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Firstly,washyourclothesbyhandinsteadofusingwashingmachines.Secondly,don’ttakeelevatorsunlessitisnecessary.Usingstairsdoesgoodtobothyourhealthandtheenvironment.Thirdly,remembertobringyourownshoppingbagswhenyougotothesupermarket.Lastly,gotoschoolonfootorbybicycle.Busesproducecarbontoo.
Let’stakeactionandbelow-carbonpeople!
2.假如你是李华,你的好友张帆迷上了网络游戏,正好你们学校下周六将组织一次主题为“如何正确使用网络”的活动,届时一位教授将做有关方面报告。
请给张帆写封邮件
内容包括:
1.描述活动的目的,形式及过程并邀请请他来参加这次活动。
2.谈谈你对他的建议和希望。
字数:
120左右
网瘾theInternetaddiction
0nepossibleversion:
DearZhangFan,
I’msorrytohearthatyouhavebecomeaddictedtotheInternetgames.Iknowyouareeagertogiveitup.luckily,IthappensthatnextSaturdayourschoolwillholdaneventaimingathelpingstudentsfighttheInternetaddiction.AnexpertwillbeinvitedtogiveusaspeechonhowtomakegooduseoftheInternet.Ithinkitwillbeofhelptoyou.Ifyoucancomeandattendit,Iwillbehappy.
Atthesametime,asforyouraddiction,Iwillgiveyousomesuggestions.Foronething,It’sbetterforyoutodosomeoutdooractivities,whichcankeepyourattentionofftheInternet.Foranotherthing,Youcantrytomakefriendswithyourclassmates,bycommunicatingfrequentlywiththem,youmayforgettheInternet.
Ihopeyoucantakemysuggestionsseriously.AndgetridoftheInternetgames.
Yours
LiHua
【亮点说明】本篇范文要点全面,语言简洁流畅,结构清晰,层次分明。
作者在谋篇布局时使用了经典的三段式结构,开头提出写信的目的,也就是发出邀请;
第二段提出了一些建议;
最后提出了自己对他的希望。
在文中作者使用了大量短语比如becomeaddictedto,beeagerto,aimat,giveaspeech,
keepsthoff,communicatewith,takesthseriously,makegooduseof等等,显示了作者词汇的丰富。
此外,作者还用到了foronething,foranotherthing来连接句子,提高了作文的档次,
3.最近,你看到某英文报社正在征集主题为“如何才能成为受人欢迎的学生”的短文,对此你很感兴趣。
请你根据以下提示谈谈自己的想法,给该报社投稿。
要点提示:
1、衣着干净、整齐,保持微笑2、诚实,乐于助人3、懂得与人合作4、其他
Howtobepopular?
Mostpeoplewouldliketobepopularwithothers,
butwhatisthesecrettoachievepopularity?
Infact,itisverysimple.
Thefirststepistoimproveourappearance.Weshouldalwaysmakesurethatwedresswellandsmilewarmly.
Inthiswaypeoplewillsurelybeimpressedbyourconfidence.Anotherimportantstepistobuildourcharacter.Weshouldalwaysbehonestandwillingtohelpotherswheneveritisnecessary.It’salsoimportanttoputothersfirst.Ifweknowhowtoworkandgetonwellwithothers,thenpeoplewillfeelcomfortableenoughtotrustus.
Iamsurewe’llbepopularwithothersifwecandoalloftheabove.
4.TheElephantandtheFly
题文:
“Anelephantwasstandingandpickingleavesfromatree.Asmallflycame,flyingandbuzzing(嗡嗡叫)nearhisear.Theelephantwaveditawaywithhislongears.Thentheflycameagain,andtheelephantwaveditawayoncemore.
Thiswasrepeatedseveraltimes.Thentheelephantaskedthefly,“Whyareyousorestlessandnoisy?
Whycan’tyoustayforawhileinoneplace?
”
Theflyanswered,“IamattractedtowhateverIsee,hearorsmell.MyfivesensespullmeconstantlyinalldirectionsandIcannotresistthem.Whatisyoursecret?
Howcanyoustaysocalmandstill?
”
Theelephantstoppedeatingandsaid,“Myfivesensesdonotrulemyattention.WhateverIdo,Igetinvolvedinit.NowthatIameating,Iamcompletelyabsorbedineating.InthiswayIcanenjoymyfoodandchewitbetter.Iruleandcontrolmyattention,andnottheotherwayaround.Sowhenyouareinchargeofyourfivesensesandattention,yourmindwillbecomecalm,too.”
【写作内容】
1、以约30个词概括短文的内容;
2、然后以约120个词就“专注”这一主题发表你的看法,并包括以下要点:
(1)看完故事后的感受及启发;
(2)描述一段你或他人因受太多干扰而使学习、生活或工作受到影响的不愉快经历;
(3)你打算在高三这一年里如何保持专注、专心。
Key:
Anelephantwasconstantlydisturbedbyarestlessfly,whowonderedaboutthesecretofremainingcalm.Theelephantrevealedthatcalmnesswouldbeobtainedwhenone’ssensesandattentionwerefocused.
Afterreadingthestory,Iwasinspiredbywhattheelephantsaid.Theabilitytofocusone’sattentionisthekeytosuccessindoinganything.Justlikethefly,apersonwhoiseasilydistractedbythesurroundingswillfeelrestlessandtired,isunabletoachievehissuccess.
ThisremindsmeofwhathappenedwhenIenteredhighschoolasaSeniorOnestudent.Iwassoexcitedtofindthattherewerevariousstudentorganizationsandafter-classactivitiesintendedforusstudents.Itseemedthatmanygroupsweresuitedtome.Duringthefirstterm,IwasattractedwhenevertherewasanoticefromastudentgroupandIwaseagertofindoutmoreaboutit.Asaresult,Ididn’tspendenoughtimeonmystudies.NorcouldIsettledownonmyhomeworkeveryday.Consequently,Ifellbehindmyclassmatesandfailedinanimportantexam.
Ihavelearnedalessonfromthisexperiencethatoneshouldfocusononethingatatimebeforehecangetitwelldone.AsaSeniorThreestudent,Iintendtosetacleargoalformyselffirst.ThenIwillgiveprioritytowhatIwillbedoingandkeepitup,tryingtoresistthetemptationofotherevents.IamfullyawarethatonlywhenIhaveaclearanddeterminedmindcanIachievemygoalintheend.
5.厦门方特梦幻王国(XiamenFangteMagicKingdom)是我国新建的一座大型主题公园。
假设你叫张娟,请根据以下内容给外国朋友凯特写一封邮件,介绍这一主题公园,并邀请她暑假一起到那里游玩。
位置
美丽的海滨城市厦门
开放时间
2013年4月28日
面积
约240公顷
特色
以科幻和互动体验而出名,将高科技与中国传统文化相融合,创造出一个充满
幻想和刺激的神奇天地
公顷hectare
科幻sciencefiction
互动interaction
高科技high-tech
[写作要求]
1.信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总句数;
2.必须用5个句子表达全部所给的内容;
3.将5个句子组织成连贯的短文。
[评分标准]
句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。
DearKate
I’mverygladtohaveachancetointroduceawonderfulthemeparktoyou
Whynotcometovisititwithmethissummerholiday?
I’mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.
Yours,
ZhangJuan
DearKate,
I’mverygladtohaveachancetointroduceawonderfulthemeparktoyou.
XiamenFangteMagicKingdom,whichliesinXiamen,abeautifulcitybythesea,isanewly-builtthemepark.Thekingdom,openedonApril28,2013,coversanareaofnearly240hectares.Thethemeparkisfamousforsciencefictionandinteractionexperience.What’smore,bycombininghigh-techwithtraditionalChineseculture,thekingdomcreatesamagicworldfulloffantasiesandexcitement.Youcantakepartinavarietyofentertainmentsandenjoyperformancesthere.
【亮点说明】范文很好的表达了要点的内容,使用了一些很好的词组和句型:
befamousfor因为…而著名,combine…with…将…和…结合起来,takepartin参加,avarietyof各种各样的,lookingforwardto盼望,XiamenFangteMagicKingdom,whichliesinXiamen,abeautifulcitybythesea,isanewly-builtthemepark.这句话使用了非限制性定语从句,Thekingdom,openedonApril28,2013,coversanareaofnearly240hectares.这句话使用了过去分词做定语,还有范文使用了What’smore这样的关联词使文章更加连贯。
6.写作:
明天的英语课轮到你进行课前英语小演讲。
请根据以下信息,以“健康早餐”为主题写一份演讲稿。
[写作内容]
1.现象:
有些同学不吃早餐;
有些同学吃早餐,但营养不均衡。
2.后果:
严重影响身体健康;
影响学习效率。
3.建议:
(1)早起,吃营养均衡的早餐。
(2)营养均衡的早餐包括:
含有碳水化合物的谷类,以提供每天所需的能量;
鸡蛋、牛奶等提供蛋白质;
蔬菜、水果等帮助消化。
谷类:
grain;
碳水化合物:
carbohydrates;
蛋白质:
protein;
消化:
digestion
I’mverymuchhonoredtogiveyouaspeechonhealthybreakfast.______________
I’mverymuchhonoredtogiveyouaspeechonhealthybreakfast.Somestudentsinourclassoftengotoschoolwithoutbreakfastwhileothersdohavebreakfastbutnotawell-balancedone.Consequently,theirhealthandstudyefficiencyarenegativelyaffected.Ahealthyandwell-balancedbreakfastshouldconsistofwholegrains,eggsandmilk,fruitsandvegetables.Thegrainwhichcontainscarbohydratescanprovidetheenergyweneedeveryday.Eggsandmilksupplyproteinandfruitsandvegetablesaregoodforhealthydigestion.Therefore,Istronglysuggestthatweshouldgetupearlyandhaveawell-balancedbreakfastbeforegoingtoschool.
7.请根据右边的漫画,结合你自己的切身体会,以"
Howtofacethecollegeentranceexaminations"
为题,用英语写一篇短评。
要求:
1)着重描述漫画所表达的现象以及你的看法,可适当发挥想象,不要做简单描述;
2)词数150左右;
3)参考词汇:
补脑汁tonics
In
the
cartoon,a
senior
3
student
isreading
in
bedandtakingsometonics,withmanybooksbesidehisbed.
Seeingit,Ican'
thelpwonderingwhether
Senior
studentsshouldtakealotoftonicstokeepfit.Idon'
tthinkitunnecessaryto.Takingtonicswillcauseustoputonweight,whichisbadforourhealth.What'
smore,
priceoftonicsisratherhigh.
Thenhowcanweface
collegeentranceexaminations?
mypoint,wecanmakeprogressifwefollow
advice.Firstofall,weshouldworkhard,domorepracticeanduseourmindwheneverwemeetwithproblems.Secondly,trytobuildupourconfidence,nevergiveuporloseheartwhateverhappens.Wealsoshouldkeepagoodstateofmind.Thirdly,wemustcreateourownwayoflearningandseekhelpfrombothteachersandclassmates.Finally,weshouldhaveenoughnutrientsanddomorephysicalexercisesoastokeepfit.Don'
tstayup!
.
Makeefforts,andwewillsucceed.
【亮点说明】.范文出彩的地方很多:
熟练运用了高中阶段的重点短语和句型:
What’smore,更有甚者,Inmypoint,builduporconfidence;
In
bedandtakingsometonics,withmanybooksbesidehisbed.这句话用了现在分词做状语和宾语从句,Idon'
tthinkitunnecessaryto.这句话用了it做形式宾语和省略句,Takingtonicswillcauseustoputonweight,whichisbadforourhealth.这句话用了动名词做主语和非限制性定语从句,weshouldwo