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者改为“,whichisgenerally”）readbyadults.the（首字母大写）draweraimstorevealasymbolicmeaningthatparentsshouldcultivatechildrenaccordingtohis（改为their）aptitude,insteadofblindnotionofeducation.Incontemporarysociety,thenumberofstudentswhosufferfromcramschool（改为schools）andthepressureoftheirparents（句子层次混乱，建议加“,which改为定语从句”）hasincreasedatanalarmingrate.Carefuldeliberationofthisphenomenonhasillustratedmeonwhythisshouldbeso（表达不准确，改为Therearenumerousreasonswhyexiststhisphenomenon,andIwouldexploreonlyafewofthemostimportantoneshere）.Fiercecompetition,inthefirstplace,constitues（拼写错误，改为consists）oneoftheprimaryreasons.Accordingtoarecentsurveymadebysina,thereareonemillionstudentschoosetopursueamasterdegreeaftergraduation.Attendingcramschool（改为schools）willlayafoundationforfuturedevelopment.Convergentthinkingexistinginthesocietyisalsothebreedinggroundforthistrend.Thisundesirablegeneralmoodofsocietywilleventuallyresult（改为results）inbeingdevoidofinnovation.Ifthereisnocompellinginterferencetorevease（拼写错误，改为reverse）thistrend,ourcountryisboundtobeinfluencedadversely.Tobespecific,It（小写）willlackinnovativetalent,beshortofthemotiontoaccelerate,（改为beshortofthemotivationtopromotethedevelopmentofeconomy）andultimatelybedetrimentaltobuildingupasuststainable（拼写错误，改为sustainable）developmentsociety.Intermsofmypersonalexperience,It（小写）isurgentandimperativetotakecountermeasures.Foronething,thepublicmediashouldadvocateandpropagandizethenotionofdivergentthinking,whichwillbeconducivetoone’spersonalgrowthandcorecompetitivepower.Foranother,studentsshouldfosteradesirablelifephilosophy.Ifwecanimplementastheabovementioned,thepromisingfuturecanbewellguaranteed.

总体点评

的整体思路你已经基本掌握，后面要做的就是多积累高分佳句，加强句子成分的分析。

写完之后定要认真检查，减少失分点。

参考分数（满分20分）12

和点评，希望大家有思考，有提高。

篇二：

考研英语看图作文范例点评手机依赖症

手机依赖症

Whatathought-provokingpicture.（!

）Inthepicture,althoughsetting（sitting）on（改为around，用on意为“坐在桌子”）thesametablefordinner,peoplearecompletelyabsorbedintheirmobilephones,andtheyarecommunicatingwithothersthroughQQ,playinggamesandpurchasingintheonlineshop（汉式思维，改为shoppingonline）.Undoubtedly,thedrawer（painter，drawer是“抽屉”）ofthecartoonrevealsacommonphenomenonthatmobilephonesinourlifeisbecomingsoimportantthatpeoplegeneratetheincreasinglyseriousemotionsofdependenceonit.（首先，可以直接用thecartoonreveals…;

其次，soimportantthat后面的句子语法错误，语句不通。

可改为thecartoonrevealsacommonphenomenonthatmobilephonesareplayingamoreandmoreimportantrolethatpeoplecan’tlivewithoutthem.）Variousreasonsresultintheproblem.Ononehand,withthePriceofcellphonesdeclining（语序错误，withthedecliningofcellphones’price）,themajorityofpeoplehave（加the）abilitytopurchasemobilesphones.Forexample,everyoneinChinapossess（单三，加es）aphone.Ontheotherhand,withthedevelopmentoftechnology,thefunctionofmobilephoneisbecomingverystrong（中式思维，改为powerful）,andmoreandmorepeoplearefascinatedwithitsdiversion（应为“消遣功能”，加function）.Andaboveall,modernpeoplearealwaystooboringandexhausted,andtheyneedsomethings（something）suchascellphonestorelievepressure.Ultimately,manypeoplearebecomingsalves（slaves，salve是“药膏”）ofphones.Inmyopinion,mobilephonesaremakingpeopleinhazard（用在这里不合适，夸大了手机对人们造成的影响。

可改为mobilephonesareharmfultopeopleinsomerespects）.Peoplealwayswastelotsoftimeonmobilephones,whichcannotonlyimpactthehealthofpeoplebutalsomakepeopleignoretherealreality.Therefore,peoplemustlearntodeveloptheawarenessofusingmobilesproperly.

章有的地方是中式思维，不够地道，如“sitonthetable”，需多背诵模仿些经典佳句，使表达更加精准。

参考分数（满分20分）11

篇三：

考研英语看图作文范例点评本分变“承诺”

本分变承诺

者这句话是要表达什么内容?

）Simpleasthedrawingis,thesymbolicmeaningbehindti（改为it）isasdeepasocean（注意句末标点）Honestyisnotonlynecessary,butalsoindepensible（拼写错误，改为indispensable）.AstheoldChineseproverbsays:

"

Honestyisgold."

However,innocountryotherthanChina,ithasbeensaidthat,theproblum（拼写错误，改为problem）ofoppositethepormise（拼写错误，改为promise）moreserious（句子逻辑关系不明确，改为theoppositeoftheoriginalpromiseismoreserious）,andpeoplefailtoattachattentiontothe"

gold"

.Individualsandorganizationscanmakemoney,takeporfits（拼写错误，改为profits）andevenobtainwealthbyattendpromise.Tobehonestcanalsohaveadded（改为add）benefitofincreasingone'

sknowledge,givingusanewperspectiveofoutsideworld.AccordingtoasurveyconductedbyChinaAcadmy（拼写错误，改为Academy）ofScience（CAS）,honestycanrelievenotonlypressurebutalsoanxietyandsuchproblums（拼写错误，改为problems）asdepression,stress,isolationandsolitude（注意句末标点）Allinall,obtain（改为obtaining，句话中只能有个谓语动词）thepromiseplaysakeyroleinourdailylife.Theunhonest（改为dishonest，表示“不诚实的”，没有unhonest词）,inviewofthecomplexityofsuchissue,wemusttreatitsocially,economicallyandculturally.with（首字母大写）aproperlaw,anup-to-datesolution,arightperspectiveandalertpublic,itwillbeamatteroftimebeforetheproblum（拼写错误，改为problem）becomesthingsofthepast.（最后段缺乏逻辑关系，建议重写）

章。

篇四：

考研英语看图作文范例点评志愿者

志愿者

宾语，而sportive为adj.，表示“运动的”）.Simpleasitis,thepicturerevealsanexcitingphenomenonthatmoreandmorepeoplearewillingtobevolunteers.Asthesocietydevelopments（改为develops，此处应该使用动词形式）,ourmaterialcomfortsareconsiderablyenhanced,thus,wearecapableofthetimeandenergytohelpothers.Atthesametime,with（去掉，若使用with，句子则无主语）themoralclimateisgettingbetter,whichisundereverybody'

sefforts,（加and，两个句子之间应该用连词连接）themembersofthesevolunteeringorganizationsaremostlyneveraskingforanyrewardseitheronfameormoney,sothattheorganizationscansurviveeasily.Itishopefulthatwewillenjoyamoreharmony（改为harmonious，more后面应该跟形容词，且后面的society为名词，应该用形容词修饰）societyinthefuture,ifthethingsdevelopelikethis.Therefore,whenweareeagertoshowourkindness,itisreallynecessarytokeepourmindclear.Foronething,oneshouldnevergiveuponcehebeginstobeavolunteer.Foranother,volunteerworkisalsoa（去掉a，responsibility为抽象名词，不能用不定冠词修饰，）responsiblity（拼写错误，改为responsibility）（建议改为volunteerworkalsoneedsresponsibility）,justasournormalwork,sodotryourbest.

水平不断提升。

篇五：

考研英语看图作文范例点评山寨文化

化

为“首先，其次，……”解释时，前面不加定冠词）first,was（句子无主语，改为itis）thelowmoralconsciousnessofbusinessandproducter（汉语式英语，改为thatbusinessmenandproducershavelowmoralconsciousness）,（加连词and,两个句子之间应该用连词连接）theywantnotingexcept（改为but，nothingbut为固定用法）moneythatcareless（可改为needlesstosay）consumers.the（去掉the）second,fromconsumers（改为consumers'

）options,theychoice（改为动词形式choose）thelowpricesomething（改为things）comparewithhighprice（可改为theywouldlikechoosethelowpricethingsratherthanchoosehighpricethings）,andthemostofcopycating（拼写错误，改为copycatting,后加products）attractconsumersbylowprice.the（去掉the）lastassupervisiondepartment（加逗号，然后加主语they）didn'

tenhancesupervise.Inmyopiniontherearesomewaysthatdefending（改为todefend）thephenomenonofcopycating（拼写错误，改为copycatting）,primary（改为Primarily,）is（去掉）asconsumerswearedong（改为shouldnot）buythecopycating（拼写错误，改为copycatting）,the（去掉the）second,surpervision（拼写错误，改为supervision）departmenttakeseriousmethodsattack（改为toagainst）copycating（拼写错误，改为copycatting,再加products）producters（删掉）goodpeopledonotingthatlikehelpbedtingssoweallshouldjoininthecampaignthatdefendcopycating（拼写错误，改为copycatting）（整句话改为andweshouldmakejointeffortstoboycottcopycattingproducts）

参考分数（满分20分）9

和点评，希望大家有思考，有提高

篇六：

考研英语看图作文范例点评招聘条件

招聘条件

者的写法，应该在failed之前加but，用来连接两个简单句，且将failed改为fail）asaconsequenceofinadequateheight.Theclearmessageisthatweshouldgetmovingtolaunchawaragainstthoseirresponsiblecompanies.Justasrejectingthoseduty-shrinkingcorporations,makingcomplainttoadministratoraslongaswemeetthissituation.（整句话没有谓语动词，且administrator使用不当，本句话可改为Torejecttheduty-shrinkingcorporations,weshouldreportthesituationtotherelevantauthorities）Moresignificantly,theauthoritiesshouldchargewiththeobligationoflayingdownassociate-effectivedisciplinewhichseemsappropriateinthelightofcurrentsituation.Bythesemethods,wewillsurelygetthroughthistoughperiodbeforelong.

即可。

其余时间可强化自己的基础知识，锻炼自己的语言组织能力。

篇七：

考研英语作文万能模板

些外国留学生将要来你的大学，以学生会的名义给他们写封email,

1表示你的欢迎

2为他们在这里的校园生活提供些建议

请写100个字左右，请不要在信的末尾写你的名字，用笔名代替，不要写地址。

Dearstudents,

Firstofall,allowme,onbehalfoftheleadersofourschoolteachersandstudentsarewarmlywelcometocometoyou,welcometoourschoolandlife.

Campuslifeisdifferentindifferentcountries,inordertomakeyourlifemorecomfortable,thefollowingIwilldescribesomeoftheproposalsinmyschoollife.

Firstofall,cannotcalltheteacher'

snameinChina,becauseChinaisaritualofceremony,Chineseusedtocalltheexpressionofrespectforteachers.

Secondly,IhopeyoucherishthetimestudyinginChina,taketheinitiativetoincreaseopportunitiesforinteractionwithChinesepeople,sothatbothcanimproveyourChineselanguagelevel,canunderstandChineseculture.

Finally,ifyouencounterdifficultyinlivingandlearning,tocommunicatewithusinatimelymanner.Wishesyoutostudy