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考前十分钟写作
[推荐]考前10分钟写作技巧-不看必悔（转）
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四级120-150字；六级150-180字；[3JIe:
2是否长短句交叉；#
3用词是否恰当，准确，形象，尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词；QuoR58
4关键词是否换用，切勿老用重复词；Qe4LW
下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项：
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1.适当用被动代替主动，这样能更客观的反映事实,句子开头不要总是用we/I（比如写结尾时不用weshouldpayattentionto而用Attentionshouldbepaidto.）举个经典结尾2004年六月六级作文的最后一段：
Itis,therefore,hightimethatsomeapplicableapproacheswereimplementedbytheserviceindustrylikethat.Thus，itscompetitiveedgewillbesharpenedeffectively.Uc[+QO
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2.善于使用插入语，比如说把副词、连接词等，作插入语放在中间，一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。
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如however/therefore/forexample/Ibelieve做插入语放在中间，一般放在动词，助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。
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比如说：
Otherindividuals,however,taketheattitudethat…T
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3.一定要学会换词，换形象，具体的代替太宽泛的。
（考试中一般不要出现good,bad,many,thing,think,people,opinion等等）比如上面例子中，applicable代替proper,approaches代替ways,implement代替carryout,sharpenone''scompetitiveedge代替enhanceone''scompetitiveness（提高某物竞争力）v=5p
下面举一篇我南京六级班上一位同学写的优秀作文（14分）的例子，看看他是如何运用各类写作技巧的。
这位同学把老师上课讲的各类写作手法和精彩替换和句型都用上了，作文有了很大的提高。
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exceedingly替换veryV?
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thrilling替换exciting;Ur#
sth.exertatremendousfascinationonsb替换sb.beinterestedinsth.p"
google替换search29Z\_
anarmyof替换alotof?
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Thedawnofthenewcenturywitnessedtheincreasingpopularityofcomputers.Coincidentwiththeadvancementofscienceandtechnology,computerspouringintothecurrentsocietyasafashionareappealingtogrowingindividuals.Itisnoexaggerationtosaywehavebeensubmergedbythem,inlargemeasure!
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Thedawnofthenewcenturywitnessed是一个精彩句型，用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情；Lr
Increasingpopularity替换moreandmorepopularkz2{X|
Coincidentwith…非常地道的词汇，表达＂与…一致＂的意思，替换With…&]
Advancement替换development94>p
Pourinto（floodinto/swarminto）替换enterinto-
Current（currently）替换nowI
Appealtosb.替换sb.beinterestedinsth.JE
Growingindividuals替换moreandmorepeopleRXpfkm
Itisnoexaggerationtosay经典句型，说某事是毫不夸张的8OcD
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Forastart替换TobeginwithA8
Wecan,freely,search用了插入语的写作手法$
ourknowledgewillbewellenriched,andourhorizonswillbegreatlybroadened.用了非常精彩的被动j
Additionally替换Inaddition/Besides:
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Deliver替换send3;DM
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Thereisnodenyingthat,however,computerscanfunctioninthedisserviceofhumanbeings,inaway,especiallythegrowingviolence,***,pornpictures,AV-filmsemergingonthescreen,whichleadsquietafewnetcitizenstocopying.Thereisnodenyingthat,however,computerscanfunctioninthedisserviceofhumanbeings,这个句子有三个精彩之处，首先Thereisnodenyingthat这个句型，还有however作为插入语，functioninthedisserviceof替换doharmtoLB_
Emerging代替appearing（fading代替disappearing）T=
Netcitizen网民，属于精彩用词UQ
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Asaclassicproverbgoesthatnogardenhasnoweeds.Computersdoplayapositiveroleinthedevelopmentofpeople''lives,despiteasliceofunfavorableimpacts.Weshould,therefore,takeadvantageofthefruitsandavoidtheoppositefacet.pp$
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Nogardenhasnoweeds替换Everycoinhastwosides'.2=S
Computersdoplay，do强调S^8Wg
Positive替换important/good等O6".D
Asliceof替换apartof%/
Unfavorable替换bad#"%
Impacts替换effects/influencescH
Weshould,therefore,takeadvantageof…使用插入语oC
Fruits（而且fruits用的非常形象，merits/virtues）替换advantage（defects替换disadvantage）cdl,
Facet替换aspect8z
各位同学，上面的作文里有这么多精彩的闪光点，作文怎么会不得高分呢！
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以下是30个最经典的替换词，各位同学可以参考一下。
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1.individuals,characters,folks代替（people,persons）1TBU
2.positive,favorable,rosy（美好的），promisingzfJ
（有希望的），perfect,pleasurable,excellent,outstanding代替good0NV
3.dreadful,unfavorable,poor,adverse（有害的）代替bad=e
如果bad做表语，可以有belessimpressive代替djt*5
eg.Anarmyofcollegestudentsindulgethemselvesinplayinggames,enjoyingromancewithgirls/boysorkillingtimepassivelyintheirdorms.Whenitapproachestograduation,asaresult,theyfindtheiracademicrecordsarelessimpressive.v^&i^
4.（anarmyof,anoceanof,aseaof,amultitudeof,many,ifnotmost）代替many.w
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Eg.Manyindividuals,ifnotmost,harbortheideathat….同理用most,ifnotall,代替most.y&M4Vq
5.asliceof,quietafew,several代替some@*T
6.harbortheideathat,taketheattitudethat,[
holdtheviewthat,itiswidelysharedthat,UC9]h
itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat）替think,X{z4
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7.affair,business,matter代替thing="'be
8.shared代commonLRR\
9.reaphugefruits代替getmuchbenefit）nrp]
10.formypart,frommyownperspective代替5j`
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11.Increasing（ly）,growing代替moreandmore（注意没有growingly这种形式。
所以当修饰名词时用increasing/growing.修饰形容词，副词用increasingly.qt
Eg.sthhasgainedgrowingpopularity.%U'E
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12.littleifanything,或littleornothing代替hardly?
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13.benefitialrewarding代替helpfulOC
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14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser,代替customerv9oSTQ
15.exceedingly,extremely代替veryR
16.hardlyunnecessary,hardlyinevitable...代替necessary,Z`A*g{
inevitable\ 17.sthappealstosb,sthexertsatremendousfascinationonsb代替sbtakeinterestin#
18.captureone''sattention代替attractone''sattention.e1h#
19.facet,demension,sphere代aspect"b
20.beindicativeof,besuggesteiveof,befearfulof代indicate,suggest,feare0j
21.giveriseto,leadto,resultin,trigger代替cause.SnB
22.Thereareseveralreasonsbehindsth代替..reasonsforsth{@1~,
23.desire代替want.`X-;!
24.pourattentioninto代替payattentionto@
25.bearinmindthat代替rememberJ
26.enjoy,possess代替have（注意process是过程的意思）RT\b
27.interaction代替communicationS.Rk-
28.frownonsth代替beagainst,disagreewithsthI
29.tonameonlyafew,asanexample代替forexample^）c
30.nextto/virtuallyimpossible,代替nearlyimpossible3/Q
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