新东方考研英语暑期课程写作豪华版笔记全录.docx

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新东方考研英语暑期课程写作豪华版笔记全录

新东方考研英语暑期课程·作文·豪华版笔记全录

作文

1、包装

①书写、习惯

②格式（如书信右上角的时间）、结构（两头小、中间大、字数分配50-80-50）

↗长句↖          

③选词造句→短句←交错使用（15句，1/3写长句，30字左右，长句后接一两句短句过渡）

↘难句：

强调句（最好使）

2、货真价实

↗情景文字

①不要跑题（跑题则一半分数以下），审题（三维）→提纲

↘图或表上的信息

②内容衔接（思维跨度不要太大）→总述和概述

↘注意句子完整

③方法多样性

一、大作文

（一）描绘：

描述性语言、可加议论性观点

（二）议述：

作者意图、个人评价

（三）总结（好的：

预期一下未来；坏的：

采取措施防治）/例证

具体讲：

（一）  描绘：

总体背景介绍+细节刻画图或表上的信息

1、背景介绍

例一：

人类克隆（试管婴儿/一个老婆四个一模一样的老公，“谁才是真的？

”）

Theproblemoftheuseofgenetictechnologiesonhumanbeinghas[caused/arousedpublicconcern]/[loomedup/croppedupasaburning/challengingtopic].

例二：

中国青少年犯罪比率上升（表）

Intherecentyears,Chinaexperienced/witnessed/wasplaguedwithanalarmingincreaseinjuveniledelinquency.

例三：

人和社会的发展与环境的协调（寓意图、对比图）

Currently,thetopic/phenomenonofenvironmentversusdevelopmenthasbeeninthelimelight.Nowhereistheclashmoreevident/visiblethaninChina,wherethelargestpopulationconfrontsdeforestation,pollutionandacidrainonarangescale.

2、细节描绘

例：

04年作文题

The（asetof）cartoondepictsavividsceneinwhichanathletedrippingsweatisrushingtotheend.Unquestionably/Undoubtedly/Beyonddoubt,hewinsthegamebutitisnotthekeymessageconveyed/implied/deliveredbythepicture.Apparently/Basically,thestrikingfeatureisthatthereisalinemarkedasboth“thestart”and“theend”,whichmeansaftertheplayercametothefinishing-line,anewraceiswaitingtohim.

另：

对于图表描述不光要用上升下降等词，还要使用比较句型结构。

comparewith/to

…asmuchasthat…

morethan,lessthan

by2000,[thenumberreachthepeak/bottom]/[thelargestnumberappeared].

（二）  议述

引言句+分论点、事实信息罗列

如：

Asamatteroffact,thepurposeofthedrawer/drawingistomakeus[payhigh/moreattentionto…]/[rethink/haveafreshlookat…].

例一：

兼职part-timejob

brainstorming

I.Advantages:

↗pocketmoney

      ①makemoney→followinterest

                          ↘tuitionfees

↗onone’sown

                           ↗life→makefriends

      ②experience             ↘custom,culture

                           ↘work→layasolidfoundationforfuturecareer

                                 ↘befamiliarwithnewfields

II.Disadvantages:

①money:

besoyoungthattheyareboundtobecheated/beinducedtodo…

②experience→scienceandtechnologyaccelerate/speedup→invalid

                         ↘hurt/injury/doharmto/endanger

III.whatshouldwedo?

①asecondlanguage

②computeroperationandapplication

③后果degradeone’sacademicperformance

完整表述：

Acquiringknowledgeatschoolwithoutpracticalworkexperienceislikeworkingononeleg.Occasionally,althoughastudentcouldattainsomeexperience,nevertheless/yetsuchexperiencetoofrequentlyis[validorevenharmful]/[abaneratherthanaboon].Thatistosay,itsdemeritsoutweighmerits.Why?

Thisisnaturalandnecessary.Notonlymaytheaccelerationofscienceandtechnologybringaboutnewtools/skillswitheachpassingday,butalsoourworkcircumstanceswillchangeasthesocietydevelops.Thefactthatcollegestudentsmustgetagoodcommandofasecondlanguageaswellasmastertheoperationandapplicationofcomputerrequiresthemnottodopart-timejob.Iftheytakepart-timejob,theirenergyandtimewillnotbeenoughandtheiracademicwilldegrade.

例二：

出国留学

brainstorming

↗dreamof（doing）

原因（好处）→themerewaytoachievesuccess

                    ↘curriculaarrangement,teachingmethod

                          ↓why?

/how?

/whichchannel?

goodlearningcondition

                           ↓what?

                    up-to-dateteachingequipment

                    first-classresearchfacilities

                    worldfamousprofessors

坏处：

money→tuitionfees          而在国内don’tworryabout↘livingexpense

       communication:

languageandculturalbarrier 而在国内parent’scareandsupportfacilitate

例三：

盗版问题（最新光盘，四元一张；港台歌曲，十元三盒；流行书刊，一律二折）

（乾坤大挪移）Nowadays,theproblemofpiracyhasbeeninthelimelight.Accordingtothecartoonwecouldfindthatbooks,VCDs,tapesandotherhigh-techproductshavebeencopied.Whenanewproductentersintothemarket,weareboundtodiscoverthatitspiratedcounterpartwillsoonswarm/floodintothesamemarket.Neverinthenation’shistoryhastheproblemofpiracybeenmoreseverethannow.

Thereisnodenyingthatpiratedcommoditieshasnotonlyresultedinagreatlosstoproducer/manufacturers,inventorsandwriters,butalsodisturb/haveaconfusioninthemarket.Why?

Inthatthepiratedgoodsoftencostlessthantheoriginalones,theyenjoyaprettygoodsellinginspiteoftheirshoddyquality.Thegenuineones,however/bycontrast,sellpoorly.Acurrentinvestigation/study/report/survey/pollindicates/manifests/revealsthatconsumersspendapproximately￥20billiononthepiratedcounterpartsinsteadofthegenuineonesannually.Inaddition,suchpiratedproduct,especiallybooks,willdoharmto/endangertheproducers’reputationduetotoomanymisprinting.

（三）  结论

另：

养宠物话题

Withthequickeningpaceofmodernlifeandfiercecompetitioninthesociety,manypeoplefeelasenseofloneliness,notonlybecauseofthelackofnormalcommunicationinthefamilybutalsosinceabsenceofintercourseamongtheneighborhood.Catsanddogsorotherpetswillfillyourvoid.

1、总结性发言

例：

养宠物

[Takingintoaccountallthefactors]/[whichhasbeendiscussedabove],wecansafelycometoaconclusionthatkeep-petshasbothpositiveandnegativeinfluences.Whatwemustdoistomakesurethatnotonlyareitsbenefitsencouragedanddeveloped/retainedbutalsowehavetostriveto/attemptto/endeavortoeliminateitsunfavorableimpacts.

2、号召与后果

例：

腐败现象

Itistimethatourgovernment/authorityshouldspeakoutagainstcorruptionandtakefirm/strong/sternactiontopunishhimwhoevertakesbribesandembezzlesfunds.Fortheofficialcorruption[ifpermittedtocontinue]/[Ifletthissituationgoasitis]willtarnishthegovernment’spopularity/imageandmayleadtoultimate/terminatedownfall.

3、具体的建议

例：

学生吸烟比率上升

Inanycase,weoughttodomorethantalkabouttheriseinstudentsmoking.Ourhighschoolsandcollegesmustbringinsomecancerexperts/specialists/researcherswhorunfilms/slidesforstudents,showingthedreadfulconsequencecausedbycigarettesmoking.Wecanalsoarrange/schedulevisitstohospitalwardsforlungcancerpatients.Inshort,weshouldtakestudentsmokingseriously.

作文

二、应用文

书信

↗①语气/措辞客气

公务信件→②格式：

开头（写明目的）、结尾（期待回音）

             ↘③词汇/语法（言简意赅，长句最多25个字）

另：

无论是大作文还是小作文，都不用些标题，如果想写则须注意以下问题：

①实词大写；②字母长度大于等于4个的虚词大写；③第一个单词的位置，不论实词还是虚词都要大写；④动词短语不做标题

补充：

1、投诉信（换宿舍）

Dec.29th,2004

DearSirorMadam/Towhomitmayconcern/DearMr.DeanZhang,

I’mwritingtoinformyouthatIwishtomovingtoanewroomnextterm.Ipreferasingleroom,asIrindthepresentsharingarrangementinconvenient.

      Imustexplainthatthereasonfordissatisfactionismyroommate’sinconsideratebehavior.Foronething,hisfriendsconstantlyvisithim;foranother,heregularlyholdsnoisyparties.Inaddition,hetoooftenborrowsmyprivatethingswithoutmypermission.Consequently,Ifinditdifficultformetoconcentrateonmystudies.

      I’msurethatyouwillagreethatImustmoveintoaroomofmyown,whereIwouldbefarfromsuchdistraction.Iwouldbegratefulifyouwouldtakemyrequirementintoconsideration,aswellasprovidemewitharoom,preferablynotinthesamebuildingbutasneartocollegecampusaspossible.

Yoursfaithfully

XXX

2、感谢信（感谢车祸中及时救助你的人）

      I’mwritingtoexpressmyheartfulgratitude.I’mreferringtotheunfortunatecrash,whenIwasknockedoffmybikebyataxi.Butforyourtimelytakingfirstaidandsendingmetoanearbyhospital,Ifearthattheconsequencemighthavebeenmuchmoreserious.

      Thedoctorsaysthatmybrokenlegishealingwell,andcutsandbruiseswillsoonbecompletelybetter,what’smore,thetaxicompanyagreedtopaymyhospitalbills.Everyoneholdsthatitisyourquick-wittedactionintheemergencythathasledtosatisfactoryoutcome.

      Althoughmanypeopletalkabouttheneedtobeunselfishandtoreadytohelpothers,weseefewpeoplepracticingwhattheypreach.Youshowedbyyourselflessactionthatyouareanexception.Iftherearemorepeoplelikeyou,theworldwouldbeamuchnicerone.

3、求购/预定信（为朋友庆祝生日）

      I’mpreparingabirthdaypartyforafriend,andwritingoinquireifyourestaurantcouldofferprivateroomswithcateringservice.Ifso,IwanttoreserveoneroomfornextFriday（oct.16th）from5p.m.to9p.m.

      Theroomshouldbebigenoughtoaccommodatemorethan50peoplecomfortably.Andthepartywillbeholdinacocktailstyle;thereforeamajorityofuswillbestandingupformostofthetime.Sotenchairsareneededintheroom.Ifthereisn’tabar,adrinkstableshouldbesetup.Forentertainment,KaraokeofDiskjockeymaybeacceptable.

      Willyoupleasecontactmeintwodays?

Youcanreachat13820XXXXXXinthedaytimeandat2737XXXXinthenight.Thanksforyouconsiderationoncemore.

考研英语写作35个常用的亮点句型（注：

S—主语，V—谓语，O—宾语）

　　【句型1】...the+~est+n.+（that）+S+haveever+seen（known/heard/had/read,etc）

　　...themost+a.+n.+（that）+S+haveever+seen（known/heard/had/read,etc）【例1】Mr.HeisthekindestteacherthatIhaveeverhad.【译文】何老师是我曾经遇到过的最仁慈的教师。

【例2】HelenisthemostbeautifulgirlthatIhaveeverseen.【译文】海伦是我所看过最美丽的女孩。

　　【句型2】Nothingis+~erthanto+v.　Nothingis+more+a.+thanto+v.【例句】Nothingismoreimportantthantoreceiveeducation.【译文】没有比接受教育更重要的事。

　　【句型3】...cannotemphasizetheimportanceof...toomuch.再怎么强调……的重要性也不为过【例句】Wecannotemphasizetheimportanceofprotectingoureyestoomuch.【译文】我们再怎么强调保护眼睛的重要性也不为过。

　　【句型4】Thereisnodenyingthat+S+V不可否认的……【例句】Thereisnodenyingthatthequalitiesofourli