美国留学申请书范文.docx

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美国留学申请书范文

美国留学申请书范文

美国留学申请书范文美国留学申请书范文1　　DuetothecomprehensivenessofChina’s“reformandopen”policies，economicsplaysanincreasinglyimportantroleinthedevelopmentofitsglobalposition.Thoughmoreandmorecompaniesbuilt，managementofcompaniescannotcatchupwiththedevelopmentofthecompanies.ManagementisaburgeoningfieldinChina，soIhopeIcanacquiremoremodernknowledgeonmanagementinEngland.Therootsofmystronginterestinbusinesscanbetracedbacktomychildhood.MyfatherwasamongthefirstofChina’snewbreedofmodernentrepreneurs.Asayounggirl，itwasinspirationalhearingabouthisbusinessventures，andmeetingthevariedandinterestingcircleofentrepreneurs.Mymotherwasalsoinvolvedinbusinessasanaccountant，helpinghimwithsimplecalculations.AndsoitwasearlyinmylifethatIhopedI，also，wouldsomedaybeabletoentertherealmofbusiness.　　Withthetimeofgrowingup，Ipreferredreadingbookstosatisfymycuriosity.IneverceasedtocontemplateoverthequestionsIencountered.Subjectsonbusinessandmanagementbecameaspecialfascinationtomeandmyknowledgeofpsychologyaswellasinterestinthisfieldwasincreasingrapidly.　　AsahighschoolstudentinChina，IhadtoconcentrateontheCollegeEntranceExamination（CEE），evenso，booksnotrelatedtotheexamswereneverexcludedfrommylife.UnfortunatelywhensittingintheexaminJune，20xx，IwassonervousthatIdidn’tscorewellintheCEEexam.IenrolledinthedepartmentofComputerScienceinZhejiangCollegeofTraditionalChineseMedicine.Anyattempttopersuademyselftofocusonmymajorturnedouttobeafailureatthebeginningofmycollegelife.Afterseveralterms，IrealizedthatIwouldneverbeinterestedinbeingaprogrammeroranengineer.Atthatmoment，Ilostmydirectionandobjectives.　　Mypersistenceinreadingsavedmefromthedarksituation.Asamatteroffact，IenjoyedreadingthebooksincludedEncyclopediaAmerican，andsomebooksaboutmanagementbyPeterF.Drucker.Ibegantonoticesomethinginteresting：

Whysomecompaniescanproducemorethanothers？

Whysomecompanycansellmorethanothers？

Whysomecompaniescanbuildupbutotherscannotwhenfacingthesamedifficulties？

　　Withthequestionsinmymind，Istartedtoreadmanyrelevantbooks.Iwasluckytoreadthebook“Jack：

StraightfromtheGut”byJackWelch，inWhichJohnA.Byrnemakesaclearillustrationthatthemanagementisimportantforacompany.WhenIwasajunior，Iranabookshopbymyselfnearmyschool.Ishouldmanagenotonlythefinanceintheshopbutalsotheemployeesinmyshopevenmadesomestrategiestoenlargethebusinessinmyshoptoholdontheruntheshop.Fromthis，myinterpersonalskillsandthecapacityinbusinesshasbeengreatlydeveloped，definitelyIwasincreasinglyinterestedinwhatIwasdoing.ByDecember，20xx，IhadfinallydeterminedtotakebusinessmanagementasmycareerinsteadofIT.Toaccumulatemorerelevantknowledge，Istrivedtogainmorepracticalworkexperienceinsomebigcompanies.　　Fortunately，asasenior，IbeganbyconductinganinternshipintheArchitectureCompanyinZhejiangProvince.Oversixmonths，Iworkedasanassistantofthemanagertoharmonizetherelationshipbetweenthedifferentdepartmentsinthiscompanyandtodraftsomemanagementsystem，whichbroadenedmyperspectiveofmanagementconditionsandbusinessperformanceindifferentindustries.TheexperienceshowedmethatmanagementismuchmoreimportantthanthatofIthoughtinbigcompanies.Aftergraduation，Icontinuedmyworkinthiscompany.InMay，20xx，thecompanyofferedmeanopportunitytoparticipateinantrainingprogramheldbyafamousmanagementschool.Throughin-depthdiscussionswithteachersandstudentsintheclasses，theyallencouragedmetopursuemyfuturecareerinmanagementfieldbecauseofmyintellectualabilityandthebrandnewideasImentioned.　　Duringtheshortperiodoftraining，Irealizedthatpursuingahigherdegreeinmanagementisawisechoiceformenow.Lancaster，withitsexcellenceinmanagement，representstheperfectfitformyneeds.Inyourchallengingenvironment，Icanbuildtherequiredfoundationofknowledgerelatedtomanagementtoachievemygoals.Iamfirmlyconvincedthatyouradmissionwillbemyfirststepofsuccess.Withthisinmind，Iherebysubmitmyapplication，andawaityourfavorablereply.美国留学申请书范文2　　GrowingupinamodestvillageinChina,Ihardlyeverhadthechancetoseemanyexamplesofmoderntechnology;peoplewhodigwellsbyhandtoobtaindrinkingwateruseox-drivenplowstocultivatetheirfieldsdon’thavemuchusefortelevisiopersonalcomputers.Butwhenmyfathergavemeanoldradiotoplaywith,Iwantednothingmorethantotakeapartthecontraptionseewhatiidemadesuchinterestingsounds.Sittingonthefloorwithaconfusedgrin,surroundedbywiresmetal,Ilookedupatmyfatheraskedthenoiseswere…（有删节）　　合理地阐述了申请者学习电子工程的.动机，学习动机是评审委员非常看中的。

同时，读了这段文字，会使读者沉浸在对童年往事的美好回忆里，借此打动评审委员的心。

　　另外一篇修改过的文章开头用诗一般的语言写道（有删节）：

　　……IfirstreadthisparagraphMadameCurieasa14-year-oldchild,IstillrememberhowwonderfulIfelt.Irememberthinking,“Whatesteemedmentheywere!

Howhardtheyworked!

”AsIgrewolder,thisparagraphbecameasourceofencouragementinthefaceofadversity.Ibegintofeelamagicalbluelighttwinklinginmyheart,kindlingaloveofscience,encouragingmetochargebravelyintotheunknownworld.　　结尾呼应了开头，阐述了作者为什么要去美国读书：

　　Ineverforgotmyadolescentidol,MariaCurie.AsIre-readthebook,anotherpaageleapedout:

“Shewasnow24-anagewhensomeofhergreatcontemporariesweretobeonthebrinkofmajordiscoveries…MariatookthetrainWarsawtoParis,theintellectualMecca.”美国留学申请书范文3　　IliveinPakistan-acountrydestroyingitselfwithbombs,gunsandgovernments’blabbertofindjustificationsforwhatitisgoingthrough;acountrywhereaformerpresidentismurderedinpublic,wherethenation’sconstitutionandparliamentaresuspendedatthesametime,andwherethevoiceofacommonmanisunheard.　　Sincethelastfewyears,Ihadaspiredtobecomeadoctor.Theideaof“scalpels,”“openedchests”and“sutures”hadalwaysintriguedme.Andthenithappened!

Therecentunprecedentedeventsinmycountrywipedoffthedustofdisillusionmentfrommyeyes;Ilostmywilltobecomeadoctor.However,theturmoilinthecountryledmetowardsnewspapersandnewschannels,andhencePolitics.　　AsIinvolvedmyselfintopolitics,Irealizedthatitisall-embracive-wieldingitswayoversocialandeconomiclife-itistheomnipotentofPakistan.Itcanmobilizepublicopinion,gearuppropagandamachinery,makeorrepeallawsandwhatnot.Backedupbypublicopinion,supportedbythemajorityofthelegislators,armedwiththemeanstokeepthepeopleinastateofignorance,politicalpowercrossesthelimitsofdictatorialpowers.Politicalpower,likethemostpowerfulintoxicant,makesthepersonsinpowertoforgetsocialethics,politicalmoralityandobligations.　　MostofthelearnedyouthinthiscountryconsiderPoliticstobe“arefugeforthescoundrels”andthisderogatoryremarkmaybetrueifwelookatthedeceptiveanddegeneratedtypeofpoliticiansindulginginadirtygame.Allthesepoliticalpartiesarevotariesofdemocracy,butthewaytheyconductthemselvesinsidetheirownpartiesisnothingbutsenselessauthoritarianism.ThereforeaveryfewstudentschoosetopursuePoliticsasaprofession,butwhattheydon’trealizeisthatifwedon’ttakeastandthesystemcanneverbechanged.Thus,IwanttostudyPoliticssoIcancomebacktomycountryandcontributewhatlittleIcandoformyhomelandanditspeople.IfIcaninspireevenasingleperson,itwouldbeworthit.Theworldtodayisgrowingglobal.Wearenownotonlytothinkofourownnationbutasandwhenwethinkofit,wehavetokeeptheinternationalperceptioninmind;consequently,IchosePoliticswithInternationalRelationsasoneofmycourses.　　StudyinginUKwillbreedasenseofindividualityandselfreliance.Iwouldbeabletointeractwithpeoplefromeverywhereandgettoknowabouttheirculture.Thiswouldnotonlyopennewhorizonsforme,butwouldalsoclearsomepreconceivednotionsonehasabouttheother.Ihavealwaysbeenanactiveparticipantofdebates.Ihaveparticipatedin3ModelUNconferencesoutofwhichIwasawardedwiththeBestDelegateawardintwo.IwasalsooneofthetwostudentstobeselectedfrommyschooltoparticipateintheEnglishSpeakingUnion‘08.Moreover,I’vetakenpartinParliamentarystyledebatestoo.ThereforeIbelieveIcancommunicateeffectivelyinpublicandlanguagewillnotbeabarrierinmyeducation.Furthermore,IhaveworkedasaninterneeatAl-ShifaEyeHospitalforamonthinsummers.HereIlearnthowtodealwithpatients,usetheAutoRef,handlefilesandpunctuality.WealsocampaignedtoaremoteareanearMurreewherewehelpedthedoctorsinexaminingthepatientsfreeofcost.AnotherexperiencewhichtaughtmealotwaswhenmeandmyfellowcolleaguesvolunteeredtopaintwallsfortheSOSChildren’sVillage.Inaddition,IworkedwithSUNGI（NGO）whereagroupof5ofushadtoorganizeaneventtopaytributeto1000WomenfortheNobelPeacePrize.　　IenjoyLiterature,especiallytheworksofShakespeare,TennesseeWilliams,ThomasHardyandAndrewMarvell.I’dbedelightedtostudyinachallengingatmospherewhereIcanfocusonmystudies.Icommittomyworkandmyabilitytothinkoutofthebox,keennessforPoliticsandmyperceptionofthings,Iunderstand,givesmeanedgeoverothers.Ibelieveinmyself,andifprovidedwithanopportunity,I’dmaketheuniversityproud.美国留学申请书范文4　　Ithascometomyattentionthatournations，and