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It'
sverykindofyoutohelpmelearnEnglisheveryday.
HowniceofyoutohelpmelearnEnglisheveryday!
二、转换句型
例:
你女儿的数学成绩很好。
你不必为她担忧。
Yourdaughterisgoodatmath.Youneedn'
tworryabouther.
Yourdaughterdoeswellinmath.Thereisnoneedforyouto,worryabouther.
Howwellyourdaughterdoesinmath!
sunnecessaryforyoutoworryabouther.
写作中常用于转换的三个重点句型:
1.there+be句型
there+be句型也是简单句中的一种常用句型,在作文中经常使用。
在there+be句型中,谓语部分还可以换用thereseems/seemedtobe(似乎有),therehappenedtobe(碰巧有),theremay/mightbe(也许有),theremustbe(肯定有),therecan'
tbe(不可能有),
thereoughtto/shouldbe(应该有)等。
例如:
(1)我的家乡经常下雨。
Thereisalotofraininmyhometown.=Itoftenrainsinmyhometown.
(2)今天是星期天。
学校不可能有学生。
It'
sSundaytoday.Therecan'
tbeanystudentsinschool.
(3)操场上碰巧有很多人。
Therehappenedtobealotofpeopleontheplayground.
2.感叹句
感叹句是作文中很有用的一种句型,常见的感叹句有两种。
感叹句型1:
How+形容词或副词十主谓结构+感叹号
感叹句型2:
What+(冠词)+形容词+名词+主谓结构+感叹号
(1)Howbeautifultheparkis!
(2)Howfasttheplayerruns!
(3)Whataninterestingfilm(itis)!
=Howinterestingafilm(itis)!
(4)Whatcoldweather(itis)!
3.强调句型
强调句型也是作文中常用的一种句型,强调句型的结构是:
Itis/was+被强调部分十that/who+原句其他部分+句号。
Theboycleanedtheclassroomyesterday.
(1)Itwastheclassroomthattheboycleanedyesterday.(强调宾语)
(2)It-wastheboywho/thatcleanedtheclassroomyesterday.(强调主语)
(3)Itwasyesterdaythattheboycleanedtheclassroom.(强调状语)
三、转换词语
例1:
杰克是我们学校的学生。
他学习特别努力。
一般:
Jackstudiesinourschool.Hestudiesveryhard.(重复studies)
较好:
Jackstudiesinourschool.Heworkshardathislessons.
例2:
妈妈匆匆忙忙去上班,连早餐都没吃。
Motherwenttowork.Shedidn'
thavebreakfast.
Motherwenttoworkwithouthavingbreakfast.(内部结构紧凑,有一气呵成之感)
例3:
汤姆努力学习中文。
他想在中国找份工作。
TomstudiesChineseveryhard.HewantstofindajobinChina.
TomstudiesChineseveryhardinorderto/soastofindajobinChina.
TomstudiesChineseveryhardwiththepurposeoffindingajobinChina.
段落练笔1
小朋一家有五个人。
他们都有自己的爱好。
他的父母喜欢打羽毛球。
爷爷奶奶喜欢晚饭后散步。
小朋喜欢集邮。
几乎每天晚上,小朋的爷爷奶奶都给他讲故事。
他们过着幸福的生活。
一般表达
Xiaopeng'
sfamilyhasfivepeople.Theyallhavetheirhobbies.Hisparentslikebadminton.Hisgrandparentsliketohaveawalkaftersupper.Xiaopenglikescollectingstamps.Hisgrandparentstellhimastoryalmosteveryevening.Theyliveahappylife.
高级表达
TherearefivepeopleinXiaopeng'
sfamily,includinghim.Allofthemhavetheirownhobbies.Forexample,hisparentslikebadmintonandhisgrandparentsenjoywalkingaftersupper.CollectingstampsisXiaopeng’shobbyandtohisgreatjoy,hisgrandparentstellhimastoryalmosteverydayintheevening.Whatahappylifetheylead!
三大亮点1.主语的表达要多样化。
如:
Allofthem还可用bothofthem,bothhisfatherandmother,theyeachlike,eachofthem
2.谓语的表达灵活。
like,enjoy还可用befondof,goinfor等表达。
3.简单句的句型变换多样。
therebe句型,动名词做主语,感叹句。
还可用倒装句,强调句。
段落练笔2
我们学校是一所新建的寄宿制高中,又大又漂亮,非常现代化。
我以前从未见过如此好的学校。
学校有2000多名学生,150余名老师。
老师待我们既严格又友好。
我们的课堂生动有趣,我们的校园生活丰富多彩。
我爱我们的学校。
一般表达
Ourschoolisanewlybuiltboardinghighschool.Itislargeandbeautiful.Itisquitemodern.Ihaveneverseensuchaniceschoolbefore.Ourschoolhasmorethan2000studentsandmorethan150teachers.Ourteachersarestrictandfriendlytous.Ourclassesarelivelyandinteresting.Ourschoollifeisrichandcolourful.Ireallylikeournewschool.
Ourschoolisanewlybuiltboardinghighschool.Itislargeandbeautiful.Ofcourseitisquitemodern.Totellyouthetruth,neverhaveIseensuchaniceschoolbefore.Therearemorethan2000studentsinourschool.Andourteachers,over150,arestrictbutfriendlytoallof
us.Toourgreatjoy,notonlyourclassesarelivelyandinteresting,butalsoourschoollifeisrichandcolourful.HowIlikeourschool!
亮点:
1.句型多样。
感叹句和倒装句的使用,“从未见过”和“多末热爱”采用感叹句和倒装句的表达
三、运用非谓语动词转换简单句
例1:
这儿的人都喜欢汤姆写的那本小说。
原句:
Allthepeopleherelikethenovel.ItiswrittenbyTom.
转换:
AllthepeopleherelikethenovelwrittenbyTom.(过去分词做定语)
这是一家工厂。
月产成千上万辆小汽车。
Thisisafactory.Itproducesthousandsofcarsamonth.
Thisisafactory,producingthousandsofcarsamonth.(现在分词做状语)
例3:
消防队员及时赶到。
他们对我们帮助很大。
Thefirefighterscamehereintime.Theyhelpedusalot.
Thefirefighters'
cominghereintimehelpedusalot.(动名词做主语)
例4:
我们应该多讲英语。
我们认为这是很重要的。
WeshouldspeakmoreEnglish.Wethinkitisveryimportant.
WethinkitveryimportanttospeakmoreEnglish.(不定式做真正宾语)
例5:
我们应该如何提高我们的英语口语水平?
这是个问题。
HowshouldweimproveourspokenEnglish?
Itisaquestion.
(1)HowtoimproveourspokenEnglishisaquestion.(不定式短语做主语)
(2)ThequestionishowtoimproveourspokenEnglish.(不定式短语做表语)
二、运用非谓语动词转换复合句
这里曾有一家化肥厂,位于城市的南边。
它每夭释放出大量有毒气体,污染环境。
Therewasalargefactory,whichproducedfertilizer.Everydayitgaveoutalotofpoisonousgas,whichpollutedtheenvironment.
Therewasalargefactory,whichproducedfertilizer.Everydayitgaveoutalotofpoisonousgas,pollutingtheenvironment.(现在分词做状语)
当我们赶到校门口时,已经8点了。
我们见到老师时,不得不为迟到而向她道歉。
Whenwegottotheschoolgateitwaseight.Whenwesawourteacher,wehadtosaysorryforourbeinglate.
Whenwegottotheschoolgateitwaseight.Seeingourteacher,wehadtosaysorryforourbeinglate.(现在分词做状语)
我们认为中学生学习一门外语是必要的。
同时我们也认为,中学生掌握一门外语是可能的。
Wethinkitisnecessarythatmiddleschoolstudentsshouldlearnaforeignlanguageandwealsothinkthatitispossiblethattheycanmasterone.
Wethinkitisnecessarythatmiddleschoolstudentsshouldlearnaforeignlanguageandwealsothinkitpossibleforthemtomasterone.(不定式做真正宾语)
由于老师的帮助,我英语进步了。
因为我英语进步了,我相信我能考上更好的大学。
Becausemyteacherhelpsme,myEnglishhasgreatlyimproved.BecausemyEnglishhasgreatlyimproved,I'
msureIwillgotoabetteruniversity.
Withmyteacherhelpingme,myEnglishhasgreatlyimproved.BecausemyEnglishhasgreatlyimproved,I’msureIwillgotoabetteruniversity.
为了赶上同班同学,李东不遗余力地学习。
为了好好学习,他从不玩电脑游戏。
LiDongsparesnoefforttostudysothathecancatchupwithhisclassmates.Heneverplayscomputergamessothathecanlearnbetter.
LiDongsparesnoefforttostudysothathecancatchupwithhisclassmates.Heneverplayscomputergamessoastolearnbetter.(不定式做状语)
TherearealargenumberoftaxidriversinBeijing.Theyservepassengersheartandsoul.TheyplayanimportantpartinthetrafficofBeijing.Theymakesomemoney.Theyworkfromdawntillnight.Oneday,IleftmycellphoneinthetaxiItook.Igotintouchwiththedriver.
Hedrovetomyhomeandgaveitbacktome.Iwasveryexcited.
TherearealargenumberoftaxidriversinBeijing,servingpassengersheartandsoulandplayinganimportantpartinthetrafficofBeijing.Inordertomakesomemoneytosupporttheirfamilies,theyworkfromdawntillnight.Oneday,IgotoutofthetaxiinahurrywithmycellphoneleftinthetaxiItook.Onhearingwhathadhappened,thetaxidriverdrovetomyhomeasfastaspossibleandgavethecellphonebacktome.Seeingmycellphoneagain,Iwastooexcitedtosayaword.
Therearemoreandmoretallbuildingsinbigcities.Theirpricesaregoingupdaybyday.
Ononehand,therearestilllotsofpeople.Theyhavenohousestolivein.Ontheotherhand,
manyapartmentsarehardtobesoldout.Evenifyoubuyanapartment,I'
mafraidyouhaveto
payoffthemoneyyouborrowfromthebank.Youwillworkharddayandnightallyourlife.I
hopeourgovernmenttakestrongmeasurestosolvethehousingproblemandtakecareofthe
people.Theirincomesarelow.
Therearemoreandmoretallbuildingsinbigcities,withtheirpricesgoingupdaybyday.
Ononehand,therearestilllotsofpeoplehavingnohousestolivein.Ontheotherhand,many
apartmentsarehardtobesoldout.Evenifyouhaveboughtanapartment,I'
mafraidyouhave
totrytopayoffthemoneyyouborrowfromthebank,workingharddayandnightallyourlife.
Idohopeourgovernmentcantakestrongmeasurestosolvethehousingproblem,showinggreatconcernforthepeoplewhoseincomesarenothighenough.
参照模式
1.Therewasadiscussionon/about(某方面)…lastweek.Someofusthink(注意时态)that...because...Butothershold(注意时态)quitedifferentopinions.Intheiropinion,…
Thediscussionlastedovertwohours,butwedidn'
tcometoanagreement.
2.Wehadadiscussionon(某方面)…lastWednesday,buttheopinionsare(注意时态)dividedonthequestions.Somethinkthatif…sthwillhappen.What’smore,…Othersinsistthat…becausetheybelievethat...Besides,…
Thediscussionendedwithoutanyresult.Butinmyopinion,…
范文
Recently,ourclasshavehadaheateddiscussionaboutwhethertheBeijingZooshouldbemovedoutofthecity.(引言,提出中心论点)Someofmyclassmatesareinfavourofthemove.(