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sh段-扫尾段-不同的写作风格
尽-简化图表
1.静态数据的描述
2.单一阶段的描述
3.句子之间的衔接
4.段落之间的衔接
在1979年，牛肉的数量是220克。
In1979,theamountofbeefwas220
关于牛肉的数据是220克。
In1979,thedataonbeefwas220
人们消耗了220克的牛|
Peopleconsumed220gramsofbeefin1979.
在1979年，220克的牛肉被消耗。
In1979,220gramsofbeefwereconsumede
数量vs数据
数量：
number;
amount;
quantity数据：
data;
figure;
statistic•…”的数量
thenumberof+可数复数theamountof+不可数thequantityof+都可以
关于……的数据
thedataabout
thefigurefor+都可以thestatisticon
thenumbersofboysandgirlstheamountsofbeefandlamb
data单复数同形
thedataonboysis/was20
thedataonboysandgirlsare/were
both20
議露二讓漂囊盞
theamountofelectricityproducedbycoaltheamountofelectricityproducedbyoil
thedataoncoal
thefigureforoil
上升/下降。
波动。
保持不变。
Thenumberquicklyincreasedfrom...to...between...and7-
上弁v.
increase;
rise;
ascend;
grow;
goup下降v.
decrease;
descend;
decline;
fall;
drop;
dip;
godown快油adv.
quickly;
rapidly;
fast;
sharply;
significantly;
dramatically;
drastically;
substantially;
markedly;
remarkably慢地adv.
slowly;
slightly;
gradually;
steadily;
gently;
modestly;
moderately;
smoothly
Thenumbershowedaquickincreasefrom...to...between...and—
显TFV.
show;
display;
present
experience;
witnessadj.
慢的adj.
上升
growthupwardtrendgrowingtrend下降
dropdownwardtrenddescendingtrend
Thenumberfluctuatedaround...
Thenumbershowedafluctuationaround...
Thenumberremainedalmoststableat...
实际运用：
Theamountofbeefquicklydecreasedfrom220gramsto180gramsbetween1979and1981.
Thequantityofbeefsignificantlydeclinedfrom220grams（1979）to
180grams（1981）.
Thedataonbeefdramaticallydroppedbetween1979（220grams）and1981（180grams）.
In1979,thefigureforbeefwas220grams.Then,itsharplywentdownto180grams2yearslater.
Peopleconsumed220gramsofbeefin1979.Duringthenext2years,thestatisticsubstantiallydescendedby40grams.
In1979,220gramsofbeefwereconsumed.Overthefollowing2years,theconsumptiondrasticallydipped,reaching180grams.
showedadrasticdippingtrend6+6=12sentences
3.句子之间的衔接逻辑-时间顺序-然后
a.副词；
副词短语
1.Then,2.
Next,Afterwards,Subsequently,
Afterthat.
Fromthenon.
Duringthenext...years,
b.非限制性定语从句
1,afterwhich2.句子
1,whichwasfollowedby2.
名词短语
1,followedby2.名词短语
c.时间状语；
时间状语从句
1,before2.句子；
doing;
名
词短语
1.234.
123.4.节奏感
4.段落之间的衔接逻辑-提及顺序
说到,•提到,•关于,•至于说Regarding…，
Asfor…，
Asto…，
Intermsof…，
Whenitcomesto…，beef
Intermsofbeef,itsamountwasabout220gramsperpersonperweekinthebeginning.Then,thedatasharplydecreasedto180grams（1981）,afterwhichitshowedafastriseby60grams2yearslater.Subsequently,thequantityfluctuatedaround230gramsuntil1987,beforeadramaticdippingtrend,reachingapproximately110gramsfinally.8.0
chickenlamb
1.1979140150
2.-2004chicken
3.-2004lamb
Regardingchickenandlamb,theirquantities（1979）were140and150gramsrespectively.Duringthenext25years,thefigureonchickensubstantiallywentup,withariseof110grams.Conversely,theconsumptionoflambexperiencedasignificantfall,arrivingatroughly60gramsintheend.
fish
Asforfish,itsconsumptionslightlydecreasedfrom60to45gramsduringthewholespan.
转变风格：
Fishconsumption,however,wasconstantlythelowestoverthewholespan.Morespecifically,itslightlydecreasedfrom60to45grams.当某条曲线排名始终未变，优先使用不同的
结尾段：
1.全新的内容
2.定也不定量
3.全面覆盖
明陛咨殳变
Overall,peopleconsumedmorechickeninthis25-yearperiod,whilethepopularityof3otherkindsdecreased.
Peopleusedmore/less•••数量卷Peopleused...more/less.辆度高低...becamemore/lesspopular.
Thepopularityof
increased/decreased/remainedalmostthesame.
表格
题目4示题-图表主体段
分段原则：
按行数或列数较少的角度分段
food,drinksandtobacco
孩心-用尽量少的句子覆盖所有数据方法-分组,•排序依据-数轴
0•
•—35
特征数据—alone
—般数1居-together
特征数据：
先写；
单独写；
详细写—般数据：
后写；
一起写；
简单写32.14%+特点o
28.91%+特点o
15.77%16.36%18.80%。
2.详细说明
3.简单说明
4.句子之间的衔接
5.段落之间的衔接
32.14%
替换主语：
数量-数据-人们-被动-其它名词
在土耳其，被花在食品饮料烟草上的钱的数占总花费的32.14%。
InTurkey,theamountofmoneyspentonfood,drinksandtobaccooccupied32.14%ofthetotalexpenditure.
关于土耳其的数据是32.14%。
ThedataonTurkeywas32.14%.
在土耳其，人们在食品饮料烟草上花了他们花费的32.14%。
InTurkey,peoplespent32.14%oftheirexpenditureonfood,drinksandtobacco.
32.14%的土耳其的花费被花在食品饮料J草上。
32.14%ofTurkishexpenditurewasspentonfood,drinksandtobacco.
裏品醐草職了32遍的土:
的花
Food,drinksandtobaccocost32.14%ofTurkishexpenditure.
ThedataonTurkeywas32.14%which
wasthelargest.
whichwasthelargest/smallest
whichwaslarger/smallerthanother
data
whichwasthesecondlargest/smallest
whichwasslightly/farmore/lessthan...
whichrankedthefirst/.../lastwhichrankedthetop/bottom
进阶1-依赖不同的小语法结构
ThedataonTurkey（32.14%）wasthe
largest.括号
ThedataonTurkey,asthelargest,was32.14%.插入语ThedataonTurkeywas32.14%,rankingthetop.伴随肤语
进阶2-依赖不同的静态数据描述句型Turkishpeoplespent32.14%oftheirexpenditure（thelargest）onfood,drinksandtobacco.
32.14%ofTurkishexpenditurewasspentonfood,drinksandtobacco,rankingthetop.
32.14%详细说明：
1.确定基本句型（静态数据描述）
2.确定特征描述方式（中文描述）
3.确定小语法结构
Thedataonwere
respectively.
Thedataonwereabout...
Thedataonrangedfrom...to...
进阶-依赖不同的静态数据描述句型
1.确定基本句型
2.确定简单说明的方式
逻辑：
说到；
提到（间隔使用）
提到（每次都用）
Regardingfood,drinksandtobacco,thisitemcostthebiggestproportionofTurkishexpenditure（32.14%）.28.91%ofIrishexpenditure,slightlylessthanijtsTurkishcounterpart,wasspent.AsforSpain,ItalyandSweden,theirfigureswereabout17.00%.
counterpart（c）n.对应的人或物—般用于两者间比较，用来指代比较双方的后者
its/their—前者的形式
adj./n'
s-后者的含义counterpart（s）-后者的形式
ChinaisbiggerthanitsFrenchcounterpart.
ChinesecuisineismoredeliciousthanitsFrenchcounterpart.
Thequantityofgoodstransportedbyroadwaslargerthanitsrail'
scounterpart.
Thosewhostudyinforeignuniversitiesreceivemoreadvancededucationthantheirdomesticcounterparts.
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