisdom.Intermsofcommunication,ideaexchangesometimesfocusesmorethansolutions,andherebybettermutualunderstandingaboutperspectives,principles,praticalitiesandpersonalitiesofeachother.

Admittelyturningtoothersforhelpandsuggestionbynomeansreferstoabsoluteandirresponsibledependence.Considerationupondifferentthoughtsandideasbroadensourmind,enlargesourvision,furthersunderstanding,enhancesmoreeffectiveandefficientbrainstorm,andstressesmutualrespectingroupsandcommunities,whichundoubtedlygivesrisetobetter,ifnotthebestsolutions.AsisparaphrasedfromJohnFKenedy,brainstormed,thereislittlewecannotdowhiledivided,thereislittlewecando.

托福写作辅导：

托福考试满分作文欣赏（3）

Aftertheycompletetheiruniversitystudies,somestudentsliveintheirhometowns.Othersliveindifferenttownsandcities.Whichdoyouthinkisbeterr?

Givereasonsforyouranswer.

Aftertheycompletetheiruniverrsitystudies,somestudentspreferrtoliveintheirhometownswhileotherschoosetoliveindifferenttownsorcities.Everybodyhashisownreasonsforhispreference.Aftermygraduation,Iwillgobackandliveinmyhomecity.Ihavemadethisdecisionbecauseofthefollowingreasons.

Firstly,myhomecityisabigcitythatcanofferalot.Thereareplentyofopportunitiesforwork,manybiglibrariesforstudies,severaldifferrentmusiumsforvisit,andnumerouscinemas,theatersandcentersforentertainment.WhenIgobackthere,IwillhavenodifficultyinfindingajobsuitableformeandIcanmakeuseofallthefacilitiesavailablethere.

Secondly,ifIgobacktomyhomecity,Icanlookaftermyparents.ItakethisintoconsiderationbecauseIamtheironlychildandtheyarenowweakandgettingoninage.IfIliveinthesamecitywiththem,Icanvisitthemveryoftenandhelpthemwheneveritisnecessary.

Thirdly,ifIliveinmyhomecity,Iwillhavealotoffriends,schoolmatesandrelativestovisitandtoturntoforhelpwhenIneed.Ofcourse,IcouldgetacquaintedwithmanypeopleandmakemanyfriendsifIweretogotoliveinastrangeplace,butthattakestime.IfIgobacktomyhomecity,everybodywillbewaitingformeandIwillbeabletosettledowncomfortablywithoutanytroubleandwasteoftime.

Inshort,mychoiseisbasedonacarefulconsiderationofmyhomecityandmyfamily.Ithinkitisabetterorsensiblechoice;inacertainsense,itisamust.

Neighborsarethepeoplewholivenearus.Inyouropinion,whatarethequalitiesofagoodneighbor?

Usespecificdetailsandexamplesinyouranswer.

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Ifyouhaveagoodneighbor,youarealuckyperson.Youhavesomeonewhocaresaboutyourneedsandyourproperty,whoishelpfulinthelittleday-to-daysituationsthatcomeup,andwhoissupportiveintimesofcrisis.

Agoodneighborissomeonewho,forinstance,understandsthatyourchildrenmayoccasionallyrunacrosshislawn,-eventhoughyoutellthemnotto.He'llrealizethatchildrencanbecarelessaboutthingslikethat,andhewon'tmakeabigfussaboutitunlessitbecomesaregularthing.Inthesamevein,heknowsthatyou'llunderstandifsomeofthetrashfromhistrashcansblowsacrossintoyouryard.Inotherwords,heissensitivetotheunintentionalthingsthatcanhappen.Hedoesn'tmakeabigdealaboutthem.

Agoodneighborisalsorespectfulofyourproperty.Forexample,sheasksyourpermissionbeforedoinganythingthatinterfereswithwhat'syours.Thismeansshewouldn'tplantahugetreeinbetweenyourhouseswithoutaskinghowyoufeltaboutit.Ifshewantedtoputupafence,shewouldletyouknowfirst.Shemightworkwithyoutodecidewhereitshouldbeplaced.Maybethetwoofyouwouldevensplitthecost.

Agoodneighborwouldlendyousomemilkifyouranout.She'dgiveyouaridetoworkifyourcarwasbroken,andletyourchildrenstayatherhouseintheeveningifyougotstuckworkingovertime.Youwoulddothesameforher.Bothofyouwouldhelpmaketheother'slifeeasier.

Whensomethingreallyawfulhappenstoyou,likeadeathinthefamily,agoodneighborwillvolunteertohelpinanywayhecan.Thiscouldmeansomethingsmall,likemakingsomecasserolestoputinyourfreezertofeedvisitingrelatives.Oritcouldmeansomethingbig,likehelpingyougetthroughthesadnessofthefuneral.

Ithinkonlysomeonewhohasexperiencedabadneighborcanreallyappreciateagoodone!

Agoodneighborcanbeagoodfriend.Heorshecanmakeallthedifferenceintheworldtoyourlife.

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托福考试满分作文欣赏（5）

Somepeopleprefertoeatatfoodstandsorrestaurants.Otherpeopleprefertoprepareandeatfoodathome.Whichdoyouprefer?

Usespecificreasonsandesamplestosupportyouranswer.

Somepeopleliketoeatoutatfoodstandsandrestaurants,whileothersliketopreparefoodathome.Oftenitdependsonthekindoflifestylepeoplehave.Thosewithverybusyjobsoutsidethehousedon’talwayshavetimetocook.Theyliketheconvenienceofeatingout.Overall,though,itischeaperandhealthiertoeatathome.

Whileeatinginrestaurantsisfast,themoneyyouspendcanaddup.WhenIhavedinneratarestaurantwithafriend,thebillisusuallyovertwentydollars.Icanbuyalotofgrocerieswiththatmuchmoney.Evenlunchatafast-foodstandusuallycostsfiveorsixdollarsforoneperson.That’senoughtofeedthewholefamilyathome.

Eatingat